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The Fallen Swallow
Lily, thirteen and the last of her kind, is thrust into a world of dark magic and violence in which supernatural forces tug at the very fabric of reality, shadowy characters lurking in every corner.
With a rich tapestry of characters and a captivating blend of fantasy and suspense, this thought-provoking adventure challenges perceptions and explores the enduring power of unity in the darkest of times.
⭐ 5-Star Praise for The Fallen Swallow
“Justin C. Davis’s The Fallen Swallow offers a high quality of writing.”
— Readers’ Favorite
“The magical ambiance and the adventures … took four decades off my age and made me feel like a teenager!”
— Readers’ Favorite
“With the story’s ending begging for a sequel, I can’t wait for the next installment.”
— Readers’ Favorite
With a rich tapestry of characters and a captivating blend of fantasy and suspense, this thought-provoking adventure challenges perceptions and explores the enduring power of unity in the darkest of times.
⭐ 5-Star Praise for The Fallen Swallow
“Justin C. Davis’s The Fallen Swallow offers a high quality of writing.”
— Readers’ Favorite
“The magical ambiance and the adventures … took four decades off my age and made me feel like a teenager!”
— Readers’ Favorite
“With the story’s ending begging for a sequel, I can’t wait for the next installment.”
— Readers’ Favorite
156 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 15, 2024
About the author
Justin C. Davis
2 books3 followersJustin C. Davis, known professionally as Brandon Francis, is a British character actor and writer whose career has taken him from the National Youth Theatre of Great Britain to stages and screens across England, America, and Japan.
Naturally drawn to bold roles and offbeat humour, he has appeared in numerous Japanese film and television productions, while also writing and adapting his own work — including the award-winning short film Bollocks, which won Best Short Film at the Peloponnesian Film Festival, and a recent stage adaptation of A Christmas Carol.
When he’s not performing or writing dark, atmospheric fiction, Justin can usually be found watching Norwich City (with cautious optimism), obsessing over sci-fi drama, spending time with his cats, or simply enjoying life with his daughter — who keeps him both grounded and inspired.
The Fallen Swallow marked his debut as a fantasy author and the beginning of a darker, myth-driven world that continues to evolve.
Naturally drawn to bold roles and offbeat humour, he has appeared in numerous Japanese film and television productions, while also writing and adapting his own work — including the award-winning short film Bollocks, which won Best Short Film at the Peloponnesian Film Festival, and a recent stage adaptation of A Christmas Carol.
When he’s not performing or writing dark, atmospheric fiction, Justin can usually be found watching Norwich City (with cautious optimism), obsessing over sci-fi drama, spending time with his cats, or simply enjoying life with his daughter — who keeps him both grounded and inspired.
The Fallen Swallow marked his debut as a fantasy author and the beginning of a darker, myth-driven world that continues to evolve.
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December 22, 2024
ARC reader. This means I received the book from the author, and while I usually try to honor any requests accompanying ARC copies, I believe that, above all, readers deserve my honest opinion (no requests made for this one). Therefore, my review and rating are in no way affected by any external requests and reflect my true experience with the book.
I really wanted to love The Fallen Swallow. Unfortunately, it didn’t quite resonate with me as I had hoped.
The Fallen Swallow combines familiar elements from an iconic magical franchise such as wands, portkeys, masked dark wizards, a chosen one, a prophecy, and even a dramatic scene involving the most powerful wand and a bolt of lightning splitting the skies... with a new twist, asking "What if the dark one won?" These are ingredients that I could love in a story, yet despite its potential, I found it difficult to fully engage with the narrative.
The worldbuilding felt underdeveloped, which I think contributed to this disconnect. When drawing from familiar folklore, it’s crucial to establish clear boundaries to distinguish the world as unique and immerse readers in its distinct rules and atmosphere. Here, the exploration of the world wasn’t deep enough to make it feel fully realized or compelling in its own right.
The characters were another aspect that fell short for me. Lily, our protagonist and the "chosen one," lacked a sense of agency. She often felt like a passive observer, carried along by the plot and other characters rather than actively driving the story herself. Her role seemed confined to being the object of a prophecy rather than someone demonstrating strength, cleverness, or even vulnerability that could make her relatable. The supporting characters also struggled to leave an impression, and even the antagonist lacked the presence or complexity to truly captivate me.
