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The Elixir of Lies
‘A gripping narrative that lingers long after the final page…5 stars.’ - Literary Titans
Anicus returns from war determined to change his fortunes.
He’s a wordsmith with a passion for plays, longing to bring his stories to life. But when he pitches wealthy patrons for funds to build a theatre, they offer nothing but scorn—and bruises. Those who fought in the war grow hungry. Those who stayed behind grow rich.
Beaten and broke… Anicus turns to deception.
With a silver tongue and a flair for performance, he conjures an illusion—an Elixir of immortality. He peddles hope to the wealthy, selling nothing but water and false promises.
The scheme starts as a means to build his stage, but as one dose becomes two, then five, then fifty, it spirals into something greater. He sees a chance to become the star he always dreamed he could be…
But it’s only a matter of time until someone falls ill.
Anicus returns from war determined to change his fortunes.
He’s a wordsmith with a passion for plays, longing to bring his stories to life. But when he pitches wealthy patrons for funds to build a theatre, they offer nothing but scorn—and bruises. Those who fought in the war grow hungry. Those who stayed behind grow rich.
Beaten and broke… Anicus turns to deception.
With a silver tongue and a flair for performance, he conjures an illusion—an Elixir of immortality. He peddles hope to the wealthy, selling nothing but water and false promises.
The scheme starts as a means to build his stage, but as one dose becomes two, then five, then fifty, it spirals into something greater. He sees a chance to become the star he always dreamed he could be…
But it’s only a matter of time until someone falls ill.
- GenresHistorical Fiction
382 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 5, 2024
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March 27, 2025
DNF @ 38p.
This is NOT Historical Fiction! This is a fever dream of a self-insert "American Dream but with togas" fanfiction from a skimmed Wikipedia page on Rome!
Because nothing screams "authentic antiquity" like slapping an "-ii" on the end of modern currency ($$$) and calling it worldbuilding. Btw, did nobody check that it's actually the Romanian word for dollar? lmao?
Oh, Anicus, you delusional, tunika-clad grifter. You didn’t just return from war—you returned from the most generic unnamed conflict in ancient-ish history, armed with nothing but a dream, and the business acumen of a 21st-century multi-level marketing schemer. Instead of struggling with PTSD or trying to reclaim an heirloom or whatever, he suddenly realizes he’s basically Euripides.
First off, the names: Eddicus? Really? I JOKED to a friend about how "Anicus" clearly comes from "Anakin", but then Eddicus just took me out. "Eddy" should get you stabbed for even whispering such a nickname near the Forum.
And Scipius instead of Scipio is just a typo, surely. Then there’s Maria, just casually hanging out in Athos like it wasn't already hard enough to tell WHEN exactly "Ancient times" is supposed to be.
Back to the beginning: Our boy Anicus, a young veteran, who, while stranded on a deserted island (because of course), suddenly discovers he’s not just a soldier—oh no, he’s a brilliant actor and playwright. You see, he loves stories, and he loves studying them. Because nothing hones the craft like talking to a ball named Wilsonius. ;D
After his return to Athos he does not seek patronage like any sensible person in a historical society where the rich literally built theatres for clout, but marches into the first chapter and demands a loan like he’s applying for a small business grant in downtown Chicago. "Ah yes, lender, I’d like 50,000 dolarii to build the first theatre—no, you don’t understand, no one has ever thought of performing before me."
Meanwhile, actual ancient Greeks and Romans are rolling in their graves.
Then comes the classic American Hustle... His grand scheme is selling an Elixir of Immortality. The ancient equivalent of selling NFTs fr.
I've not even read 40 pages and physically couldn't do it any more. The protagonist is just a theater kid who just discovered capitalism... Anicus' audacity is probably the most Roman thing about this whole mess.
This is NOT Historical Fiction! This is a fever dream of a self-insert "American Dream but with togas" fanfiction from a skimmed Wikipedia page on Rome!
Because nothing screams "authentic antiquity" like slapping an "-ii" on the end of modern currency ($$$) and calling it worldbuilding. Btw, did nobody check that it's actually the Romanian word for dollar? lmao?
Oh, Anicus, you delusional, tunika-clad grifter. You didn’t just return from war—you returned from the most generic unnamed conflict in ancient-ish history, armed with nothing but a dream, and the business acumen of a 21st-century multi-level marketing schemer. Instead of struggling with PTSD or trying to reclaim an heirloom or whatever, he suddenly realizes he’s basically Euripides.
First off, the names: Eddicus? Really? I JOKED to a friend about how "Anicus" clearly comes from "Anakin", but then Eddicus just took me out. "Eddy" should get you stabbed for even whispering such a nickname near the Forum.
And Scipius instead of Scipio is just a typo, surely. Then there’s Maria, just casually hanging out in Athos like it wasn't already hard enough to tell WHEN exactly "Ancient times" is supposed to be.
Back to the beginning: Our boy Anicus, a young veteran, who, while stranded on a deserted island (because of course), suddenly discovers he’s not just a soldier—oh no, he’s a brilliant actor and playwright. You see, he loves stories, and he loves studying them. Because nothing hones the craft like talking to a ball named Wilsonius. ;D
After his return to Athos he does not seek patronage like any sensible person in a historical society where the rich literally built theatres for clout, but marches into the first chapter and demands a loan like he’s applying for a small business grant in downtown Chicago. "Ah yes, lender, I’d like 50,000 dolarii to build the first theatre—no, you don’t understand, no one has ever thought of performing before me."
Meanwhile, actual ancient Greeks and Romans are rolling in their graves.
