I found The Mermaid's Wrath both enjoyable and disappointing, but what underwhelmed me might be perfect for another reader, so here goes...
The story follows Jelly, a warrior mermaid desperate to save the oceans from pollution and humanity's negligence as a whole. When an even darker presence threatens her and her loved ones because of a mysterious pearl she inherited, Jelly joins forces with a vibrant cast of characters, including mers, fae, shifters, and animals, to thwart it. The journey also forces her to embrace her traumas, powers, and desires.
The world-building of The Mermaid's Wrath is detailed and vivid in terms of the mer and fae societies and how they fit within civilisation and history as we know it.
There's also intriguing depth to key characters, especially Jelly, a dynamic female lead embodying very familiar and poignant feminist and ecological rage. Even animals are woven into the narrative in delightful and exciting ways.
Another element I enjoyed is the use of real-world facts within the plot and character development, further merging fantasy and reality in an immersive, action-packed adventure laced with romance.
Unfortunately, this is where The Mermaid's Wrath lost me. I'm all for sex positivity, but romantacy just isn't a genre I care about. My interest gradually dips when romance takes over a plot unnecessarily, someone rips their shirt off in every other scene, and almost every character is depicted as a staggeringly beautiful model. Some forewarning in the Discovery blurb or tags would have been appreciated.
Additionally, even though the writing style is generally good, there are moments where the description or dialogue is awkward or redundant. A lot could have been cut out. The depiction of English and Scot characters also felt a bit too focused on stereotypes. I wasn't sure how to feel about that.
Overall, I was captivated by the book's first few chapters, particularly its ecological and societal messages and Jelly's character development. As the plot unfolded, however, I struggled to stay on top of the plot because of the unnecessary details and romantically themed noise obscuring it. While I appreciated some aspects of The Mermaid's Wrath, I'm sad to say that I didn't fully enjoy it from start to finish.