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You'll Breathe Me In
One Direction AU - Words:95489 complete
His first driving lesson with Louis takes place on a Saturday.
Harry stumbles out through the front gate in thrown-on baggy jeans and his ratty Ramones shirt, sees Louis leaning casually against the car, and his knees nearly give out. Apparently "not another surly teacher" meant a drop dead gorgeous twenty-something scruffy guy with shaggy brown hair and cheekbones sharp enough to chop a salad with. Clearly, Robin's trying to get Harry killed at seventeen.
Or, the AU where Louis is a 25-year-old driving instructor and Harry is a 17-year-old virgin who's really awful at seduction, except for the time he gets Louis to fall for him and fuck him senseless and take him on kinky adventures.
His first driving lesson with Louis takes place on a Saturday.
Harry stumbles out through the front gate in thrown-on baggy jeans and his ratty Ramones shirt, sees Louis leaning casually against the car, and his knees nearly give out. Apparently "not another surly teacher" meant a drop dead gorgeous twenty-something scruffy guy with shaggy brown hair and cheekbones sharp enough to chop a salad with. Clearly, Robin's trying to get Harry killed at seventeen.
Or, the AU where Louis is a 25-year-old driving instructor and Harry is a 17-year-old virgin who's really awful at seduction, except for the time he gets Louis to fall for him and fuck him senseless and take him on kinky adventures.
287 pages, ebook
First published March 21, 2014
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January 3, 2015
I have three points to make.
1. I just spent an entire day reading a smutty fanfiction while vacationing with my family. (And by family I mean mother, mother's boyfriend and mother's mother, not cousins-who-are-also-clubbing-buddies-and-BFFs or something like that. Essentially because there's an eight year age difference between me and each of my two cousins. My relatives are all decrepit.) I just couldn't bring myself to stop, because:
2. This stuff did it for me in ways that no other book or fanfiction ever has, ever.
3. LoadedGunn is to Larry what RemainNameless is to Sterek.
More on these points:
1. I opened this story on my phone every single goddamn time I wasn't actively involved in a conversation, all day long. I don't normally do that.
I mean, I do, but not to such outrageous levels.
2. I honestly have no idea why that is, but that's the way it is.
Talking strictly about what I like in fiction, I'm normally more into vanilla sex. You know all about it, it comes in a hundred different flavours and is pretty much impossible to cock up (ha, cock). BDSM is for the times when I want something harder, juicier (and that is not just me - this does sound sexual). As for daddy kink, that's never ever been my thing under any circumstances ever. Just nope. I don't know why, but I'd resigned myself and come to terms with it. And then LoadedGunn came along and flipped my world upside down.
There was something about this fic - the fact that is was so incredibly visual and tactile, maybe? The writing? The emotion and passion behind every touch and gesture? - that spoke to me on a very... intimate level. All kinds of intimate. I don't want to venture further into TMI territory here than I already have, 'kay?
I drank it up so avidly. Thankfully, I'm good at hiding my tells, but my anthropomorphic psyche sat there with eyes bugged out and flushed cheeks all day long.
The way Harry and Louis interacted in bed (and pretty much everywhere, since they fucked like bunnies) is enrapturing and hot like burning. That's all I've got to say on this topic.
The first half of this fanfic had me almost crying tears of joy because of how fucking good it was on every possible level. The only thing that might tempt me to give it less than five full stars would be the fact that 200 pages of sex can get a little... well, not boring - never boring with this author - but a tiny bit repetitive, if you will. But this fic still blew me away in a lot of ways, and I did (totally, absolutely, wholeheartedly) "love it", as the GR rating guidelines say, so five it is.
3. The characterisation, relationship/character/plot development, dialogues and writing - pitch perfect. There is not one sentence, one word I would have changed. First there's the flirty, tentative, absolutely explosive seduction, then there's the big conflict, and then it's all smooth sailing towards forever, with a few bumps along the road just to keep things interesting (mixed metaphors? Ugh). As if they weren't already interesting enough with all that super-intense love-making and breath play. (btw, I get it now. LoadedGunn made me get it, made me understand what's hot and amazing about it.)
RemainNameless is pretty much my goddess (idk why I'm assuming she's female. If she's not, apologies - I could use a gender neutral pronoun, but there's nothing in between god and goddess other than something generic like "deity", which doesn't quite convey how much I worship this person) because of the way she handles all the elements that make a good fanfiction, and I can state with full confidence that LoadedGunn is right up there on her same level - snark, smut, words and all.