Then comes the classic American Hustle... His grand scheme is selling an Elixir of Immortality. The ancient equivalent of selling NFTs fr.
I've not even read 40 pages and physically couldn't do it any more. The protagonist is just a theater kid who just discovered capitalism... Anicus' audacity is probably the most Roman thing about this whole mess.
March 21, 2025
Wow! This is one of the most unique stories I've read. It is a gripping and morally complex story that explores ambition, deception, and the slow descent into darkness. This isn’t your typical hero’s journey—it’s not even really a villain origin story—it's just a story about a man with the best of intentions who descends into ruin.
Anicus is a fascinating protagonist, though not necessarily a likable one. His dream of building a theater is relatable, but his means of achieving it—selling a fake elixir of immortality—quickly spirals into something much darker. Watching Anicus cross ethical lines, one small step at a time, is both compelling and unsettling. This masterfully examines human nature, showing how desperation and the hunger for power can twist a person into someone they never expected to become.
Beyond Anicus, the novel shines in its world-building, particularly in how it weaves social dynamics into the plot. The city’s stark divide between those who profited from war and those who suffered creates a tense, layered backdrop for the story. The supporting cast adds even more depth and they stand out as complex and engaging figures. Even the antagonists are intriguing, making the story feel all the more nuanced.
The novel’s structure feels almost labyrinthine, mirroring Anicus’ descent with a narrative that is both mesmerizing and bittersweet. There’s a certain inevitability to his downfall, making it a fascinating yet haunting read. For a debut novel, this is incredibly impressive—thought-provoking, immersive, and unafraid to explore the darker sides of ambition and morality. If you love stories that challenge your perceptions and lean into moral complexity, The Elixir of Lies is a must-read.
Thanks so much to the author and MTMC tours for the complimentary copy. This review is voluntary and all opinions are my own.
Anicus is a fascinating protagonist, though not necessarily a likable one. His dream of building a theater is relatable, but his means of achieving it—selling a fake elixir of immortality—quickly spirals into something much darker. Watching Anicus cross ethical lines, one small step at a time, is both compelling and unsettling. This masterfully examines human nature, showing how desperation and the hunger for power can twist a person into someone they never expected to become.
Beyond Anicus, the novel shines in its world-building, particularly in how it weaves social dynamics into the plot. The city’s stark divide between those who profited from war and those who suffered creates a tense, layered backdrop for the story. The supporting cast adds even more depth and they stand out as complex and engaging figures. Even the antagonists are intriguing, making the story feel all the more nuanced.
The novel’s structure feels almost labyrinthine, mirroring Anicus’ descent with a narrative that is both mesmerizing and bittersweet. There’s a certain inevitability to his downfall, making it a fascinating yet haunting read. For a debut novel, this is incredibly impressive—thought-provoking, immersive, and unafraid to explore the darker sides of ambition and morality. If you love stories that challenge your perceptions and lean into moral complexity, The Elixir of Lies is a must-read.
Thanks so much to the author and MTMC tours for the complimentary copy. This review is voluntary and all opinions are my own.
March 22, 2025
thank you so much to mtmc tours and S.E. Kaiser for providing me with a copy!!
the elixir of lies is a fantasy following Anicus, a wordsmith, who returns from war determined to change his fortune. he longs to bring his stories to life and after being rejected by wealthy patrons for funds to build a theatre, he decides to create fake elixirs of immortality. he only started this deception to gain funds to build his theatre but then he sees the opportunity to create something bigger and become the star he always dreamed he could be…
this was such a wonderful novel and i loved Anicus’s story, the way his determination to make his dreams come true soon turns into greed for power was really interesting.
it was written in such a compelling way that you couldn’t help but feel for him!!
it’s honestly so hard for me to go into everything i loved without spoilers but i adored the writing so much, it was impossible for me to put this down!
the elixir of lies is a fantasy following Anicus, a wordsmith, who returns from war determined to change his fortune. he longs to bring his stories to life and after being rejected by wealthy patrons for funds to build a theatre, he decides to create fake elixirs of immortality. he only started this deception to gain funds to build his theatre but then he sees the opportunity to create something bigger and become the star he always dreamed he could be…
this was such a wonderful novel and i loved Anicus’s story, the way his determination to make his dreams come true soon turns into greed for power was really interesting.
it was written in such a compelling way that you couldn’t help but feel for him!!
it’s honestly so hard for me to go into everything i loved without spoilers but i adored the writing so much, it was impossible for me to put this down!
January 23, 2025
I received a copy from the publisher in exchange for a review.
From the musings of Anicus, a scholar of the arcane and collector of esoteric tomes,
To delve into "The Elixir of Lies" by S.E. Kaiser is to wade through a swamp of deception where truth is as elusive as the morning mist. Here, in the twisted halls of human ambition and folly, one finds a narrative not unlike the alchemical pursuit of transforming base metals into gold - a pursuit of transforming base intentions into grand deceptions.
Plot and Deception:
The book follows the journey of a would-be alchemist, whose quest for the Elixir of Immortality leads him through the murky waters of human morality. The narrative is a complex tapestry, woven with threads of lies, each more intricate than the last, suggesting that perhaps the true elixir is not of life but of illusion. The story explores how lies can be an elixir in themselves, sustaining the illusion of control or eternal life.
Five Notable Quotes:
"In the crucible of our deceit, we forge the chains that bind us to the illusion of eternity."
This speaks to the theme of how our lies trap us, much like the alchemist's pursuit entraps him in his own narrative.
"The Elixir of Immortality is but a mirror; it shows not the path to eternal life but the reflection of our deepest desires."
