I loved Dead City and Blue Moon, so I thought this would be just as good, with a fantastic writing style and some type of- well, anything. The grammar is atrocious, the plot is loose at best, and the whole project feels rushed, like James Ponti had a contract that was about to expire and he needed to squeeze more money into the Dead City franchise. If he took this, gave it a plan and worked on the grammar, maybe if he made the characters three dimensional again, maybe if he did that, I'd give this 5 stars. For now, go home and re-read Dead City. It's easily the best one. Then, re-read Blue Moon, almost on the same level, and then, just read fan-fiction. The grammar'll be the same, and I bet the plot will be more developed.
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