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Song of the Dark
You can run away from home, but you can’t run away from yourself.
Thomas seemingly has the ideal life; he is the heir to a prosperous and powerful shipping dynasty, and he gets top marks at his elite boarding school. But Thomas has always felt deeply at odds with himself… until he befriends his greatest rival, Charles. Their connection launches Thomas down a path that will change his life—and the world— forever.
Through brushes with magi, sirens, and gods, Thomas finds that the world is nothing like he imagined, that the lie he was born into may cost him his soul, and that the most terrifying force in the world might be love.
Thomas seemingly has the ideal life; he is the heir to a prosperous and powerful shipping dynasty, and he gets top marks at his elite boarding school. But Thomas has always felt deeply at odds with himself… until he befriends his greatest rival, Charles. Their connection launches Thomas down a path that will change his life—and the world— forever.
Through brushes with magi, sirens, and gods, Thomas finds that the world is nothing like he imagined, that the lie he was born into may cost him his soul, and that the most terrifying force in the world might be love.
352 pages, Hardcover
Published November 15, 2024
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September 2, 2023
The good
+ Thomas' genuine personality, and his habit of taking what people say at face value and without prejudice
+ The friendship between Thomas and Charles at school
+ No easy forgiveness after a great betrayal
+ Thomas' honesty about his feelings and his unhappiness
+ The writing style. It was very pleasant to read
The neutral
o I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book. My review remains honest and unbiased
o Parts of the plot were very predictable, but it was still enjoyable to read
The bad
- The four magi Thomas met were called Fiona, Faya, Fyavine and Fiametta. It was really difficult to keep them apart
- There were no content warnings in this book. At the very least, there should have been warnings for
- When I got this book, I did not know this was not a standalone. I was therefore completely blindsided by the ending. , and I wouldn't classify it as a genre Romance because of that. If I had known beforehand that there will be a sequel, which I assume will be about the same characters, my views might have been different. Now I just felt very betrayed. One of the tags the author used was "sweet romance fantasy". Considering the ending, and the depressed main character, I wouldn't call this book sweet, but rather angsty or even tragic
- When Charles saw Thomas again, he acted like what he did to Thomas was just a small disagreement instead of the utter betrayal it actually was. He should have been groveling right from the start
This book was not what I had expected. With tags like "sweet romance fantasy" I had expected something cozy instead of angsty, and definitely a romance. Combined with the lack of content warnings, I was completely unprepared. The book was really good, don't get me wrong, but it was not at all what was advertised or what I expected. I do think I will read the second book if it's about the same characters, because I expect lots of groveling and that's one of my favorite things in books. If you want to read this book, I'd suggest asking someone who read it for more information beforehand so you know what to expect.
+ Thomas' genuine personality, and his habit of taking what people say at face value and without prejudice
+ The friendship between Thomas and Charles at school
+ No easy forgiveness after a great betrayal
+ Thomas' honesty about his feelings and his unhappiness
+ The writing style. It was very pleasant to read
The neutral
o I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book. My review remains honest and unbiased
o Parts of the plot were very predictable, but it was still enjoyable to read
The bad
- The four magi Thomas met were called Fiona, Faya, Fyavine and Fiametta. It was really difficult to keep them apart
- There were no content warnings in this book. At the very least, there should have been warnings for
- When I got this book, I did not know this was not a standalone. I was therefore completely blindsided by the ending. , and I wouldn't classify it as a genre Romance because of that. If I had known beforehand that there will be a sequel, which I assume will be about the same characters, my views might have been different. Now I just felt very betrayed. One of the tags the author used was "sweet romance fantasy". Considering the ending, and the depressed main character, I wouldn't call this book sweet, but rather angsty or even tragic
- When Charles saw Thomas again, he acted like what he did to Thomas was just a small disagreement instead of the utter betrayal it actually was. He should have been groveling right from the start
This book was not what I had expected. With tags like "sweet romance fantasy" I had expected something cozy instead of angsty, and definitely a romance. Combined with the lack of content warnings, I was completely unprepared. The book was really good, don't get me wrong, but it was not at all what was advertised or what I expected. I do think I will read the second book if it's about the same characters, because I expect lots of groveling and that's one of my favorite things in books. If you want to read this book, I'd suggest asking someone who read it for more information beforehand so you know what to expect.
August 1, 2023
This book was a wonderful representation of gay and bi characters without the sex. It follows a sweet boy, Thomas, through his trails and tribulations as a gay man in a world where that is not allowed. This book was incredibly sweet and I really felt for all of the characters in the book.
I was incredibly impressed with how the author hooked me within the first few pages. I really felt the emotions of the characters.
I was incredibly impressed with how the author hooked me within the first few pages. I really felt the emotions of the characters.
October 31, 2025
I fear my expectations got in the way of my enjoyment.
(slight spoilers ahead, but I don't go too deep into detail and it's rather minor or obvious early in the story. I did vaguely speak about the ending)
For the era this story is hinted to be in, the way the characters spoke felt like modern times. So much so that I wouldn't have been surprised if one of them pulled out a cell phone. Dialogue overall felt like I was reading about middle schoolers. Most everything, matter-of-fact, aside from the actual age of the characters, felt as though I was reading a middle-grade book.
The characters were rather shallow. Especially Thomas. I pinned one or two attributes to each character when introduced and they stayed consistent throughout. Don't get me wrong, there was some development, it just seemed either forced, that minute, or lackluster. However, Thomas and Charles were my biggest issues. There wasn't much of a rivalry between the two as the author had marketed. It was a one-sided, self-proclaimed 'rivalry' (more like an excuse to insult Thomas) on Charles' part while Thomas didn't care about Charles' antis, about being better than Charles academically, and didn't understand why Charles was targetting him outside of their families. The entire thing was solved with a single conversation. I do believe the 'rivalry' lasted a chapter before they became friends, a handful of chapters later becoming lovers. Since Thomas was the main character, I'm going to focus on him for a moment. I wish his ambitions were expressed within the first three chapters. I also wish he had them to begin with. He was given a purpose he wasn't entirely invested in and it carried his character. In the latter half of the book, we're told about Thomas's love for sailing and the ocean. I feel that information should have been shared right away, giving Thomas a tad more depth, motivation, and making his choices, before we hit the flashbacks, understandable. There was a single moment in which Thomas felt very out of character because of how he reacted, handled, and carried out his anger when beforehand, he was prone to cry. I feel it would have been more in character had he thought about doing what he did rather than carrying it out. As I said at the beginning of this section, I could pin a word or two to a character, Thomas being depressed, and it rang true till the end. Finally, both Gods involved didn't feel like ethereal beings, unused to dealing with humankind, but like quarreling, adolescent siblings.
