Aubrey Dalton’s life as a single mother is anything but easy, the last thing she needs to complicate it is getting mixed up with the local biker gang. That is exactly what happens though when she and her children are attacked by a rival club looking to settle a score with the Northridge Disciples MC. Now Bree has to struggle with not only facing new advisories but also her attraction the Disciple’s president, Will Ryder.
Ryder had a dysfunctional childhood at best which is why he’s never chosen to settle down. That and the fact that life in as the president of a MC consumes every minute of his day. But when he meets Aubrey, the single mom who happens to look like a Playboy centerfold, he rethinks his priorities. The only problem is that he needs to keep Bree alive long enough to get to know her and her endearing kids because she’s been targeted by his old enemies and they don’t seem to care if they take innocent lives in order to get to him.
***This book may not be suitable for readers under the age of 18 due to offensive language and sexual content.
My update @40 %: 40 % done and not. One. Measly. Kiss. Yet. This is a biker book, for Pete's sake! Geez, what a bore! :(
BTW, the first (measly) kiss happened at 40 %, right after I posted that update.
Rating clarification: I would have given it two stars but I had to deduct one star due to the incredibly shoddy proofreading/editing. An example among many others:
That was the last straw. Her bra and panties were off in less than a second and Ryder was on top of her, the swollen head of his aching cock poised at her wet entrance. He took the time to capture her mouth again in a hungry kiss as he carefully began to push himself into her. God, she was so tight! There was nothing for it, he was going to hurt her weather (Is it raining? Where…what…sorry, couldn't resist. Baba, it's "whether".) or not he was careful. "Take a deep breath, kitten." (Baba takes an extra deep breath, thank you for reminding me) He instructed and as she did he slammed into her all the way, as deep as he could go. She let out a little scream, weather (hmm…I think it's still raining) it was from pain or pleasure he could not tell but now that he had begun he could not stop.
But. I. Can. Stop. And. I. Will. Stop.
Almost done. Just a sec.
"Oh my God, Will." She moaned.
Will. Not too many people called him that these days but the name sounded erotic coming from her beautiful lips. "Say it again." He grunted, spearing her again.
Very erotic. Not.
He could feel her erratic heartbeat pounding into his chest through the crush of her breasts. Her magnificent breasts which he had ignored! Next time he would worship her body as he should have tonight.
Erm…nice. Not. And I wouldn't say he worshipped her. That was one seriously pathetic f@ck. Well, practice makes perfect and hope dies last or some such.
Another little example for your perusal: "(…) I just told them that some of you Disciple ass hole's where hanging around her place."
Told you so. Shoddy job.
In a nutshell Disciple is a total bore. The plot is 'meh' at best and the characters didn't interest me in the least. The first sex scene was extremely poorly written and don't get me started on the kissing or lack thereof or whatever. The endearment kitten annoyed the living daylights out of me. Overall? A simple no will do.
Book goes back to Amazon for a refund of my money.
I really enjoyed this biker romance between a single mom with two kids and the President of a MC. The story was good and the romance was believable and kind of sweet. There are some typos and grammar issues but it wasn't bad enough to really bother me.
First time read for this author by me. I was pleased with the writing style and the characters/story line was good. I really liked Ryder and his relationship with the kids. I liked that it was not a wham bam fall in bed relationship between the two. There were a lot of things I liked about Aubrey but at the end of the book when she went all out Bambo was a little over the top for me. I really have a problem with a regular female being able to beat the hell out of a big, bad biker dude(s). I know there are women who are trained fighters, etc who could do it but Aubrey just didn't fit in that class. But it was a very good read. I saw a few editing issues but it didn't detract from my reading experience. I would definitely read the next book in this series.
Aubrey Dalton’s life as a single mother is anything but easy, the last thing she needs to complicate it is getting mixed up with the local biker gang. That is exactly what happens though when she and her children are attacked by a rival club looking to settle a score with the Northridge Disciples MC. Now Bree has to struggle with not only facing new advisories but also her attraction the Disciple’s president, Will Ryder.
Ryder had a dysfunctional childhood at best which is why he’s never chosen to settle down. That and the fact that life in as the president of a MC consumes every minute of his day. But when he meets Aubrey, the single mom who happens to look like a Playboy centerfold, he rethinks his priorities. The only problem is that he needs to keep Bree alive long enough to get to know her and her endearing kids because she’s been targeted by his old enemies and they don’t seem to care if they take innocent lives in order to get to him.
I can't gush enough on how much I enjoyed this read. I loved Ryder from the beginning, Bree grew on me though.. Yes she was a bit cold in the beginning, but she has two small fatherless children she has to put first and that I appreciated. My crush on Ryder grew from a small crush to a huge blown out "I friggin love you"! He stepped into the father role without any questions, without hesitation, and you could see the change in the two small children. I think that was my favorite part, his relationship with those two! Loved every page!
