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San Rose Hospital #1
Abbandonata all'altare
Doveva essere il giorno più felice della vita di una coppia, ma lui le ha distrutto il cuore...
Ian Gray è l’amministratore delegato dell’ospedale San Rose, fondato anni prima dalla sua famiglia. Ma dietro la sua apparenza impeccabile e fredda, il giovane nasconde una ferita che lo fa annegare in un mare di tristezza.
Il cuore di Priscilla Menezes è stato spezzato dall’uomo che lei credeva essere l’amore della sua vita e che l’ha abbandonata all’altare, senza alcuna spiegazione. Pochi giorni dopo, scopre di essere incinta, ma il giovane non è disposto ad ascoltarla né a sapere di sua figlia, frutto dell’amore che un tempo lei si era illusa potesse durare per sempre.
Priscilla non avrebbe mai immaginato di tornare in quell’ospedale o di rivedere l’uomo che l’aveva distrutta. Tuttavia, un incidente con la bambina non le dà altra scelta, solo che sa di non essere pronta ad affrontarlo, tanto meno a sopportare il dolore del rifiuto.
Ian Gray è l’amministratore delegato dell’ospedale San Rose, fondato anni prima dalla sua famiglia. Ma dietro la sua apparenza impeccabile e fredda, il giovane nasconde una ferita che lo fa annegare in un mare di tristezza.
Il cuore di Priscilla Menezes è stato spezzato dall’uomo che lei credeva essere l’amore della sua vita e che l’ha abbandonata all’altare, senza alcuna spiegazione. Pochi giorni dopo, scopre di essere incinta, ma il giovane non è disposto ad ascoltarla né a sapere di sua figlia, frutto dell’amore che un tempo lei si era illusa potesse durare per sempre.
Priscilla non avrebbe mai immaginato di tornare in quell’ospedale o di rivedere l’uomo che l’aveva distrutta. Tuttavia, un incidente con la bambina non le dà altra scelta, solo che sa di non essere pronta ad affrontarlo, tanto meno a sopportare il dolore del rifiuto.
259 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 4, 2024
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November 11, 2024
The editing was horrendous and ruined the book
This was just sloppy. The story might have been okay but the editing just wasn't there. I think the guy was a jerk and I wondered why she took him back. If the baby hadn't been sick, he would have kept.on.hating her. I don't think he was celibate either while she was. He didn't even give her a chance to look at the photo. Or talk.to her about what he saw. And he blamed her for not telling about the baby. Such a.jerk. maybe with an excellent editor this story can be saved.
This was just sloppy. The story might have been okay but the editing just wasn't there. I think the guy was a jerk and I wondered why she took him back. If the baby hadn't been sick, he would have kept.on.hating her. I don't think he was celibate either while she was. He didn't even give her a chance to look at the photo. Or talk.to her about what he saw. And he blamed her for not telling about the baby. Such a.jerk. maybe with an excellent editor this story can be saved.
November 17, 2024
OH DEAR!!
I think this author is very talented. The premise of the story very good, HOWEVER, in translating this book so much is lost.
Sentences don’t mean what they are supposed to. So many errors in he/she that it takes a minute to figure out. It was very hard to follow.
After some editing and better translating this would be a five star read!
I think this author is very talented. The premise of the story very good, HOWEVER, in translating this book so much is lost.
Sentences don’t mean what they are supposed to. So many errors in he/she that it takes a minute to figure out. It was very hard to follow.
After some editing and better translating this would be a five star read!
November 17, 2024
What a mess !!
This story would've been good if written and edited right.Holy cow what a mess.The words are all over the place it jumps around so much you get whiplash.The sentences aren't even complete.There are gaps where it goes from one situation to another and you wonder how you got there.And whoever edited it should go back to school and learn to read.I tried sticking with it because i hoped it would get better but by chapter 5 I gave up.Love the story line and wanted to see the end but couldn't do it !!!
This story would've been good if written and edited right.Holy cow what a mess.The words are all over the place it jumps around so much you get whiplash.The sentences aren't even complete.There are gaps where it goes from one situation to another and you wonder how you got there.And whoever edited it should go back to school and learn to read.I tried sticking with it because i hoped it would get better but by chapter 5 I gave up.Love the story line and wanted to see the end but couldn't do it !!!
