Disclaimer: I received this book as an ARC for free.
Just a heads up, as I’ve gotten older and developed as both a reader and writer, my reviews often sound more negative then they are. I assure you, right from the get-go, if I think something is bad, I say it is BAD. I frequently start out with criticisms and end with praise; it’s how I like to be reviewed and critiqued, so it’s how I review others. Anyways, with that out of the way, let’s begin:
Wild Skies by K.E. Andrews is a rootin’ tootin’ fantasy western which is something right up my alley. I love fantasy, and despite it’s rather gruesome and painful history, the wild west is one of my favorite settings for anything ever. When I saw the cover for this book and saw it described as “cowboys riding dragons” I was immediately hooked; however, I’ve been hooked before by things I love and left extremely upset and let-down. Thankfully, this was not one of those times.
As I’ve gotten older, I’ve realized that I really, REALLY love the written word. I’m highly envious of people who can string beautiful sentences together and form pictures in my mind not just through standard descriptions, but through use of incredible word play. This book…doesn’t really offer that.
That being said, it isn’t a bad thing. While I do love me some poetic writing, I understand it is not everybody’s cup of tea. Many people are more interested in getting straight into the plot and the characters, and I can respect that. This is absolutely not a criticism of this book itself, more of just an observation. The prose in this book is absolutely fine; there’s nothing truly outstanding about it, but honestly, compared to a lot of other books I’ve read in recent years, I will take fine any day.
Much like the prose, some of the dialogue is a bit clunky. It isn’t awful by any measure, and though there are some lines that really accentuate the characters and the setting, most of it is simply moving the plot forward without a lot of time for dilly-dallying; it is highly utilitarian. However, as someone who likes to read dialogue aloud, I do think that the dialogue in this book does a good job of conveying strong voices and personalities among the characters, especially if you keep that western cowboy vibe in mind.
Speaking of characters, I’ve a very small (albeit one that takes up nearly 350 words of this 1000-word review) complaint in regard to a scene involving our main character, Dale. Not to spoil anything, but it should come as no surprise that our dragon-riding, gun-toting, bounty-hunting cowboy has a tragic past involving missing parents. This supposedly happened over fifteen years ago, yet at times Dale lashes out in a way that’d make you think it happened much more recently, and it makes him feel more like a teenager than an adult (I don’t recall if we’re given a specific age, but I think at some point it’s stated that he’s in his late twenty’s/early thirty’s).
As a writer, I understand trying to convey a character’s motivations as strong and passionate, but a part of me feels this is far too cinematic. Early on in the book (Chapter 3 I believe), Dale snaps at Russel, his old friend and mentor, and it reads as something out of a soap-opera; Russel says Dale’s been searching for his missing parents for 15 years, and Dale with hands clenched at his sides, proclaims, “And I’ll look another fifteen years if I need to!”
It’s not a bad scene, but as I was reading, I interpreted this line as a more subdued and quiet fury, but that little exclamation point at the end, as well as describing his fists tightly clenched sold it to me as a melodramatic outburst. Now, I for one love my melodrama, but I do believe it works best in visual media such as television or comics. One of the strengths of literary writing is that we have access to a character’s inner thoughts in a way that is wholly organic to the medium. We don’t need Dale to emotionally snap to convey his passions, because we can gain that from his thoughts, which I do think the paragraph immediately following does pretty well.
I don’t want to harp on this one scene any longer; it’s just the one that stuck out to me the most when reading, and I think it was more my inner editor coming out in regard to something I see a lot in contemporary writing.
Moving on, I do want to say that I thoroughly enjoyed the world this story took place in. Much like my love of prose, as I’ve gotten older, I’ve realized that I don’t really need deep dive into the lore and history of a world for me to enjoy a fun fantasy story. Little things like seeing how people interact with the magical and fantastical— having them do things that are so wonderous to us, but mundane to them—is something that goes a long way for me, as does a character simply using a magical term or referencing various breeds of dragon.
And that’s not to say the world isn’t deep or well thought out, quite the contrary. it’s more to say that the book doesn’t do any large exposition dumps just to explain how the world works. We don’t need long paragraphs explaining the difference between dragon breeds or what it means that the bad guy has a fully “Sparked” dragon. This world clearly has a lot of thought put into it, and it has plenty of little splashes of flavor hear and there to let you know that. A writer shouldn’t be expected to have whole historical texts or legendarium for their world to feel fully fleshed out; I don’t need logical answers to why the climate in the Melted Lands makes it so, I don’t need a detailed history on why and how dragons came to be tamed and ridden.
Some people like all of that stuff—I get it—but I don’t think every fantasy needs it.
All in all, I think Wild Skies by K.E. Andrews is an exciting fantasy western filled to the brim with fun characters, exciting action, and is a delightful romp from beginning to end.