Here, Kaiser cleverly plays with the notion that immortality is not about living forever but about seeing one's darkest wishes reflected back.
"Truth is the lead we start with; lies are the gold we hope to end with."
A poignant reflection on the alchemical process as a metaphor for human nature, where truth is transformed into deceit for gain.
"Every lie we tell is a sip from the chalice of our own demise."
This quote poignantly illustrates the self-destructive nature of deception.
"In the end, it's not the elixir that grants life; it's the lie that we believe in."
Perhaps the most cynical of all, it suggests that our belief in our own deceptions is what keeps us going, not any mythical potion.
Ratings Breakdown:
Plot Complexity: 4/5 - Kaiser's narrative is a labyrinth of deceit, with each twist revealing more about human nature than the Elixir itself.
Character Development: 3/5 - While the protagonist's journey is compelling, the supporting cast often feels like mere echoes of the main character's internal struggles.
Thematic Depth: 5/5 - The exploration of lies as an elixir for the soul and society is profound, offering much to ponder for those who seek wisdom in fiction.
Writing Style: 4/5 - The prose is eloquent, almost intoxicating like the elixir itself, though at times it can become overly dense with its metaphors and symbolism.
Philosophical Insight: 4/5 - Kaiser delves into philosophical inquiries about truth, reality, and human desire with a keen, if somewhat dark, perspective.
Conclusion:
In sum, "The Elixir of Lies" by S.E. Kaiser is a tome that would find a fitting place on my shelf, not for its truth but for its artful deception. It is a book that whispers in the shadows of one's mind, questioning the very essence of what we seek in life and what we're willing to lie about to achieve it. While it may not quench the thirst for straightforward storytelling, it certainly satiates the hunger for a narrative that challenges and provokes thought on the nature of existence and deceit.
However, one must tread carefully through this narrative, for like any potent elixir, it can intoxicate with its own brand of truth - the truth of lies.
From the musings of Anicus, a scholar of the arcane and collector of esoteric tomes,
To delve into "The Elixir of Lies" by S.E. Kaiser is to wade through a swamp of deception where truth is as elusive as the morning mist. Here, in the twisted halls of human ambition and folly, one finds a narrative not unlike the alchemical pursuit of transforming base metals into gold - a pursuit of transforming base intentions into grand deceptions.
Plot and Deception:
The book follows the journey of a would-be alchemist, whose quest for the Elixir of Immortality leads him through the murky waters of human morality. The narrative is a complex tapestry, woven with threads of lies, each more intricate than the last, suggesting that perhaps the true elixir is not of life but of illusion. The story explores how lies can be an elixir in themselves, sustaining the illusion of control or eternal life.
Five Notable Quotes:
"In the crucible of our deceit, we forge the chains that bind us to the illusion of eternity."
This speaks to the theme of how our lies trap us, much like the alchemist's pursuit entraps him in his own narrative.
"The Elixir of Immortality is but a mirror; it shows not the path to eternal life but the reflection of our deepest desires."
Here, Kaiser cleverly plays with the notion that immortality is not about living forever but about seeing one's darkest wishes reflected back.
"Truth is the lead we start with; lies are the gold we hope to end with."
A poignant reflection on the alchemical process as a metaphor for human nature, where truth is transformed into deceit for gain.
"Every lie we tell is a sip from the chalice of our own demise."
This quote poignantly illustrates the self-destructive nature of deception.
"In the end, it's not the elixir that grants life; it's the lie that we believe in."
Perhaps the most cynical of all, it suggests that our belief in our own deceptions is what keeps us going, not any mythical potion.
Ratings Breakdown:
Plot Complexity: 4/5 - Kaiser's narrative is a labyrinth of deceit, with each twist revealing more about human nature than the Elixir itself.
Character Development: 3/5 - While the protagonist's journey is compelling, the supporting cast often feels like mere echoes of the main character's internal struggles.
Thematic Depth: 5/5 - The exploration of lies as an elixir for the soul and society is profound, offering much to ponder for those who seek wisdom in fiction.
Writing Style: 4/5 - The prose is eloquent, almost intoxicating like the elixir itself, though at times it can become overly dense with its metaphors and symbolism.
Philosophical Insight: 4/5 - Kaiser delves into philosophical inquiries about truth, reality, and human desire with a keen, if somewhat dark, perspective.
Conclusion:
In sum, "The Elixir of Lies" by S.E. Kaiser is a tome that would find a fitting place on my shelf, not for its truth but for its artful deception. It is a book that whispers in the shadows of one's mind, questioning the very essence of what we seek in life and what we're willing to lie about to achieve it. While it may not quench the thirst for straightforward storytelling, it certainly satiates the hunger for a narrative that challenges and provokes thought on the nature of existence and deceit.
However, one must tread carefully through this narrative, for like any potent elixir, it can intoxicate with its own brand of truth - the truth of lies.
November 8, 2024
The Elixir of Lies, by S.E. Kaiser, is a captivating tale set in the divided city of Athos, where the line between the haves and the have-nots is stark and unforgiving. At the heart of this story is Anicus, a former soldier who is now reduced to bricklaying for a pittance, yet fueled by a dream—to one day build his own theater. However, after a ruthless lender named Scipius crushes his proposal, Anicus devises a daring scheme. With only a few basic ingredients and his gift for persuasion, he convinces the city’s elite that he holds the secret to immortality, an elixir capable of curing illness and staving off death. As his deception deepens, Anicus finds himself entangled in a dangerous web of power, debt, and the rigid social hierarchy that defines Athos. The stakes rise as his lies grow, forcing him to navigate not just external pressures but the internal moral conflict his deceit has created.