I really loved this book. All of the characters were really strong. Wil was awesome. He was so sexy and I loved how he was with Aubrey's kids. And those kids stole your heart right away. Bree was kick ass. No one bossed her around and you better not mess with her kids! Wil and Bree were so good for each other. Aubrey wasn't afaird to talk back to the Pres of the MC nope not her. The story was really good. There was a lot of action. I'm looking forward to the next installment. This wasn't as steamy as I would have liked but it didn't deter me at all. There was sex, it was hot because of the characters it just wasn't as dirty as most MC books. Loved it anyway!!
I liked this book, but nowhere near what it seems I did back in 2017. There were a lot of editing mistakes and some things the H said that were kinda red flags. And the epilogue, while cute, happened directly after the climax. There was no aftermath, we just get the epilogue.
Original review - April 2017 - 5 Stars Swoon!!! I absolutely loved this book and the H! He was amazing and absolutely made the whole book for me
I really liked how they were a tough MC but were not so vulgar, Will was awesome and how he cared for the kids. Bree was okay she did everything she could for her children. Glad they got their HEA.
I can't decide between 3 1/2 or 4 stars, when Aubrey's friend asks her over in the middle of the night she is shocked to see a house full of bikers in need of medical attention. That one night changes her life forever. Aubrey works hard at her job and at raising her two children when she see's the MC that her friend is so connected with and she wants nothing to do with them including their handsome president Ryder.
When Ryder and his MC find out that their rival MC is causing problem they decide to step in and stop them. To do this the MC needs someone the rival won't know. When someone suggests Aubrey Ryder doesn't want her in harms way but knowing it's the only option he agrees. All Aubrey has to do is dance and get information from the rival MC, not wanting to but not being able to resist the money they offer her when money is so tight, and the promise that she will be safe Aubrey agrees. That night puts her on radar with the other MC and now Aubrey and her kids lives are in danger. Ryder can't believe that he put Aubrey and her kids in danger and he takes it upon himself to protect them.
Now that Aubrey and her kids live with Ryder they each find it harder and harder to stay away from each other, and they both begin to fall in love and Aubrey's kids also begin to claim Ryder's heart. As they all grow closer to one another and begin to feel like a family the rival MC has plans for not only Ryder and his MC but for Aubrey as well and they won't stop till they get what they want. Now Ryder and the MC will stop at nothing to not only shut the rivals down but to protect the three people who have become Ryder's heart.
This was a nice MC book, it was a really quick read and I am really interested in seeing if others from this book get their own books. Ryder was a great hero, it was hard to not fall in love with him not only for how he loved and took care of Aubrey but especially with how much he cared for and loved Aubrey's kids, he was also possessive and it was fun to read about Aubrey and the kids getting him wrapped around their fingers.
Aubrey was a nice heroine, I really liked her and I loved the moments with her and her kids, I would have liked her to not have been so indecisive for so long. I will say that I didn't really like the heroines best friend Sam. I thought that (especially in the beginning) she acted like she cared about Aubrey and her kids and I do believe she did but I also believe that she cared more about the MC more and would have said anything to Aubrey to get her to help the MC. I think she made it seem like helping the MC wasn't a big deal or dangerous but it was and it was even stated that old ladies would have known that but since Aubrey didn't know anything about the MC she wasn't aware. I don't know I get it the MC is your family but Aubrey was supposed to be her best friend.
Overall this was a really nice MC book that is on the lighter side, not as gritty or dark but still a true MC book. I think this book was refreshing to see the heroine having kids and the hero not, and though we know the hero has had other woman it wasn't shoved down our throats ever other page, and another bonus the only mention of OW is just in passing about a hanger on who wants him but Aubrey is it for him. I will definitely be keeping an eye on this author to see what she comes out with next ands to see if this is the first in a new MC series.
Aubrey Dalton has not had the easiest life, she has dealt with every punch thrown her way. A single mom of two, Aubrey knows trouble when she sees it and getting involved with the Northridge Disciples MC is just that. When Aubrey is offered a one time deal to help President Will Ryder, she takes it but it comes with a cost that puts her family in danger.
Ryder never thought he would want an Old Lady and kids, but one look at Aubrey and her two children he was hooked. He tried to stay away, but the instant he found out she was in danger, he made his move. It is not a smooth transition though for Aubrey doesn't trust anyone and handing over her trust to Ryder leaves her uneasy. Ryder plans to gain her trust though one way or another.
