Beautiful Devil by Rachel Leigh promised a classic enemies-to-lovers dynamic, but unfortunately, it didn’t quite deliver for me. Brogan, a fiery sideline cheerleader, and Hayes Madden, an arrogant hockey player with a heartless reputation, are caught in a rivalry that quickly turns into a love-hate relationship. The premise had a lot of potential, and while there were moments of tension and drama, the overall execution felt flat.
“You’re the first, and likely the last. I’m not very good at sharing.”
Hayes is painted as the “heartless monster” with a reputation that precedes him, but I never truly felt the intensity of the supposed animosity between him and Brogan. Instead, their dynamic felt more like a vague “I dislike you, but I’m not sure why” situation rather than a fully fleshed-out enemies-to-lovers arc. I found myself wishing Brogan would just admit her attraction to Hayes earlier on. The repeated tension of “I hate him, but he’s so hot” got a bit old, and instead of feeling the excitement of that slow burn, I just felt frustrated by the lack of genuine conflict.
"She consumes me—every thought, every dream, every second of every day."
The romance, which should have been the focal point, didn’t hit the emotional highs I was expecting. While there were some steamy moments, they didn’t feel earned or fully developed, especially early on. The chemistry was there, but the pace felt rushed, especially towards the end. I also struggled with the relationship between Brogan and Kamden, which felt unnecessary and dragged on longer than it should have, especially since she already admitted there wasn’t much of a connection.
As for the plot, it never fully grabbed me. Things would seem to be building towards a big emotional moment, only to fizzle out and leave me disappointed. There’s a lot of potential here, but it didn’t come together in a way that made me feel invested in the characters or their growth. The writing itself is fine, but the lack of character depth and the rushed pace really held the story back for me. And while the spice was a fun addition, it felt awkward at times and didn't quite make up for the missed opportunities in terms of relationship development.
"Even if you don’t see me and I just see you, knowing you’re there makes me feel like I can conquer the world."
Overall, Beautiful Devil had its moments, but it ultimately left me feeling lukewarm. If you're into light, sports-themed romances and don’t mind a bit of drama, this might be a quick read for you. However, if you're looking for a more deeply developed enemies-to-lovers romance with a stronger connection between the characters, this one might not hit the mark. I was hoping for more depth and growth in the relationship, especially considering the shorter length of the book. If you're still curious, it’s available on Kindle if you want to give it a try, but for me, it didn't quite live up to the hype.