December 5, 2024
omg the writing
I think this is the worst book I have ever read. I don't normally post reviews, but with this book, I feel I have to. To start off with, all the way through the book, you have to try to figure out what the author is writing. If you're going to write about a book, the writing should be clear and easy to understand.
I don't believe this author understood the English language It was very difficult To replace What words were supposed to be what and the meaning.
I think this is the worst book I have ever read. I don't normally post reviews, but with this book, I feel I have to. To start off with, all the way through the book, you have to try to figure out what the author is writing. If you're going to write about a book, the writing should be clear and easy to understand.
I don't believe this author understood the English language It was very difficult To replace What words were supposed to be what and the meaning.
December 23, 2024
My trust with reading poorly edited stories.
This is a very good story. However, it gave me a headache. Whoever edited this did a poor job. The pronouns were mixer up and at times became confused. Please take this book and re edit. Apart from the mix up, there were quotation marks every where. The persons who want to be editors need to go back and Do an English course or an editing one. These grammatical errors make the story very hard to read and understand.
This is a very good story. However, it gave me a headache. Whoever edited this did a poor job. The pronouns were mixer up and at times became confused. Please take this book and re edit. Apart from the mix up, there were quotation marks every where. The persons who want to be editors need to go back and Do an English course or an editing one. These grammatical errors make the story very hard to read and understand.
May 15, 2025
Pelo título, era de se esperar que eu ia passar raiva mas gosto dos enredo meio novela mexicana que essa autora cria. Logo no começo eu já tava envolvida com a história, como se fosse uma fofoca da minha cidade, querendo saber quem armou pra separar o casal, desconfiei de todo mundo 😅. Maas gostaria que o mocinho tivesse sofrido por mais tempo. E agora quero ler o livro do irmão dele, que espero, continue sendo carismático
November 8, 2024
I enjoyed the story, but sad about the translation/editing
Very hard to read at times. Translation to English was awful, I kept getting confused as to who was actually talking - Sonia was referred to as “he “ in one part and then “she” in another. The also happened constantly with Pri and Ian.
Very hard to read at times. Translation to English was awful, I kept getting confused as to who was actually talking - Sonia was referred to as “he “ in one part and then “she” in another. The also happened constantly with Pri and Ian.
November 8, 2024
poor English translation
Many wrong pronouns. Storyline ok. But the pronouns problem makes it hard to read. What’s a yellow smile? Does not sound very attractive. I found many sentences errors that does not make sense.I think an English speaking editor and proof reader would help.
Many wrong pronouns. Storyline ok. But the pronouns problem makes it hard to read. What’s a yellow smile? Does not sound very attractive. I found many sentences errors that does not make sense.I think an English speaking editor and proof reader would help.
November 13, 2024
Needs better editing
I didn't finish this book even though I wanted to. The grammar was so bad that I had to go back to make it make sense. The pronouns were usually switched. It became too much effort to just read the book. I think I got to about 50% and would have like to see how the book ended.
I didn't finish this book even though I wanted to. The grammar was so bad that I had to go back to make it make sense. The pronouns were usually switched. It became too much effort to just read the book. I think I got to about 50% and would have like to see how the book ended.
November 28, 2024
Good plot but the grammatical error messed it up
The book had a good start but who ever proofread the book before publishing needs another job. He’s where it should have been She’, and all kinds of errors plagued the book and made it very hard to continue. I finished just so I could write this review.
The book had a good start but who ever proofread the book before publishing needs another job. He’s where it should have been She’, and all kinds of errors plagued the book and made it very hard to continue. I finished just so I could write this review.
November 16, 2024
too many errors
I liked the plot of the story but there are so many grammatical errors. At times it was so hard to follow. There were so many times I wanted to throw in the towel and not read.
I liked the plot of the story but there are so many grammatical errors. At times it was so hard to follow. There were so many times I wanted to throw in the towel and not read.
November 19, 2024
Wasn't proofread at all. Confusing. Yellow smile?
Story line would have been good but way too many grammar mistakes, he used for she. Read like it was thrown together in an hour. Hard to follow and couldn't get over the " yellow smile s. Bad teeth?
Story line would have been good but way too many grammar mistakes, he used for she. Read like it was thrown together in an hour. Hard to follow and couldn't get over the " yellow smile s. Bad teeth?