Anicus is a complex and driven protagonist, whose intelligence and ambition make him both relatable and compelling. He’s wonderfully human, shaped by the forces of imbalance and ethical dilemmas that pull him in opposing directions. His journey is not just a battle for survival, but a poignant exploration of what it means to confront power and seek one’s place in a world that favors the wealthy and privileged. Kaiser’s skillful character development shines throughout the novel.
Every figure, whether reluctantly likable, deeply lovable, or deliciously detestable, feels fully realized. These aren’t one-dimensional players in Anicus’ story—they are layered individuals whose actions challenge the conventional notions of good and evil. The morally gray terrain these characters navigate makes the story all the more engaging. Athos itself is another triumph of the novel. Kaiser breathes life into this bustling city, painting vivid pictures of its streets, markets, and the crowds that pulse with energy.
The social dynamics of the city are intricately woven into the plot, grounding the story in a world that feels not only believable but essential to the narrative. The setting is more than just a backdrop; it’s a character in its own right, as integral to the story as Anicus himself.
What sets The Elixir of Lies apart is its originality and the masterful world-building that Kaiser delivers. It’s a fascinating exploration of deception, social hierarchy, and the raw power of words—both written and spoken. The novel deftly examines how ambition and desperation can drive one to manipulate truths, and it poses intriguing questions about the price of such deceit.
For readers who enjoy richly developed characters and immersive settings, The Elixir of Lies offers a gripping narrative that lingers long after the final page. Kaiser’s story is a powerful meditation on strength, struggle, and the lengths one will go to pursue their dreams in a world that often seems stacked against them.
Anicus is a complex and driven protagonist, whose intelligence and ambition make him both relatable and compelling. He’s wonderfully human, shaped by the forces of imbalance and ethical dilemmas that pull him in opposing directions. His journey is not just a battle for survival, but a poignant exploration of what it means to confront power and seek one’s place in a world that favors the wealthy and privileged. Kaiser’s skillful character development shines throughout the novel.
Every figure, whether reluctantly likable, deeply lovable, or deliciously detestable, feels fully realized. These aren’t one-dimensional players in Anicus’ story—they are layered individuals whose actions challenge the conventional notions of good and evil. The morally gray terrain these characters navigate makes the story all the more engaging. Athos itself is another triumph of the novel. Kaiser breathes life into this bustling city, painting vivid pictures of its streets, markets, and the crowds that pulse with energy.
The social dynamics of the city are intricately woven into the plot, grounding the story in a world that feels not only believable but essential to the narrative. The setting is more than just a backdrop; it’s a character in its own right, as integral to the story as Anicus himself.
What sets The Elixir of Lies apart is its originality and the masterful world-building that Kaiser delivers. It’s a fascinating exploration of deception, social hierarchy, and the raw power of words—both written and spoken. The novel deftly examines how ambition and desperation can drive one to manipulate truths, and it poses intriguing questions about the price of such deceit.
For readers who enjoy richly developed characters and immersive settings, The Elixir of Lies offers a gripping narrative that lingers long after the final page. Kaiser’s story is a powerful meditation on strength, struggle, and the lengths one will go to pursue their dreams in a world that often seems stacked against them.
March 8, 2025
siast with an interest in history, any history. Writing, apparently, came about because of an unfortunate accident in which he broke his leg. The Elixir of Lies is a result of that injury.
First, the marketing blurb:
Anicus returns from war determined to change his fortunes.
He’s a wordsmith with a passion for plays, longing to bring his stories to life. But when he pitches wealthy patrons for funds to build a theatre, they offer nothing but scorn—and bruises. While those who fought in the war grow hungry, those who stayed behind grow rich.
Beaten and broke… Anicus turns to deception.
With a silver tongue and a flair for performance, he conjures an illusion—an Elixir of immortality. He peddles hope to the wealthy, selling nothing but water and false promises. The scheme starts as a means to build his stage, but as one dose becomes two, then five, then fifty, it spirals into something greater. He has a chance to become the star he always dreamed he could be…
But it’s only a matter of time until someone falls ill.
For a first novel, and an independently published one at that, Kaiser creates a relatively credible world influenced by ancient Greece and Rome, complete with downtrodden and abused veteran who dreams of a life greater than what his service, and his country have afforded him. This is very much a common man story, a story of an individual trying to overcome the crushing reality of a classist society, of disregard and abuse. It is a theme which has resonated throughout human history, and one which Kaiser examines with intensity.
The writing, character development, and plot in The Elixir of Lies are entertaining if not remarkable. There are a few material culture problems which arrested credibility, but that reaction is not surprising given this reviewer’s rather critical expectations. Kaiser spins his character through a situation which rapidly becomes something of its own, an implacable juggernaut. And in the end, there is a satisfying resolution following in the tradition of Greek tragedy, and the inescapable destiny of fate.
The Elixir of Lies is a good escapist read. I’m confident Kaiser will hone his craft and present a growing readership with stories which demonstrate that here is a writer who will find his place.
First, the marketing blurb:
Anicus returns from war determined to change his fortunes.
He’s a wordsmith with a passion for plays, longing to bring his stories to life. But when he pitches wealthy patrons for funds to build a theatre, they offer nothing but scorn—and bruises. While those who fought in the war grow hungry, those who stayed behind grow rich.
Beaten and broke… Anicus turns to deception.
With a silver tongue and a flair for performance, he conjures an illusion—an Elixir of immortality. He peddles hope to the wealthy, selling nothing but water and false promises. The scheme starts as a means to build his stage, but as one dose becomes two, then five, then fifty, it spirals into something greater. He has a chance to become the star he always dreamed he could be…
But it’s only a matter of time until someone falls ill.
