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Playing the Part
By the author of Red Roses and Black Dahlias, Playing the Part is a short and smutty novella revolving around roleplay. It's light, funny and cute, for those days where you just want to escape into your fantasies. 18+ audience only.
DANIELLA
Okay so maybe what I am looking for is a little... unorthodox. But in my defense, I don't expect anyone to really follow me in that direction.
When I ask my former childhood best friend to help with my predicament, I don't think for one second he's gonna run out of the room like I burned him with the strength of a thousand fires. I expect even less for one of the hockey players I tutor to be so eager to take his place.
See, my name is Daniella and I write romance. Spicy, hot, filthy romance. Only problem is that I am a virgin too.
Now you might think the two don't go hand in hand but I think they do. Who could write better smut than someone who's so obviously hungry for physical touch after going all their lives without it? I don't have any particular reason for remaining a card-holding member of the v-club— I'm only twenty for goodness sake and there's no shame with being a freaking virgin.
I don't have any problem with it either, not until "chokemedaddy69", one of my online readers, says my inexperience is starting to show in my writing. Badly.
So I come up with this plan. I need to learn more about sex than the internet can teach me, and what better way to do so than by roleplaying all of my scenarios right before I write them?
The only problem with my plan is that I find myself stuck with an insanely hot hockey player who has probably received too many blows to the head if his willingness to follow my every crazy fantasy is any indication.
I guess we'll both have to play the part for it to work.
226 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 1, 2024
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June 28, 2024
ೃ⁀➷ 4.5 stars *ੈ✩‧₊˚
When I started this, I was not expecting myself to enjoy it this much. Aaahhhhh I’m madly in loveeee w LeviDani 🤸♂️🤸♂️
This was the most perfect blend of smutty and wholesome, filthy and easygoing that I’ve ever read in a novella 👑👑 I genuinely think I’ve found a gem here.
This authors writing was so engaging and I never skimmed once. Gahhh it got me blushing,, giggling, HOT ASF and overall so happy I can’t get over it, can’t get over them!
THE SMUT WAS FIREEE I HAVE NO WORDS JUST READ IT-
Small moments are my kryptonite and this was written so PERFECTLY. It had everything I wanted. The hugging, the aftercare, skimming their thumb on the other’s cheek, unashamedly staring at the other, calling each other baby LIKEEEEE 💘💕💖💝💞🦋💓💗
The COMMUNICATION was so good. I love that the fmc wasn’t some bumbling girl but knew exactly what she wanted and said it. And that the mmc wasn’t an ass but the cutest golden retriever with a dominant streak MY BRAIN IS MELTING RN
These 230 pages easily beat so many books with over 500 pages of random filler in between. Each chapter got to the point. There was nothing unnecessary, and the third act was resolved quickly and it was the most ADORABLE third act ever 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 I literally wanted to sob on the floor bc of hm i love Levi.
I am 1000% gna reread LeviDani diaries forevermore 💅
𝗦𝗶𝗱𝗲 𝗻𝗼𝘁𝗲:
Saying goodbye to EliMia as number 1. It’s the start of a new era 😣❤️🩹
𝗦𝗼𝗻𝗴𝘀: 🎧
Fantasy — azee
Vixen — Miguel
𝗙𝗮𝘃 𝗤𝘂𝗼𝘁𝗲𝘀:
“She didn't say anything as I tucked her against my chest. She looked content instead, rubbing her cheek against my shirt. My nickname for her made all the sense in the world right then.”
~he calls her kitten 💘💕💓💞💞
“I kept my arms slung around his neck while his were holding me tightly against him. He buried his head in the crook of my neck, inhaling my perfume and peppering kisses on my skin. “
~🦋🦋🦋
"You're so fucking tiny." He chuckled.
"Well, I suppose you could give me a few inches then." I smiled to myself when I felt him tense.
"That fucking mouth."
~SCREAMINGGGGGGHHHHHH 🤸🏻♀️🤸🏻♀️🤸🏻♀️
He sent me a mirror selfie which had visibly been taken in the locker room after his practice. I found myself grinning because damn that guy was hot.
Me: Turn around just a liiiittle bit.
Another picture came through where we could clearly see the side outline of his ass, hugged to perfection by his gray joggers.
Me: Sexiest ass on the block, baby.
~HAHAH I LOVEEE THEMMM
“My fingers drew abstract patterns on her back while we basked in each other’s presence.”
~why is this so 🥹🥹
When I started this, I was not expecting myself to enjoy it this much. Aaahhhhh I’m madly in loveeee w LeviDani 🤸♂️🤸♂️
This was the most perfect blend of smutty and wholesome, filthy and easygoing that I’ve ever read in a novella 👑👑 I genuinely think I’ve found a gem here.
This authors writing was so engaging and I never skimmed once. Gahhh it got me blushing,, giggling, HOT ASF and overall so happy I can’t get over it, can’t get over them!
THE SMUT WAS FIREEE I HAVE NO WORDS JUST READ IT-
Small moments are my kryptonite and this was written so PERFECTLY. It had everything I wanted. The hugging, the aftercare, skimming their thumb on the other’s cheek, unashamedly staring at the other, calling each other baby LIKEEEEE 💘💕💖💝💞🦋💓💗
The COMMUNICATION was so good. I love that the fmc wasn’t some bumbling girl but knew exactly what she wanted and said it. And that the mmc wasn’t an ass but the cutest golden retriever with a dominant streak MY BRAIN IS MELTING RN
These 230 pages easily beat so many books with over 500 pages of random filler in between. Each chapter got to the point. There was nothing unnecessary, and the third act was resolved quickly and it was the most ADORABLE third act ever 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 I literally wanted to sob on the floor bc of hm i love Levi.
I am 1000% gna reread LeviDani diaries forevermore 💅
𝗦𝗶𝗱𝗲 𝗻𝗼𝘁𝗲:
Saying goodbye to EliMia as number 1. It’s the start of a new era 😣❤️🩹
𝗦𝗼𝗻𝗴𝘀: 🎧
Fantasy — azee
Vixen — Miguel
𝗙𝗮𝘃 𝗤𝘂𝗼𝘁𝗲𝘀:
“She didn't say anything as I tucked her against my chest. She looked content instead, rubbing her cheek against my shirt. My nickname for her made all the sense in the world right then.”
~he calls her kitten 💘💕💓💞💞
“I kept my arms slung around his neck while his were holding me tightly against him. He buried his head in the crook of my neck, inhaling my perfume and peppering kisses on my skin. “
~🦋🦋🦋
"You're so fucking tiny." He chuckled.
"Well, I suppose you could give me a few inches then." I smiled to myself when I felt him tense.