My point being: THIS IS ACE AND LOADEDGUNN DESERVES FAME.
And even though this is not by any means the only or most notice-worthy feature about this fic, it bears mentioning (and repeating) that it's hot as all get-out.
1. I just spent an entire day reading a smutty fanfiction while vacationing with my family. (And by family I mean mother, mother's boyfriend and mother's mother, not cousins-who-are-also-clubbing-buddies-and-BFFs or something like that. Essentially because there's an eight year age difference between me and each of my two cousins. My relatives are all decrepit.) I just couldn't bring myself to stop, because:
2. This stuff did it for me in ways that no other book or fanfiction ever has, ever.
3. LoadedGunn is to Larry what RemainNameless is to Sterek.
More on these points:
1. I opened this story on my phone every single goddamn time I wasn't actively involved in a conversation, all day long. I don't normally do that.
I mean, I do, but not to such outrageous levels.
2. I honestly have no idea why that is, but that's the way it is.
Talking strictly about what I like in fiction, I'm normally more into vanilla sex. You know all about it, it comes in a hundred different flavours and is pretty much impossible to cock up (ha, cock). BDSM is for the times when I want something harder, juicier (and that is not just me - this does sound sexual). As for daddy kink, that's never ever been my thing under any circumstances ever. Just nope. I don't know why, but I'd resigned myself and come to terms with it. And then LoadedGunn came along and flipped my world upside down.
There was something about this fic - the fact that is was so incredibly visual and tactile, maybe? The writing? The emotion and passion behind every touch and gesture? - that spoke to me on a very... intimate level. All kinds of intimate. I don't want to venture further into TMI territory here than I already have, 'kay?
I drank it up so avidly. Thankfully, I'm good at hiding my tells, but my anthropomorphic psyche sat there with eyes bugged out and flushed cheeks all day long.
The way Harry and Louis interacted in bed (and pretty much everywhere, since they fucked like bunnies) is enrapturing and hot like burning. That's all I've got to say on this topic.
The first half of this fanfic had me almost crying tears of joy because of how fucking good it was on every possible level. The only thing that might tempt me to give it less than five full stars would be the fact that 200 pages of sex can get a little... well, not boring - never boring with this author - but a tiny bit repetitive, if you will. But this fic still blew me away in a lot of ways, and I did (totally, absolutely, wholeheartedly) "love it", as the GR rating guidelines say, so five it is.
3. The characterisation, relationship/character/plot development, dialogues and writing - pitch perfect. There is not one sentence, one word I would have changed. First there's the flirty, tentative, absolutely explosive seduction, then there's the big conflict, and then it's all smooth sailing towards forever, with a few bumps along the road just to keep things interesting (mixed metaphors? Ugh). As if they weren't already interesting enough with all that super-intense love-making and breath play. (btw, I get it now. LoadedGunn made me get it, made me understand what's hot and amazing about it.)
RemainNameless is pretty much my goddess (idk why I'm assuming she's female. If she's not, apologies - I could use a gender neutral pronoun, but there's nothing in between god and goddess other than something generic like "deity", which doesn't quite convey how much I worship this person) because of the way she handles all the elements that make a good fanfiction, and I can state with full confidence that LoadedGunn is right up there on her same level - snark, smut, words and all.
My point being: THIS IS ACE AND LOADEDGUNN DESERVES FAME.
And even though this is not by any means the only or most notice-worthy feature about this fic, it bears mentioning (and repeating) that it's hot as all get-out.
September 3, 2014
Amazingly sexy, and fun reading. I loved the banter between the characters, and their journey of discovery. I liked the balance between them, and the bond that they develop is both real and strong. I never thought I would read one of these, and now
I've fallen
Please send help
I blame Nina.
I've fallen
Please send help
I blame Nina.
January 21, 2017
If you ignore the fact that this is One Direction fanfic and focus on the daddy kink....it's really hot AF. The age gap is 7 years. Louis is 25 and Harry is 17. I prefer a much wider age gap and a more mature top but this was really good daddy kink so I was able to bend reality. Hard.
A filthy dirty and really rather surprisingly sweet read. Those are the best kinds.
A filthy dirty and really rather surprisingly sweet read. Those are the best kinds.
