Christmas at Sevyn: A Dramatic Christmas Short Story

by Brandi Nikkale

In this gripping tale of revenge and redemption, two strangers find their lives intertwined by a decades-old tragedy. Set against the backdrop of the cutthroat corporate world and the weight of generational curses, this story explores the depths of human nature, the price of vengeance, and the possibility of healing. With twists that will keep readers on the edge of their seats, this novella delves into themes of family, fate, and the lengths we go to protect those we love. It's a haunting exploration of how the past shapes our present and the power we have to change our future.

Genres: Thriller

25 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 11, 2024

Reviews

[April · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fun short story about revenge, heart break and family curses! I didn’t know how this story would play out between Sevyn and this “mysterious stranger” that walked into her diner. But when their pasts resurfaced, I wasn’t prepared for how deep the secrets lied. Definitely wondering what happened to Sevyn afterwards.

[Ari Whipple · Rating 4 out of 5]

Wait a dang minute here

He was just like "think on it, and if you want to kill me in a year, well, that's ok, I guess." And how is he not in jail? Or, what about his family? Aren't they going to seek revenge for his death?

Did he get his affairs in order?
Is she going to get in trouble for killing him?
What about the curse, did she break it, or is she still on the hook, because seven generations means more than just her mother died.
Omggggggg
I want to know more about this lady and her life.

[Toya Davis-Stokley · Rating 3 out of 5]

Uhhhh.... wow! This read had a somber feeling right from the beginning, and I wondered what it could possibly be in a Christmas story. This read really packed a punch, for being only 25 pages.
Two strangers meeting and enjoying each other's company late on Christmas Eve, only to find out that they shared a connection that was a traumatic and tragic.

Emerson, what did you do exactly? How was it hidden for so long? Why was the evidence of your wrongdoing in your desk drawer? 👀 That ending confused the hell out of me! Did Sevyn "help" Emerson on his journey, or did he take it alone? Hmmm...... that was an interesting read to get me out of my sappy Christmas feels. 🤯

[Gabby Penn Farmer · Rating 4 out of 5]

Only 25 pages. Had the potential to be a great story… was missing something… the ending needed more… was a little confusing at the end.

[Kris Book Reads]

Uhm excuse me? What? 😭 I am unwell.

[Khaliat · Rating 3 out of 5]

Lmaooo what? I’m confused? Is that the end? 😂

[Elonda · Rating 5 out of 5]

This short story was quite impactful in such a short amount of pages! This is my first read by this author, I will be back for more! Great writing, kept me turning all 25 pages! Great, quick read this Christmas morning!

[Victoria B · Rating 3 out of 5]

Ok I am so confused and have so many questions.

[Lourdes · Rating 2 out of 5]

This has potential

This was short and to the point but I think more could of been added to give more to the story and the reader. The story was engaging but I wanted more. Definitely would read again from this author.

[Joslyn · Rating 2 out of 5]

While i enjoyed this Christmas short . I do think this book could have been at least 10 pages longer. The story itself is interesting. Most of the book i was curious on how this would turn out.

Emerson need for revenge cause him to live with guilt for 20yrs. As he should. So many families were hurt because of his decision. Me personally i would have like a flashback scene explaining to readers how exactly was he able to do what he did.

Sevyn revenge was much sweeter. How do you come inside someone cafe with that bombshell. I do believe the ending could have been slightly better. But what do yu expect when the book is only 25 pages .

Very enjoyable read .

[Bunny · Rating 4 out of 5]

BRANDI!!!!????? Where you at miss ma’am? I just wanna talk sis!!! 🤣

I have SO many questions for you! Like, what happened with the people that stole his shit? Did they not take him to jail? Why didn’t they take his ass to jail? When did he agree to let her unalive him??

Emerson CFO of Sky view airlines did something horrible 20 years ago out of “revenge”. And it’s still haunting him to this day. And one day he will come face to face with one of the victims daughters.

Sevyn runs a cafe and 20 years ago she lost her mom to an airplane “accident”. Or so that’s what’s she had to assume all these years. One day Emerson conveniently stops in the cafe. And while they are getting to know each other and sharing “secrets”. Sis connects the dots and finds out HE is the reason she’s without a mother.

One year after she finds this out. They meet up at a cliff… and um. Yeah. Ends it for him. Or he ends It for himself? WE NEED ANSWERS!

[Toni Larue · Rating 5 out of 5]

I enjoyed the story


Not every author can master the art of the short story, but Brandi Nikkale nailed it with "Christmas at Seven." 


In just 25 pages, she created characters that grabbed me and wouldn't let go.

Proof that sometimes the best stories come in small packages. 🎄

[GREEDY]

Good

It was a delightful and swiftly paced read. I appreciated the smooth and effortless flow of the narrative. I highly recommend this short story, particularly if you are seeking a quick and engaging read.

[Brianna · Rating 3 out of 5]

So many unanswered questions 😩

[Kim Denley · Rating 2 out of 5]

Uh…what??

[Taryn Hatcher · Rating 3 out of 5]

I needed this to be longer because whatttt? lol

[Paige · Rating 3 out of 5]

I need to stop blind reading. The cover gives” cute Christmas love story” but I was WRONG!!!

Ummm what the f**k?! 😳🤯

I have no words lol ….just wow.

[Diamond Jones-Cox · Rating 3 out of 5]

This short story was interesting and the ending was jaw dropping.

[Rhina M. Finley · Rating 5 out of 5]

A Shocking Twist!

A short story to remember with this read! This was mind blowing and twisted in a since! I think I have a little chill from reading Christmas at Sevyn! That ending was shocking!

[Karm Barter · Rating 2 out of 5]

I don’t think I really got what the point was. The writing was fine. Maybe if it was more fleshed out. It was pretty sober

[Stephanie Gray Brand · Rating 4 out of 5]

Quick read I listened to on my way to therapy. This was fast and I related to some of the things bought up in this short story.

[Alaine Nix · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short story - was okay, not my typical.

[Dannelle · Rating 2 out of 5]

I was so disappointed in this book. I wanted more. I understand it was a short, but I wanted the back stories.. It just felt like something was missing... Well not something, a lot.