"That fucking mouth."
~SCREAMINGGGGGGHHHHHH 🤸🏻♀️🤸🏻♀️🤸🏻♀️
He sent me a mirror selfie which had visibly been taken in the locker room after his practice. I found myself grinning because damn that guy was hot.
Me: Turn around just a liiiittle bit.
Another picture came through where we could clearly see the side outline of his ass, hugged to perfection by his gray joggers.
Me: Sexiest ass on the block, baby.
~HAHAH I LOVEEE THEMMM
“My fingers drew abstract patterns on her back while we basked in each other’s presence.”
~why is this so 🥹🥹
September 1, 2024
– 3.75 stars ★
"You, Levi Callahan, were written for me."
This was the cutest book ever, and I literally devoured every single word. From now on i know that i can always count on my pookie Buket for the cutest romances, bc this was amazing🫡
These 2 were so sweet, adorable, cute and literally perfect. The way they had me giggling the whole time should be illegal.
"You, Levi Callahan, were written for me."
This was the cutest book ever, and I literally devoured every single word. From now on i know that i can always count on my pookie Buket for the cutest romances, bc this was amazing🫡
These 2 were so sweet, adorable, cute and literally perfect. The way they had me giggling the whole time should be illegal.
September 24, 2023
GUYS DON'T READ THIS IN PUBLIC because it was so embarrassing how i was giggling, kicking my feet and blushing while reading this 🤭🤭
they were so silly and perfect for each other 🤭 might be one of the sweetest stories i've read 💖💞😭😍🥺🤭😌✨
when Iqra said in her review ADORABLE THIRD ACT i knew i had to see it. and let me tell you she was righttttt😌 it was so CUTE like who gave them permission to be so cute????????🤨🤭
anyways bestttttt novella i've read. the smut? perfect🧿 the way they were acting every single one of her fantasies ✋🏼 pleaseeeeeee
💓 "You know… I think you're my best friend, Levi."
"I know you're mine."
💖 "You, Levi Callahan, were written for me."
they were so silly and perfect for each other 🤭 might be one of the sweetest stories i've read 💖💞😭😍🥺🤭😌✨
when Iqra said in her review ADORABLE THIRD ACT i knew i had to see it. and let me tell you she was righttttt😌 it was so CUTE like who gave them permission to be so cute????????🤨🤭
anyways bestttttt novella i've read. the smut? perfect🧿 the way they were acting every single one of her fantasies ✋🏼 pleaseeeeeee
💓 "You know… I think you're my best friend, Levi."
"I know you're mine."
💖 "You, Levi Callahan, were written for me."
September 27, 2023
This is MY opinion but I received an ARC from the author.
I’m so happy that I was able to receive an e-ARC of this book. Once I heard about this it became one of my most anticipated reads. It has everything that I was looking for and I felt a bit represented by the h. If not for one detail (a personal preference) this book will be a 10/10.
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This review has SPOILERS SPOILER !!!!!!!!!!
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The resume will be that Daniella or Dani, the h, is a virgin erotic writer and has decided that she needs to lose her virginity and recreate the scenes that she wants in her books to make them more realistic and also, to find inspiration for the next book. So, she asked her childhood bff and he declines and make her feel ashamed. What an ass. But our H, Levi, came to the rescue and once h told him what happened he decides that he wants to be the one that helps her (between you and me, he has been having a crush on her since they met 2 years ago but thought that she only dates smart guys and he isn’t one. In fact, she tutors him to make him pass his exams) So, he decides to go to her room dressed as a geek (a hot one) after reading all her erotic novellas and decides that recreating that one will fit better for the first time bc she is the one making all the moves and being in control. h opens the door and that’s ALL I’m saying. Don’t want to spoil more.
Some of the tropes:
🏒Dual POV
🏒She tutors him
🏒Hockey player
🏒Role play.
🏒She writes spicy scenes, he helps her reenact them!
🏒College romance
🏒Friends to lovers
🏒Golden retriever H x sunshine h
🏒H has a crush on h
🏒Virgin h
🏒Degradatory kink
🏒Praise kink for her (AND for him)
🏒Healthy communication
🏒Impact play
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SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS
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Now, I’m going to start with my opinion:
I will start with all the good:
The book was super fun, steamy, hot, and even “Real”. By real I mean that normally these novellas tend to be OTT (I’m here for it) but this one doesn’t feel crazy. For me, it’s something that can happen in real life.
The H is great. H is obsessed with her and it’s 100% on it. There is minimal miscommunication and he will have to go through that if that was what she wanted even tho it will have killed him (emotionally)
I felt a bit represented by the h. I mean she is 22 and I’m 23 but for the rest, I will say we are pretty similar. Except for Levi, WHERE IS MY LEVI???!?!
It’s the first time that I have read a book with this dynamic. We have different types of scenarios and they are all pretty hot.
Great communication. Except for a minimal one almost at the end, they talk about everything and put a safety word and talk about STDs. Good job!
There is NOT OW drama. And just a tiny bit of OM drama bc she asked first her childhood friend.
Even tho (spoilers for the cons) H is NOT celibate after meeting h. He has been celibate for a while (almost a year?) As I said before, H has always had a crush on h so I will prefer he is celibate or that there is no mention of H being with others.
Finally, there are some crumbs about h and H in the next book.
The Cons:
This can be summarized in one thing. Double standards. h is a virgin (hasn’t even had her first kiss) while H has been with others AFTER meeting her. He is a bit of a manho and I just wish that he wasn’t after meeting her. h didn’t give him any signal that they can be together but idk I just LOVE it when once they meet there are no others. There are not many mentions of his past but there are some and I didn’t like that. I forgave him bc he is actually great and adores the h but I just hate that I'm not good enough for her so I’m going to be with others. But he was celibate for quite some time so there’s that.
I’m so happy that I was able to receive an e-ARC of this book. Once I heard about this it became one of my most anticipated reads. It has everything that I was looking for and I felt a bit represented by the h. If not for one detail (a personal preference) this book will be a 10/10.
⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️
This review has SPOILERS SPOILER !!!!!!!!!!
⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️
The resume will be that Daniella or Dani, the h, is a virgin erotic writer and has decided that she needs to lose her virginity and recreate the scenes that she wants in her books to make them more realistic and also, to find inspiration for the next book. So, she asked her childhood bff and he declines and make her feel ashamed. What an ass. But our H, Levi, came to the rescue and once h told him what happened he decides that he wants to be the one that helps her (between you and me, he has been having a crush on her since they met 2 years ago but thought that she only dates smart guys and he isn’t one. In fact, she tutors him to make him pass his exams) So, he decides to go to her room dressed as a geek (a hot one) after reading all her erotic novellas and decides that recreating that one will fit better for the first time bc she is the one making all the moves and being in control. h opens the door and that’s ALL I’m saying. Don’t want to spoil more.
