I’m really not sure how I feel about this book. On one hand, I enjoyed it—the plot was decent, and it had potential. But on the other, I felt like we were missing so much. The way it jumped ahead—especially at the beginning and end—left it feeling disjointed.
I liked the multi-POV aspect, but the repetitiveness of scenes from both perspectives didn’t always work for me. I love getting both sides, but I feel like it could have been done differently—maybe by staying in certain moments longer to pull out more emotion, rather than just repeating events.
I get that fated mates are supposed to have this instant connection, but after Logan chained Ava up and held a gun to her head, I really would have liked to see more resistance and inner turmoil from both of them. A lot of trauma just didn’t get unpacked—it felt like some of the heaviest moments were swept under the rug. For example, when Ava was attacked in the bar, she went into shock afterward, which felt realistic—but after the cabin incident, it’s just… make-up sex and moving on? Then she’s kidnapped and tortured, and aside from a brief mention of her scars, she just moves straight to her happy ending. It felt rushed and unresolved.
Speaking of things we missed out on—where was the whole Luna moment? We don’t see Ava stepping into her role, no real scene of Emily seeing Ava as the Luna, no meeting between Logan’s mother and Ava—nothing. The ending wrap-up felt rushed, and I needed more detail.
That said, I did really enjoy the side characters—Emily, Tony, Malik, and Kaiden were my favorites. I’m actually intrigued by the next book being about Iris and Kaiden.
Ava and Logan did have some great moments—their first meeting was powerful, and leading up to the cabin scene, I had a feeling of where it was going… until she woke up in the basement, and from there, I had no idea what was coming next. I loved that unpredictability, but I still feel like some parts needed more development.
Now, let’s talk spice. Some of it? Great. Some of it? Way too much. I started skimming certain parts because some of the phrasing just gave me the ick. "Slick folds"—I feel like this phrase needs its own trigger warning. "Slit"? Absolutely not. And "puckered hole"? I need that erased from my brain immediately. But then we had lines like "eyes on me", and I’m sorry—yes sir, hooked.
Overall, I did enjoy this book—it was fast-paced enough to keep me intrigued, and I finished it quickly. I just wish certain scenes had been developed more, and that the rogue villain/witch plotline had more detail so we could piece it together as we went along. I love a good mystery and unraveling a story, but this one left me with too many unanswered questions.