A part of why I felt the book was written as if for a much younger audience, is because of how it is literally written. The simplicity of the narrative, conversations, worldbuilding, and relationships was a tricky thing to get used to. There was an abundance of repetitive phrases within a single paragraph I had to ignore as I couldn't turn off the editor part of my brain. Truly, I tried. Although the vocabulary overall seemed limited, adding to the sense of redundancy. Repetitiveness aside, there were a lot of unnecessary 'that's. I felt there was a lot more telling than showing with emotion. "I was disgusted" instead of "Worms writhed underneath my skin at the sight" There can be a healthy mix of both within the narrative, I simply found there was less of the 'showing' when there could have absolutely been more. There was a lot of filtering, as in "He saw the waves hit the shore" instead of "The waves hit the shore" (filtering reminds the readers whose POV we're in. Necessary as it is, it doesn't, and shouldn't be constant). Similarly, I think there could have been more descriptions of the setting, more inclusion of the five senses, and more time festering on certain decisions that heavily impacted the plot, of which felt glazed over.
The ending was... disappointing. One of the major points of Thomas's character was the very thing he gave up. Not only did he give it up, he threw it away for someone, then proceeded to tell said person to leave him alone. This was one of the moments that felt forced, more in the aspect of Charles' involvement. The ending was a left turn for me, as if it wasn't planned but the want to continue the story, making it a series, occurred near the end of the writing process.
I'm conflicted. I feel bad for criticizing as I have while not giving any specific reasons as to why I rated it three stars when I clearly hadn't enjoyed myself. Again, this is why I opened with what I did. My own expectations, after having read adult stories exclusively, dampened Song of the Dark. What's worse, is that I cannot go into detail about what I liked. I enjoyed specific scenes over the general narrative. I was smiling and chuckling throughout. I like the inclusivity as a queer person myself.
Song of the Dark was a quick read due to its simplicity, yet fun and endearing. This is a great book if you're new to the genre or are looking to introduce a bit more gayness into your reading.
(slight spoilers ahead, but I don't go too deep into detail and it's rather minor or obvious early in the story. I did vaguely speak about the ending)
For the era this story is hinted to be in, the way the characters spoke felt like modern times. So much so that I wouldn't have been surprised if one of them pulled out a cell phone. Dialogue overall felt like I was reading about middle schoolers. Most everything, matter-of-fact, aside from the actual age of the characters, felt as though I was reading a middle-grade book.
The characters were rather shallow. Especially Thomas. I pinned one or two attributes to each character when introduced and they stayed consistent throughout. Don't get me wrong, there was some development, it just seemed either forced, that minute, or lackluster. However, Thomas and Charles were my biggest issues. There wasn't much of a rivalry between the two as the author had marketed. It was a one-sided, self-proclaimed 'rivalry' (more like an excuse to insult Thomas) on Charles' part while Thomas didn't care about Charles' antis, about being better than Charles academically, and didn't understand why Charles was targetting him outside of their families. The entire thing was solved with a single conversation. I do believe the 'rivalry' lasted a chapter before they became friends, a handful of chapters later becoming lovers. Since Thomas was the main character, I'm going to focus on him for a moment. I wish his ambitions were expressed within the first three chapters. I also wish he had them to begin with. He was given a purpose he wasn't entirely invested in and it carried his character. In the latter half of the book, we're told about Thomas's love for sailing and the ocean. I feel that information should have been shared right away, giving Thomas a tad more depth, motivation, and making his choices, before we hit the flashbacks, understandable. There was a single moment in which Thomas felt very out of character because of how he reacted, handled, and carried out his anger when beforehand, he was prone to cry. I feel it would have been more in character had he thought about doing what he did rather than carrying it out. As I said at the beginning of this section, I could pin a word or two to a character, Thomas being depressed, and it rang true till the end. Finally, both Gods involved didn't feel like ethereal beings, unused to dealing with humankind, but like quarreling, adolescent siblings.
A part of why I felt the book was written as if for a much younger audience, is because of how it is literally written. The simplicity of the narrative, conversations, worldbuilding, and relationships was a tricky thing to get used to. There was an abundance of repetitive phrases within a single paragraph I had to ignore as I couldn't turn off the editor part of my brain. Truly, I tried. Although the vocabulary overall seemed limited, adding to the sense of redundancy. Repetitiveness aside, there were a lot of unnecessary 'that's. I felt there was a lot more telling than showing with emotion. "I was disgusted" instead of "Worms writhed underneath my skin at the sight" There can be a healthy mix of both within the narrative, I simply found there was less of the 'showing' when there could have absolutely been more. There was a lot of filtering, as in "He saw the waves hit the shore" instead of "The waves hit the shore" (filtering reminds the readers whose POV we're in. Necessary as it is, it doesn't, and shouldn't be constant). Similarly, I think there could have been more descriptions of the setting, more inclusion of the five senses, and more time festering on certain decisions that heavily impacted the plot, of which felt glazed over.
The ending was... disappointing. One of the major points of Thomas's character was the very thing he gave up. Not only did he give it up, he threw it away for someone, then proceeded to tell said person to leave him alone. This was one of the moments that felt forced, more in the aspect of Charles' involvement. The ending was a left turn for me, as if it wasn't planned but the want to continue the story, making it a series, occurred near the end of the writing process.
I'm conflicted. I feel bad for criticizing as I have while not giving any specific reasons as to why I rated it three stars when I clearly hadn't enjoyed myself. Again, this is why I opened with what I did. My own expectations, after having read adult stories exclusively, dampened Song of the Dark. What's worse, is that I cannot go into detail about what I liked. I enjoyed specific scenes over the general narrative. I was smiling and chuckling throughout. I like the inclusivity as a queer person myself.
Song of the Dark was a quick read due to its simplicity, yet fun and endearing. This is a great book if you're new to the genre or are looking to introduce a bit more gayness into your reading.
August 29, 2023
I really enjoyed this book-- the romance is heartbreaking. There are cool characters and different kinds of magic, and the action keeps moving but keeps me curious at the same time. I can't wait for the sequel!
June 7, 2025
Whadaflip!!!!! This book literally sat on my desk for like a month straight... I was on page 12 and genuinely tempted to dnf... oh boy am I glad I didn't! Listen, this book is written like a fanfiction. I can tell just from Suddarth's description of people that they have a LOT of experience on Wattpad or ao3, or hell, even tumblr. I think it's crazy that we're living in a time where random teenagers writing and publishing their work on the internet can end up becoming published authors. Seriously, as much as I was struggling to get into this book, it really wasn't as hard to read as some very well-known authors and titles.
I think it's the fact that Bryn Suddarth is someone who I've.. sort of interacted with? I mean, I saw their posts on my Tiktok For You Page at like, 500 likes, and bought a book from them simply because I wanted to support a small author. I didn't really even look at the synopsis before purchasing it.. oopsies! Then they published the second of this four book series (I think that's what they said), and I immediately bought it. Like, preordered and everything. I think it's so crazy that I have signed copies of books now because of this series. Yes, the cover is hella embarrassing, yes this book is probably not for everyone, but so what? If people can go around reading Icebreaker in public shamelessly, why can't I peacefully read Song of the Dark in my bedroom and tell my 3 followers on goodreads?
