This book was a little bit of a mixed bag for me, but as this is the author's debut novel, I hope to provide some constructive points from which she can grow and learn. So let's focus on the positive first.
I enjoyed this novel for the most part. I found Jane and Cameron engaging as a bonded brother and sister pair, living a less than fulfilling life in the city of Glasgow (portrayed a bit like the slums of east London), having been run off their family estate of Darnalay by their "evil" titled cousin, Michael Dunn. The pair are well-developed, and I found them easy to like. Introduce Percy - as the male romantic lead for Jane - and I wasn't quite sure of him initially (he seemed to be a cad, oily and hard to trust in the beginning). But he grows and shows a truer side of himself as the story progresses, such that by the end, I thought Jane and Percy deserved their Happily Ever After. I also enjoyed the secondary characters that Jane and Cameron knew from their childhood at Darnalay Castle - Tavish, Mrs, Brodie, Mr. MacKinnon and even the ghost of Kendric.
The story is fairly well written, and I liked her use of metaphors, but occasionally the novel had a little bit of purple prose that could have been tightened up or eliminated. Additionally, there were internal monologues that at times seemed to express the same thoughts and reservations repeatedly - am I good enough for him/her? Will he/she still want me when they see what their future can be?. etc. I noticed this more in the early sections of the novel with Jane and then later with Percy. I would encourage the author to continue to develop her own authentic writing voice because it will become stronger the more she writes.
Now - here was my absolute biggest problem with this novel - the spelling of the word whisky. The novel is set in Scotland, so I think it is safe to assume that the characters are drinking Scottish whisky. And this is a HUGE failing of the editor of this novel. The Scots are particular about their whisky (as they should be), and the amber-colored spirit that is distilled in Scotland and Canada is spelled WHISKY!!!!!! NO E. Throughout all of this novel, it is misspelled, and it irked the heck out of me, by making the novel less authentic and less well researched. Whiskey distilled in Ireland and the US is spelled with the "E". Whisky distilled in SCOTLAND and CANADA is spelled without the "E". This fact is easily found on Google and Wikipedia - so I blame her editor for not being tuned in to this difference.
I also had some difficulty with the villain in this story. It's hard to believe that he would be as dastardly as he is, that he would drive his cousins from the only home they'd ever known and want to evict the tenants from the land, but then stop when it came to possibly forcing himself on Jane. For me, he was a little soft when we actually meet him, although he had been portrayed as a harsh, unsympathetic man since the beginning of the novel, and even at the end there seems to be some question of whether he is redeemable as their last living family member.
All in all, I liked this story, and I get where the title comes from but agree it doesn't seem to relate closely to the heart of this novel. The cover is eye-catching, and I love that Percy's guitar is there at his side. It is a good first outing for this author, and I am interested to read the next story in the series, about Cameron as the new Lord Banton. Do I think it could be tighter with less flowery language? - yes. Do I think the author needs to have a serious chat with her editor about spelling in her novel? - why, yes, I do because Scottish whisky is spelled without the "E". Do I want to see what Louise Mayberry brings next to the table - yes, yes, I do.
A very solid 3.5 stars, but I have to round down to 3 stars for the misspelling of whisky.
Thank you to NetGalley and the author for providing me with this free ARC. My review above represents my honest opinion of the novel, and all thoughts are my own.