Some of the tropes:
🏒Dual POV
🏒She tutors him
🏒Hockey player
🏒Role play.
🏒She writes spicy scenes, he helps her reenact them!
🏒College romance
🏒Friends to lovers
🏒Golden retriever H x sunshine h
🏒H has a crush on h
🏒Virgin h
🏒Degradatory kink
🏒Praise kink for her (AND for him)
🏒Healthy communication
🏒Impact play
⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️
SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS
⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️
Now, I’m going to start with my opinion:
I will start with all the good:
The book was super fun, steamy, hot, and even “Real”. By real I mean that normally these novellas tend to be OTT (I’m here for it) but this one doesn’t feel crazy. For me, it’s something that can happen in real life.
The H is great. H is obsessed with her and it’s 100% on it. There is minimal miscommunication and he will have to go through that if that was what she wanted even tho it will have killed him (emotionally)
I felt a bit represented by the h. I mean she is 22 and I’m 23 but for the rest, I will say we are pretty similar. Except for Levi, WHERE IS MY LEVI???!?!
It’s the first time that I have read a book with this dynamic. We have different types of scenarios and they are all pretty hot.
Great communication. Except for a minimal one almost at the end, they talk about everything and put a safety word and talk about STDs. Good job!
There is NOT OW drama. And just a tiny bit of OM drama bc she asked first her childhood friend.
Even tho (spoilers for the cons) H is NOT celibate after meeting h. He has been celibate for a while (almost a year?) As I said before, H has always had a crush on h so I will prefer he is celibate or that there is no mention of H being with others.
Finally, there are some crumbs about h and H in the next book.
The Cons:
This can be summarized in one thing. Double standards. h is a virgin (hasn’t even had her first kiss) while H has been with others AFTER meeting her. He is a bit of a manho and I just wish that he wasn’t after meeting her. h didn’t give him any signal that they can be together but idk I just LOVE it when once they meet there are no others. There are not many mentions of his past but there are some and I didn’t like that. I forgave him bc he is actually great and adores the h but I just hate that I'm not good enough for her so I’m going to be with others. But he was celibate for quite some time so there’s that.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 1, 2024
RATING: 3.5✨
SPICE: 🌶🌶🌶
Spice/Kink Elements:
✔ Vanilla-type scene(s) (no roleplay elements)
✔ Confident, experienced FMC x nerd “virgin” tutor MMC roleplay
✔ Nerdy schoolgirl tutor FMC x footballer jock MMC roleplay
✔ Cheerleader FMC x pizza delivery man MMC roleplay
✔ Use of sex toys/sex shop shopping spree date
✔ Final girl FMC x Ghostface MMC Scream movie roleplay
✔ TAKEN FROM AUTHOR NOTES: breath play, light primal play, mask kink, praise and degradation, dirty talk, CNC in the context of role-play, and knife play
Trope/Setting Highlights:
✔ Little over ~240 pages
✔ Smutty college-set contemporary romance novella
✔ Student tutor FMC x hockey player MMC
✔ Low stakes/angst
✔ Sex roleplay scenarios
✔ HEA
Review:
Macy T. Riosa, you are so iconic for this.
Listen, let me start off this review saying this: if you’re looking for heavy prose or Shakespearean level writing, this novella won’t be that. There’s no over-the-top stakes, or an overarching motif, or Inception level plot twists.
However, this novella doesn’t claim to be that, or even want to be that, for that matter.
Playing the Part by Macy T. Riosa follows college student Dani, who on the side publishes erotica fiction to her blog with mild success. When readers claim her inexperience with sex is beginning to show in her work (and well, they’re not so wrong on the inexperienced part), Dani seeks to find a partner to test out her roleplay scenes after writing them, to ensure full accuracy, of course.
Enter Levi, the hockey player Dani has been tutoring for the past 2 years. While he isn’t her first choice for the arrangement (not due to lack of wanting), they end up finding their way to each other, and to some seriously sexy fun.
Dani and Levi were just two sweet people that found in each other a genuine friendship, with a gradual buildup of affection and trust. And in that trust, a safe space to explore their inner desires and ideas was formed. They are each other’s safe space.
And honestly, get you a MMC that:
✔ Consistently encourages your passions
✔ Is confident enough in his masculinity to try almost anything once and has enough emotional maturity to discuss personal boundaries
✔ Buys you all your favorite snacks when you’re sad/sick
✔ Sneaks into your class to take notes for you when you complain you feel sick
✔ Remembers all the little details
Overall, this was a great read that came at the perfect time for me, after nearly going into a post-5-star-but-heavy-read coma. This was sweet and spicy in all the best ways, and sometimes there’s truly nothing better than watching two good people fall in love and have hot, kinky sex.
I’ll end on this: I would’ve given this a full 5 stars just for the premise alone, but I just had to dock a bit off because we had the perfect set-up for that billionaire MMC x maid FMC roleplay with domination, spanking, and breeding (with no actual pregnancy) and it just… didn’t… happen. That’s like the greatest hits of kink (for me at least)!
Also the writing overall was a little weak.
@Macy T. Riosa I’m not saying bonus extended epilogue… but bonus extended epilogue.
SPICE: 🌶🌶🌶
Spice/Kink Elements:
✔ Vanilla-type scene(s) (no roleplay elements)
✔ Confident, experienced FMC x nerd “virgin” tutor MMC roleplay
✔ Nerdy schoolgirl tutor FMC x footballer jock MMC roleplay
✔ Cheerleader FMC x pizza delivery man MMC roleplay
✔ Use of sex toys/sex shop shopping spree date
✔ Final girl FMC x Ghostface MMC Scream movie roleplay
✔ TAKEN FROM AUTHOR NOTES: breath play, light primal play, mask kink, praise and degradation, dirty talk, CNC in the context of role-play, and knife play
Trope/Setting Highlights:
✔ Little over ~240 pages
✔ Smutty college-set contemporary romance novella
✔ Student tutor FMC x hockey player MMC
✔ Low stakes/angst
✔ Sex roleplay scenarios
✔ HEA
Review:
Macy T. Riosa, you are so iconic for this.
Listen, let me start off this review saying this: if you’re looking for heavy prose or Shakespearean level writing, this novella won’t be that. There’s no over-the-top stakes, or an overarching motif, or Inception level plot twists.
However, this novella doesn’t claim to be that, or even want to be that, for that matter.
