This novel was a big surprise to me! It was really enjoyable. Not a full five stars, but definitely more than 4, the journey of the characters deserves it. So, 4.5.
The English title of the novel is "The Consort is Both Charming and Scheming, Rising Through Palace Intrigue", and it's one of the negative points of the novel, because it will never help me find or remember which of the novels with just that setting this one is. I hope that this review will help me jog my memory one day.
Just as generic as the title, is the base setup of the novel: Our FL Ning Shuyan, the illegitimate daughter of mid tier noble is going to enter the palace as a concubine. She is not favored at home and not close to her legitimate parents or siblings. She is clearheaded (and a transmigrator) and knows that she cannot fall in love with the emperor. The Emperor, Xiao Yu, is young and handsome and accomplished - and he has both an empress with a good reputation as well as an established favorite consort.
Except for the names of the characters, there are at many, many stories with the same setup whose names I also cannot remember. Still, it's the details (and the quality of the translation by Xiaobai) that makes this story enjoyable, even if they don't stick out as that special at first.
For one, the FL was decreed as a concubine by the previous emperor - though only as a second choice, as the prince he originally wanted her to be a concubine for, refused. This is not exactly a point of pride for the ML, and it's something that the female lead has to overcome.
For another, we learn early that the FL is close to her concubine mother - and her mother does not disappear from the story and stays alive!
And there is more and the most remarkable was the presence of genuine female friendship. In an Imperial Harem novels. Yes, you read that right. They don't start out as friends, but they end up friends, though there sometimes are some issues, as is natural. And their friendship is for life. I love it.
The last thing that I want to point out is that the development of the feelings between the two leads is gradual. And yes, it is BETWEEN them. Both. He falls first and harder of course, but he is really sincere and it eventually moves her, even if it takes a long, long time. The emperor groveled his way into her heart and he's there to stay. And it's not just her struggling with these feelings. Due past experiences Xiao Yu, really doesn't think that an emperor falling in love is a good idea, so when he realized that he has... he is in denial for a while. Sometimes you (and the female lead) actually feel bad for him, because he treats her so well but she is not sincere. And that's what made it special. Of course it's stupid to fall in love with an emperor, but it's also human to end up being fond of someone who treats you well and makes you happy. Ning Shuyan struggles with this, even as she sticks to her decisions and that made her unusually likable for an imperial harem novel protagonist.
What stuck out as not so great...
If you feel that way to, maybe skip the last extra, even if it was otherwise fluffy.
10/30/24 - TBH I definitely started this thinking it was a romance ... but then kept reading it when the author was like "no it's not a romance it's a girl power novel" ... but then it was like the saddest girl power novel ever. And I kept hoping it'd get better but ... it didn't. TBH the "FL"/HEA was more FL's bestie ... who ... had a very minor role in all this.
I'm ... ugh... I'm not MAD I read it - but I am lowkey mad. Waste of time. No girl power rah rah - and I kept thinking "yeah the author DEFINITELY watched Zhen Huan while writing this... or just before ... during ... both ... " I was glad to see a smart FL who didn't really have many golden fingers, but then ... I mean she didn't get STUPID stupid, but kinda. And clearly readers were annoyed which led to author scolding readers which I definitely didn't love- and bitch look, you wrote her stupid. You just wanted to drag out shit plot. Bleh. Plus the WTF ending/extras. Would not recommend.
D--- ~*~*~*~*~*~ The Girl Who Struggled Through Palace Intrigues to Become the Empress
C1 FL is Song Zhao (you get that bitch ass evil older sister! 💪💯)
C3 OMG 😱😹💯 I love this bitch! “Song Zhao twirled the whip in the air, suddenly laughing, "A consort's position? Ha! I'm entering the palace to become the Empress, why else would I go? To cook for others?””
C5 damn FL is smart - even though it said she wasn’t reborn for a second I wondered - but no she’s just really observant!
C7 🤦🏻♀️ FL’s maid is stupid as shit
C10 🙊🙊🙊💯💯💯 “Yun Shan commented, "My lady always thinks ahead. Like you said, your father is your support in the palace, but also your vulnerability, you..." She stopped mid-sentence upon noticing a subtle twitch in Song Zhao's brow and chose not to continue. Song Zhao remained silent for a moment, memories of her mother being beaten to death by the Jiang family flashing through her mind. She recalled how Song Shicheng witnessed it all but remained silent and indifferent. Her eyes darkened, her jaw tensed, and she uttered heavily, "I have no vulnerabilities." Having said that, she blew out the candle in front of her.”
C14 Ahahaha this scheming bitch I love her! Lololol. I wondered if her rash was fake! Hah! (How did she know the poem though?!) heh hopefully the emperor likes her! 😄💯💪
C20 😹☠️💯 that’s Li knocked down
21 Damn girl! “The more powerful the man, the more he enjoys conquering women. They relish the process. It’s like climbing a mountain; there’s always a higher one ahead. Once he’s conquered one mountain, he’ll always look for a taller one." Song Zhao put the preserved fruit in her mouth, gazing at the bright candlelight with a seductive smile, "My aim is to be the mountain he can never surmount. That way, he'll always think of me, yearn for me, and willingly offer what I desire."”