The pacing started out promising, bolstered by richly detailed descriptions that painted vivid imagery. However, this descriptive style quickly became overbearing, slowing the rhythm of the story and detracting from its momentum. The author’s ability to craft beautiful, cinematic scenes is clear, but it felt overused, sometimes compensating for weaker elements in the story. The narrative structure—interweaving multiple perspectives and timelines in such a short book—added to the sense of disorientation, especially with characters who didn’t stand out enough to anchor these shifts.
That said, there’s clear talent here. The writing is polished, and the author shows great promise in creating evocative, almost visual moments. With tighter focus on worldbuilding, stronger character development, and a more streamlined narrative, this story could become truly engaging.
In conclusion, The Fallen Swallow has the seeds of something I’d love, but it didn’t quite come together for me in its current form. I’m hopeful that as the author continues to refine their craft, they’ll create something truly memorable. Perhaps with more context and development, this could become a story worth revisiting.
⭐⭐ 2/5
I really wanted to love The Fallen Swallow. Unfortunately, it didn’t quite resonate with me as I had hoped.
The Fallen Swallow combines familiar elements from an iconic magical franchise such as wands, portkeys, masked dark wizards, a chosen one, a prophecy, and even a dramatic scene involving the most powerful wand and a bolt of lightning splitting the skies... with a new twist, asking "What if the dark one won?" These are ingredients that I could love in a story, yet despite its potential, I found it difficult to fully engage with the narrative.
The worldbuilding felt underdeveloped, which I think contributed to this disconnect. When drawing from familiar folklore, it’s crucial to establish clear boundaries to distinguish the world as unique and immerse readers in its distinct rules and atmosphere. Here, the exploration of the world wasn’t deep enough to make it feel fully realized or compelling in its own right.
The characters were another aspect that fell short for me. Lily, our protagonist and the "chosen one," lacked a sense of agency. She often felt like a passive observer, carried along by the plot and other characters rather than actively driving the story herself. Her role seemed confined to being the object of a prophecy rather than someone demonstrating strength, cleverness, or even vulnerability that could make her relatable. The supporting characters also struggled to leave an impression, and even the antagonist lacked the presence or complexity to truly captivate me.
The pacing started out promising, bolstered by richly detailed descriptions that painted vivid imagery. However, this descriptive style quickly became overbearing, slowing the rhythm of the story and detracting from its momentum. The author’s ability to craft beautiful, cinematic scenes is clear, but it felt overused, sometimes compensating for weaker elements in the story. The narrative structure—interweaving multiple perspectives and timelines in such a short book—added to the sense of disorientation, especially with characters who didn’t stand out enough to anchor these shifts.
That said, there’s clear talent here. The writing is polished, and the author shows great promise in creating evocative, almost visual moments. With tighter focus on worldbuilding, stronger character development, and a more streamlined narrative, this story could become truly engaging.
In conclusion, The Fallen Swallow has the seeds of something I’d love, but it didn’t quite come together for me in its current form. I’m hopeful that as the author continues to refine their craft, they’ll create something truly memorable. Perhaps with more context and development, this could become a story worth revisiting.
⭐⭐ 2/5
December 26, 2024
The Fallen Swallow is a gripping dark YA fantasy novella that follows 13-year-old Lily as she is forced into hiding by her adoptive father. Lily must navigate a world of mounting danger, racing from city to city, pursued by Abaddon, a menacing figure whose connection to Lily is shrouded in mystery. This fast-paced story, narrated primarily from Lily’s perspective, also offers tantalizing glimpses into the minds of Abaddon and a shadowy figure known only as “the dark wizard.”
The novella gripped me with its richly imagined world that balances magic, power struggles, and a deep exploration of identity. Despite its brevity, the story is layered with themes of violence, fate, and the sacrifices made for loved ones.
One of the novella’s strengths lies in its characters. Lily is a compelling protagonist, her journey marked by a mix of bravery and vulnerability. Abaddon’s portrayal, in particular, stands out—he’s not just a villain but a character shaped by his own tragic experiences. Even minor characters like Gadabout and Randolph leave a lasting impression.