Anyway, onto the book itself. I hate gay people. That's like in the top 10 phrases I say most commonly. Shockingly, I found myself rooting for the gay people! I know! Normally I hate them and wish they would all suffer while bawling and saying "ts so real ong bru istg" or something. I feel like even though the characters could be a little ridiculous, it wasn't crazy unbelievable. People are ridiculous. The one thing that felt very unreal to me was the ending between Thomas and Charles. I assume since there are supposed to be three more books in this series that they'll end up getting past their issues and being disgustingly perfect for each other. But seriously, I was shocked when Thomas rejected Charles and Charles just.... listened???? Charles? THE Charles? The same Charles we've been reading about this whole time? That guy actually listened to Thomas and what Thomas wanted? Really????? Seriously, I feel like that was the most unrealistic character trait (besides people being able to use magic and stuff).
Overall, I'm not above a good Suddarth book now. Bryn!!!!! I will buy every single book you publish even if it's a steaming hot pile of garbage!!!!! It really just makes my little child brain happy, since there was a long period of time where I truly wanted to be an author. Which is crazy, because little child me HATED READING???? I don't know what was going through my dumbass child brain. But yeah, I think being able to see first-hand someone achieve something that I wanted, it just reminds me that life is unpredictable and nothing is impossible. Yeah, this book was self-published, but still! I really think that Bryn has a lot of potential. This is literally their first book, and it's already great. Things can only get better from here.
(Sorry if I accidentally used a comma instead of a period or a period instead of a comma, I took my glasses off while typing this and I can't see shit)
5/5 stars, would recommend*, would read again
*if they're interested in queer fiction
I think it's the fact that Bryn Suddarth is someone who I've.. sort of interacted with? I mean, I saw their posts on my Tiktok For You Page at like, 500 likes, and bought a book from them simply because I wanted to support a small author. I didn't really even look at the synopsis before purchasing it.. oopsies! Then they published the second of this four book series (I think that's what they said), and I immediately bought it. Like, preordered and everything. I think it's so crazy that I have signed copies of books now because of this series. Yes, the cover is hella embarrassing, yes this book is probably not for everyone, but so what? If people can go around reading Icebreaker in public shamelessly, why can't I peacefully read Song of the Dark in my bedroom and tell my 3 followers on goodreads?
Anyway, onto the book itself. I hate gay people. That's like in the top 10 phrases I say most commonly. Shockingly, I found myself rooting for the gay people! I know! Normally I hate them and wish they would all suffer while bawling and saying "ts so real ong bru istg" or something. I feel like even though the characters could be a little ridiculous, it wasn't crazy unbelievable. People are ridiculous. The one thing that felt very unreal to me was the ending between Thomas and Charles. I assume since there are supposed to be three more books in this series that they'll end up getting past their issues and being disgustingly perfect for each other. But seriously, I was shocked when Thomas rejected Charles and Charles just.... listened???? Charles? THE Charles? The same Charles we've been reading about this whole time? That guy actually listened to Thomas and what Thomas wanted? Really????? Seriously, I feel like that was the most unrealistic character trait (besides people being able to use magic and stuff).
Overall, I'm not above a good Suddarth book now. Bryn!!!!! I will buy every single book you publish even if it's a steaming hot pile of garbage!!!!! It really just makes my little child brain happy, since there was a long period of time where I truly wanted to be an author. Which is crazy, because little child me HATED READING???? I don't know what was going through my dumbass child brain. But yeah, I think being able to see first-hand someone achieve something that I wanted, it just reminds me that life is unpredictable and nothing is impossible. Yeah, this book was self-published, but still! I really think that Bryn has a lot of potential. This is literally their first book, and it's already great. Things can only get better from here.
(Sorry if I accidentally used a comma instead of a period or a period instead of a comma, I took my glasses off while typing this and I can't see shit)
5/5 stars, would recommend*, would read again
*if they're interested in queer fiction
May 1, 2025
4.5 ⭐️
Giving a spoiler free review is going to be difficult but here we go. I liked that when it came to the betrayal aspect of the book the character wasn’t easily forgiven, there was good depth with the emotions and the hurt felt much more realistic this way all the while showing both characters cared deeply for each other; enough to make sacrifices to save the other.
This book had such a good balance of plot and romance. While romance does play a big role in this it wasn’t the main spotlight but rather the adventure, the friendships, the hardships of life, and the magic system were.
I really liked this book, the writing style of this was lovely. The setting and atmosphere of this book were really beautiful and the characters were well detailed. The queer rep was also really nice. Definitely ordering book two soon.
Read For
✓ Slow Burn
✓ High Fantasy
✓ Enemies to Lovers
✓ Mermaids and Sirens
✓ Adventure and Chaos
⚠️ Content Warnings
Graphic: Emotional abuse, Homophobia, Mental illness, Suicidal thoughts, Grief, Outing, Abandonment, Classism
Moderate: Child abuse, Death, Panic attacks/disorders, Suicidal thoughts, Blood, Trafficking, Grief, Death of parent
Minor: Alcoholism, Physical abuse, Forced institutionalization
𓍊𓋼𓍊𓋼𓍊𓋼𓍊𓋼𓍊𓋼𓍊𓋼𓍊𓋼𓍊𓋼𓍊𓋼𓍊𓋼𓍊𓋼𓍊
Spice Level: n/a
Sad Level:💧💧💧
Plot: 9/10
Pace: 10/10
Ending: 7/10
Characters: 8/10
Enjoyability: 9/10
Writing Style: 9/10
Would I Recommend? Yes
Favorite Character(s): Charles and Thomas
Favorite Quote: ❝I can't even die right. Thomas lay flat on the deck of the recently wrecked ship, left alone with only his thoughts.❞
POV: Duel, Third Person
Pages: 352
Format: Paperback
Language: English
Release Date: 27, August 2023
Rep/Extras: Gay (main character), Bisexual (main character), queer diversity, racial diversity
September 22, 2024
Love the reluctant hero, the found ship crew, the world of magic and hidden characteristics. Love the back and forth between before and current story, much like the back and forth rocking of the sea. And then things start clicking and you get thrown for a loop and now I can't wait for the next book!!
November 6, 2024
Slow burn. Loved the character development with the MMC. The love interest annoyed me and appeared weak. Fun little mystery through the book and interesting characters. Heavy on depression and thoughts of suicide, but also acts of selflessness. Eager for the next book.
January 6, 2025
Holy shit this book was so good. I love how the magic system works and the amount of twists and turns the story took was incredible. I genuinely cannot wait for the second book to come out, im in absolute shambles after the end. Easily a 6 star read if I could give it. God I love this book so much. I will need 5-7 business days to recover
August 29, 2023
Saw this on TikTok.
Great characters, a beautiful world, and lots of fun adventure. That would have been enough, but then it went so hard at the end... my heart
Great characters, a beautiful world, and lots of fun adventure. That would have been enough, but then it went so hard at the end... my heart
September 8, 2023
It's so good to find a world-building like this!
The relationships were developed a bit quickly but the story is still exciting.
Also, the pacing is kinda fast, and that is a definite plus to me.
Enjoyers of:
-fantasea
-sirens
-magi
-rivals to lovers
This was made for you!
My warmest thanks to the author for the copy!!
The relationships were developed a bit quickly but the story is still exciting.
Also, the pacing is kinda fast, and that is a definite plus to me.
Enjoyers of:
-fantasea
-sirens
-magi
-rivals to lovers
This was made for you!
My warmest thanks to the author for the copy!!
