I usually really enjoy this author's works. The ending on this one, however, I REALLY didn't care for.
I should state, here at the outset, that the following is rant-y, very, very rant-y, because I'm very, very annoyed with this story. That said, I have really enjoy the authors' other works (and hope she won't read my rant-y hissy fit because it's not at all nice or diplomatic), I definitely do not think one work that I have issues with makes her a bad author (and if I'm being fair, I think ruminating on this kind of outraged response is good for a reader to understand my fundamental values/beliefs), and I'll definitely be reading more books by this author in the future (in truth, the next book I read after this story was her 3rd Pax Galactica book, and I enjoyed it).
Anyway, to the rant...
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I didn't like how the colonel ended up using his inheritance for the bond for the robot child, for several reasons. I get that the author/characters didn't want the MFC to feel indebted to the MMC, but... if they're heading that way anyway, why not just do the marriage of convenience, save the expense of the $1M bond, start from a basis of friends, and if it doesn't actually work out, I think if they stayed friends (which, kid involved, so that should be a good regardless of the label) I don't think the government would have to know / don't think it would be an issue. The whole 11th hour godmother (god-colonel?) just didn't work for me. (1) He said he inherited just "a little more" than the bond from his father. Okay, so he's basically giving away his entire inheritance (or at least loaning it out, for at least more than a decade, until the kid grows up), for a stupid government bureaucracy / governmental money-making scheme? (2) He said his father wouldn't approve of using it for a mercenary business start-up, but... $1M is a crazy amount of money, he could use it for something that would actually make a difference (yes, clearly using it as a bond makes a large difference in the life of kid and MFC, BUUUUUUT, that money would be entirely unnecessary if they did the marriage of convenience thing). And we get the main characters all matched up (but no obligation, as if their lack of mutual obligation is THE most important thing here), but the poor colonel is just like "yep, giving you all my money, feel good about this" and exit stage right. No discussion of his future, what he's going to do now that he gave up his entire plan (and what about the people he was going to employ huh??? It's not like they're nebulous, hypothetical people, he was definitely recruiting from his former military comrades. So they're just SOL because fairy (robot) godmother (colonel) wants his nice underling not to have to marry the lady he's probably going to end up marrying anyway?!?! WTF?! I just can't even, it annoys me so much. Her books are so smart and involved and this just comes off as stupid and one-dimensional. GRRR.
Borrowed from Kindle Unlimited.