For a first novel, and an independently published one at that, Kaiser creates a relatively credible world influenced by ancient Greece and Rome, complete with downtrodden and abused veteran who dreams of a life greater than what his service, and his country have afforded him. This is very much a common man story, a story of an individual trying to overcome the crushing reality of a classist society, of disregard and abuse. It is a theme which has resonated throughout human history, and one which Kaiser examines with intensity.
The writing, character development, and plot in The Elixir of Lies are entertaining if not remarkable. There are a few material culture problems which arrested credibility, but that reaction is not surprising given this reviewer’s rather critical expectations. Kaiser spins his character through a situation which rapidly becomes something of its own, an implacable juggernaut. And in the end, there is a satisfying resolution following in the tradition of Greek tragedy, and the inescapable destiny of fate.
The Elixir of Lies is a good escapist read. I’m confident Kaiser will hone his craft and present a growing readership with stories which demonstrate that here is a writer who will find his place.
November 14, 2025
The Elixir of Lies by S.E. Kaiser
Genre: Historical Fantasy
Length: 320 pages
Release Date: December 18, 2024
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I received a #gifted copy from @MTCMTours and @sekaiserwriting in exchange for my honest review.
When honesty fails… One path remains.
Welcome to my stop in the Bookstagram Tour for The Elixir of Lies by @sekaiserwriting! A starving actor creates a fake immortality potion to swindle the rich and feed the poor, but as people begin falling ill, he must decide how far he’ll go for fame. This Adult Fantasy is out now & it's available to read with Kindle Unlimited!
Review:
The story follows Anicus, a former solider, now bricklayer has dreams for something more grand, to have his own theater. He encounters a deceptive lender, Scipius who refuses to outright hear Anicus' propsal because it bores him. Anicus, who is passionate about his love for the theater has his dreams crushed by the loan denial, Anicus comes up with a scheme all of his own to bring his dream to fruition. He plans to sell an elixir that claims to cure those with ailing health and stave off death. The elixir is selling wildly well, and of course Scipicus wants in on this business venture. There is a small problem, Anicus is a fraud. What ensure is a web of lies and deceit to not only Scipicus, but the fellow business owners whom Anicus is attempting to unite against Scipicus and even his fellow friends. Every character was exceptionally developed and as the story unfolded it was a page turner to see how Kaiser was able to intriciately weave all of these characters with their individual intentions within the story. It was truly a masterclass in deception, survival, and how desperation can push even the the best of us to dark places.
Genre: Historical Fantasy
Length: 320 pages
Release Date: December 18, 2024
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I received a #gifted copy from @MTCMTours and @sekaiserwriting in exchange for my honest review.
When honesty fails… One path remains.
Welcome to my stop in the Bookstagram Tour for The Elixir of Lies by @sekaiserwriting! A starving actor creates a fake immortality potion to swindle the rich and feed the poor, but as people begin falling ill, he must decide how far he’ll go for fame. This Adult Fantasy is out now & it's available to read with Kindle Unlimited!
Review:
The story follows Anicus, a former solider, now bricklayer has dreams for something more grand, to have his own theater. He encounters a deceptive lender, Scipius who refuses to outright hear Anicus' propsal because it bores him. Anicus, who is passionate about his love for the theater has his dreams crushed by the loan denial, Anicus comes up with a scheme all of his own to bring his dream to fruition. He plans to sell an elixir that claims to cure those with ailing health and stave off death. The elixir is selling wildly well, and of course Scipicus wants in on this business venture. There is a small problem, Anicus is a fraud. What ensure is a web of lies and deceit to not only Scipicus, but the fellow business owners whom Anicus is attempting to unite against Scipicus and even his fellow friends. Every character was exceptionally developed and as the story unfolded it was a page turner to see how Kaiser was able to intriciately weave all of these characters with their individual intentions within the story. It was truly a masterclass in deception, survival, and how desperation can push even the the best of us to dark places.
February 25, 2025
Many thanks to BookSirens and the author, SE Kaiser for providing the copy on which this review is based.
S.E. Kaiser’s Elixir of Lies is a masterful debut that explores the pursuit of dreams at any cost, set against the backdrop of the war-torn city of Athos. A wonderful tale of ambition, deception, power and morality, this novel offers an exhilarating journey through power struggles, deception, and the lengths one man will go to in order to realize his vision.
At the heart of the story is Anicus, a veteran soldier turned bricklayer with a grand ambition—to build a magnificent theatre. But when his dreams are dismissed by the city’s elite, he concocts an audacious scheme - convincing the wealthy that he possesses a miraculous elixir, a cure-all capable of granting eternal life. What begins as a desperate ploy quickly spirals into a high-stakes game of quick wits, manipulation, murder and blackmail, where success and ruin teeter on the edge of every decision.
Anicus starts off as a hapless, down-on-his-luck man with little more than his wits and determination, a character that could have walked straight out of a K.J. Parker novel. He is smart, deeply resourceful, and full of ambition, but as the book progresses, his moral compass begins to shift. What starts as a clever con fueled by desperation turns into a ruthless ascent to power, mirroring the very elites he once despised. His transformation is both fascinating and chilling—a slow descent into corruption as the cost of his dreams continues to rise.