September 8, 2025
First of all, this got me out of my worst and I do mean worst reading slump ever. I hadn't been able to read for shit for over a month, and this baby was my saving grace. How do I go from reading absolutely nothing and DNFing about four books to finishing this in 12 hours straight? Wilddd.
Moving on, what the actual eff was that ending? The main character got his soul intact, but I feel HOLLOW as hell now. Did we switch spots or something? I am genuinely spiraling so hard rn cause my thoughts are too fast and my fingers can't keep up at all. But woahh, that was such a shit ending, and I swear I mean that in the best way possible. I am sooo thankful I don't have to wait for years to know what happens next, cause I will be starting the next immediately.
Now, as much as I would love to make this a small ass review and go straight to reading book 2, I just wanna rant about the best character in the book for a bit. If you thought the answer was Thomas, you are absolutely right.
Thomas Hambleton. Tommy. The most amazing, beautiful, kind man who deserves all the love in the whole wide world. These are some of the ways in which I would describe my favorite character. I have a very specific type when it comes to picking favorite characters, and no person has ever been deemed a favorite as fast as this man was. When I had just started reading, it was giving me very strong HIGH (emphasis on high) quality Wattpad gay fantasy romance. The last 3 words for me are the best genre of literature. Another reason I loved this book so much because it was not only a Fantasy, but also Gay but also, and not a heavy romance. The balance there is incredible and very difficult to find. There's a reason why I used to, and so many people till this day love Wattpad so much. So getting something that I used to love but in a much better quality made me so much happy. Like if someone took a cringey fic that you used to love and just enhanced it to be so much better without changing the whole story. I wasss very happy with the storyline here.
Sorry, got off track, back to my baby Thomas. He deserves the world, and I am ready to do anything for this man. If you can't tell, he's my favorite. A big reason the ending pissed me off was that Thomas did not get the ending he wanted. No, I did not want him to die, absolutely not. But I kind of assumed all would end all, and eventually he and Charles would be back, and he would actually, for the first time in his life, want to live. Notice how I didn't add forever at the end of that sentence. Don't get me wrong, it's sweet that he literally did the one thing he never wanted to ever do for the love of his life, that's beautiful. But what about him??? Why doesn't he get to be happy? It's just not fair. Thomas is the best example of a person who had every opportunity to be evil because the world had shitten on him from day 1 and he did not. He simply persevered and went on to be an absolutely selfless angel. Name one time he did something for himself. One. I just wanna wrap him up in a big blanket and protect him from everyone because the world doesn't deserve him but I still am so happy that he got a wonderful found family.
I personally think we need to talk more about the other mother angel of this story, Fyavine. I'm gonna hope we got Fyavine content in the second book because I absolutely love the dynamic between Fyavine and Thomas. She took one look at him and was like 'yeahhh, he's my kid now' in the most sisterly way ever. I know that there were a lot of wonderful, sweet characters in the book, but something about Fyavine just hit me different. It just felt very authentic.
Y'all can hate me if you want, but I am a Charles Southworth apologist. My man made a whole lot of mistakes, and I will not give you any excuses for them. Even he knows he's been a piece of utter shit, but just hear me out. Being gay is very hard. It's not an excuse to hurt the people you love, but just consider that simple thing. I am gonna hope he does better as time goes and he is already trying to atone for his mistakes. Also, now that Thomas is immortal, I have a very funny feeling that Charles might just join Tetra (I LOVE THE NAME TETRA) so he can also be immortal. The good news, I would love those two getting together and having a happy ending. The bad news; that it would defeat the whole point of Thomas becoming immortal. The author would have to execute really, really well for this to be the complete ending
Lastly special mention to my boy Felix. The original one. We knew the scheme wouldn't last long, but shoutout to him for doing his best.
Final thing. I was ranting to my friend about Thomas and saying he's such an angel, but he's depressed and he deserves so much love and he's kind yadayadayada, and her response was straight up, 'that sounds like you'. And I oop. I felt very complimented, honestly. Just gonna ignore everything else haha.
Moving on, what the actual eff was that ending? The main character got his soul intact, but I feel HOLLOW as hell now. Did we switch spots or something? I am genuinely spiraling so hard rn cause my thoughts are too fast and my fingers can't keep up at all. But woahh, that was such a shit ending, and I swear I mean that in the best way possible. I am sooo thankful I don't have to wait for years to know what happens next, cause I will be starting the next immediately.
Now, as much as I would love to make this a small ass review and go straight to reading book 2, I just wanna rant about the best character in the book for a bit. If you thought the answer was Thomas, you are absolutely right.
Thomas Hambleton. Tommy. The most amazing, beautiful, kind man who deserves all the love in the whole wide world. These are some of the ways in which I would describe my favorite character. I have a very specific type when it comes to picking favorite characters, and no person has ever been deemed a favorite as fast as this man was. When I had just started reading, it was giving me very strong HIGH (emphasis on high) quality Wattpad gay fantasy romance. The last 3 words for me are the best genre of literature. Another reason I loved this book so much because it was not only a Fantasy, but also Gay but also, and not a heavy romance. The balance there is incredible and very difficult to find. There's a reason why I used to, and so many people till this day love Wattpad so much. So getting something that I used to love but in a much better quality made me so much happy. Like if someone took a cringey fic that you used to love and just enhanced it to be so much better without changing the whole story. I wasss very happy with the storyline here.
Sorry, got off track, back to my baby Thomas. He deserves the world, and I am ready to do anything for this man. If you can't tell, he's my favorite. A big reason the ending pissed me off was that Thomas did not get the ending he wanted. No, I did not want him to die, absolutely not. But I kind of assumed all would end all, and eventually he and Charles would be back, and he would actually, for the first time in his life, want to live. Notice how I didn't add forever at the end of that sentence. Don't get me wrong, it's sweet that he literally did the one thing he never wanted to ever do for the love of his life, that's beautiful. But what about him??? Why doesn't he get to be happy? It's just not fair. Thomas is the best example of a person who had every opportunity to be evil because the world had shitten on him from day 1 and he did not. He simply persevered and went on to be an absolutely selfless angel. Name one time he did something for himself. One. I just wanna wrap him up in a big blanket and protect him from everyone because the world doesn't deserve him but I still am so happy that he got a wonderful found family.
I personally think we need to talk more about the other mother angel of this story, Fyavine. I'm gonna hope we got Fyavine content in the second book because I absolutely love the dynamic between Fyavine and Thomas. She took one look at him and was like 'yeahhh, he's my kid now' in the most sisterly way ever. I know that there were a lot of wonderful, sweet characters in the book, but something about Fyavine just hit me different. It just felt very authentic.
Y'all can hate me if you want, but I am a Charles Southworth apologist. My man made a whole lot of mistakes, and I will not give you any excuses for them. Even he knows he's been a piece of utter shit, but just hear me out. Being gay is very hard. It's not an excuse to hurt the people you love, but just consider that simple thing. I am gonna hope he does better as time goes and he is already trying to atone for his mistakes. Also, now that Thomas is immortal, I have a very funny feeling that Charles might just join Tetra (I LOVE THE NAME TETRA) so he can also be immortal. The good news, I would love those two getting together and having a happy ending. The bad news; that it would defeat the whole point of Thomas becoming immortal. The author would have to execute really, really well for this to be the complete ending
Lastly special mention to my boy Felix. The original one. We knew the scheme wouldn't last long, but shoutout to him for doing his best.