The descriptions are vivid, the dialogue natural, and the world-building immersive. However, there are occasional moments of repetitive phrasing that slightly disrupt the flow. Despite these minor flaws, it was a thoroughly enjoyable story.
Overall, The Fallen Swallow is a powerful and thought-provoking story that delivers despite its short length. Definitely recommend and will be reading book 2.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The novella gripped me with its richly imagined world that balances magic, power struggles, and a deep exploration of identity. Despite its brevity, the story is layered with themes of violence, fate, and the sacrifices made for loved ones.
One of the novella’s strengths lies in its characters. Lily is a compelling protagonist, her journey marked by a mix of bravery and vulnerability. Abaddon’s portrayal, in particular, stands out—he’s not just a villain but a character shaped by his own tragic experiences. Even minor characters like Gadabout and Randolph leave a lasting impression.
The descriptions are vivid, the dialogue natural, and the world-building immersive. However, there are occasional moments of repetitive phrasing that slightly disrupt the flow. Despite these minor flaws, it was a thoroughly enjoyable story.
Overall, The Fallen Swallow is a powerful and thought-provoking story that delivers despite its short length. Definitely recommend and will be reading book 2.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
April 2, 2025
Some good world building, mfc is pretty relatable for a 13 year old. Story was easy to follow. That first chapter hooks you in. But fair warning leaves you on a cliff hanger. A good short read, would be good for an early teen.
I received an advanced copy , leaving this review voluntary.
I received an advanced copy , leaving this review voluntary.
November 8, 2024
The Fallen Swallow is an enchanting YA fantasy that follows thirteen-year-old Lily, a girl with a mysterious past, forced to flee her home in the city of Elders. Guided by Lord Cecil, a friend of her adoptive family, Lily finds herself on the run from the sinister Abaddon, a dark force whose intentions toward her become clearer as the story unfolds. Together, Lily and Lord Cecil travel from city to city, seeking safety while Lily pieces together her connection to a powerful prophecy—and her place in this world of magic and hidden dangers.
The world-building in The Fallen Swallow is rich and immersive, bringing to life a magical realm with history and lore that feels well-woven and atmospheric. Lily is a well-crafted character, whose emotional depth and resilience make her journey compelling and relatable. The author’s descriptions are vivid, painting scenes that linger in the mind, though occasionally the details slow the pacing, which may feel dense to some readers. Additionally, the story holds back on fully revealing Abaddon’s threat until later in the book, which leaves some tension building quietly in the background. This gradual reveal might feel a bit slow, but it does leave plenty of room for the stakes to rise in future installments.
Overall, this is a promising start to a series, and I’m intrigued to see where Lily’s journey takes her as she uncovers more about her past and her role in this world. Fans of richly detailed fantasy with strong female protagonists will likely find themselves drawn to this world—and looking forward to book two as much as I am.
I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
The world-building in The Fallen Swallow is rich and immersive, bringing to life a magical realm with history and lore that feels well-woven and atmospheric. Lily is a well-crafted character, whose emotional depth and resilience make her journey compelling and relatable. The author’s descriptions are vivid, painting scenes that linger in the mind, though occasionally the details slow the pacing, which may feel dense to some readers. Additionally, the story holds back on fully revealing Abaddon’s threat until later in the book, which leaves some tension building quietly in the background. This gradual reveal might feel a bit slow, but it does leave plenty of room for the stakes to rise in future installments.
Overall, this is a promising start to a series, and I’m intrigued to see where Lily’s journey takes her as she uncovers more about her past and her role in this world. Fans of richly detailed fantasy with strong female protagonists will likely find themselves drawn to this world—and looking forward to book two as much as I am.
I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
November 12, 2024
I will be completely honest and say I almost DNF'd this at 16% but gosh am I glad I didn't! I would have liked some more world building but it's still getting 5 stars because of how much I liked the story and characters.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
October 25, 2024
The Fallen Swallow is a YA fantasy book that follows 13 year old Lily, who is forced to flee the city of Elders, and from the only family she's known. Lord Walsingham, her adoptive father, places Lily in the care of his friend, Lord Cecil, while he stays behind to defend the city from a man named Abaddon. No one will tell Lily why they're running from Abaddon, but as she and Lord Cecil race from city to city in hopes of safety, it becomes apparent that he wishes Lily harm.
