A Storm of Immortality

by Jason C Wint

352 pages, Hardcover

Published October 31, 2024

Reviews

[Book Reviewer · Rating 5 out of 5]

J. Wint’s A Storm of Immortality pulls readers into a dark and immersive dystopian world where hope teeters on the brink, resting in the hands of humans with unimaginable and feared powers. The novel captivates from the first page, plunging readers into a society forced underground, where survival demands conformity, silence, and rigid adherence to suffocating rules. Wint constructs this world with remarkable skill, painting the cave-bound existence in hues of tension and shadows, where even a whisper of difference can mean ruin. At the center of this fraught environment stands Brindall, a young man carrying the weight of his family’s survival on his shoulders. By day, he toils as a miner, serves in the militia, and follows every regulation imposed by his society. This community’s entire reality unfolds within a labyrinth of caves, a place where freedom feels like a dream and safety remains tethered to the darkness underground. Life leaves little room for rebellion or hope, and as The Day of the Nail approaches, Brindall’s anxiety peaks. This test, a measure to prove young people harbor no dangerous powers, threatens everything he holds dear. One mistake, one unexpected display of ability, and his life and his family’s could be forfeit.

Wint crafts a relentless atmosphere of suspense, where the stakes only climb higher. Brindall emerges as a fierce and charismatic protagonist. He exudes natural leadership, yet he is more than the typical warrior figure. Compassion and strength define him, a compelling mix that drives his journey. Faced with challenge after challenge, Brindall relies on an inner power he’s hidden his whole life. But he doesn’t battle alone. Soon, he finds himself among a group of extraordinary individuals, each wielding the same forbidden abilities. What starts as a collection of strangers soon forms a bond deeper than any he’s known, a chosen family united in the fight for freedom.

The narrative balances heart-pounding action with moments of genuine connection. As Brindall’s team of allies trains, strategizes, and faces the ever-looming threat of oppression, dark forces lurk, manipulating reality and blurring the lines between truth and illusion. Wint’s writing keeps readers spellbound, with a pace that flows seamlessly, never feeling rushed or dragging. The author’s skillful narration brings to life a story rich with complexity, and as each chapter unfolds, the world becomes more intricate and captivating. Characters grow, transforming in confidence and power as they confront their own limits.

A Storm of Immortality delivers everything a fan of dystopian fiction could crave: unrelenting action, a deep sense of mystery, chosen beings grappling with newfound strength, fierce conflicts, and the bonds of true friendship forged in the fires of adversity. The novel calls to mind the best of the dystopian wave of the 2010s, while standing out with its own unique flavor. Brindall’s journey feels fresh yet timeless, and the potential for more stories in this world brims with promise. Wint has crafted a compelling tale that holds readers tightly, leaving them eager for the next installment. This is a story executed with precision, heart, and a clear vision of what makes dystopian fiction unforgettable.

[Reader Views · Rating 4 out of 5]

“A Storm of Immortality,” by Jason Wint is a very unique dystopian fantasy full of adventure, growth, and new relationships. There is a war going on between the north and the south to determine who will get to live on the off-world station being created known as the Skylight System. Earth itself is no longer livable as constant storms of rain and lightning never let up. The entire population is living underground, mining the materials needed for this new living station. There are others, known as Immortals, who are being utilized in this war.

The story Wint shares with us is very unique and interesting. While it was a bit of a slow start, the story did progress well and continued to intrigue me throughout. There is one main character, Brin, who meets a lot of new people quickly in the beginning. We get a little bit of back story on each character while finding out what exactly the Immortals are.

There is a very diverse cast of characters from different areas and backgrounds. They all must overcome difficulties while trying to complete the tasks set before them. I do wish we could have spent a little more time in this growth period, it seemed to pass too quickly. The relationship between the new Immortals was very well done. Their reactions to learning and growing all seemed to fit with the backgrounds we were given.

The setting of the story varied a lot. However, Wint did a good job at explaining where they were going, how they were getting there, and a rough idea of the layout. I would like to see the map at the beginning a little more detailed, but overall, I understood the concepts the author was getting at. The editing is also well done, only a few easily fixable errors. This is always an accomplishment in general, but especially when someone is self-published.

Overall, “A Storm of Immortality” by Jason Wint was an intense story about war and the Elites’ concept of sacrificing those less fortunate than them. It’s a young adult, fantasy, dystopian story with very minimal cursing and barely any romance. There is a lot of battle, but it’s not overly graphic, and also a lot of friendship bonding. It’s definitely a book I’d recommend to anyone who enjoys the genres of epic fantasies, science fiction, and young adult reads. It is a unique tale.

[Alejandra · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book takes place in a dystopian future where earth is nearing the end of it's ability to sustain life. Everyone lives deep underground while there is a battle taking place on the surface, the North vs the South both looking to score themselves a spot into the space station that will (allegedly) save and improve their lives. The background and worldbuilding was easy to understand but there were a few points I would have wanted further clarification on. The characters are loveable but you could clearly tell who the "favorites" were who would make it into the next book from the start. I would have felt a more emotional impact had I been able to get to know the other characters more. The book ends on not quite a cliffhanger but definitely there are unanswered questions for the next book.

**I received this book for free from NetGalley in exchange for my review

[Jennifer (Yodareads) Bishop · Rating 4 out of 5]

“A Storm of Immortality” by J. Wint was a very unique fantasy dystopian full of adventure, growth, and new relationships. There is a war going on between the north and the south to determine who will get to live on the off-world station being created. The earth itself is no longer livable as constant storms of rain and lightning never let up. The entire population is living underground mining for the materials needed for this new living station. There are specific people, known as Immortals, who are being utilized in this war.

Overall, “A Storm of Immortality” by J. Wint was an intense story about war and the Elites sacrificing those less fortunate than them. It’s a young adult, fantasy, dystopian with very minimal cursing and barely any romance. There is a lot of battle, but not overly descriptive, and a lot of bonding of friendships. It’s definitely a book I’d recommend to anyone who likes this genre as it is something different.

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