Final thing. I was ranting to my friend about Thomas and saying he's such an angel, but he's depressed and he deserves so much love and he's kind yadayadayada, and her response was straight up, 'that sounds like you'. And I oop. I felt very complimented, honestly. Just gonna ignore everything else haha.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 5, 2023
Song of the Dark” by Bryn Suddarth is an immersive, imaginative YA novel about self-acceptance. The main character Thomas has anything you could want. He attends a top boarding school, stands to inherit a shipping dynasty, and seems to have his life all mapped out. But there is one thing missing, and that is himself. Rather, his true self. He isn’t what you would call comfortable in his own skin. Charles is his rival, but also his friend, and it’s when they cross paths that his quest for self-discovery and true happiness begins. His life and the world itself may never be the same again. As he encounters gods, sirens, and the magi, he realizes that love can either paralyze him or set him free.
Suddarth’s character-driven coming-of-age fantasy is hard to put down. From the opening scene on the ship when Thomas is alone with his dark thoughts of whether he wants to live or die, all the way through to the end, you get a palpable sense of realness about the storyline and characters’ journeys. It’s always great when a character goes in search of the inner self, and this author carries this out in a dramatic and believable way.
The drama is not overwrought, and the author doesn’t play it for attention. You are instantly drawn into the plot, and the detailed, vivid descriptions make you feel as if you are there with the characters, experiencing their lives. The different points of view work well here, and the conflict is well-conceived. You have inner conflict and outer conflict, so the two make for compelling reading.
It’s a personal story for the characters, and some of the characters you may not like or agree with, but that’s what makes it interesting. Everyone is not always on their best behavior. The fantasy aspect just adds another irresistible layer, and so do the multiple timelines. Thomas’ character arc is especially well-conceived and executed. We first see him as a humble sailor at rock bottom on a ship, but he’s from a rich and powerful family. What happened? That’s what’s so entertaining about this book. It isn’t just about one thing. It’s about different themes that are eventually tied together and understood.
I like that the ending leaves room for future stories, and doesn’t explain everything away. When it comes to a YA fantasy novel with grit and heart, your first choice should be “Song of the Dark,” by Bryn Suddarth.
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ClickSong of the Dark” by Bryn Suddarth is an immersive, imaginative YA novel about self-acceptance. The main character Thomas has anything you could want. He attends a top boarding school, stands to inherit a shipping dynasty, and seems to have his life all mapped out. But there is one thing missing, and that is himself. Rather, his true self. He isn’t what you would call comfortable in his own skin. Charles is his rival, but also his friend, and it’s when they cross paths that his quest for self-discovery and true happiness begins. His life and the world itself may never be the same again. As he encounters gods, sirens, and the magi, he realizes that love can either paralyze him or set him free.
Suddarth’s character-driven coming-of-age fantasy is hard to put down. From the opening scene on the ship when Thomas is alone with his dark thoughts of whether he wants to live or die, all the way through to the end, you get a palpable sense of realness about the storyline and characters’ journeys. It’s always great when a character goes in search of the inner self, and this author carries this out in a dramatic and believable way.
The drama is not overwrought, and the author doesn’t play it for attention. You are instantly drawn into the plot, and the detailed, vivid descriptions make you feel as if you are there with the characters, experiencing their lives. The different points of view work well here, and the conflict is well-conceived. You have inner conflict and outer conflict, so the two make for compelling reading.
It’s a personal story for the characters, and some of the characters you may not like or agree with, but that’s what makes it interesting. Everyone is not always on their best behavior. The fantasy aspect just adds another irresistible layer, and so do the multiple timelines. Thomas’ character arc is especially well-conceived and executed. We first see him as a humble sailor at rock bottom on a ship, but he’s from a rich and powerful family. What happened? That’s what’s so entertaining about this book. It isn’t just about one thing. It’s about different themes that are eventually tied together and understood.
I like that the ending leaves room for future stories, and doesn’t explain everything away. When it comes to a YA fantasy novel with grit and heart, your first choice should be “Song of the Dark,” by Bryn Suddarth.
Suddarth’s character-driven coming-of-age fantasy is hard to put down. From the opening scene on the ship when Thomas is alone with his dark thoughts of whether he wants to live or die, all the way through to the end, you get a palpable sense of realness about the storyline and characters’ journeys. It’s always great when a character goes in search of the inner self, and this author carries this out in a dramatic and believable way.
The drama is not overwrought, and the author doesn’t play it for attention. You are instantly drawn into the plot, and the detailed, vivid descriptions make you feel as if you are there with the characters, experiencing their lives. The different points of view work well here, and the conflict is well-conceived. You have inner conflict and outer conflict, so the two make for compelling reading.
It’s a personal story for the characters, and some of the characters you may not like or agree with, but that’s what makes it interesting. Everyone is not always on their best behavior. The fantasy aspect just adds another irresistible layer, and so do the multiple timelines. Thomas’ character arc is especially well-conceived and executed. We first see him as a humble sailor at rock bottom on a ship, but he’s from a rich and powerful family. What happened? That’s what’s so entertaining about this book. It isn’t just about one thing. It’s about different themes that are eventually tied together and understood.
I like that the ending leaves room for future stories, and doesn’t explain everything away. When it comes to a YA fantasy novel with grit and heart, your first choice should be “Song of the Dark,” by Bryn Suddarth.
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ClickSong of the Dark” by Bryn Suddarth is an immersive, imaginative YA novel about self-acceptance. The main character Thomas has anything you could want. He attends a top boarding school, stands to inherit a shipping dynasty, and seems to have his life all mapped out. But there is one thing missing, and that is himself. Rather, his true self. He isn’t what you would call comfortable in his own skin. Charles is his rival, but also his friend, and it’s when they cross paths that his quest for self-discovery and true happiness begins. His life and the world itself may never be the same again. As he encounters gods, sirens, and the magi, he realizes that love can either paralyze him or set him free.
Suddarth’s character-driven coming-of-age fantasy is hard to put down. From the opening scene on the ship when Thomas is alone with his dark thoughts of whether he wants to live or die, all the way through to the end, you get a palpable sense of realness about the storyline and characters’ journeys. It’s always great when a character goes in search of the inner self, and this author carries this out in a dramatic and believable way.
The drama is not overwrought, and the author doesn’t play it for attention. You are instantly drawn into the plot, and the detailed, vivid descriptions make you feel as if you are there with the characters, experiencing their lives. The different points of view work well here, and the conflict is well-conceived. You have inner conflict and outer conflict, so the two make for compelling reading.
It’s a personal story for the characters, and some of the characters you may not like or agree with, but that’s what makes it interesting. Everyone is not always on their best behavior. The fantasy aspect just adds another irresistible layer, and so do the multiple timelines. Thomas’ character arc is especially well-conceived and executed. We first see him as a humble sailor at rock bottom on a ship, but he’s from a rich and powerful family. What happened? That’s what’s so entertaining about this book. It isn’t just about one thing. It’s about different themes that are eventually tied together and understood.
