Katie, a petit boyish programmer signs up to be part of an immersive video game experience. She starts as a low level mage and has two ways to level up, kill or convince monsters to give her experience. When Katie meets a high level tentacle monster she knows she's in deep trouble. The monster asks her for a trade, her body for experience. Will she accept? And why is she so excited to be violated by this monster? Follow Katie through an expansive fantasy world where she learns that when you have nothing to lose, the true adventure begins. This is a 5k adult erotic short that involves one very large slime monster and lots of twisting tentacles that get everywhere! "I do," replied Katie, her voice braver than she felt at this moment, was the mountain a monster? An in game character? Was he an artifact? She paused her racing thoughts, realizing the mountain could talk. He was definitely a monster. The low level mage began to back out of the cave quietly but suddenly a tentacle of slime shot out and grabbed her ankle and pulled her back into the room with the mountain of slime, suspending her upside down in mid air, her cloak falling over her face so she could not see anything."I have not met your kind before, what do you call yourself?" boomed the creature, the room seemed to rumble when he spoke but Katie could not tell from her current position. "Katie?" the monster replied, the word sounded foreign to him "I have not met a Katie before, do you wish to fight me Katie?"She couldn't fight such a large creature at such a low level, but she recalled there was two ways to defeat a monster, convince it to become your ally, or slay it. Killing the mountainous monster was out of the question with her only skill, so Katie would attempt to convince this slime mountain to become her ally."Not to fight, to ask for your alliance!" she replied hoping this would get the monster to put her back on the ground. Instead he dropped her, her body bouncing off the ground, slime sticking to her cloak. The cloak clinging to her body and she grimaced at the feeling."An alliance? With a Katie creature? What do you have to offer me?" his voice boomed, his black eyes staring down at her. To be honest, she didn't have anything to offer the creature, she had a bag of gold, a cloak, and her body. "I have not much to offer, I am afraid""Offer me your body, Katie." the creature replied quickly, too quickly she thought but before she could ask what that meant, or why he had known what to ask her. Two glowing blue tentacles, thin and firm erupted from the side of the mountain. They wrapped around her legs and torso and yanked her closer to him, she was sure that she was going to be yanked inside of the mountain of gel, but instead she was suspended in air again, this time upright."Wait! What does that mean? Are you going to kill me? Stop!" she shrieked and the mountain of slime shot two more tentacles out at her, they felt so soft against her bare skin, they were firm and warm, they didn't stick to her but slid over her skin with ease like oil."Offer your body to me, and I will be in an alliance with you." the creature repeated, a separate blue tentacle twisted around each of her legs, pulling them far apart and she squealed, trying to pull them back together. How did she know it meant its promise to her? She bit her lip as the tentacles began to venture higher on her legs, squeezing them tightly, she had to make a decision fast.
Winifred has been penning stories since she knew how to write, starting with romance and moving onto just the sexy parts, she knows her way with words, and with ropes. Like in real life, her favorite genres involve lots of lace, handsome men, and the tight knots she can get herself in
**Read as part of the Galloping Abs Society podcast**
Okay. So. Look up. Right at the top of this review. See the starred disclaimer? The sentence that states I read this solely for comedic purposes? Yeah, that's important.
What's also important is that apparently I needed over a month to gather my thoughts to review this story.
(^ actual footage of me and the Gaspod gals while reading)
In a nutshell, this is an extremely badly written story about a naive woman who gets sucked into a virtual reality simulation that can only be defeated by, apparently, fucking tentacled mountains of goop.
Not that Goop, calm the shit down Gwenyth.
Now, as we state in our pod, we have nothing against monsterfuckers. Monsterfuckers are great. Monsterfuckers are fun. What I don't like are monsterfuckers who are written in extremely assault-like situations with writing styles that don't look like they've seen the barest passing glance of an editor. The entire thing was gross, in every single sense of the word.
Should you read this book?
Unless, of course, you're into dubious consent relations with what amounts to a big pile of glowy pudding, weird Matrix vibes, lowkey references to very very generalized MMORPGs, absolutely no consistency in terms of punctuation usage, a plot with as much substance as the booger you snot-rocketed into your shower last night (come on, I know you did it), and a character with the common sense of a pile of moldy figs.
Katie is excited when she learns she’s been chosen for a video game immersion. Once in the game she quickly realizes a few things. 1. She needs to find out the object of the game 2. She needs to find other players 3. She needs to build experience fast because she’s dressed only in her underwear and has only 1 skill (fire) and 4. She’s experiencing everything which makes her wonder if she dies in the game will she die in real life? Well, shit. Leveling up has just become priority #1.
I’m not all that great at them, but I love video games. How cool would it be to actually go inside a game and play from there? Well, except for getting hurt or dying. That wouldn’t be very cool. Katie learns that she needs to find 5 artifacts and in order to gain experience she can either make alliances with monsters or kill them. As a level 1 mage encountering her 1st monster, she has no other choice but to make an alliance. The slime monster demands sexual satisfaction in exchange for an alliance and while Katie is icked out, she soon finds herself in orgasmic heaven. Ewwww! Slime is so gross! But what’s a girl to do? Decently written and creative (yeah, I’m partial to video games even if I’m not to slime) I’m looking forward to finding out how Katie’s quest proceeds.
If you have ever wanted to read VR dubcon erotica featuring a sentient mountain of Jell-O with tentacles, this sure is your book. Alas, I have never wanted that, and still don't.
This tale was a little different from most of what I read. The premise was interesting and leaves room to go into dozens of different directions. Instead it ends after the first real encounter. Expound on the story and I'll gladly reconsider my rating.
I'm always a tad hesitant to read Erotica, not because of shyness, but due to so many poorly written stories out there. This is a fine exception to the norm. The Sci-fi/fantasy genre reader in me actually enjoyed the story line and the main character. Definitely an 18+ short, this is a series I may find time to add on to the ever growing TBR list. This is not just for the well written "alternative encounters", but the storyline! I'm curious about the immersive role-playing world she has become stuck in, how she fares in her journey, and does she get out? Recommended for those who like some hot fantasy to break up the monotony of the day. ;)
I really wanted to like this one. The parts: female protagonist (yuppers); RPG (big thumbs up); tentacles (well duh!). The sum of the parts just doesn't add up here. Others have said this better here, but yeah... this was a meh at best.