November 19, 2024
Not a terrible plot but the errors throughout the book were distracting.
H was an idiot. The fact he threw away a couple of years with h and left her at the alter just because he got a picture in text was 😱 of course the picture turned out to be fake.
H was an idiot. The fact he threw away a couple of years with h and left her at the alter just because he got a picture in text was 😱 of course the picture turned out to be fake.
November 22, 2024
Good plot too many editing mistakes
The plot was nice but the pronouns were all over the place. Hard to stay focused. I made it a game to count them per page. Translation problems also.
The plot was nice but the pronouns were all over the place. Hard to stay focused. I made it a game to count them per page. Translation problems also.
December 5, 2024
Confusing
It would be a good story if it was put together better. Punctuation is off, it mixes the people's thoughts and what they are saying, it mixes up his and hers, he and she. And some times it was confusing who was talking or if it's was a thought.
It would be a good story if it was put together better. Punctuation is off, it mixes the people's thoughts and what they are saying, it mixes up his and hers, he and she. And some times it was confusing who was talking or if it's was a thought.
December 9, 2024
Great Story bad grammar
The book was great if you could get past the grammar issues. He was really a she, and it was hard to comprehend the difference. The author had issues with talking about themselves. Other than that, it was a good book.
The book was great if you could get past the grammar issues. He was really a she, and it was hard to comprehend the difference. The author had issues with talking about themselves. Other than that, it was a good book.
February 1, 2025
Poor translation!!
The story was okay,but English is obviously NOT a language she speaks .There were so many grammatical errors it was a pain to read .She couldn't figure out male from female! I gave up at 53% of the book. I'm sorry but I can't recommend this book
The story was okay,but English is obviously NOT a language she speaks .There were so many grammatical errors it was a pain to read .She couldn't figure out male from female! I gave up at 53% of the book. I'm sorry but I can't recommend this book
December 18, 2025
Será que vale a leitura dinâmica?
Podia ser bom, mas fazendo esta resenha agora, um tempo após leitura, lembro do tema geral, no entanto não marcou, mais um igual a tantos outras leituras.
Sorry autora.
Podia ser bom, mas fazendo esta resenha agora, um tempo após leitura, lembro do tema geral, no entanto não marcou, mais um igual a tantos outras leituras.
Sorry autora.
November 5, 2024
Storyline Ok
I realize English is not her first language, but someone should have done more for her in the translation and especially grammar.
I realize English is not her first language, but someone should have done more for her in the translation and especially grammar.
November 8, 2024
Wording off in so many places. He,she
Whoever checked your wording, spelling needs to be fired. Kept reading and rereading bro understand grammar cause it was a good love story.
Whoever checked your wording, spelling needs to be fired. Kept reading and rereading bro understand grammar cause it was a good love story.
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November 9, 2024This was a good concept—very HPesque, but It’s obvious that English isn’t their first language, makes reading tough.
November 14, 2024
Bad Edit
Story line is entertaining,but did anyone edit this Book. His ,her ,she and it are used randomly . Would be nice to get it fixed.
Story line is entertaining,but did anyone edit this Book. His ,her ,she and it are used randomly . Would be nice to get it fixed.
November 19, 2024
The story line is good but the editing is horrible couldn’t finish this book everything was mixed up
November 22, 2024
Poor editing ruined what could have been a great read.
November 24, 2024
Confusion
It was a good story line but too many grammar errors and that made me not enjoy it as much.
It was a good story line but too many grammar errors and that made me not enjoy it as much.
November 24, 2024
Editing 0/10. So poorly written it was not finishable.
November 26, 2024
needs lots of editing.
It was very hard to get through because of all the errors. He and she were mixed up several times.
It was very hard to get through because of all the errors. He and she were mixed up several times.
November 26, 2024
Could not finish…. Horrible editing and he/she mistakes. NOT worth my time
December 1, 2024
The story had promise. But the writing/editing was none existent. Definitely needs a professional editors touch.
December 3, 2024
Story good. Editing abominable.
Liked story line but editing was horrible. Pronouns didn't fit all through book. Made reading very tough. Expect better from books.
Liked story line but editing was horrible. Pronouns didn't fit all through book. Made reading very tough. Expect better from books.
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