“Can you adjust the tone of the following book review to be more considerate of the author’s feelings were they to read it, while retaining the critique and criticism of their work?”
“Absolutely. Here’s a version of your review with a more considerate tone, aimed at preserving the core critiques while softening the language and avoiding any ad hominem implications. It offers the same thoughtful analysis, just in a way that the author might find more constructive:”
This book is an accessible and at times thought-provoking introduction to an important and fast-evolving field. It raises big, timely questions and is clearly written with a broad audience in mind. For readers entirely new to the terrain, it may serve as a useful jumping-off point. However, its ambitions outpace its depth, and for anyone with even moderate familiarity with the topics discussed, the book is likely to feel frustratingly superficial.
The treatment of core concepts—like intelligence and information—is where this becomes most evident. The attempt to define these terms slides into circular reasoning, seemingly without the author’s awareness, and without engaging with the rich body of existing literature that has wrestled with these definitions for decades. The definitions offered come across more like quick personal takes than the result of sustained engagement or original insight.
One moment that particularly jarred was the invocation of Einstein’s famous aphorism about problem definition, followed by an example using Moore’s Law. The author first presents Moore’s Law as illustrative of a defined problem, then immediately calls it a prediction and an industry challenge. The internal contradiction here is never resolved, and it typifies a kind of glibness that runs through much of the book’s reasoning.
Similar issues appear elsewhere. The chapter on consciousness glosses over the ‘hard problem’ with a take that is, frankly, just wrong. The discussion of Bayes’ Theorem misrepresents both its logic and its significance. In areas where I have more domain knowledge, the author’s approach often seemed to cherry-pick or lean heavily on sources that aligned with their thesis, without seriously engaging counterarguments or complexity. That in turn made me cautious about accepting the book’s claims in areas where I was less well-read.
Most worryingly, there is a pervasive and unexamined human exceptionalism when it comes to volition, motive, ‘free will’, and our supposed capacity for ethical self-regulation—all of which lends a troubling naivety to the book’s treatment of AI risk. Its tone is breezily reassuring, but for readers who are more skeptical of humanity’s track record of acting in our own best interests—or who are attuned to the increasingly tenuous distinction between biological and silicon-based information processing—that reassurance is unlikely to land. In fact, given the author’s influential role within the AI industry, it may have quite the opposite effect.
Analogies to the domestication of wolves or early industrial-era anxieties feel similarly misplaced. They seem designed to cast concern about AI as little more than modern-day Luddism. But it’s entirely possible—and necessary—to recognise the potential benefits of AI while remaining clear-eyed about its risks. History has shown how transformative technologies can bring harm alongside progress, especially when their unintended consequences are dismissed in the name of optimism.
Perhaps most disappointing is the mismatch between the book’s confident tone and the author’s background. I expected a deeper foundation in philosophy, cognitive science, or technical AI. Instead, the author appears to come from a primarily entrepreneurial and policy-facing background. That’s not inherently disqualifying, but it does help explain the book’s tendency to favour broad statements over close reasoning. In a moment when public understanding and policy are being shaped by books like this, it’s crucial to distinguish between influence and expertise.
That said, books that provoke strong disagreement can still be valuable. This one certainly made me reflect more deeply, prompted some fact-checking, and encouraged me to revisit and expand my understanding of certain concepts. For all its flaws, I’m glad I read it—just not for the reasons the author might have hoped.
“Thanks!”