Playing the Part by Macy T. Riosa follows college student Dani, who on the side publishes erotica fiction to her blog with mild success. When readers claim her inexperience with sex is beginning to show in her work (and well, they’re not so wrong on the inexperienced part), Dani seeks to find a partner to test out her roleplay scenes after writing them, to ensure full accuracy, of course.
Enter Levi, the hockey player Dani has been tutoring for the past 2 years. While he isn’t her first choice for the arrangement (not due to lack of wanting), they end up finding their way to each other, and to some seriously sexy fun.
Dani and Levi were just two sweet people that found in each other a genuine friendship, with a gradual buildup of affection and trust. And in that trust, a safe space to explore their inner desires and ideas was formed. They are each other’s safe space.
And honestly, get you a MMC that:
✔ Consistently encourages your passions
✔ Is confident enough in his masculinity to try almost anything once and has enough emotional maturity to discuss personal boundaries
✔ Buys you all your favorite snacks when you’re sad/sick
✔ Sneaks into your class to take notes for you when you complain you feel sick
✔ Remembers all the little details
Overall, this was a great read that came at the perfect time for me, after nearly going into a post-5-star-but-heavy-read coma. This was sweet and spicy in all the best ways, and sometimes there’s truly nothing better than watching two good people fall in love and have hot, kinky sex.
I’ll end on this: I would’ve given this a full 5 stars just for the premise alone, but I just had to dock a bit off because we had the perfect set-up for that billionaire MMC x maid FMC roleplay with domination, spanking, and breeding (with no actual pregnancy) and it just… didn’t… happen. That’s like the greatest hits of kink (for me at least)!
Also the writing overall was a little weak.
@Macy T. Riosa I’m not saying bonus extended epilogue… but bonus extended epilogue.
September 29, 2023
it's supposed to be four stars but the second-hand embarrassment stole one star
January 5, 2024
now if this was satire i would’ve had a nice giggle over the pussy sized pads and ghostface smut scene but this author is (sadly) fully serious so now my entire week is ruined
June 17, 2023
I might be terrified of roller coasters but this was very enjoyable ride.
May 24, 2023
levi being obsessed with dani was hot.
dani was a "girly girl", nah hey that's how she introduced herself.
was good overall ♡
dani was a "girly girl", nah hey that's how she introduced herself.
was good overall ♡
September 24, 2023
4.75/5 💫
OMG this freaking book had me blushing, giggling and kicking my feet every chapter. 🤭
I didn’t think I’d like a book with role play much but I ended up highlighting almost every single page 😫 It’s been a while since I read a book in one sitting (my eyes lowkey hurt) and didn’t zone out or skip the smut scenes. 😋
I love LeviDani so much, they’re so perfect for each other 💗💖💕
Levi is the embodiment of golden retriever bf. Pls the way he showed up to her place the first night 😭🤚🏻 and him being bitter and anxious about dani choosing jace over him ?? I love me an insecure man 😌 I didn’t even mind that he was a former manwhore since he stopped for a good reason 🫶🏻 Surprisingly, it didn’t bother me at all how he called her “kitten” 🫣
Dani’s personality was chefs kiss, I love her ability to leave everyone speechless 😭
“‘I'm so sorry, Levi. I was so looking forward to having you inside me.’ I couldn't help it and chuckled at her confession because damn, again, that girl had no fucking filter. I was starting to love that about her.”
Side note, I really really hope she’ll write a book/novella for Kane and do him justice 🌝
Thank you Iqra for forcing me to read it 🫶🏻 🫂and you’re welcome for the live reactions <3
Quotes 💘
“I put her down in front of the door and she sent me a shy smile before entering it and closing the door after herself. I noticed she was limping slightly which got me thinking of how painful periods must be for women. Five days of that? Per month? Men could never.” Our feminist icon 😌
“God, why did my heart feel so constricted whenever I saw her cry? It was torture.”
"So, I know I should probably know that because I've had my fingers in there quite a few times now," an old lady passed by and heard the end of my sentence. She looked at me with weird eyes. "But, well, there seems to be no extra small and uh… God, there's no sweet way to ask that. What's your pussy size, Dani?"
"You know… I think you're my best friend, Levi." I brought her closer to me, hugging her to my chest as she returned the embrace. “I know you're mine." I love them soso muchh 🥹🫶🏻
OMG this freaking book had me blushing, giggling and kicking my feet every chapter. 🤭
I didn’t think I’d like a book with role play much but I ended up highlighting almost every single page 😫 It’s been a while since I read a book in one sitting (my eyes lowkey hurt) and didn’t zone out or skip the smut scenes. 😋
I love LeviDani so much, they’re so perfect for each other 💗💖💕
Levi is the embodiment of golden retriever bf. Pls the way he showed up to her place the first night 😭🤚🏻 and him being bitter and anxious about dani choosing jace over him ?? I love me an insecure man 😌 I didn’t even mind that he was a former manwhore since he stopped for a good reason 🫶🏻 Surprisingly, it didn’t bother me at all how he called her “kitten” 🫣
Dani’s personality was chefs kiss, I love her ability to leave everyone speechless 😭
“‘I'm so sorry, Levi. I was so looking forward to having you inside me.’ I couldn't help it and chuckled at her confession because damn, again, that girl had no fucking filter. I was starting to love that about her.”
Side note, I really really hope she’ll write a book/novella for Kane and do him justice 🌝
Thank you Iqra for forcing me to read it 🫶🏻 🫂and you’re welcome for the live reactions <3
Quotes 💘
“I put her down in front of the door and she sent me a shy smile before entering it and closing the door after herself. I noticed she was limping slightly which got me thinking of how painful periods must be for women. Five days of that? Per month? Men could never.” Our feminist icon 😌
“God, why did my heart feel so constricted whenever I saw her cry? It was torture.”
"So, I know I should probably know that because I've had my fingers in there quite a few times now," an old lady passed by and heard the end of my sentence. She looked at me with weird eyes. "But, well, there seems to be no extra small and uh… God, there's no sweet way to ask that. What's your pussy size, Dani?"
"You know… I think you're my best friend, Levi." I brought her closer to me, hugging her to my chest as she returned the embrace. “I know you're mine." I love them soso muchh 🥹🫶🏻
May 27, 2023
this was such a fun smutty, yet beautifully written and executed, short story!! i loved their dynamic and when i tell you levi is a top book boyfriend i mean it WOW hot hot hot
i loved macy’s writing style so much and look forward to going back to read her other book, i also cant wait for more in the future!!
dani was a very loveable character and i would love to read her short stories🤭🤭 the connection between dani and levi was so apparent and the chemistry was off the charts, they fit SO well together
i loved macy’s writing style so much and look forward to going back to read her other book, i also cant wait for more in the future!!
dani was a very loveable character and i would love to read her short stories🤭🤭 the connection between dani and levi was so apparent and the chemistry was off the charts, they fit SO well together
October 23, 2024
-=- (Re-read) -=-
*+:｡.｡ 4 stars ｡.｡:+*
I ended up loving this one so much more than I did the first time around (although I still can't get through the first smut scene with a straight face 😭).