This is a short novella that mainly follows Lily's POV, with a couple excepts for Abaddon and "the dark wizard". I enjoyed that the narration was focused and narrow in scope, especially given the length of the story. The story is also attention grabbing, and has pretty good world building. The only minor critique I have is that the writing was a little hit and miss. The overall descriptions and dialogue were well written, but sometimes the word choice was repetitive.
I also was bummed that the story isn't wrapped up in book one! The story ends just when we're starting to learn more about why Abaddon is a bad man, and the identity/motive of the dark wizard. I guess I'll just have to patiently wait for book two. I'm ready for Lily to learn about her past and finally get some answers about why she is on the run.
I received an ARC of this book in an exchange for my review.
This is a short novella that mainly follows Lily's POV, with a couple excepts for Abaddon and "the dark wizard". I enjoyed that the narration was focused and narrow in scope, especially given the length of the story. The story is also attention grabbing, and has pretty good world building. The only minor critique I have is that the writing was a little hit and miss. The overall descriptions and dialogue were well written, but sometimes the word choice was repetitive.
I also was bummed that the story isn't wrapped up in book one! The story ends just when we're starting to learn more about why Abaddon is a bad man, and the identity/motive of the dark wizard. I guess I'll just have to patiently wait for book two. I'm ready for Lily to learn about her past and finally get some answers about why she is on the run.
I received an ARC of this book in an exchange for my review.
October 31, 2024
This Novella is the best piece of short writing I have had the pleasure to read. I wanted more, so much more.
The novella does state it is the end of Book One on the final page, but for some reason I was still left surprised by the massive cliffhanger. I cannot wait for Book Two.
For such a short story, Justin C Davis does not waste a single word. He has somehow managed to simultaneously use great detail whilst still giving so much story.
I could vividly picture the moments throughout and it felt so immersive that all my emotions and feelings were even more intensified as well. Fantastic.
The characters are each so interesting on their own and each important in their own way.
The world building and magic are wonderful and I just could not put this story down.
Truly wonderful and my only annoyance is that I now have to wait for Book two.
Thank you to BookSirens and Justin for allowing me the opportunity to read this Advanced review copy.
(No payment or incentive was involved).
The novella does state it is the end of Book One on the final page, but for some reason I was still left surprised by the massive cliffhanger. I cannot wait for Book Two.
For such a short story, Justin C Davis does not waste a single word. He has somehow managed to simultaneously use great detail whilst still giving so much story.
I could vividly picture the moments throughout and it felt so immersive that all my emotions and feelings were even more intensified as well. Fantastic.
The characters are each so interesting on their own and each important in their own way.
The world building and magic are wonderful and I just could not put this story down.
Truly wonderful and my only annoyance is that I now have to wait for Book two.
Thank you to BookSirens and Justin for allowing me the opportunity to read this Advanced review copy.
(No payment or incentive was involved).
November 1, 2024
Well written with great world building and a good magic system, personally I did not fall in love with any of the characters, which was the only let down for me reading this book, also it ends on a cliffhanger right when you start to get to know the characters better , guess I’ll have to wait for the next book….
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
January 24, 2026
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
This book drops you straight into the deep end and does not bother easing you in none. Lily is thirteen and already carrying way more weight than most grown folks ever do. Being the last of her kind puts a heavy shadow over every step she takes, and you feel that pressure right off. The world around her is rough, dark, and mean in places, full of magic that feels dangerous instead of pretty, and trouble waiting around every corner.
What worked real strong for me was the mood. This story stays tense most the way through. You got folks you do not fully trust, situations that feel like they could go bad quick, and a sense that reality itself is stretched thin. It kept me turning pages because I wanted to see who would snap and who would stand firm when things got ugly.
