Genre: Fantasy, Paranormal
Tropes: magic academy, from human to supernatural, Atlantis
Series: Supernatural Academy #1
Cliffhanger: Yes
Spice: 1/5 🌶
Rating: 2.5⭐
Set in the same world as: the Supernatural Prison series
"But this year, the year of pink hair, was all about firsts. First formal dress. First use of magic. First assassination attempt.
Look at me go."
I'm honestly not sure when was the last time I was this undecided with the rating of a book, due to its numerous ups and downs:
✅ cool magical system
✅ fast paced action
✅ side characters
🆗️ strong"ish" female MC
🆗️ Plot twists - not utterly unexpected but not really super predictable either
❌ insta-love
❌ insta-friendship
》》The Plot《《
Maddison James always did two things on New Year: turn a year older and change her hair color. But apparently pink hair brings trouble. Because she feels the whole "Ye're a wizard, Harry" scene on her own skin when a girl shows up and reveals she's part of the supernatural community and takes her to a magic academy. If Maddie gets to go through that at 22, I guess it's not too late for our Hogwarts letter either, right? Anyway, back to the plot; at the academy (cool magic system, no complaints here), nobody knows in which of the four groups she belongs: vampire, shifter, fey or magic user and she shows great potential even if there's a lock on her magic. The year goes by, Maddi having to figure out what she is, how to deal with the Clovers (magical version of Mean Girls) and what to do with the group of 5 hot, powerful and illegally beautiful guys, the Atlantean-five. Especially when Asher is part of them and he just happens to be the closest thing to a God she's ever seen.
"I could already tell that this Academy was like high school on steroids, filled with magical creatures born of myth and legend."
The book is written from Maddison's perspective, the action moving pretty fast through the first year at the academy. While the story was interesting, I was deeply bothered when things happened randomly, without any sort of built up and those moments gave me the feeling the writer hadn't actually thought about a way of getting the characters out of those situations.
》》 Characters and Relationships《《
Well... I'll mess a bit with the format I usually use because this book is that chaotic with its characters and relationships.
🧝🏻♀️ Maddison James
“You’re diff—”
“If you say different,” I interrupted, “I’m going to punch you. Don’t separate me out from other women. They’re my people.”
That was the scene where I loved her. The rest she was just OK, on the good side of my character radar, but not exceptional. Anyway, the weird thing with her was that she didn't seem written with a pattern in mind; she was a loner who run away from people and in the first hour at the academy she's officially best friends for life with two chicks she had just met, she states she doesn't want trouble and will stay away from the Clovers but provokes them the first chance she got, she knows the Atlantean-five are strong and dangerous and was decided to stay away from them but goes all smartass and rude from the first conversation ... I just felt she wasn't very consistent in her actions.
"There was a waterfall … under the damn ocean.
I had so many questions."
Also, POPPY BALFOUR, is this you here??? (Sorry, From Blood and Ash reference)
But back to Maddison, what I liked about her character is this new year new hair color thing. Really fresh idea, or at least, it feels like that for me.
👩🏻🦰🧛🏾♀️ Ilia and Larissa
Ilia and Larissa are the two girls Maddi becomes BFF with on the spot (literally, insta-friendship). Ilia is a magic user who works to track down supernaturals from all over the world and bring them to the academy, extremely bold, confident and let's go for eccentric. Larissa, on the other hand, is a super shy vampire who, despite being the daughter of the principal and having been to the academy for a year, doesn't have any other friends.
Then we have the Atlantean-five:
🧑🏻💼 Asher Locke
“If there was any such thing as a god on Earth, Asher Locke is as close as you’ll get.”
He's the strongest supe at the academy, the magic user with the most Atlantian blood and the love interests, making him the male MC.
🦁 Jesse
"Jesse was green-eyed, dark-skinned, and a lion shifter. He was one of the biggest guys I’d ever seen in my life, well over six and a half feet and built like a linebacker. He was also really hot. Atlantean-level hot, because I was starting to think that they were definitely their own race of supes."
Do I need to tell you more? Also, he was really sweet, after Axl who was very nerdy so his sweetness came from that too.
🧑🏽 Calen
"He was big, well over six feet, dressed in stylish and expensive clothing. I noted his pretty-boy haircut, brown hair that was longer on top, and flashing eyes that were a shade of silvery brown."
He's another strong magic user and he's very flirty.
🧛🏻 Rone
"Rone was even broader across the shoulders than Jesse, which was quite a feat. His features were beautiful. I mean, a fallen angel from the sky beautiful, with that golden-blond hair and icy blue eyes framed by long golden lashes, defined cheekbones, and a strong, angular jaw."
Of course, we also get a cold vampire with a traumatic childhood.
🧑🏻🎓 Axl
"He wasn’t as tall or built as Jesse. If anything, his muscles were long and wiry, like a runner or long-distance swimmer. He had messy auburn waves, and those eyes, which were a beautiful shade between gold and silver."
He's definitely the brains of the group.