November 21, 2015
3.5 so good ;-)
Mmm, Daddy!
Mmm, Daddy!
February 20, 2022
To read this book, you have to be able to allow yourself to step into morally grey ground and separate reality from fiction. This fic absolutely has unconventional topics like BDSM and an age gap, which could be grooming. It has a shit ton of smut and the age gap does make a lot of people uncomfortable. This fic is not for everyone and that's okay.
Rating: 3.5 stars maybe? I read this like 2 weeks ago and forgot to review it so it's not so fresh in my mind
Personally, when I read books I've been trying to separate reality from fiction and this book made it easier, as they wrote it well enough to not make it feel like Harry was being taken advantage of. That's something I was worried about but they didn't make it gross and a powerplay thing so that was interesting. I'm aware that if I looked into the deeper semantics of everything and how it was written then it'd be really bad but on a surface level it was actually really good. The author did a good job at researching BDSM and this was written about a couple who's being introduced to it. I found that pretty cool and almost informative as I've never really known much about BDSM than the basics everyone is shown. This book was very respectful towards the community and that's really cool as most environments tend to tease fun at them?
The tension here was written really well. I love the whole "I want you and you want me but we don't know but we think we might know but we don't do anything about it" bit. It's my favorite part of any book and they wrote it really well. Also, this fic is dripping in sexual tension, except it's really well written. A lot of sexual tension tends to be a tad too graphic and focused too much on body parts but here it was longing and pining while simultaneously trying to cover up the fact that they're feeling it. It's really well written. I love love love jealousy tropes and having one of them be jealous and this happened for both of them multiple times and that was so so good.
Overall, this was a really good fic and I found myself enjoying it. The topics covered in here are very problematic, but I didn't feel weird reading it and that's interesting to me because I'm usually the type to be hard on fiction when it has problematic topics. Maybe it's just my change in tastes and wanting to enjoy books more, instead of being tough on everything I read. This one definitely kept me on my toes and I didn't feel like I was forcing myself to finish which is always good. I genuinely enjoyed it and would probably read it again.
Personal summary: **SPOILERS, OBVIOUSLY**
Okay so this fic starts off with Harry turning 17 and needing a driving instructor so he can learn to drive and get his license. He has a couple bad ones but eventually he gets Louis. Louis is 25 years old and his new driving instructor. Harry is absolutely taken with him and decides that he wants to "seduce him" so he has a couple of plans but they're mostly just adorable and funny attempts. There are a couple attempts and they slowly start to warm up to each other and kind of become friends with sexual tension between them. One day, Harry accidentally calls Louis "Daddy" and it starts their kinky journey as it affects them both. We find out that Harry has a thing for older people and has had experiences with older guys before, which makes Louis jealous. Harry gets a tattoo and a new car. Louis finds Harry swimming one day and they drive after. Harry notices Louis' pants and asks if he can give him a bj. He does and then Louis avoids him for days. Harry goes to a club to forget Louis and dances with an older guy, Louis finds them and takes Harry away to sleep his drunkenness off. They have sex in the morning. Their official relationship kind of starts here. They have problems like not being able to be seen in public and Louis being afraid that he's too old for Harry and not someone he would be interested in for a long term (very Pretty Little Liars -esque). Their relationship gets even kinkier and together they start to discover new BDSM kinks and boundaries. The rest of the book is them finding their footing in their sex life and exploring new things really. Then it's Louis' birthday and he's getting older so he's convinced that Harry is going to leave him because he's "grown out of having a thing for older guys" and instead Harry proposes. Basically, Louis is shit at conversations and extremely insecure and always ghosts Harry when he's struggling with something and Harry is sweet and gentle and shy and kinky and always tries to make sure they talk about their issues when they come up. It's a very cute dynamic and kind of adorable. Also there's a sequel and in that one it's basically them doing wax play with Zayn but Zayn isn't really involved, just watching. They're very safe and Louis is very dead set on never doing anything that could hurt Harry. Also Zayn finds it hilarious that Harry calls Louis "Daddy" but eventually he understands once he sees them together.