The characters are handled well overall. Lily feels real in how confused and stubborn she can be, especially for her age. Some of the side characters stand out more than others, but together they build a solid mix that keeps the story moving. I liked how the book leaned into the idea of sticking together when everything is falling apart, without getting preachy or soft about it.
That said, a few parts felt like they slowed down more than they needed to. There were moments where the story circled the same thoughts or feelings before pushing forward again. It did not ruin the book, but it did make me want things to hurry up just a bit in spots.
All in all, this is a dark fantasy that knows what it wants to be. It is moody, tense, and thoughtful without trying too hard to impress. If you like stories where young characters are forced to grow up fast in a dangerous world, this one is worth your time.
I give it a 4 outta 5 catfish!
This book drops you straight into the deep end and does not bother easing you in none. Lily is thirteen and already carrying way more weight than most grown folks ever do. Being the last of her kind puts a heavy shadow over every step she takes, and you feel that pressure right off. The world around her is rough, dark, and mean in places, full of magic that feels dangerous instead of pretty, and trouble waiting around every corner.
What worked real strong for me was the mood. This story stays tense most the way through. You got folks you do not fully trust, situations that feel like they could go bad quick, and a sense that reality itself is stretched thin. It kept me turning pages because I wanted to see who would snap and who would stand firm when things got ugly.
The characters are handled well overall. Lily feels real in how confused and stubborn she can be, especially for her age. Some of the side characters stand out more than others, but together they build a solid mix that keeps the story moving. I liked how the book leaned into the idea of sticking together when everything is falling apart, without getting preachy or soft about it.
That said, a few parts felt like they slowed down more than they needed to. There were moments where the story circled the same thoughts or feelings before pushing forward again. It did not ruin the book, but it did make me want things to hurry up just a bit in spots.
All in all, this is a dark fantasy that knows what it wants to be. It is moody, tense, and thoughtful without trying too hard to impress. If you like stories where young characters are forced to grow up fast in a dangerous world, this one is worth your time.
I give it a 4 outta 5 catfish!
December 20, 2024
First Impressions
The Fallen Swallow, I received an ARC of this novella and I have been waging an internal war in my head since I started it, on whether my completely blunt, honest opinion would be welcomed. I think perhaps maybe I'm not the intended audience for this particular book. Although I feel my opinion would be null for the youngest adult range, there are those of us who adore YA fantasy fiction. So my unbiased review is for them.
I found the idea of the book very intriguing, suspense and mysterious pasts aside, I do enjoy dark magic and the draw for me was that alone.
My Thoughts
I didn't like the story as a whole, but there is definitely promise in the writing that could hint to future better works, if the bloat can be eliminated.
This brings me to the first point, I have to mention the excessive use of descriptive content. I found it repetitive and hard to get into a good flow. I can see there is a decent story under the excess fluff writing. I do not however, have time to go through and cross out these page after page problems to make it readable for myself.
My next point is the FMC, I found her too young, I couldn't click with the vibes the book tried to sell. At 13 years old, I doubt I would have clicked then either. It just wasn't working for me.
This is why I unfortunately must delicately place this in my DNF pile. I will try to pursue it further at a later date, but for right now I must move on and try to get myself out of the reading slump this novella triggered. 😩
Overall Ratings
Readability ⭐⭐⭐
World building 🌎🌎
The Fallen Swallow, I received an ARC of this novella and I have been waging an internal war in my head since I started it, on whether my completely blunt, honest opinion would be welcomed. I think perhaps maybe I'm not the intended audience for this particular book. Although I feel my opinion would be null for the youngest adult range, there are those of us who adore YA fantasy fiction. So my unbiased review is for them.
I found the idea of the book very intriguing, suspense and mysterious pasts aside, I do enjoy dark magic and the draw for me was that alone.
My Thoughts
I didn't like the story as a whole, but there is definitely promise in the writing that could hint to future better works, if the bloat can be eliminated.
This brings me to the first point, I have to mention the excessive use of descriptive content. I found it repetitive and hard to get into a good flow. I can see there is a decent story under the excess fluff writing. I do not however, have time to go through and cross out these page after page problems to make it readable for myself.
My next point is the FMC, I found her too young, I couldn't click with the vibes the book tried to sell. At 13 years old, I doubt I would have clicked then either. It just wasn't working for me.
