Of Mountains and Men: A Why Choose Romance

by Sammy Culbertson

Charlotte and her young son Charley have been living the simple life in the small town of Paleriver, Montana. Charlotte is in for the biggest change of her life when a trip of business men come to the resort where she works. She has to decide if she wants to take a chance on love again.

Find out if Charlotte gets her happily ever after with three billionaire men and their kids!

422 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 6, 2024

Reviews

[OneDayI'll]

That was painful to read. First of all, I'm surprised that reviewers haven't jumped all over this with both feet. The grammar is awful, there doesn't seem to be much editing done. The dialogue is ridiculous. At least 2 of the 3 guys cheats, the 3rd doesn't say specifically. There's double standards all over the place - they're allowed to have adult sleepovers while having visitation but the exes can't? Her best friend is jealous and bitterly vocal about it. There's so many time jumps the story has more holes than a mesh commander. She starts off saying she has no time due to work and a 2yo but she makes homemade soap and cans her food. The toddler speaks like a toddler 1 minute and then uses words teens wouldn't in essay papers the next. There was zero romance. She supposedly falls in love ridiculously fast but it's more like using them for their money and stability. There's zero mention of their careers, but they have millions and yet have bosses...I think? I was losing whatever the plot was by that point. Honestly, I just finished it to be stubborn and to see if it ever improved. No. Because the 1 guy is joking about pushing for smexy times while she's dealing with a medically difficult pregnancy that involves hospitalization. And still jokes about the same when she's told no relations due to the cesarian. One of the ones that cheated. For which she forgave far too easily. They adopt a bunch of animals but the only 1 who knows how to care for them is on bed rest. They depend on nannies, cooks, and cleaning staff as single dads but suddenly are nailing all this with 4 kids, hospital stays, and medical emergencies, while still doing whatever mysterious jobs they have? She mentioned bears walking through the meadow and then the kids can just come and go on their own? The problem family members are mentioned once then immediately forgotten. They never contest the exes for claiming their visitation but ignoring the kids during it. Twi hundred and forty acres and the 3 city guys who already have jobs don't have any farm hands to help with the animals or land? Dairy cows take a lot of work. Growing and storing feed, vet care, breeding, calving, milking machinery and the upkeep, contracts for sales for calves and milk, vaccinations, barn and fence repair because thousand pound animals do some wear and tear, ...

[Lisa Watt · Rating 1 out of 5]

I'm not someone who likes to write bad reviews, as i know it takes a lot of effort and bravery to release a novel to the public. However, this was probably the worst books I've ever attempted to read. I don't even have the words to describe how badly written it is, and it has nothing to do with typos or spelling.
It's way too descriptive of things that don't matter (her home, her clothes...), but not descriptive of feelings.
It's all just a matter of facts. She meets three hot dads and they ask her out immediately. Does she question it? Most people would be like what, "all three of you?"!?! Maybe wonder why 3 rich dads who are on vacation want to go out with her. Hesitate. But no, she just wonders what to wear.
Its just weird. I hate to dnf books, but once I got to the sex scene which was approximately a page long, I had to throw in the towel!

[PAM · Rating 1 out of 5]

Yawn