Similarly, the city of Athos itself feels like a character in its own right, again evoking K.J. Parker’s sprawling but nameless The City from The Siege Trilogy. Vast, war-ravaged, and deeply divided, Athos is a place where fortunes rise and fall on the whims of the powerful. The disconnect between the haves and the have-nots is stark, and Kaiser vividly captures the simmering tensions that drive Anicus’s journey. The world-building strikes a delicate balance, richly detailed without overwhelming the narrative, making the city feel vibrant and lived-in.
One of the novel’s greatest strengths is its character work. Anicus is compelling and deeply flawed, making choices that are both thrilling and frustrating. His journey is mirrored by a strong supporting cast, each with their own ambitions and moral struggles. The secondary characters are not mere extensions of Anicus’s story; they have their own goals, conflicts, and unseen movements that keep the plot unpredictable.
With its fast-paced storytelling, morally complex characters, and a escalating blend of crime, intrigue, and dark ambition, Elixir of Lies is a standout debut. S.E. Kaiser is an author to watch, and I eagerly await what they write next.
S.E. Kaiser’s Elixir of Lies is a masterful debut that explores the pursuit of dreams at any cost, set against the backdrop of the war-torn city of Athos. A wonderful tale of ambition, deception, power and morality, this novel offers an exhilarating journey through power struggles, deception, and the lengths one man will go to in order to realize his vision.
At the heart of the story is Anicus, a veteran soldier turned bricklayer with a grand ambition—to build a magnificent theatre. But when his dreams are dismissed by the city’s elite, he concocts an audacious scheme - convincing the wealthy that he possesses a miraculous elixir, a cure-all capable of granting eternal life. What begins as a desperate ploy quickly spirals into a high-stakes game of quick wits, manipulation, murder and blackmail, where success and ruin teeter on the edge of every decision.
Anicus starts off as a hapless, down-on-his-luck man with little more than his wits and determination, a character that could have walked straight out of a K.J. Parker novel. He is smart, deeply resourceful, and full of ambition, but as the book progresses, his moral compass begins to shift. What starts as a clever con fueled by desperation turns into a ruthless ascent to power, mirroring the very elites he once despised. His transformation is both fascinating and chilling—a slow descent into corruption as the cost of his dreams continues to rise.
Similarly, the city of Athos itself feels like a character in its own right, again evoking K.J. Parker’s sprawling but nameless The City from The Siege Trilogy. Vast, war-ravaged, and deeply divided, Athos is a place where fortunes rise and fall on the whims of the powerful. The disconnect between the haves and the have-nots is stark, and Kaiser vividly captures the simmering tensions that drive Anicus’s journey. The world-building strikes a delicate balance, richly detailed without overwhelming the narrative, making the city feel vibrant and lived-in.
One of the novel’s greatest strengths is its character work. Anicus is compelling and deeply flawed, making choices that are both thrilling and frustrating. His journey is mirrored by a strong supporting cast, each with their own ambitions and moral struggles. The secondary characters are not mere extensions of Anicus’s story; they have their own goals, conflicts, and unseen movements that keep the plot unpredictable.
With its fast-paced storytelling, morally complex characters, and a escalating blend of crime, intrigue, and dark ambition, Elixir of Lies is a standout debut. S.E. Kaiser is an author to watch, and I eagerly await what they write next.
December 6, 2024
What an incredible debut fantasy! I’ve never read any book as unique as this one.
Take a classic Greek hero but make him an artsy underdog, and you’ll get the MC of this story. Anicus returns from war to find Athos deteriorating from corruption. The rich get richer while the poor get poorer. He wants to help his community by building a theatre where he can perform his stories, to heal and inspire hope through art. But his dream is quickly squashed when he is publicly humiliated by the richest lender in Athos. From there, Anicus begins his mission to gain his funds by selling a fake elixir of immortality.
It’s safe to say that things escalate. You’ll be amazed by how the plot turns and how everything is concluded.
I can’t say too much more for the sake of preventing spoilers, but let’s just say that Anicus is a more complicated character than you’d think.
My one criticism: the second quarter of the story felt incredibly slow. It was a weird mix of small events happening, and characters vaguely changing, but no real development. I got so close to DNFing because the premise of this book was so promising that this portion was disappointing and frustrating to read. HOWEVER, the plot REALLY ramps up from the 50% mark. It’s like watching a movie where things just get worse and worse, and you know a breaking point is coming but you don’t know how or when. The ending was so satisfying that I’m glad that I was able to exercise patience for that small portion of the story.
Thank you to the author and BookSirens for an ARC of this book! I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Take a classic Greek hero but make him an artsy underdog, and you’ll get the MC of this story. Anicus returns from war to find Athos deteriorating from corruption. The rich get richer while the poor get poorer. He wants to help his community by building a theatre where he can perform his stories, to heal and inspire hope through art. But his dream is quickly squashed when he is publicly humiliated by the richest lender in Athos. From there, Anicus begins his mission to gain his funds by selling a fake elixir of immortality.
It’s safe to say that things escalate. You’ll be amazed by how the plot turns and how everything is concluded.
I can’t say too much more for the sake of preventing spoilers, but let’s just say that Anicus is a more complicated character than you’d think.
My one criticism: the second quarter of the story felt incredibly slow. It was a weird mix of small events happening, and characters vaguely changing, but no real development. I got so close to DNFing because the premise of this book was so promising that this portion was disappointing and frustrating to read. HOWEVER, the plot REALLY ramps up from the 50% mark. It’s like watching a movie where things just get worse and worse, and you know a breaking point is coming but you don’t know how or when. The ending was so satisfying that I’m glad that I was able to exercise patience for that small portion of the story.