I like that the ending leaves room for future stories, and doesn’t explain everything away. When it comes to a YA fantasy novel with grit and heart, your first choice should be “Song of the Dark,” by Bryn Suddarth.
August 29, 2023
I'm rating this book a 4.3-4.5 star but I hate leaving lower reviews because Goodreads doesn't have half stars so I'm going to round up.
This was a fun, easy read that I enjoyed very much and I highly recommend!!!! I really liked how there were terms used from the modern world but they were introduced in the story in a fun way. I also like how there were lots of aspects of the world that were mentioned that could be expanded on in the next books. The world that the story is set it is super cool and though it has mythical creatures and magic I think that it differs from other fantasy books. Also, the twists at the end were super intriguing and have me waiting on the edge of my seat for what happens next!
Overall, this story was really engaging and I think it would be a great book for people who are new to fantasy since it struck me as more of a semi-magical realism. I saw another comment that said that the magic system in the book seemed under-developed and that the characters had spells that could do exactly what they need them too and at the time I agreed, but if you think about books like Harry Potter they have the same kind of system, it's just that you see more magic overall. Like, you see the kids practicing and studying and using spells that they don't necessarily need to do something at that time but they still have spells that do exactly what they need them to do. I think if there was more evidence of other people using magic in this book it would help.
The buildup seemed long in comparison to the resolution but since the beginning was so engaging and there will be more books in the series I think it works.
I really liked the characters, but since the book mainly followed only two of them it seemed like some of the others were one-dimensional. I think this added to the resolution seeming so quick because we weren't able to see the other characters' thoughts/POVs.
Go read it!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This was a fun, easy read that I enjoyed very much and I highly recommend!!!! I really liked how there were terms used from the modern world but they were introduced in the story in a fun way. I also like how there were lots of aspects of the world that were mentioned that could be expanded on in the next books. The world that the story is set it is super cool and though it has mythical creatures and magic I think that it differs from other fantasy books. Also, the twists at the end were super intriguing and have me waiting on the edge of my seat for what happens next!
Overall, this story was really engaging and I think it would be a great book for people who are new to fantasy since it struck me as more of a semi-magical realism. I saw another comment that said that the magic system in the book seemed under-developed and that the characters had spells that could do exactly what they need them too and at the time I agreed, but if you think about books like Harry Potter they have the same kind of system, it's just that you see more magic overall. Like, you see the kids practicing and studying and using spells that they don't necessarily need to do something at that time but they still have spells that do exactly what they need them to do. I think if there was more evidence of other people using magic in this book it would help.
The buildup seemed long in comparison to the resolution but since the beginning was so engaging and there will be more books in the series I think it works.
I really liked the characters, but since the book mainly followed only two of them it seemed like some of the others were one-dimensional. I think this added to the resolution seeming so quick because we weren't able to see the other characters' thoughts/POVs.
Go read it!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 19, 2023
I am a chaotic person. I started reading this, then I found out there’s because it’s a series. Told myself I was absolutely not reading it until the sequel/series was out because I am not good at patience and reading unfinished series is something I try to avoid.
I failed. I needed something to read, and even at 10%—where I originally left off—this had me interested.
So yeah like many series,
There is so much angst here. Like, constant angst. I cried several times. Not because I am an angsty teenager (though I was, long ago), but because I am a person who has struggled with depression for years. So, definitely know that there are some major triggers here for depression and suicidal ideation. There’s talk about wanting to die, not wanting to be alive, etc. and that general apathy toward life when you’re depressed. Like honestly my heart hurts for the author if they wrote the depression from experience because… yeah. Same. Happily in treatment and doing well now, but whew is this familiar.
But despite all talk of depressing things, what I truly loved about the way this book ended was how Thomas, who didn’t care to live, ended up I mean I also loved Mariana’s role in the end, and I’m excited to see what happens in the next book in regards to that.
This is also a great found family story. I am on a kick with that lately and it fit in perfectly. The people Thomas meets along the way, whether they intend to become close or not, end up meaning a lot to him. And they are just as devoted to him.
So yeah, great read, I don’t regret not sticking to my plan. This is also my 365th full-length book of the year so I’m glad it was one I could rate highly.
Also, before I forget: the narrative does kinda skip around in time. We read about the past and the present concurrently, but it’s all clearly labeled and I found it easy to follow, personally.
I failed. I needed something to read, and even at 10%—where I originally left off—this had me interested.
So yeah like many series,
There is so much angst here. Like, constant angst. I cried several times. Not because I am an angsty teenager (though I was, long ago), but because I am a person who has struggled with depression for years. So, definitely know that there are some major triggers here for depression and suicidal ideation. There’s talk about wanting to die, not wanting to be alive, etc. and that general apathy toward life when you’re depressed. Like honestly my heart hurts for the author if they wrote the depression from experience because… yeah. Same. Happily in treatment and doing well now, but whew is this familiar.
But despite all talk of depressing things, what I truly loved about the way this book ended was how Thomas, who didn’t care to live, ended up I mean I also loved Mariana’s role in the end, and I’m excited to see what happens in the next book in regards to that.
This is also a great found family story. I am on a kick with that lately and it fit in perfectly. The people Thomas meets along the way, whether they intend to become close or not, end up meaning a lot to him. And they are just as devoted to him.
So yeah, great read, I don’t regret not sticking to my plan. This is also my 365th full-length book of the year so I’m glad it was one I could rate highly.
Also, before I forget: the narrative does kinda skip around in time. We read about the past and the present concurrently, but it’s all clearly labeled and I found it easy to follow, personally.
November 2, 2024
Felix...The world is a scary, evil place," she said softly. "There are so many of us hiding in plain sight. People won't let us be here unless we make it clear we're here to stay. Do you get what I'm saying?"
Thomas nodded. "Yes, but I'm not brave enough."
"You're very brave. You're still here, and that's all it takes."
I knew when I got this book I would enjoy it so it's really refreshing to have that confirmed!
A Song in the Dark is about our main character Thomas who has been sent on a mission by the god of the ocean to help save the mermaids. Unfortunately, Thomas has been sent on this mission during the lowest part of his life while he is struggling to find who he is and how he fits into the world. Through his adventure he meets new people who quickly become friends and help him open up about himself and how he sees the world.
I really enjoyed how the story was written because we got information we needed right when it was important to have and it really helped shape the story so we could see everything through Thomas's eyes but also have that secret insight of a reader. I found this story very engaging and I loved getting to know the characters. The friendship was my favorite part of this book and how supportive and loving the group is.
I disconnected from the ending a little bit because it felt a little abrupt but honestly I think it ended how it needed to and I am looking forward to the next book.
Overall, this was a great adventure and I would recommend it to anyone looking for a found family, coming into your true self, fantasy adventure!
Thomas nodded. "Yes, but I'm not brave enough."
"You're very brave. You're still here, and that's all it takes."
I knew when I got this book I would enjoy it so it's really refreshing to have that confirmed!
A Song in the Dark is about our main character Thomas who has been sent on a mission by the god of the ocean to help save the mermaids. Unfortunately, Thomas has been sent on this mission during the lowest part of his life while he is struggling to find who he is and how he fits into the world. Through his adventure he meets new people who quickly become friends and help him open up about himself and how he sees the world.