This is why I unfortunately must delicately place this in my DNF pile. I will try to pursue it further at a later date, but for right now I must move on and try to get myself out of the reading slump this novella triggered. 😩
Overall Ratings
Readability ⭐⭐⭐
World building 🌎🌎
November 19, 2024
📖 The Fallen Swallow by Justin C Davis
This fantasy book is about wizards, magic, prophecy, formidable one, destiny, clueless one who's the hope for everyone. Thirteen year old clueless Lily is forced to leave her home in Elders to escape from the army of Abaddon. Her father's trusted friend Lord Cecil takes her under his protection and away from Abaddon. They transport cities using port keys all while fighting off mercenaries, desperate to earn Abbadon's favour. Will Lily be able to piece together puzzles of her past? Abaddon seems to be two steps forward while Lily has a lot to catch up. How will the prophecy come true?
There are tons of questions and I want to read the Book 2 right now. I felt the book was short but I get the cliffhanger and waiting part is author's way of building anticipation. I really liked the story build-up. The author has done a good job in keeping the reader hooked up (at least I was). The description of magical realm, wizard and witches, suspense, mythical creatures makes the story captivating. Sometimes few words become repetitive. I'd suggest people to check for trigger warning as few gore descriptions may make the reader uncomfortable. I'm very much looking forward to the sequel. 4 stars 🌟 book for me!
I recieved an ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review
This fantasy book is about wizards, magic, prophecy, formidable one, destiny, clueless one who's the hope for everyone. Thirteen year old clueless Lily is forced to leave her home in Elders to escape from the army of Abaddon. Her father's trusted friend Lord Cecil takes her under his protection and away from Abaddon. They transport cities using port keys all while fighting off mercenaries, desperate to earn Abbadon's favour. Will Lily be able to piece together puzzles of her past? Abaddon seems to be two steps forward while Lily has a lot to catch up. How will the prophecy come true?
There are tons of questions and I want to read the Book 2 right now. I felt the book was short but I get the cliffhanger and waiting part is author's way of building anticipation. I really liked the story build-up. The author has done a good job in keeping the reader hooked up (at least I was). The description of magical realm, wizard and witches, suspense, mythical creatures makes the story captivating. Sometimes few words become repetitive. I'd suggest people to check for trigger warning as few gore descriptions may make the reader uncomfortable. I'm very much looking forward to the sequel. 4 stars 🌟 book for me!
I recieved an ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review
November 3, 2024
Brilliant Novella! Despite a few flaws, this short piece really packs a punch. At first glance, it might seem like a straightforward dark YA fantasy adventure for teen readers, but there’s so much more happening beneath the surface. It’s layered with rich themes and metaphors - exploring the impact of violence and war on young minds, the clash of power, fate, and free will, and delving into questions of identity, the beauty and danger of magic, and the sacrifices we make for loved ones.
Each character is well-crafted and brings something unique to the story. Even Gadabout and Randolph, who appear only briefly, leave a lasting impression - I was especially drawn to Randolph. His purity and rejection of violence, in contrast to his turbulent childhood, made him incredibly compelling. I only wish the author had explored his and Gadabouts journey a bit more.
What really sets this novella apart from other self-published fantasy works is the dark humor brewing quietly in the background. It gives the story a unique edge that keeps you thinking. I have mixed feeling about the ending. But it works because I definitely want to know what happens next!
Each character is well-crafted and brings something unique to the story. Even Gadabout and Randolph, who appear only briefly, leave a lasting impression - I was especially drawn to Randolph. His purity and rejection of violence, in contrast to his turbulent childhood, made him incredibly compelling. I only wish the author had explored his and Gadabouts journey a bit more.
What really sets this novella apart from other self-published fantasy works is the dark humor brewing quietly in the background. It gives the story a unique edge that keeps you thinking. I have mixed feeling about the ending. But it works because I definitely want to know what happens next!
October 26, 2024
This novella largely follows Lily's perspective, with occasional glimpses into other characters’ lives. From the start, it pulls you in with a gripping plot that explores themes of magic, power, and identity.
