It's been a while since I've read a japanese light novel. To be honest, my expectations were a little low, mostly because I was used to reading poorly-translated versions of the novels. However, this is the very first time I picked up a LN with an official english translation, and it went better than I expected! The writing flowed nicely, the pace was good, and I apreciated how simple it was! Reading it didn't feel like a chore so I finished it pretty fast.
My complaints about My Happy Marriage are a bit personal, though. While the pacing and writing were fine, the story felt a little... bland. The characters were also too 2D for me. The book is written in third person, but we still jump from a PoV to another. Miyo's PoVs were... very frustrating to read, honestly. I understand where she's coming from, and her background was pitiful and cruel. As a victim of abuse, her character made sense and I had to clench my fists and remind myself that this is normal and that I shouldn't be frustrated AT her, but FOR her. Nevertheless, some scenes had me a bit annoyed due to the clear lack of communication between Miyo and Kiyoka. Again, both of their behaviors make sense, but the way it was potrayed felt incredibly frustrating to read at some points. Thankfully, the awful miscommunication didn't last long and the couple started developping a healthy, well-respected relationship.
It's clear that this story is more about Miyo's journey than her marriage life, at least on this first volume. Kiyoka played a big role in helping her heal, and I thought that their pure relationship and semi-slow pace was wholesome. This LN is very pure and can be read by anyone, really, but that's also why it made it feel... a little dull.
Again, this is just my personal opinion. I love slowburn romances, but somehow this LN didn't really make me feel the little heart-throbs I usually feel when I read a romantic book. Kiyoka was cute, but there was so little to his character that I couldn't bring myself to see him as anything but 2dimentional. Yes, I do love cold on the outside but soft on the inside types- but Kiyoka's lack of personality-layers made me care for him so very little. At some point, I could only see him as a shield for Miyo- and extension of her, and that's pretty bad for me.
Another complaint I have is the severe lack of PUNISHMENT Miyo's family received by the end of the book. Seriously?! All of that abuse, senseless hatred and cruelty going unpunished? Yeah, they technically did get a 'penalty', but the author was so very LENIENT on them that I felt completely disappointed. One of the main reasons why I kept reading My Happy Marriage was to see the daughter-mother bitch duo get a taste of their own medicine- including that bastard of a father. Instead, we had a very mellow conclusion to that evil family... I was so disappointed.
I have very conflicted feelings about this LN. On one hand, it's a well done, wholesome story about a cute and shy couple (mostly Miyo-focus). On the other hand, the lack of flavor, layers, and overall world-build made this story very bland. I will still try out Volume 2 when I have the chance.
Maybe the Anime/Manga will give this work justice.