This was so good.
-=- (Original read) -=-
"You, Levi Callahan, were written for me."
-=-(3.5 stars)-=-
Listen, when I started this book I almost DNF-ed it because the first smut scene had me questioning if it was worth it 😭. I just about lost it when he started stuttering 💀-yes I get it was roleplay but the outfit and the acting had me rolling (not in a good way) 😭.
BUT I'm so glad that I stuck with this book. Small editing/ grammar mistakes aside this story was just so fun. I found myself laughing so many times and just fell in love with these characters.
Their relationship was romantic and personal and just so sweet- I literally sent my friend an unnecessary amount of voice notes about how cute one of the scenes was. Levi & Dani's communication was everything and I loved how the story played out.
Overall it was just so fun- and I really enjoyed reading it. I can definitely see myself re-reading this because let me tell you, the comfort care scenes, mixed in with their amazing communication (and smut), just led to such a lighthearted, and easy read. (and Dani was so real for the ghost face scenes lmfaooo).
*+:｡.｡ 4 stars ｡.｡:+*
I ended up loving this one so much more than I did the first time around (although I still can't get through the first smut scene with a straight face 😭).
This was so good.
-=- (Original read) -=-
"You, Levi Callahan, were written for me."
-=-(3.5 stars)-=-
Listen, when I started this book I almost DNF-ed it because the first smut scene had me questioning if it was worth it 😭. I just about lost it when he started stuttering 💀-yes I get it was roleplay but the outfit and the acting had me rolling (not in a good way) 😭.
BUT I'm so glad that I stuck with this book. Small editing/ grammar mistakes aside this story was just so fun. I found myself laughing so many times and just fell in love with these characters.
Their relationship was romantic and personal and just so sweet- I literally sent my friend an unnecessary amount of voice notes about how cute one of the scenes was. Levi & Dani's communication was everything and I loved how the story played out.
Overall it was just so fun- and I really enjoyed reading it. I can definitely see myself re-reading this because let me tell you, the comfort care scenes, mixed in with their amazing communication (and smut), just led to such a lighthearted, and easy read. (and Dani was so real for the ghost face scenes lmfaooo).
February 20, 2024
4⭐️
4🌶️
This book was all spice with the tiniest bit of plot imaginable thrown in there for flare. It was a great book to read after reading Iron Flame. It got me out of my feelings so I don’t have to deep dive into those quite yet. It was short, spicy, and the characters are lovable. Only thing is if you don’t like cliques this book is not for you. It is full of them, but I will say I didn’t expect the last scene before the epilogue through me in for a loop and I loved it. It was the perfect spicy ending. I almost didn’t read the epilogue, but I did and felt like it was really unneeded.
4🌶️
This book was all spice with the tiniest bit of plot imaginable thrown in there for flare. It was a great book to read after reading Iron Flame. It got me out of my feelings so I don’t have to deep dive into those quite yet. It was short, spicy, and the characters are lovable. Only thing is if you don’t like cliques this book is not for you. It is full of them, but I will say I didn’t expect the last scene before the epilogue through me in for a loop and I loved it. It was the perfect spicy ending. I almost didn’t read the epilogue, but I did and felt like it was really unneeded.
November 27, 2023
5 fully smut stars 🌟 THE PERFECT NOVELLA! 🤭
If you’re in the mood of a book full of smut, go for this. It’s also super cute tho. ❤️❤️
If you’re in the mood of a book full of smut, go for this. It’s also super cute tho. ❤️❤️
September 28, 2023
"You, Levi Callahan, were written for me."
this was such a cute and fun read, so wholesome reading about Levi and Dani, it was like a breath of fresh air.
read it read it read it 100% recommend 😩✨
iykyk 😏👻💀
July 8, 2023
i should start reading book descriptions before actually starting the book
September 11, 2023
SHE IS A SPICY ROMANCE WRITER AND HE HELPS HER RENACT HER STORIES.
this was such a quick, cute and smutty read. i devoured this in a day and trust me when i tell you, I COULDN'T PUT IT DOWN.
levi callahan, you have my heart. and dani was so relatable at times, i love her.
the pace was perfect and levi was a gentleman. the things he did for dani made my heart flutter in so many ways. the smut got better with every page, every chapter. i cannot thank macy enough for sending me the arc of this novella.
– spicy college romance novella
– quick read
– he falls first
– boy obsessed
– friends to lovers
I NEED Y'ALL TO READ THIS BOOK RIGHT AWAY. thank you macy for the e-arc copy♡
this was such a quick, cute and smutty read. i devoured this in a day and trust me when i tell you, I COULDN'T PUT IT DOWN.
levi callahan, you have my heart. and dani was so relatable at times, i love her.
the pace was perfect and levi was a gentleman. the things he did for dani made my heart flutter in so many ways. the smut got better with every page, every chapter. i cannot thank macy enough for sending me the arc of this novella.
– spicy college romance novella
– quick read
– he falls first
– boy obsessed
– friends to lovers
I NEED Y'ALL TO READ THIS BOOK RIGHT AWAY. thank you macy for the e-arc copy♡
November 21, 2023
Daniella, known as Dani, is a college student who writes spicy romances online. When she's not studyin' or writin', she tutors students and one of them is Levi. So when Dani blurts out that she's in dire need of a partner to help her renact her stories because she's inexperienced, Levi doesn't think twice and jumps at the chance to help her.
The pace is good and I devoured EVERY page of this book. It was cute, short and fun + the characters are so loveable. Dani’s kind heart & unfiltered mouth? Hell, I want her. Levi's small intentions and acts of service? *HOT* I don't accept Dani and Levi haters here, let’s be clear. anYwaYs, one aspect of the book that I really liked was the communication. Characters able to communicate and listen to one another? HELL YES.
“You, Levi Callahan, were written for me.”
The pace is good and I devoured EVERY page of this book. It was cute, short and fun + the characters are so loveable. Dani’s kind heart & unfiltered mouth? Hell, I want her. Levi's small intentions and acts of service? *HOT* I don't accept Dani and Levi haters here, let’s be clear. anYwaYs, one aspect of the book that I really liked was the communication. Characters able to communicate and listen to one another? HELL YES.
May 16, 2023
I received an ARC for my honest review - thanks Macy!