23 Heh vigorous Xiao Jingheng (damn you censorship!)
55 lol I love how clear eyed FL is & knows the emperor is lowkey (high key) a trash ass man
60 😱🙊 had FL not had the hand injury scheme she would’ve been disfigured by the snapped pipa string
77 >.> so I def think the empress is faking her heart disease now
78 bloop and it was Consort Shu’s maid not the empress’s that had Xiao’s maid killed 😱 (for the snakes thing?)
Snort laughing c81 her praying for blessings in the snow I mean I could be wrong but this c & the previous 90% of my brain re: This book was “The author has watched Zhen Huan” 😹☠️
82 wait but if they don’t record FL being with the emperor what if she gets pregnant?
85 damn how did consort Chen know the chains on the steps would break?
(C89 had to switch to other translation starting here)
C90 yaaas FL’s (birth) mom was friends with the empress dowager! 😹💯❤️
94 🙄😒 no but how can the emperor not know the Chen family is behind FL’s dad? (And consort Chen isn’t exactly hiding it)
101 lol FL scheming to have the emperor see the others esp Chen mistreat her. (But wait did/how did he promote her?)
107 😹☠️💯 someone give this bitch an Oscar lol FL tampering with her own flowers to put on this show
C111 lol FL is cold as ice to those who betray her 💯 (she gave that bitch a chance!)
Oh no! Blackmailed by 6th ~Prince Xiao JingYan
120 🙄 consort Chen/Ning I guess truly loves the emperor
124 sigh shit MTL again can’t tell the difference between a fire and a flood 🙄😒 Heh though I don’t like Ning it’s a pretty boss move to publicly use a fake birthday while only the emperor knows her real one 💪💯 so much for their scheme against her
127 lol FL’s scheming got that Wei astrological bastard killed 💪💯 P6… might become an ally? I don’t trust him though
129 Queen shit “Xiao Jingheng's words were sincere. After speaking, he bowed his head and planted a kiss on Song Zhao's lips, “You will be able to walk out of here fair and square soon. I promise you, rest assured.”
There were tears shining in Song Zhao's bright eyes as she nodded vigorously. Of course she was reassured. But this reassurance was not because of Xiao Jingheng's promise. It was because with her own means, she had once again saved herself from the mire. Her destiny was always in her own hands, so how could she not feel reassured?”
133 lol FL’s trash evil sister & her equally trash fiancé turned on each other quickly
😹☠️ 134 FL pretending to cry but actually laughing after the empress dowager tells her to kill her evil half sister 😹
139 🤷🏻♀️ I’m not clever enough to get the details behind the death of (grand) consort Rui other than the emperor was okay with it (and the empress used Chen/Ning as a scapegoat?)
140 😱😅😹 … 🤷🏻♀️ and now FL has eliminated her entire family yet is blameless
>.> 147 I might be too suspicious but I def don’t think consort Hui - the food loving youngun to be as innocent as she seems. Like she’s probably the hidden boss
lol I worried for nothing in c167 with FL’s confession letter for Chen/Ning! Disappearing ink! 💪💯
169 JFC the empress is evil. And ugh Shu wasn’t smart but I also get her falling for that fake sickly fetus scheme
172 it’s getting really annoying for random characters to just be called the empress by the shit “translator.” Also ugh actual shit empress trying to get FL killed & idiot being so easily used
174 🙊😱 ok I don’t like Chen but gotta say her turning the spy the empress put by her into a human skin lantern was … kinda baller
Fuck 176 stupid emperor. Hui definitely will be a problem & I don’t believe she’s innocent. IMO she’ll definitely try to harm FL
181 o.O so Xiao’s baby has Snake-scale psoriasis, modernly known as ichthyosis
188 😒 indeed the evil empress is faking her heart condition. So she’s paid off every imperial doctor?!
194 damn girl “I did not come to suffer humiliation. If people don't offend me, I try my best not to offend them. But if someone offends me, I will first make them wish they were dead, then cordially wish them a long life of a hundred years!"”
199 Ugh if Tong RongYue enters the harem will FL’s former friend backstab her?! Oh no she got selected by the empress dowager
Sigh 201 shit translating/c/p with random words & incorrect characters makes this difficult reading
C205 not loving all this “casual” racism 😐
220 I do actually feel a little bad Chen is so misunderstood by the emperor re: how she treats the baby but … she’s not exactly a good person either
244 ok Hui is DEFINITELY suspicious
255 oh so Hui is the emperor’s spy. (Also poor Chen her son being murdered & the sketch emperor even getting 50k troops from Mongolia by blaming Ru(I?))