Overall good book. Had a few words that were misspelled but otherwise I thought the story was engaging and I really liked Ryder, he was patient with Aubrey but laid it out when needed. Will definitely try more books from this author.
Story: ⭐⭐⭐⭐1\2 Trope: single mom Angst: 😱😱1\2 Smexy: 🔥🔥
I really live finding brand new authors that can really tell a fantastic story! Great plot, tons of action, and solid character building. I'm really hoping to see more from her!
As a post script I will say that the book could use editing. Quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but it did not affect my rating since its a brand new author and I know that can be expensive. A free option is to run it through Grammarly. Not perfect, but it'll get a lot.
This had some great parts and some parts that were okay. I only finished this book yesterday and already forgot a lot of the story. The writing was bland in some areas while some I liked.
I usually avoid baby mama stories. In this book, the heroine has two children by two different fathers. The first one was by a tragic incident, while the other father was a customer where she worked. I understand the first incident and the unexpected pregnancy, but the other(s)...get a condom!!!! The heroine is not a slut. She does not just jump into bed with random men. I just think she makes poor choices and needs a lesson on birth control.
I liked the heroine and I liked the hero, but it gets annoying when the character makes the same stupid mistake time and time again.
The hero...there is nothing more I love than a hero who is awesome to kids and especially kids that are not his own. I LOVE the way Ryder treated Aubrey's children, especially her son.
It was not a bad read. It kept my attention. It was just not an epic read for me.
There were a few editing issues however that's not the main reason for a lower rating. This book had the potential to be a average to above average read. What held it back was character development. We really didn't get to know anyone that well. Some back story on two of the MC but only (it seemed) in the context of checking off a box. Motorcycle Clubs have all sorts of interesting people in them but you wouldn't have known that from this story.
A couple more edits and a reshape of the storyline would be good for this book.
I had been in a MC slump lately and I came across this book while looking for my Amazon monthly read and I have to say that I am glad I took a chance on this book and the author and I plan on buying it for my collection, this book is a definite re-read. I found it entertaining and exciting. The main characters were very engaging and the back and forth between the couple kept the story line moving. I am hoping that this is the start to my good books by this author.
Please edit for spelling, punctuation, and grammar. If one of those three is poorly done, or missing completely, the flow of the story and the overall meaning are compromised. Love these characters but I almost put the book down unfinished when I read "her menstruations" instead of "her ministrations". Mic drop,out.
I liked it overall, but I had mixed feelings about H. At times, he came across as strong and assertive, almost like a alpha but then in front of the h he seemed helpless. The h in other situations, she was overly bold—almost unnaturally so—especially considering how hesitant and scared she was in the beginning. Her character development felt a bit inconsistent.
The backstory around her pregnancies also didn't sit well with me. The first one is completely understandable—she was young and a victim of assault. But by the second time, it was hard to believe she wouldn’t take precautions, especially after what she'd already been through. And then it happened a third time? That made her choices feel less thoughtful, which didn’t align with the idea of her being a smart, resilient woman.
The plot also felt a bit too chaotic at times. The constant club drama overshadowed the romance, which made it hard to fully connect with the love story. I wish there had been a better balance between the two.
I heard about this book through a Facebook romance mc page. I read the reviews and thought the blurb was decent.
I honestly think the heroine made a decent amount of dumb decisions. The hero was definitely an alpha but took on a family and chose to love them and raise kids that weren’t his. I honestly didn’t like the heroine and I don’t usually invest much into the characters.
I feel like the author has had 9 years (originally published in 2014) to make the much needed edits to make this a 4-5 star review.
Familiar plot type with an independent type of h and sweet kids in main role. I’m a sucker for strong damsels in distress type books so I went with it. I enjoyed the book but was very, very light on the ‘hardass’ feel of an MC club. However, I like how the author wrote Ryder, I loved his interactions with the kids. Good book overall and will look for more from this author.
Ryder + Bree. I don’t know why but I thought this book would’ve been something more. It was perfectly fine, and realistic but it didn’t really capture me. I didn’t even feel the connection between Ryder and Bree.
I really enjoyed the book even though it needs some major editing and spell-checking. Did not distract me from the story too much. Kind of an MC light book, no OW or crazy MC drama. Overall a decent read
I loved Disciple by Cherie Hewitt, great story that makes you want to keep reading, Aubrey & Ryder made an interesting couple, even though I got a bit annoyed with their stupidity a couple of times. Reason for 4 stars is too many missing words and spell mistakes
This story brought so many emotions! Could not put it down. Ryder dominant male perfection. Bree strong determine woman that will fight for her family. Love it. Wish Cherie Hewitt had more books out.
The Disciplr MC is having trouble with a rival club. When Aubrey and kids get pulled into club life. An exciting first book and looking forward to whats next.