Dani and Levi are study buddies and Dani approaches Levi with a particularly head-scratching problem. They’re friends, so who is Levi to say no? And thus starts their unconventional but entirely mutually beneficial arrangement.
I loved the characters, their communication (really about everything but their growing feelings for one another), their openness to be vulnerable and really ask for what they want. There is enough role reversal to pique your interest at some part throughout the book.
Overall, it was a good, fun read!
Dani and Levi are study buddies and Dani approaches Levi with a particularly head-scratching problem. They’re friends, so who is Levi to say no? And thus starts their unconventional but entirely mutually beneficial arrangement.
I loved the characters, their communication (really about everything but their growing feelings for one another), their openness to be vulnerable and really ask for what they want. There is enough role reversal to pique your interest at some part throughout the book.
Overall, it was a good, fun read!
July 5, 2024
Macy T. Riosa is rapidly becoming one of my go to authors.
Though this book contained one of my pet peeve,
virgin FMC x reformed manho MMC.
However it did not deter the love I felt for these two, Levi is a down so bad, downright obsessed, fell first AND harder swoony MMC.
That boy was willing to put up with Dani’s nutcase requests to reenact her book scenarios to be a better writer, as well as he binged all of her books to better understand her 😭😭😭 I love him so much. He even gives his input on some of her books and suggests different scenarios to role-play.
Though this book contained one of my pet peeve,
virgin FMC x reformed manho MMC.
However it did not deter the love I felt for these two, Levi is a down so bad, downright obsessed, fell first AND harder swoony MMC.
That boy was willing to put up with Dani’s nutcase requests to reenact her book scenarios to be a better writer, as well as he binged all of her books to better understand her 😭😭😭 I love him so much. He even gives his input on some of her books and suggests different scenarios to role-play.
May 20, 2023
*arc review*
“You, Levi Callahan, we’re written for me.”
Oh me oh my this book was incredible.
Levi Callahan, my sweet dirty boy I love him so much. He can punch me, kick me, pull my hair. I am A-OK being stabbed. Biting and scratching are on the table. He can use fire too because why not. I’m down for anything
this novella was PACKED with smut and FLUFF! how??? I have no idea how Macy did it but she is an ARTIST. It swept me off my feet.
Dani was adorable and I loved that she has no filter and embraces is because same. Dani and levi were perfect for each other. They were so precious and adorable I want to have what they have!
I would like to kiss Macy’s forehead for writing the ultimate ghost face smutty scene of my dreams because wow! She gets me. I adore scream franchise and I only recently I discovered that I have a …thing for ghost face so….you can imagine the rest
Overall, this novella is a palette cleaner and if you are looking for the perfect balance of smut and fluff make sure to read it !
“You, Levi Callahan, we’re written for me.”
Oh me oh my this book was incredible.
Levi Callahan, my sweet dirty boy I love him so much. He can punch me, kick me, pull my hair. I am A-OK being stabbed. Biting and scratching are on the table. He can use fire too because why not. I’m down for anything
this novella was PACKED with smut and FLUFF! how??? I have no idea how Macy did it but she is an ARTIST. It swept me off my feet.
Dani was adorable and I loved that she has no filter and embraces is because same. Dani and levi were perfect for each other. They were so precious and adorable I want to have what they have!
I would like to kiss Macy’s forehead for writing the ultimate ghost face smutty scene of my dreams because wow! She gets me. I adore scream franchise and I only recently I discovered that I have a …thing for ghost face so….you can imagine the rest
Overall, this novella is a palette cleaner and if you are looking for the perfect balance of smut and fluff make sure to read it !
October 11, 2023
3.5 ⭑ “preferring fictional men over real ones.” no but so real
November 30, 2024
I need a Levi in my life
May 16, 2023
I received an ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review. Thank you so much Macy T. Riosa!
Daniella Vega is a twenty-year-old who secretly keeps a blog of smutty short stories under the pen name Diamond Herrera. But there's a tiny little problem, she's a virgin and her lack of experience is starting to show. And what better way to improve her writing than by enacting her own stories? She needs some help, though...
Levi Callahan, captain of the hockey team, has been tutored by Dani for two years and has always been drawn to her, but she's never given him the time of day. When the opportunity arises, Levi showed Dani exactly how eager he was to help her in any capacity.
Levi has won me over so fast. His inner dialogue was great, he was so funny. I loved how thoughtful he was to Dani, very dreamy. Dani was a breath of fresh air. She was funny and light-hearted. Despite her lack of experience, Dani wasn't ashamed of it.
"You, Levi Callahan, were written for me."
This novella's story revolves around role-playing, and that alone had me in a chokehold. I was low-key expecting more scenes, though, I'm not gonna lie. But all those that happened were very satisfying. Macy knows how to write her smut. It was such a feel-good novella, the pace was perfect for the book's length, in my opinion.
The highlights in the story for me it was refreshing to see two characters in a friends-with-benefits/fuck buddies situation that were open to that becoming more (although they didn't talk openly about it). On that note, they were great at communication. Gotta love his kind of relationship. They were very honest and open to each other. It was so damn cute seeing them falling in love with each other so naturally.
Macy's done it again and I can't wait to read her upcoming books.
Daniella Vega is a twenty-year-old who secretly keeps a blog of smutty short stories under the pen name Diamond Herrera. But there's a tiny little problem, she's a virgin and her lack of experience is starting to show. And what better way to improve her writing than by enacting her own stories? She needs some help, though...
Levi Callahan, captain of the hockey team, has been tutored by Dani for two years and has always been drawn to her, but she's never given him the time of day. When the opportunity arises, Levi showed Dani exactly how eager he was to help her in any capacity.
Levi has won me over so fast. His inner dialogue was great, he was so funny. I loved how thoughtful he was to Dani, very dreamy. Dani was a breath of fresh air. She was funny and light-hearted. Despite her lack of experience, Dani wasn't ashamed of it.
"You, Levi Callahan, were written for me."
This novella's story revolves around role-playing, and that alone had me in a chokehold. I was low-key expecting more scenes, though, I'm not gonna lie. But all those that happened were very satisfying. Macy knows how to write her smut. It was such a feel-good novella, the pace was perfect for the book's length, in my opinion.
The highlights in the story for me it was refreshing to see two characters in a friends-with-benefits/fuck buddies situation that were open to that becoming more (although they didn't talk openly about it). On that note, they were great at communication. Gotta love his kind of relationship. They were very honest and open to each other. It was so damn cute seeing them falling in love with each other so naturally.
Macy's done it again and I can't wait to read her upcoming books.
August 26, 2024
Levi & Daniel
August 24, 2023
"𝙔𝙤𝙪, 𝙇𝙚𝙫𝙞 𝘾𝙖𝙡𝙡𝙖𝙝𝙖𝙣, 𝙬𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙬𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙩𝙚𝙣 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙢𝙚."