Thank you to the author and BookSirens for an ARC of this book! I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
December 15, 2024
I found The Elixir of Lies by S. E. Kaiser to be an odyssey of power and justice type novel set in the Old Ages in Athos. This story centres around Anicus, once a soldier but now struggling to make ends meet as a lowly bricklayer. Despite his circumstances, he holds on to a grand aspiration: to build his theatre.
When Scipius, a merciless financier, dismisses his proposal without a second thought, Anicus crafts an audacious plan. With nothing but a few simple components and his knack for persuasion, he persuades the city's upper class that he possesses a miraculous potion—a cure for all diseases and the key to eternal life.
Beyond its central theme, the plot weaves through numerous twists and turns, keeping the characters in a constant state of flux—soaring to glory one moment and plunging into despair the next. This dynamic storytelling is what captivated me the most. The well-crafted characters are shaped by extraordinary circumstances, each facing internal struggles while also grappling with external conflicts involving the elite, friends, and society. These tensions enrich the narrative and give it depth.
Journeying alongside Anicus, Eddicus, and the other characters, experiencing their emotions and challenges, is one of the most rewarding aspects of this story. The pacing is so engaging that I found myself turning page after page without pause. This is how I truly came to enjoy this book.
When Scipius, a merciless financier, dismisses his proposal without a second thought, Anicus crafts an audacious plan. With nothing but a few simple components and his knack for persuasion, he persuades the city's upper class that he possesses a miraculous potion—a cure for all diseases and the key to eternal life.
Beyond its central theme, the plot weaves through numerous twists and turns, keeping the characters in a constant state of flux—soaring to glory one moment and plunging into despair the next. This dynamic storytelling is what captivated me the most. The well-crafted characters are shaped by extraordinary circumstances, each facing internal struggles while also grappling with external conflicts involving the elite, friends, and society. These tensions enrich the narrative and give it depth.
Journeying alongside Anicus, Eddicus, and the other characters, experiencing their emotions and challenges, is one of the most rewarding aspects of this story. The pacing is so engaging that I found myself turning page after page without pause. This is how I truly came to enjoy this book.
January 9, 2025
Characters: 5/5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Story/Plot: 4/5⭐⭐⭐⭐
Writing: 5/5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
This enchanting debut novel, Elixir of Lies, is a portrayal of human desires and morality, that takes a look at what one might be willing to do in order to achieve their dreams, even at the risk of losing all they hold dear.
Set in the Greek city of Athos, it follows Anicus as he navigates class power struggles, and what it costs to create his ideal world. The writing in this debut novel was captivating, and easy to read; I found myself unable to put it down!
This book succeeded in crafting some really complex characters that brought out many emotions in me throughout the novel. I was rooting for Anicus, and disappointed in some of his actions as well. The side characters were also fully fleshed out with their own convictions, a lot of times in contrast to Anicus. One of my favorite things was that characters are always busy off page. There were a lot of great surprises throughout as each character works with their own motivations.
The world building felt historical and true to Greek life without getting bogged down in the details. It was just enough to keep me immersed and paint a great backdrop for the conflict. It was unlike anything I have read before, truly a blend of genres that works very well to tell a captivating story.
I cannot wait to see what this author releases next!!
Story/Plot: 4/5⭐⭐⭐⭐
Writing: 5/5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
This enchanting debut novel, Elixir of Lies, is a portrayal of human desires and morality, that takes a look at what one might be willing to do in order to achieve their dreams, even at the risk of losing all they hold dear.
Set in the Greek city of Athos, it follows Anicus as he navigates class power struggles, and what it costs to create his ideal world. The writing in this debut novel was captivating, and easy to read; I found myself unable to put it down!
This book succeeded in crafting some really complex characters that brought out many emotions in me throughout the novel. I was rooting for Anicus, and disappointed in some of his actions as well. The side characters were also fully fleshed out with their own convictions, a lot of times in contrast to Anicus. One of my favorite things was that characters are always busy off page. There were a lot of great surprises throughout as each character works with their own motivations.
The world building felt historical and true to Greek life without getting bogged down in the details. It was just enough to keep me immersed and paint a great backdrop for the conflict. It was unlike anything I have read before, truly a blend of genres that works very well to tell a captivating story.
I cannot wait to see what this author releases next!!
January 10, 2025
TW: suicide, "mercy killing," sexual content.
A Greco-Roman actor turned snake oil salesman, half Robin Hood, half Shakespeare, unwittingly becoming the protagonist in a tragedy of his own writing—
The concept is fantastic. A beautifully written corruption arc, high-stakes wars with words, and heart-pounding desperation.
But the last third of the book began to drag a bit, and the conclusion failed to really claim the aching chord of true tragic writing.
I'm hypercritical of books that see suicide as a solution to any situation. Even though the prose is brilliant and scintillating in the first half, that alone makes me uncomfortable.
It's well written, especially for a debut author. But I hope Kaiser will continue to grow as a writer and really nail down the final act next time.
Full review here: https://bookmarkedone.home.blog/2025/....
Thank you to BookSirens for the free advanced reader copy of this title. All opinions in the review are voluntary and my own.
A Greco-Roman actor turned snake oil salesman, half Robin Hood, half Shakespeare, unwittingly becoming the protagonist in a tragedy of his own writing—
The concept is fantastic. A beautifully written corruption arc, high-stakes wars with words, and heart-pounding desperation.
But the last third of the book began to drag a bit, and the conclusion failed to really claim the aching chord of true tragic writing.
I'm hypercritical of books that see suicide as a solution to any situation. Even though the prose is brilliant and scintillating in the first half, that alone makes me uncomfortable.
It's well written, especially for a debut author. But I hope Kaiser will continue to grow as a writer and really nail down the final act next time.