Rating: 3.5 stars maybe? I read this like 2 weeks ago and forgot to review it so it's not so fresh in my mind
Personally, when I read books I've been trying to separate reality from fiction and this book made it easier, as they wrote it well enough to not make it feel like Harry was being taken advantage of. That's something I was worried about but they didn't make it gross and a powerplay thing so that was interesting. I'm aware that if I looked into the deeper semantics of everything and how it was written then it'd be really bad but on a surface level it was actually really good. The author did a good job at researching BDSM and this was written about a couple who's being introduced to it. I found that pretty cool and almost informative as I've never really known much about BDSM than the basics everyone is shown. This book was very respectful towards the community and that's really cool as most environments tend to tease fun at them?
The tension here was written really well. I love the whole "I want you and you want me but we don't know but we think we might know but we don't do anything about it" bit. It's my favorite part of any book and they wrote it really well. Also, this fic is dripping in sexual tension, except it's really well written. A lot of sexual tension tends to be a tad too graphic and focused too much on body parts but here it was longing and pining while simultaneously trying to cover up the fact that they're feeling it. It's really well written. I love love love jealousy tropes and having one of them be jealous and this happened for both of them multiple times and that was so so good.
Overall, this was a really good fic and I found myself enjoying it. The topics covered in here are very problematic, but I didn't feel weird reading it and that's interesting to me because I'm usually the type to be hard on fiction when it has problematic topics. Maybe it's just my change in tastes and wanting to enjoy books more, instead of being tough on everything I read. This one definitely kept me on my toes and I didn't feel like I was forcing myself to finish which is always good. I genuinely enjoyed it and would probably read it again.
Personal summary: **SPOILERS, OBVIOUSLY**
Okay so this fic starts off with Harry turning 17 and needing a driving instructor so he can learn to drive and get his license. He has a couple bad ones but eventually he gets Louis. Louis is 25 years old and his new driving instructor. Harry is absolutely taken with him and decides that he wants to "seduce him" so he has a couple of plans but they're mostly just adorable and funny attempts. There are a couple attempts and they slowly start to warm up to each other and kind of become friends with sexual tension between them. One day, Harry accidentally calls Louis "Daddy" and it starts their kinky journey as it affects them both. We find out that Harry has a thing for older people and has had experiences with older guys before, which makes Louis jealous. Harry gets a tattoo and a new car. Louis finds Harry swimming one day and they drive after. Harry notices Louis' pants and asks if he can give him a bj. He does and then Louis avoids him for days. Harry goes to a club to forget Louis and dances with an older guy, Louis finds them and takes Harry away to sleep his drunkenness off. They have sex in the morning. Their official relationship kind of starts here. They have problems like not being able to be seen in public and Louis being afraid that he's too old for Harry and not someone he would be interested in for a long term (very Pretty Little Liars -esque). Their relationship gets even kinkier and together they start to discover new BDSM kinks and boundaries. The rest of the book is them finding their footing in their sex life and exploring new things really. Then it's Louis' birthday and he's getting older so he's convinced that Harry is going to leave him because he's "grown out of having a thing for older guys" and instead Harry proposes. Basically, Louis is shit at conversations and extremely insecure and always ghosts Harry when he's struggling with something and Harry is sweet and gentle and shy and kinky and always tries to make sure they talk about their issues when they come up. It's a very cute dynamic and kind of adorable. Also there's a sequel and in that one it's basically them doing wax play with Zayn but Zayn isn't really involved, just watching. They're very safe and Louis is very dead set on never doing anything that could hurt Harry. Also Zayn finds it hilarious that Harry calls Louis "Daddy" but eventually he understands once he sees them together.
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February 16, 2015DNF
Not relating to this one.
Not relating to this one.
April 27, 2021
Podía ser más. Daba para más, pero llegó hasta ahí.
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May 26, 2022the driving instructer im dying... kinda weird but it was cute
February 22, 2024
2.5 stars because THE ENDING
December 27, 2024
This is predominantly smut and sexual tension, which I love in moderation, but still I was able to get giddy. Solid!!!
August 12, 2023
Es una historia divertida, me meti pensando que iba a ser liviana y divertida, pero tiene un trasfondo mucho mas interesante. La relación entre los personajes va mutando y creciendo con ellos y es una de las pocas fics donde hay planteados problemas “comunes” mas alla de los relacionales.
June 15, 2014
Short and kinky.
August 2, 2015
not really much of story, but it's still Larry, so.
February 14, 2016
4.5 stars :)
Daddy kink!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!
Daddy kink!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!
dnf
January 25, 2015First couple of chapters were fun.
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