AND LET ME TELL YOU THIS: I do not, in any way, go for reverse harem tropes (unless they are written by Caroline Peckham and Susanne Valenti, then I'm all in) and it's definitely something I still consider weird but this book had the perfect set up for that. I complained about the insta-love going on, but I swear, if Jaymin Eve would have spent as much time in building Maddison and Asher’s romance as she spent on setting the grounds for a RH that never happened, this book would have been so much better. Don't believe me? Look:
"If a shifter offers you some of their food, it’s about more than just sharing. It’s about pack. About even … romance, sometimes.”
I swallowed hard. “So, Jesse was like … shifter-style flirting with me?”
You have Jesse flirting with her in whatever shifter way Lions do it. Then you have Calen hitting on her. Multiple times.
“So, we’re on new girl babysitting duty,” Calen said, and he waggled an eyebrow at me. “I’m taking the night shift.”
I pointed a finger at him. “You step one foot into my room and you’re going to leave without your balls.” He opened his mouth, but I cut him off. “And it won’t be in any fun sort of way.”
“Spoilsport,” he muttered.
That's just one small example and it's definitely more than Asher did up until that point anyway. THEN you have her waking up with all them all around her:
"The next time I opened my eyes, it was morning, and I was literally surrounded by male bodies. Calen was at my feet, almost curled around them, and I resisted the urge to nudge him in the ribs. Jesse and Asher, who each had an arm over me, tightened their hold, stopping me from moving."
I mean... come on... this has RH written all over it. Even Ilia knows it.
“Ilia was pretty adamant that she wanted to see you. I’m afraid she wasn’t happy about the ‘no outsiders’ rule for our house, but in the end she relented and gave me your bag.” He held it out to me. “She also said that if you didn’t have—” He cleared his throat. “—a six-way with all of us, then she was greatly disappointed in you.”
Hell, I think even Asher knew it!!!!
Asher just shook his head. “If you all could stop hitting on Maddi, that’d be great. She’s here as our friend. Okay? She’s one of us. An Atlantean. That’s a bond deeper than you all trying to plant your dick in her.”
He leaned in closer. “Different rules for me,” he murmured, and my blood boiled again, my body aching.
I rest my case.
I'm not saying I wanted a RH, but I'm pointing out that's where things were leading. Especially with the way people fell in love in this book (I swear, it felt like 90% of the romantic development happened off script).
*MINOR SPOLIER ALERTS AHEAD *
And don't even get me started at how Ilia was more than half of the book with Josh and they were portrayed as a super good couple to have them breaking up in legit 3 sentences and then suddenly have Calen and Ilia as "a thing" that apparently also involves feelings. That came out of absolutely fucking nowhere. The same story goes for Rone and Larissa. Just out of the blue, no built up and simply for the sake of having Maddison's friends paired with Asher’s. And I'm not saying it's bothering me to have them like that, but there was legitimately NO BUILT UP for that.
My rant is over.
》》 Favorite Scenes《《
🧝🏻♀️ Maddison thinking about Asher
"I wondered if I should have followed the redheaded chick’s advice and worked out a safety for if I fainted. Asher was lethal to females everywhere. And probably half the males."
👩🏻🦰 Ilia's lines and her way of thinking
💧Maddison pushing through the barrier at her Water Elemental lesson
👗Damon showing interest in Maddison at the dance
🧝🏻♀️🧛🏾♀️🧑🏽 The talk about girl power interrupted by Calen
“You can’t be part of girl power,” I told him, not so politely snatching my stroganoff back.
“Why not?” Calen said, sounding completely affronted.
I raised my eyebrows. “Uh, let me think of the reasons. One: too much dick. Two: Two too many balls. Three: Not enough awesome.”
“So much dick,” he agreed. “You have no idea how much dick. Wanna find out?”
🧑🏻🎓 Axl being Axl
🧝🏻♀️👩🏻🦰🧛🏾♀️ The girls getting drunk and swimming naked in the pool
💤 The guys being worried about Maddison
“Are you sleeping?” Jesse asked me as I flopped onto the couch with him. “Because—and please don’t take this the wrong way—you look like crap.”
“Smokin’ hot crap,” Calen said, entering the room, bottles of beer and wine in his hands. “You’re always hot, Maddi, it’s just that the circles under your eyes have circles now.”
🧝🏻♀️ Maddison deciding on her new hair color
》��� Conclusion《《
The book had a strong Wattpad vibe, with the way it was written and how certain things were handled. I thought a bit about Zodiac Academy while reading it, because there were a few similarities, but this one is definitely more suitable for YA then Zodiac Academy. I was frustrated with the writing style and the things that happened in the blink of an eye, but I was also kind of addicted to this, so taught guess whether someone might enjoy this series or not. Is it a masterpiece? No. But it's still exciting to follow as long as you don't expect a "bulletproof" plot and you don't mind the insta-love and insta-friendship. Will I still go on with this series? Yes, I will try. I'm curious enough to keep reading it and I'm curious to see if Jaymin Eve's writing can impress me. I've read the Secret Keeper series from her as well and, again, while the story was good, the way it was written and the fact that all the characters had that insta-love going on made it impossible for me to love it. So I'm really curious if all the series are like that, because, if that's the case, I might have to give up on the author.
"In one week it was my birthday. Before I met with anyone and changed the fate of the world, I was going to change my hair.
New color had always been synonymous with new fate for me.
Let those fate-bitches do their best to take me down. The year of pink was over.
It was time for something different.
The year of purple."