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Whims & Inconsistencies: A Collection of Humorous Pride and Prejudice Variations

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Whims & Inconsistencies is a compilation of two previously published works by J Marie Croft.

Love at First SlightMr Bennet's greatest wish is to see his five sons advantageously married. When the haughty Miss Elizabeth Darcy comes to Netherfield Park with her widowed friend, speculation—and prejudice—runs rampant through Hertfordshire. William Bennet, a reluctant and irreverent future reverend, catches Miss Darcy's eye even though he is beneath her station. However, his opinion of her is fixed when she slights him at the Meryton Assembly. As her ardour grows, so does his disdain, and when she fully expects to receive an offer of marriage, he gives her something else entirely!

Whimsical In His CivilitiesAccompany Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy as he—intent on reversing the disastrous first impression he made on his first visit to Meryton—braves another assembly and seeks to win his heart's desire, Miss Elizabeth Bennet.

These two works are unabridged and unaltered from the original form. If you previously purchased these works, please know that they are not changed from their original form.

390 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 28, 2024

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J. Marie Croft

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J. Marie Croft (Joanne) is a life-long resident of Nova Scotia, Canada, but spends a lot of time in Regency England with Jane Austen's beloved characters. She has written a dozen Austenesque stories: three novels, three novellas, and six short stories for anthologies. Joanne shares with her husband a love of their adult twin daughters, a spoiled calico cat, the great outdoors, geocaching, and British crime dramas.

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August 13, 2026
Its a combination of two stories. the first story of whimsical Mr darcy is very good. the dialogues are witty and u root for Darcy that his second chance get success

The second one love at first slight is reimagination where the roles are reversed. Its Mr. Bennet with 5 boys to marry off and elizabeth is a Darcy. the problems i had with Elizabeth's character in the OG get more pronounced in this story where William bennet is considered. so i did not like this story much. even after ample evidence William keeps reverting back in his thoughts that she sees my family with derision. even when he is in love with her was such an irritation
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2,197 reviews157 followers
December 2, 2024
This book has two stories, Whimsical in His Civilities and Love at First Slight.

Whimsical has Mr. Darcy returning to Meryton to take another shot at gaining Elizabeth Bennet's heart.

First Slight has the characters' roles reversed. Thus Mr. Bennet has five sons to marry off. William Bennet is the middle son. (The two youngest, Christopher and Lawrence, are the silliest boys in England.). Elizabeth Darcy slights William at the Assembly calling him only tolerable.

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2,062 reviews24 followers
January 7, 2025
Croft has crafted a delightful read! I'm all astonishment with her Pride & Prejudice Variations.

Recommend to readers who enjoy Jane Austen Fan Fiction.

I borrowed a copy from KU. I have expressed my honest view.
120 reviews
December 27, 2025
very unique

How delightful! So original with very witty dialogue. So much fun and hardly any drama from the villains thank goodness.
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