Why does this always happen to me? This book features my least favorite kind of “hero”. Everything he doesn’t is complexity selfish and for self gain, but his inner dialogue rambles on like what he is doing is for her. Except unlike when that happens in most books where the hero is like that his rationale is just completely dumb. For example his reasoning for not coming back to her or then back to get her etc, was that he saw a newspaper clipping where she had started attending nursing school and was making her “dreams come true”. Um speaking as a nurse and someone who is re-entering college to complete the next degree, I eyerolled so hard I almost gave myself a migraine. Like, seriously? This is where the author went with this? Yeah I want to be an independent woman and I respect that. But nursing is a career. It may be a “dream” to become a nurse but come on! To actually pretend that dumping someone and forcing them, a person who loved him, to watch him with Hollywood starlets and models in the media (she could never escape it being that they were from the same town) for years was doing them a favor so they were free to pursue their dream of nursing is some of the dumbest writing that I have ever read!!! If that’s what he was truly doing then maybe he should have kept it in his pants? Because it’s all about “dreams” and protecting her, right? Exactly, not it’s not. The author didn’t go that route because even they don’t believe that, so why shove that down the readers throats? Either the authors really just aren’t very bright or they just don’t care to / are too lazy to write a quality story. Trust me. Unless there are other issues, 99% of us would rather have had our Hollywood true love show up to win us back than respect our “dream of nursing”. He wouldn’t have kept her from anything. She could have still made the decision to finish school and then make decision from there. But to be grieving their relationship, having the fame/other women thrown in her face, and also deal with how demanding nursing school is? He was hindering her “dreams” not helping him them, that’s for sure. How come authors always come up with these completely ludicrous plot points to supposedly show how a hero “loves” the heroine, but having him be loyal and faithful is just too much of a stretch? Anyway everything he did was just kind of douchey, and was the exactly same pattern of all of the other secret baby stories.
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When he finds out he is the father, he throws a mantrum and is angry that she didn’t tell him. He then threatens her with a lawyer, and does what? Gasp, it’s shocking... He leaves 🙄 and goes back to Hollywood and his life there. He eventually comes back and or course, because this isn’t actually a well formulated plot and/or story, there is a two second conversation where there are zero explanations really given or anything accomplished yet they magically have worked everything out. Long story short this is such a crap story and I wish I had given in to the urge to DNF as soon as I had it, instead of trying to get to the substance. Spoiler alert, there isn’t any!