1. The spelling and grammar is godawful and clearly unedited.
2. 75% of the plots centred on cheating.
3. Sooooo poorly written. Very disjointed and clinical.
4. There was a transphobic story: ‘Innocent, is that supposed to be funny? Our Bailey had become what they now call a transgender. It sickens me even speaking the word.’
5. A lot of casual xenophobia laced through this book.
6. A lot of victim blaming or r*pe justification: ‘And so, they had sex, though it was mostly one-sided, and while it couldn’t be classed as rape, Mike couldn’t shake the feeling it was wrong, even criminal.’
‘Hated and blamed the dress for what it had done. Most of all, she blamed herself for choosing to wear the dress and flaunt – opting for provocative over restraint.’ (This one is from a story titled ‘Asking for it.
Honestly never should have been published. Discrimination and victim blaming aside, this book is just poorly written and the plots are unoriginal or just not scary.