😒 258 wtf is up with Jing (tai) Gui Fei (Prince An? 6?’s mom…)
260 poor Zhi Hua the maid FL sent to Hui dying unjustly. At least FL stuffed the (empress? Empress dowager’s?) spy on her. And sigh to this shit translation
277 tragic stupid consort Chen, Ning Wan(Shuang?) … so mean of the emperor to have her see her dad & brother be executed
290 TBH this is all so stupid with the empress why not just kill her 🙄😒 - not as if he balks at that shit
299 bloop and Hui killed the empress. What’s with the coral ring Hui wears?
305 yikes FL’s son is going to be appointed crown prince at age 1?!
306 OH NO hopefully Xiao FuZi is still alive… and same with FL’s son poor baby ChengYu
308 I literally shuddered - I wonder if it really was the emperor who kidnapped his own son
315 did the shit emperor really bury FL’s son alive? And huh P6 Prince An Xiao JinYan being the one to bring FL food…
316 wow. He really did. Bless P6 for the switch. Whut. XJY isn’t the emperor’s brother and FL is his little sister?! O.o
330 uh … should she … be so direct with him while still in the cold palace? Also Hui is still running around…
338 this stupid fucking emperor thinking he can just erase FL’s memories
340 … she has to be faking, right?
341 confirmed - faking
346 awww no surprise Chen/Ning did a great job raising FL’s daughter
358 glad FL has the tianji token so … the emperor clearly has a fake…
Wait 359 so … she DID give the token to the emperor and just directs him? But why would he listen to her?! This seems stupid…
363 new “parents” new name … FL is no over Song Zhao but Luo Hua
371 huh so the oldest prince schemed himself for P3 to be cooked in oil? How did he become so twisted?
375 sigh shit “translation” again leaves me clueless as to who is actually speaking, esp since author loves having concubines pregnant in groups 🙄
405 finally the empress. Why did her brother ignore her & have stank face? And will FL rescue the Chens or not?
415 sigh & scaly prince is a monster two ways cuz Hui
422 ah damn I cried. Ok so ChengHuan wasn’t entirely evil in part he just wanted the best for Chen/Ning but went DEEPLY astray… *sigh* and C/N basically put him in hospice.
427 I remain CONVINCED the author studied ZhenHuan for writing this 😜 skimmed the ending of the chapter cuz I always hate this stupid little girl with crushes & idiot servants shit Was sad P5 died, glad he effectively saved P6 though
lol I skimmed-ish 430 cuz fuck that Nalan family & the trash emperor - but yay FL protecting her brother!
440 concubines Yun and Li gone. I don’t even really remember Yun 🤷🏻♀️ (also went on the southern trip but lost to acne ridden Yao maybe?) yay Tong jie surviving this
443 RuGe unexpected ally! 💪💯
457 how did FL become so stupid (looking at you annoying author) - evil emperor is definitely using his daughters blood as some sort of medicine/elixir for himself
🙄 460 finally they figured it out. Poor 2nd princess and Chen/Ning though esp just after her mom died
Skimmed the schedule author put for FL in the notes in 462 which I get FL was overworked but … duh easy solution is to delegate more? 🙄😒 With Ning out Tong is there. Put the harem on lockdown - the emperor is sick. Like this was just stupid. Fucking scolding readers. 😒😡
🙄🙄🙄 464 I get destroying the records of that one year was meant to be a plot point but it was always too stupid like duh just make a new one with that omission
Skimmed 473 stupid whingeing and I literally said “are you FUCKING kidding me” at the end when WanShuang says she’d be willing to be with him again the next life. (Also him claiming he only ever loved her? 🙄😒 author stop fucking contradicting yourself)
🙄😒 475 Ning WanShuang’s death was so stupid it’s like *she* had amnesia
478 yay Tong and Xiao JingYan finally able to be together!
482 main story done, court clean up starting
486 a decade later 🙄 rah rah equal rights. Which extra annoys me cuz I do obviously support it but the way this is written is so unrealistic and hokey. so ChengYu is ~only a general as he wanted, FL is ruling, and CY is in lurve
488 aww she goes to Mongolia etc & to sweep NWS’s tomb six years after taking over WTF to the getting drunk there millennia passing then someone calling “Zhao’er?” 😒
489-496 just scrolled through cuz I never liked ShangYang or whatever/whoever Hui really was
497-505 I read skimmed. NWS is rebirthed. Seems FL is too to save NWS from the pit of the evil emperor (who 🤷🏻♀️ … who cares about him)
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
3.5/4 Il titolo in inglese è “The Girl Who Struggled Through Palace Intrigues to Become the Empress”. Non è una storia d’amore, ma di liberazione della donna diciamo, e per buona parte del libro di intrighi politici.
Mi è piaciuto devo essere sincera, anche se ho trovato delle incongruenze in alcuni complotti verso la fine
English title: The Girl Who Struggled Through Palace Intrigues to Become the Empress Translator: Akk Novel Translation Note: Unfortunately Machine Translated with little proof reading. Incorrect pronouns and flipped titles abound (Noble Consort Li will be called Li Noble Consort for a chapter or two and then it will be Noble Consort Li again).