I really enjoyed how the story was written because we got information we needed right when it was important to have and it really helped shape the story so we could see everything through Thomas's eyes but also have that secret insight of a reader. I found this story very engaging and I loved getting to know the characters. The friendship was my favorite part of this book and how supportive and loving the group is.
I disconnected from the ending a little bit because it felt a little abrupt but honestly I think it ended how it needed to and I am looking forward to the next book.
Overall, this was a great adventure and I would recommend it to anyone looking for a found family, coming into your true self, fantasy adventure!
November 19, 2025
Idk what it is about the ocean but the second I start reading a book about the sea all my critical thinking skills go out the door and a five star rating is imminent. What a fun read this was! I really enjoyed Thomas, and I really appreciated the kind of reluctant hero he was.
Now, even with 5 stars I do have some things I’d like to mention. My main gripe with this book is that it is YA when I feel like it may have been better had it been written for adults. Maybe it’s just me, but I feel as if Thomas and Charles should have been aged up, primarily to give their forbidden romance more impact on their lives and futures as well as allowed for the book to explore topics such as death in a deeper way. I’d also like to mention that the ending of the book really flipped and threw away bits of what made Thomas who he was, but I won’t complain about that part too much until I read the second book to see where this is going.
On the topic of romance, I would just like to say I’m really glad that there was no easy solution to their plight. I don’t know if I myself could’ve forgiven Charles for what he did, and I’m glad that while he struggled with it, Thomas ultimately pushed him away (at least for the time being). I also really liked how it switched between the present and their time at school, it kept the narrative interesting and I found myself excited for both parts.
Sure, it may read a little simple, but sometimes you don’t need complex sentences and prose to have a good book and I really enjoyed my time reading this book! I’m very excited to start the second one!!
Now, even with 5 stars I do have some things I’d like to mention. My main gripe with this book is that it is YA when I feel like it may have been better had it been written for adults. Maybe it’s just me, but I feel as if Thomas and Charles should have been aged up, primarily to give their forbidden romance more impact on their lives and futures as well as allowed for the book to explore topics such as death in a deeper way. I’d also like to mention that the ending of the book really flipped and threw away bits of what made Thomas who he was, but I won’t complain about that part too much until I read the second book to see where this is going.
On the topic of romance, I would just like to say I’m really glad that there was no easy solution to their plight. I don’t know if I myself could’ve forgiven Charles for what he did, and I’m glad that while he struggled with it, Thomas ultimately pushed him away (at least for the time being). I also really liked how it switched between the present and their time at school, it kept the narrative interesting and I found myself excited for both parts.
Sure, it may read a little simple, but sometimes you don’t need complex sentences and prose to have a good book and I really enjoyed my time reading this book! I’m very excited to start the second one!!
October 31, 2024
I don’t even know what to say. This book was such an emotional roller coaster.
The relationship between Charles and Thomas is so tragic I don’t think I’ll ever recover. At first when Charles thought Thomas was dead I was thinking “ha karma” but then I started to feel bad for him. I think I could have been normal about the book if it wasn’t for their reunion. God, they got my hopes up for them to get back together then stabbed me in the gut repeatedly. Their dynamic was so complex and interesting and sad and sweet I was struggling to put the book down.
The way everything in the book is like a puzzle that’s being slowly put together is amazing. The reveal that Thomas had traded lives with Felix, Thomas finding out the Hambletons were evil, THOMAS BEING A WATER ELEMENTALIST?! Every twist had me on the edge of my seat. I can’t wait for the continuation of this series. Especially for Thomas to learn how to use his magic now that it’s been restored.
Mariana and Tetra are such good characters. Tetra is a horrifying villain and Mariana is hilarious. Despite her flaws she truly does her best to help Thomas and I love her for that.
My only complaints are the writing was a little confusing at some points and so many F names. Felix, Fiona, Fyavine, Fiametta, Finnlay, Faya… I think it’s time to pick another letter. But overall this is a great read and is totally worth reading, especially if you want to support a small author!
The relationship between Charles and Thomas is so tragic I don’t think I’ll ever recover. At first when Charles thought Thomas was dead I was thinking “ha karma” but then I started to feel bad for him. I think I could have been normal about the book if it wasn’t for their reunion. God, they got my hopes up for them to get back together then stabbed me in the gut repeatedly. Their dynamic was so complex and interesting and sad and sweet I was struggling to put the book down.
The way everything in the book is like a puzzle that’s being slowly put together is amazing. The reveal that Thomas had traded lives with Felix, Thomas finding out the Hambletons were evil, THOMAS BEING A WATER ELEMENTALIST?! Every twist had me on the edge of my seat. I can’t wait for the continuation of this series. Especially for Thomas to learn how to use his magic now that it’s been restored.
Mariana and Tetra are such good characters. Tetra is a horrifying villain and Mariana is hilarious. Despite her flaws she truly does her best to help Thomas and I love her for that.
My only complaints are the writing was a little confusing at some points and so many F names. Felix, Fiona, Fyavine, Fiametta, Finnlay, Faya… I think it’s time to pick another letter. But overall this is a great read and is totally worth reading, especially if you want to support a small author!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 28, 2023
I think that the plot of this book is very intriguing and has some interesting elements, from the different gods to the world-building. I liked some of the twists that appeared throughout, especially near the end.
However, saying that, I think that this book could do with some refining. Mainly in terms of how the plot and relationships progress. Some things happen very conviniently and relationships are also developed very quickly such that I'm left thinking 'you feel that way already'? As a result, some characters can come off less developed and almost perhaps a bit immature.
I would recommend this book to people who like fantasy set on the sea and want a quick read. Be careful to read that this is book 1 of a series. I am intrigued to see where this series goes, and to hopefully see the author hone their writing skills.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
However, saying that, I think that this book could do with some refining. Mainly in terms of how the plot and relationships progress. Some things happen very conviniently and relationships are also developed very quickly such that I'm left thinking 'you feel that way already'? As a result, some characters can come off less developed and almost perhaps a bit immature.
I would recommend this book to people who like fantasy set on the sea and want a quick read. Be careful to read that this is book 1 of a series. I am intrigued to see where this series goes, and to hopefully see the author hone their writing skills.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 1, 2023
I had a difficult time trying to decide how to present the results of this book to you. I haven't had this issue before. There are two time frames presented to you in alternating chapters and while at the end you kind of see how they go together, I was never quite sure what this story was trying to present most. Was it a love story gone horribly wrong or a man finding his true destiny and "family". There was page after page of angst among the guys in the love story, agonizing over each other, time and time again, hoping against hope that they could just find each other again everything would be ok, which was understandable given the nature of the story, but then near the end, in just 5 or 6 pages, everything between them is resolved and in a way that left me cold and wondering, "What?". If there is a second book I would read it to see which direction the author decided to go. The story was well written but just left me unsettled.
October 9, 2024
To get my only negative out of the way: at times the writing feels short and stilted. However, the theming and hooks that the author wrote into this book make the style of writing quick and easy to overcome if that is not your vibe.