I have mixed feelings about this book—it’s both frustrating and fascinating. But the fact that I read it twice shows just how compelling it is. Beyond the fantasy elements, the story delves into the impact of violence on children and how it shapes their futures. Abaddon’s character especially captures this; you can’t help but wonder if his life could have taken a different path. The "dark wizard" also stands out, operating in morally grey areas that make him a sort of anti-hero.
The writing hits moments of brilliance, though there are times it feels rough around the edges, which is understandable for a debut, self-published author. The ending left me frustrated—just as the mysteries of Abaddon and the dark wizard deepen, it cuts off. But maybe that’s part of its strength—it leaves you eager to find out what happens next. I will definitely read book 2.
I have mixed feelings about this book—it’s both frustrating and fascinating. But the fact that I read it twice shows just how compelling it is. Beyond the fantasy elements, the story delves into the impact of violence on children and how it shapes their futures. Abaddon’s character especially captures this; you can’t help but wonder if his life could have taken a different path. The "dark wizard" also stands out, operating in morally grey areas that make him a sort of anti-hero.
The writing hits moments of brilliance, though there are times it feels rough around the edges, which is understandable for a debut, self-published author. The ending left me frustrated—just as the mysteries of Abaddon and the dark wizard deepen, it cuts off. But maybe that’s part of its strength—it leaves you eager to find out what happens next. I will definitely read book 2.
January 12, 2025
I received an advance review copy from BookSirens for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
My favorite thing about this book is the writing style. It is very poetic and eloquent.
The story is also captivating and very intense as well as gruesome. There are lots of interesting elements such as witch magic, prophecies, politics and much more.
I am impressed that the author was able to fit so much into such a small book.
Although I realize that this is the first book of the series, I do think there should have been a bit more world building and character development. The plot had a very nice pace to it, but I do have a feeling that I didn't get to find out who the characters truly were, and so I didn't care about them as much as I would have liked to. Basically, the book really could have been longer.
My favorite thing about this book is the writing style. It is very poetic and eloquent.
The story is also captivating and very intense as well as gruesome. There are lots of interesting elements such as witch magic, prophecies, politics and much more.
I am impressed that the author was able to fit so much into such a small book.
Although I realize that this is the first book of the series, I do think there should have been a bit more world building and character development. The plot had a very nice pace to it, but I do have a feeling that I didn't get to find out who the characters truly were, and so I didn't care about them as much as I would have liked to. Basically, the book really could have been longer.
March 14, 2025
ARC copy was received and so grateful to read this work of art.
The world building through the book improved as reading, it was atmospheric alongside the well-crafted characters. I felt I was immersed into the magical realm of the world, which entices me to want to read the second book.
The author also managed to simultaneously use great detail whilst still giving so much story, which is great for a novella as it drives you to the emotional depths of wanting to read more. The story isn’t wrapped up all in one, which can leave you questioning your own theories of what will happen next with lily and ‘the dark wizard’.
Overall, I would recommend this novella to other readers, as it stuck with me after finishing. Can’t wait until the next book comes out.
3.5 stars rounded up.
⭐⭐⭐⭐
The world building through the book improved as reading, it was atmospheric alongside the well-crafted characters. I felt I was immersed into the magical realm of the world, which entices me to want to read the second book.
The author also managed to simultaneously use great detail whilst still giving so much story, which is great for a novella as it drives you to the emotional depths of wanting to read more. The story isn’t wrapped up all in one, which can leave you questioning your own theories of what will happen next with lily and ‘the dark wizard’.
Overall, I would recommend this novella to other readers, as it stuck with me after finishing. Can’t wait until the next book comes out.
3.5 stars rounded up.
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January 4, 2025
2.5 rounded down ⭐️ Arc Read!
The writing of this book was solid however the narrative and characters were very familiar to a certain franchise and I couldn’t stop seeing the similarities between the two. Names were similar, a lot of magical aspects were very similar and there wasn’t anything particularly unique that separated the two.
That said there is clearly a solid grasp on a writing technique, the imagery is strong and could be used to strengthen the magic system even more in the second book.