"𝙒-𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙞𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙖𝙧𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙨 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙙𝙤𝙣'𝙩 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚?"
"𝙄'𝙡𝙡 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙞𝙩 𝙘𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙨 𝙩𝙤 𝙮𝙤𝙪."
"𝙂𝙚𝙩 𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠. 𝙉𝙤𝙬. 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙩𝙖𝙠𝙚 𝙤𝙛𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙙𝙖𝙢𝙣 𝙥𝙖𝙣𝙩𝙞𝙚𝙨."
"𝘽𝙤𝙡𝙙 𝙤𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙩𝙤 𝙖𝙨𝙨𝙪𝙢𝙚 𝙄'𝙢 𝙬𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙣𝙮."
Not even ten pages in and I was already giggling and blushing.
It was so hilarious.
The cute little girl writing erotica in her free time? Sounds fun to me, huh?!
The roleplay was sooo gooddd.
There wasn't an actual plot or something but who cares? WHO THE FUCK CARES ????? Not me probably.
To be fair, the book was actually cliche at times. Also, everything was fine but it was kinda unrealistic how the Mc just agreed to do all this with her. Hell he offered!! And she just accepted his offer. I mean, like girl? Have some sense of sanity maybe?? Idk? He isn't really your friend? Just a guy whom you tutor and you already trust him with your body? So easily?
Also, it was kinda cringe how he called her kitten.
The first time he called her that was so random and so unnecessary. You just don't go around calling people such names?? Also girls calling guys 'baby', sounds so off to me!! (And cringe. And weird.)
We were not really introduced to them as individuals. Not only does this book have no plot. We don't really know them as a person.
I was so excited to complete the book as the starting of the book was actually good. (My opinion changed later and I'm not happy about it.) I still feel it's a cute book and a quick read but it's just not it tbh. It was not THE BOOK for me. But overall it was a cute short story.
This book was so cringe - it wasn't too bad - that I'm literally desperate to read a dark romance with an asshole Mc in it. This book gives so tik tok kinda vibes.
Based on the few first pages of the book. I would have actually given it a 5 stars. ( But as I said, my opinion changed later.)
Also the roleplay in the epilogue was so so similar to haunting Adeline. It lowkey made me uncomfortable tbh. It felt wrong to me. Like I'm cheating or something?? idk???
Cat playing with the mouse?? A fucking knife? The whole knife thing?? “If you lose… if you lose, I’ll catch you and I’ll fuck that tight little pussy of yours, senseless.” "Run, kitten" ??
Also now that I think about it, the girl is also a fucking author?!!? I mean yeah kind of.
You just can't convince me that these similarities are just mere coincidence????
But you know what? Zade would never ever call his Addie a fucking whore or a slut. He would never 'disrespect' her. Roleplay or not. No matter what!!!
"𝙒-𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙞𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙖𝙧𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙨 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙙𝙤𝙣'𝙩 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚?"
"𝙄'𝙡𝙡 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙞𝙩 𝙘𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙨 𝙩𝙤 𝙮𝙤𝙪."
"𝙂𝙚𝙩 𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠. 𝙉𝙤𝙬. 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙩𝙖𝙠𝙚 𝙤𝙛𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙙𝙖𝙢𝙣 𝙥𝙖𝙣𝙩𝙞𝙚𝙨."
"𝘽𝙤𝙡𝙙 𝙤𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙩𝙤 𝙖𝙨𝙨𝙪𝙢𝙚 𝙄'𝙢 𝙬𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙣𝙮."
Not even ten pages in and I was already giggling and blushing.
It was so hilarious.
The cute little girl writing erotica in her free time? Sounds fun to me, huh?!
The roleplay was sooo gooddd.
There wasn't an actual plot or something but who cares? WHO THE FUCK CARES ????? Not me probably.
To be fair, the book was actually cliche at times. Also, everything was fine but it was kinda unrealistic how the Mc just agreed to do all this with her. Hell he offered!! And she just accepted his offer. I mean, like girl? Have some sense of sanity maybe?? Idk? He isn't really your friend? Just a guy whom you tutor and you already trust him with your body? So easily?
Also, it was kinda cringe how he called her kitten.
The first time he called her that was so random and so unnecessary. You just don't go around calling people such names?? Also girls calling guys 'baby', sounds so off to me!! (And cringe. And weird.)
We were not really introduced to them as individuals. Not only does this book have no plot. We don't really know them as a person.
I was so excited to complete the book as the starting of the book was actually good. (My opinion changed later and I'm not happy about it.) I still feel it's a cute book and a quick read but it's just not it tbh. It was not THE BOOK for me. But overall it was a cute short story.
This book was so cringe - it wasn't too bad - that I'm literally desperate to read a dark romance with an asshole Mc in it. This book gives so tik tok kinda vibes.
Based on the few first pages of the book. I would have actually given it a 5 stars. ( But as I said, my opinion changed later.)
Also the roleplay in the epilogue was so so similar to haunting Adeline. It lowkey made me uncomfortable tbh. It felt wrong to me. Like I'm cheating or something?? idk???
Cat playing with the mouse?? A fucking knife? The whole knife thing?? “If you lose… if you lose, I’ll catch you and I’ll fuck that tight little pussy of yours, senseless.” "Run, kitten" ??
Also now that I think about it, the girl is also a fucking author?!!? I mean yeah kind of.
You just can't convince me that these similarities are just mere coincidence????
But you know what? Zade would never ever call his Addie a fucking whore or a slut. He would never 'disrespect' her. Roleplay or not. No matter what!!!
August 16, 2023
⭐️⭐️
🏒📝 But then a wicked smile took over his face as he looked back at me and said, “Do that again.” 🏒📝
idk what to say other than it was a cute premise, but was written really… lamely? like it was just all very cheesy. like idk what drugs you guys are on to be rating it so highly, but truthfully, that is none of my business.
– Basically, Dani writes romance novels online and her audience has been commenting stuff about how she clearly hasn’t experienced any of what she’s writing irl, specifically the smut scenes. they’re like “clearly you’ve never seen a peen irl”, and lowkey, I feel like it would be impossible to tell any of that unless it was written by a legit child, but that is beyond the point.
– Levi, the hockey player she tutors, offers to help. it’s cute. they roleplay. he’s in love with her. whatever. blah, it got a bit boring. things that happened seemed very unrealistic. I just wanted it to end.
🩷 beautiful quotes, literally better than shakespeare: 🤍
I had three older brothers, but somehow it felt like I had found a fourth one who also doubled as a soul mate.
LMAO AYO???