Full review here: https://bookmarkedone.home.blog/2025/....
Thank you to BookSirens for the free advanced reader copy of this title. All opinions in the review are voluntary and my own.
November 16, 2024
Breaking Bad in a world inspired by Ancient Greece
This is a gripping read about crime and corruption in a gritty, vibrant world. The city of Athos is recovering from a bitter war and the poor are struggling to survive. Enter Anicus, the impoverished former soldier with big dreams who is willing to struggle and scheme to achieve them. I don't want to get into spoilers, but I think I can say chaos ensues.
I particularly loved the richness of the world-building and moral greyness of the characters. The writing is at times both funny and thought-provoking. Overall a very fun read that I'd recommend if you enjoyed Will of the Many, the Blacktongue Thief, of City of Last Chances.
This is a gripping read about crime and corruption in a gritty, vibrant world. The city of Athos is recovering from a bitter war and the poor are struggling to survive. Enter Anicus, the impoverished former soldier with big dreams who is willing to struggle and scheme to achieve them. I don't want to get into spoilers, but I think I can say chaos ensues.
I particularly loved the richness of the world-building and moral greyness of the characters. The writing is at times both funny and thought-provoking. Overall a very fun read that I'd recommend if you enjoyed Will of the Many, the Blacktongue Thief, of City of Last Chances.
January 21, 2025
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. (Thank you, Book Sirens!)
This is one of the most unique debut novels I've ever read. The MMC is an older man who wants to be a patron of the arts but falls into the corruption money and power brings. I think this commentary is very needed, especially now, and hopefully will spark some critical thinking when it comes to relationship we are seeing between billionaires and our government here in the US.
If you like Greek/Roman inspired fiction, political intrigue, soap opera level drama, or all of the above this book is for you!
This is one of the most unique debut novels I've ever read. The MMC is an older man who wants to be a patron of the arts but falls into the corruption money and power brings. I think this commentary is very needed, especially now, and hopefully will spark some critical thinking when it comes to relationship we are seeing between billionaires and our government here in the US.
If you like Greek/Roman inspired fiction, political intrigue, soap opera level drama, or all of the above this book is for you!
November 17, 2024
What a fantastic read! This fast-paced and enthralling story grips you from the first page and doesn’t let go.
Kaiser masterfully crafts a vivid world inspired by the grandeur of Ancient Rome and Greece, blending historical elements into a richly detailed and immersive setting.
At its heart is Anicus, a complex protagonist navigating profound moral dilemmas. His relentless pursuit of his dreams raises thought-provoking questions, leaving readers on edge, wondering just how far he’s willing to go.
This book is a must-read for fans of historical fantasy!
Kaiser masterfully crafts a vivid world inspired by the grandeur of Ancient Rome and Greece, blending historical elements into a richly detailed and immersive setting.
At its heart is Anicus, a complex protagonist navigating profound moral dilemmas. His relentless pursuit of his dreams raises thought-provoking questions, leaving readers on edge, wondering just how far he’s willing to go.
This book is a must-read for fans of historical fantasy!
December 2, 2024
This book definitely wasn't for me. It had an interesting premise, but it felt very poorly executed. The plot was slow, the characters were dull, and there were too many names being tossed around.
The characters were all very flat and one-sided and I couldn't connect with any of them. The plot, while interesting, was written in a way that didn't pull me in.
I can see how others liked this, but it wasn't for me and I struggled through it.
Thank you to BookSirens for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
The characters were all very flat and one-sided and I couldn't connect with any of them. The plot, while interesting, was written in a way that didn't pull me in.
I can see how others liked this, but it wasn't for me and I struggled through it.
Thank you to BookSirens for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
December 5, 2024
This started well, but the middle portion was a little slow. However, it quickly picked up pace again, and I couldn't put it down after that. Finding out how Anicus would resolve his problems was gripping, and the ending was extremely satisfying. The plot is brilliant, and the characters are realistic, with good traits and bad. I loved the classical elements of the setting. All in all, well worth reading. My thanks to BookSirens for th opportunity to read it.
November 10, 2024
When I first picked it up I thought it was going to be in the vein of the modern Greek mythologies, but I was so wrong. Elixir of Lies was completely original, and nothing like anything I've read before. Anicus is a compelling protagonist that brings you along on his schemes for success. You can't help but love him, even at his worst. The writing is beautifully detailed, and paints a full picture of Athos and social dynamics of the time.
Overall, I really loved this book and highly recommend for both fans of Greek mythology and anyone who is just looking for something refreshing and immersive.
Overall, I really loved this book and highly recommend for both fans of Greek mythology and anyone who is just looking for something refreshing and immersive.
December 31, 2024
What a page turner! I thoroughly enjoyed this book, particularly the world building and the protagonist’s journey. The twists and turns kept me hooked all the way through. The ending also tied everything together very nicely. Overall a great read. I’m excited to see what S. E. Kaiser comes up with next!
January 2, 2025
I loved the story! It has many shifts and turns, so I found it to unexpected and a page turning book. It is inspired by the old Roman and Greek times, which I also loved.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
January 14, 2025
A modern-day Roman tragedy, written with an engaging story that keeps you invested in the hero as he transforms into the villain. It hits the unique and sweet spot of historical fiction, business strategy, and deceptive mystery.
December 31, 2024
This book intrigued me, but I simply couldn't get into it. I picked it up and put it down twice and still couldn't finish it.
February 20, 2025
Great well written book! Aside from a brief lull on the first half, I was hooked from start to finish. Usually I can tell where a book is going, but this also kept me guessing, which I appreciated.
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