Onto the good: Bryn handles many difficult themes with so much thought and care that it is more than refreshing to read. Learning who you are, to love yourself for it, finding people who will accept you all make incredibly obvious shows throughout the store, but it's the more subtly worked on ones that gradually appear that I am most impressed by. Struggles with depression and guilt, of toxic relationships, of manipulation by those considered to be good people as well as bad. All of these are handled with such care and nuance that it's enjoyable and refreshing to find in a romantasy book.
If you're looking for something with love, friendship, and a little bit of mystery, definitely worth the read.
Onto the good: Bryn handles many difficult themes with so much thought and care that it is more than refreshing to read. Learning who you are, to love yourself for it, finding people who will accept you all make incredibly obvious shows throughout the store, but it's the more subtly worked on ones that gradually appear that I am most impressed by. Struggles with depression and guilt, of toxic relationships, of manipulation by those considered to be good people as well as bad. All of these are handled with such care and nuance that it's enjoyable and refreshing to find in a romantasy book.
If you're looking for something with love, friendship, and a little bit of mystery, definitely worth the read.
July 16, 2025
I was entertained enough by this book to finish it, but I’m not entranced enough by the story to immediately pick up the sequel. I found the writing to be pretty good, although there were some bits of dialogue that I found cringey (especially the part where Thomas and Charles discover they’re gay; the world they live in is prejudiced against same sex attraction but they don’t have a name for it???). I also thought the God Mariana was annoying at first, but she grew to be likable. I think more than anything I enjoyed finding out that Thomas’ depression was linked to part of his soul missing. If I ever read the sequel, I hope we find out more about his family, because I don’t remember meeting them or really even getting descriptions about them. It’s strange to have a major world villain just be mentioned but never seen, especially when they’re the main character’s parents.
Overall, it’s not a bad debut. It’s actually pretty good. I would recommend it.
Overall, it’s not a bad debut. It’s actually pretty good. I would recommend it.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 28, 2023
I really liked this book!
I had a hard time putting it down to go do things around the house!
The characters struggles are relatable. You can understand each of their differing points of view, even when they are in opposition to each other.
Having the parents as presented, the reader can cringe with one of the boys as he is unable to be true to himself.
I also liked that there are other characters developed, and brought into the story with their own lives and challenges to overcome. This all weaves together as they get to know each other and work their way through what life has given them.
There are interesting turns of events, and twists in the storyline that keep you intrigued and surprised and anxious to see what will happen next.
I can't wait for the second book!
This is a great read!
I had a hard time putting it down to go do things around the house!
The characters struggles are relatable. You can understand each of their differing points of view, even when they are in opposition to each other.
Having the parents as presented, the reader can cringe with one of the boys as he is unable to be true to himself.
I also liked that there are other characters developed, and brought into the story with their own lives and challenges to overcome. This all weaves together as they get to know each other and work their way through what life has given them.
There are interesting turns of events, and twists in the storyline that keep you intrigued and surprised and anxious to see what will happen next.
I can't wait for the second book!
This is a great read!
April 6, 2025
this book had so much promise. i was completely enthralled by the way it was written (even if it slightly read as a YA). i personally loved thomas, charles, faya, fiona, and even felix as characters. i loved the plot and the character growth. the overall moral of this story seemed to be not to judge someone based on preconceived notions. it also spoke of accepting who you are and not letting others perceptions change you.
what killed this book for me was the ending. i wish i was warned that there is no HEA or HFN in this book because if i would’ve known that, i would’ve not picked up this book. i think i’d classify this book as a queer fantasy rather than a romantic fantasy with a queer couple.
what killed this book for me was the ending. i wish i was warned that there is no HEA or HFN in this book because if i would’ve known that, i would’ve not picked up this book. i think i’d classify this book as a queer fantasy rather than a romantic fantasy with a queer couple.
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June 5, 2025
Ok, at a keyboard for this. Anyway, the start was a little rocky, getting used to writing style and had to really exercise that suspension of disbelief for the first chapter or two. But I became engrossed and it consumed me until it was all I could do and basically read it in a day. Lovely, and decent plot.
Tags: 3rd person omniscient, Fantasy, M/m romance, Mermaids, Sirens, Magic, Shapeshifters, Gods, Werewolves, Exercising boundaries, Lesbian character (outed), Bisexual (uhh...not specifically outed, but trust), Homophobia, Magicphobia, Child imprisonment. Think that's most of it that doesn't get too specific to give things away.
Anyway, super fun read. Loved. Will be reading the next book as soon as I get a few days off to allow it to consume me again because if I read it on a work day, no work will get done.
Tags: 3rd person omniscient, Fantasy, M/m romance, Mermaids, Sirens, Magic, Shapeshifters, Gods, Werewolves, Exercising boundaries, Lesbian character (outed), Bisexual (uhh...not specifically outed, but trust), Homophobia, Magicphobia, Child imprisonment. Think that's most of it that doesn't get too specific to give things away.
Anyway, super fun read. Loved. Will be reading the next book as soon as I get a few days off to allow it to consume me again because if I read it on a work day, no work will get done.
August 29, 2023
This story was so complex and kept me wanting to keep reading. The character development is amazing, interactions between both main and minor character is phenomenal. The story kept me guessing which is great because while I don’t mind guessing some things I love surprises in a book. The relationship between Thomas and Charles wasn’t a stereotypical romance between characters and I deeply enjoyed reading their characters develop. I will definitely be on the lookout for more novels by Bryn.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
August 31, 2023
I liked how the book immediately started with an action scene to keep me engaged. The pacing was fast, the characters were interesting. There was a lot of worldbuilding going on with the deities and the magical creatures (sirens). Unfortunately for me the magic system was not developed much and so it left me quite confused at times. I also thought there were quite a bit of plot conveniences going on.
I would recommend this book if you like fantasy, stories set on open water and fast-paced books.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I would recommend this book if you like fantasy, stories set on open water and fast-paced books.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 29, 2023
Exciting story of wonderful characters who are full of life! Thomas is a relatable character who has a sworn enemy he's attracted to. The story will take you in directions you will not anticipate as Thomas is pulled out to adventure to help save the mermaids plagued by some mysterious disease.
I loved the end and how it didn't turn out like I thought. Despite being fantasy, it felt real. The feelings, experiences and emotions kept me reading. I can't wait for the next book of the series!
I loved the end and how it didn't turn out like I thought. Despite being fantasy, it felt real. The feelings, experiences and emotions kept me reading. I can't wait for the next book of the series!
October 14, 2024
This book was amazing. Top 5 books of the year for me. This book is a nautical themed novel with a gay couple. This book has some heavy themes such as same-sex relationships, coming out and discovering your sexuality, depression and mental health. Honestly this book is a fantastic young adult novel with great character building. This book has multiple time lines and points of view going at once. There is betrayal, drama, mystery, and unique friendships. Cannot recommend this book enough.
September 1, 2023
I know you're not supposed to judge a book by its cover but I'm so glad I picked this one up! The vibrant art is a perfect representation for how fresh and "new" this book felt in terms of fantasy and romance. All of the characters were very personable and their journeys made me emotional, I loved it! I cannot wait for the next one!
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