”We might have considered each other siblings at one point, but we aren’t related! So it’s fine.”
GIRL??!!?
I’m not gonna lie and say my interest here is totally selfless though, because although I really want to help you improve your stories, I’m also really attracted to you.
okay word
"Aw, you blush so prettily."
I pinched the skin on his cheekbone mockingly when out of nowhere, his hand shot out and grabbed a handful of my hair, bringing our heads closer. I gasped in surprise but loved the unexpected show of dominance.
"Are you making fun of me, kitten?"
ok, i’ll be honest–this is a safe space so stfu–this line got me. made me blush a lil. do not hold this against me. I am only human. i am weak. i also need therapy most likely (unrelated).
Melissa had gotten me a coffee before she came to get me but these fuckers messed up the order and gave me almond milk instead of regular one and Lord only knows how bad almond milk tastes.
the almond milk slander really was not necessary?!? grow up 🙄
"But, well, there seems to be no extra small and uh… God, there's no sweet way to ask that. What's your pussy size, Dani?"
yes, that infamous ‘pussy size’ meme was included in this book for some unknown reason. i am gonna roll over and die now.
The worst thing about this, though, was that if she really wanted it, then I knew I’d give it to her. I’d put my feelings aside and make sure she was satisfied even if it broke my heart in the process.
OKAY LEVI, I SEE U
🏒📝 But then a wicked smile took over his face as he looked back at me and said, “Do that again.” 🏒📝
idk what to say other than it was a cute premise, but was written really… lamely? like it was just all very cheesy. like idk what drugs you guys are on to be rating it so highly, but truthfully, that is none of my business.
– Basically, Dani writes romance novels online and her audience has been commenting stuff about how she clearly hasn’t experienced any of what she’s writing irl, specifically the smut scenes. they’re like “clearly you’ve never seen a peen irl”, and lowkey, I feel like it would be impossible to tell any of that unless it was written by a legit child, but that is beyond the point.
– Levi, the hockey player she tutors, offers to help. it’s cute. they roleplay. he’s in love with her. whatever. blah, it got a bit boring. things that happened seemed very unrealistic. I just wanted it to end.
🩷 beautiful quotes, literally better than shakespeare: 🤍
I had three older brothers, but somehow it felt like I had found a fourth one who also doubled as a soul mate.
LMAO AYO???
”We might have considered each other siblings at one point, but we aren’t related! So it’s fine.”
GIRL??!!?
I’m not gonna lie and say my interest here is totally selfless though, because although I really want to help you improve your stories, I’m also really attracted to you.
okay word
"Aw, you blush so prettily."
I pinched the skin on his cheekbone mockingly when out of nowhere, his hand shot out and grabbed a handful of my hair, bringing our heads closer. I gasped in surprise but loved the unexpected show of dominance.
"Are you making fun of me, kitten?"
ok, i’ll be honest–this is a safe space so stfu–this line got me. made me blush a lil. do not hold this against me. I am only human. i am weak. i also need therapy most likely (unrelated).
Melissa had gotten me a coffee before she came to get me but these fuckers messed up the order and gave me almond milk instead of regular one and Lord only knows how bad almond milk tastes.
the almond milk slander really was not necessary?!? grow up 🙄
"But, well, there seems to be no extra small and uh… God, there's no sweet way to ask that. What's your pussy size, Dani?"
yes, that infamous ‘pussy size’ meme was included in this book for some unknown reason. i am gonna roll over and die now.
The worst thing about this, though, was that if she really wanted it, then I knew I’d give it to her. I’d put my feelings aside and make sure she was satisfied even if it broke my heart in the process.
OKAY LEVI, I SEE U
May 26, 2023
"You, Levi Callahan, were written for me."
Holy Shit! Did my water just broke? Or my period just came? (hint: i wasn't pregnant and i already had my this month's period)
I swear to God, this has to be one of the cutest and kinkiest novella. I love how both of them are so honest and obssessed with each other like no glitches whatsoever. (my inner jealous demon was awaken tyvm).
All the roleplay scenes (which is like 80% of the book)? God have mercy.
And the book literally ended with “Forgive me, father, for I’m about to sin.”
I was like OMG *flips to the next page*
just to find myself greeted by a giant
THE MOTHERFUCKING END (OR IS IT?)
HAHAHAHA anyways, i had fun, enjoyed it, ate it up very good, damn i even licked the plate lol.
ps. Thank you Macy for the Arc copy!
xoxo, ash:)
Holy Shit! Did my water just broke? Or my period just came? (hint: i wasn't pregnant and i already had my this month's period)
I swear to God, this has to be one of the cutest and kinkiest novella. I love how both of them are so honest and obssessed with each other like no glitches whatsoever. (my inner jealous demon was awaken tyvm).
All the roleplay scenes (which is like 80% of the book)? God have mercy.
And the book literally ended with “Forgive me, father, for I’m about to sin.”
I was like OMG *flips to the next page*
just to find myself greeted by a giant
THE MOTHERFUCKING END (OR IS IT?)
HAHAHAHA anyways, i had fun, enjoyed it, ate it up very good, damn i even licked the plate lol.
ps. Thank you Macy for the Arc copy!
xoxo, ash:)
June 28, 2025
You do you! It was cute but the epilogue threw me off a bit? Then I've read it's kind of connected to the author's Blood and Water series and it made more sense 😅
May 23, 2023
I received an ARC of this book for my honest review. Thanks a lot Macy <3
4,5 / 5 ⭐️
“You, Levi Callahan, were written for me”
Oh man I had so much fun reading this novella. Those characters were so lovable I loved it! I read it in one sitting because every chapter was so intense… I was thrilled to know which scene they would act in every chapters. And let me tell you, Levi Callahan know what is doing…
Daniella is a college student who love writing smutty books in her website. But, one day she received a bad review about one of her scene. not going over, she asks her childhood friend to reproduce scenes to make them more realistic in her books... thanks to him, he refuses, because now Levi Callahan will makes Daniella's every wish come true.
(please keep in mind that english is not my first language, sorry for the spelling mistakes)
4,5 / 5 ⭐️
“You, Levi Callahan, were written for me”
Oh man I had so much fun reading this novella. Those characters were so lovable I loved it! I read it in one sitting because every chapter was so intense… I was thrilled to know which scene they would act in every chapters. And let me tell you, Levi Callahan know what is doing…
Daniella is a college student who love writing smutty books in her website. But, one day she received a bad review about one of her scene. not going over, she asks her childhood friend to reproduce scenes to make them more realistic in her books... thanks to him, he refuses, because now Levi Callahan will makes Daniella's every wish come true.
(please keep in mind that english is not my first language, sorry for the spelling mistakes)
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