Overall I don’t think this was a bad book at all. It was a very easy and nice read but it relies too much on holding the readers hand instead of letting people immerse themselves into the world.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The writing of this book was solid however the narrative and characters were very familiar to a certain franchise and I couldn’t stop seeing the similarities between the two. Names were similar, a lot of magical aspects were very similar and there wasn’t anything particularly unique that separated the two.
That said there is clearly a solid grasp on a writing technique, the imagery is strong and could be used to strengthen the magic system even more in the second book.
Overall I don’t think this was a bad book at all. It was a very easy and nice read but it relies too much on holding the readers hand instead of letting people immerse themselves into the world.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
April 14, 2025
When is the next one?
Magic-packed adventure where a 13-year-old girl, Lily, finds herself being hunted by a powerful wizard with serious drama issues. Think chosen one energy, but with more near-death experiences and cooler cloaks.
The characters are solid, the villain has just enough tragic backstory to make you almost feel bad for him, and the pacing keeps you turning pages faster than Lily changes locations.
It loses a star only because it ends on a cliffhanger so intense I stared at the last page like, “You did not just stop there.” Great setup for a sequel, though.
Magic-packed adventure where a 13-year-old girl, Lily, finds herself being hunted by a powerful wizard with serious drama issues. Think chosen one energy, but with more near-death experiences and cooler cloaks.
The characters are solid, the villain has just enough tragic backstory to make you almost feel bad for him, and the pacing keeps you turning pages faster than Lily changes locations.
It loses a star only because it ends on a cliffhanger so intense I stared at the last page like, “You did not just stop there.” Great setup for a sequel, though.
November 14, 2024
I stumbled upon this book after finishing The Harry Potter series. I found it very atmospheric, imaginative and though quite a dark novel it has shades of light and dark humor which I liked.
The characters are real and identifiable and the scene making is rich and creative. I really felt like I had entered into this realm. Though it is a fantasy it has many tangible connections with our world today. The theme of magic is cleverly used as an analogy but I'll leave that for you to discover.
The characters are real and identifiable and the scene making is rich and creative. I really felt like I had entered into this realm. Though it is a fantasy it has many tangible connections with our world today. The theme of magic is cleverly used as an analogy but I'll leave that for you to discover.
November 13, 2024
Dark YA fantasy novella that is just the perfect size to read and ends in a cliff-hanger that will make you want to see what happens next.
This book is the perfect size for a quick weekend read - but it is gripping and will leave you be left longing to have the next installment of this story in your hand!!
This book is the perfect size for a quick weekend read - but it is gripping and will leave you be left longing to have the next installment of this story in your hand!!
October 21, 2024
I received an advanced copy of the book, and I was pleasantly surprised. The story has some beautiful descriptions & interesting characters. It's fast-paced, magical adventure with deeper themes woven throughout. It was a fun read.
October 26, 2024
I enjoyed the world building and characters. The universe created was very entertaining and vibrant. The characters were engaging and very well rounded. The only issue was that were a few grammar mistakes that hindered the flow of the story. Looking to book 2.
November 8, 2024
I enjoyed this book. While , I do feel it was a little too young for me, it was still very enjoyable. Great intro book to fantasy for a pre teen or teenager.
November 10, 2024
There’s something about it that really stayed with me. And it’s one of those stories where you can feel the potential just under the surface. It’s got that kind of Netflix vibe, too—like it could easily be adapted into a series.
The story follows 13-year-old Lily, who’s suddenly forced to leave her adoptive family and go on the run with Lord Cecil and Robert. Thrust into a brutal world, she has to dig deep to survive. Lily isn’t your typical damsel in distress; she’s vulnerable, but there’s a quiet bravery about her that makes you root for her.
This novella left me wanting so much more—because of the you can feel there’s so much potential waiting to be explored.
The story follows 13-year-old Lily, who’s suddenly forced to leave her adoptive family and go on the run with Lord Cecil and Robert. Thrust into a brutal world, she has to dig deep to survive. Lily isn’t your typical damsel in distress; she’s vulnerable, but there’s a quiet bravery about her that makes you root for her.
This novella left me wanting so much more—because of the you can feel there’s so much potential waiting to be explored.
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