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240 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 10, 2014
"I begged her to marry me" isn't a revelation any jilted lover will make. "I did so much for her and the bitch still left me" would perhaps be more plausible. But this is not what That Certain Something does. This and many other such examples in the book can only be described as lazy plot development and not a light-hearted or rom-com writing style. The author introduces problems (for example, Sir Charles' homophobia) and then resolves them very simplistically, perhaps to evoke laughter, but they just seem like a cop out, like the author couldn't be bothered to think the resolution through.
Some resolutions are even problematic, for example, the handling of Pia's trust issue. First the author makes two very important characters – Mama and Ed – inject a sense of reality into Pia's naive notion of love and romance and then completely negates her own effort by choosing to portray Pia as someone whose love for Cate only peaks when she gets the assurance that . One wonders how acceptable this resolution would've been if Pia had been a man. By writing this end, Ashton not only ridicules the idea of love and commitment, but also gives weight to the long-held belief that women's bodies are things to be possessed and the purity of that body is foremost in any relationship.
Even though the writing style and the humour in the book are good, they are definitely not enough to redeem a book that demeans women in this way.