I read the synopsis of one of the books in this series, and thought it sounded wonderful. So I bought several of them, including this one, the first in the series. It brought back to me a fact that I've already learned, but obviously don't use--download a sample before buying! Because this book was, in the words from my past "not yet ready for primetime." The writing was amateurish, to say the least. The story has several disconnects, jumps in scene that don't make sense. The characters are flat, paper people that are never fleshed out. Introduced too quickly, they are just a jumble of names. If the author later brings them to life, that can be rectified, but that doesn't happen here. The main character, Susan, is simply too stupid to live--in both her thoughts and actions. What a twerp. Another character, a teenager, supposedly adores her Mother, who we know is a violent-tempered, self-centered bitch. What, does she have a split personality? Mean, conniving, controlling woman AND adoring mother? I was surprised to read the author has four children, because adding normal teenage hormones with a mother like that does not equal and loving mother-daughter relationship. And the ending was beyond belief--but one of the prime examples of how stupid Susan is. The only reason I actually finished this book is because before this I had put down two previous books without finishing, something that rarely happens to me. So I guess I felt I had to read the entire thing. What a waste of time.
I do have to mention one thing the author did do well. The plotting was pretty good, and she had several characters with good reasons to be suspects. There may be a good writer here, but she has some work to do--this manuscript should have been left in the box under the bed while she continued learning her craft. Perhaps the books get better in later books in the series. Could be, but I'm not wasting more time trying to find out. The only thing I can recommend for this series is DOWNLOAD THE SAMPLE first!