The Human Constant Equation: A Short Story

by Renley N. Chu, Tiffany Chu

In a world where humanity has split between the winged and the earthbound, one man's failed transformation leaves him caught between two worlds. After five years away, he returns home for one last chance at reconciliation, bearing a cake and the weight of his deteriorating body. But time moves differently when you're dying, and the line between reality and hallucination blurs with each passing moment. As he navigates a tense family dinner where tablecloths fray and reform, and walls snow inside navy bedrooms, he must confront the price of evolution and the cost of belonging. This haunting tale explores the spaces between who we were and who we become, asking whether love can bridge the gap between the human and post-human. This story delves into the heart of what makes us our flaws, our love, and our desperate need to make things right before time runs out.

17 pages, Kindle Edition

First published November 6, 2024

About the author

Renley lost both his parents in a fire that permanently damaged his vocal cords and lungs at the age of five, leaving him unable to speak.

On May 18, 2021, he was adopted by Tiffany Chu and her husband, and changed his legal name to Renley Nicolas Chu.

About a week after his eighteenth birthday, Renley suffered a severe attack leading to lung and heart failure; he passed away 3 days before he would have left for the U.S.

Renley’s last wish to come home was fulfilled on June 1, when his ashes were brought to San Diego.

Rest in Peace, Renley Chu (May 2003 - May 2021)

Reviews

[Vicky Peplow · Rating 3 out of 5]

A very short read!

This is a very short 15 page read. The premise of the story is interesting but unfortunately feels a little unfinished. I get that the main character is dying but what is he dying from? I personally think a little back story is needed as I'm left with a lot of questions. The story certainly definitely has promise to be a good read.