Sage is a trainee nurse, disliking Christmas because of past experiences. Payton is a celebrity chef, who has moved to a small town with her young daughter Clem to escape her divorce and the negative media frenzy.
There are so many editing problems with this, but under all that, it is still a lovely, heartfelt story.
There are link passages missing, places where chunks of text are repeated, information one character knows, that there is no record of them ever being told, and then a bit later they have forgotten it. Many other errors; for example, at the beginning, Sage is a trainee paediatric nurse, but later she is in ER, and at one point she is addressed as Doctor. Some things in the book happen in the wrong order, or happen, and then the story forgets that they happened. Continuity is the biggest problem here, getting worse as the book progresses. The story seems to jump around a lot, without a cohesive story arc, instead a series of scenes. Other books I have read and reviewed from this author have similar editing issues. These could all be exceptional books with a bit more editorial care.
The English and the spelling in the book are good, and some sections of text are really exceptional. The warmth of the scenes with Clem, especially with the three of them together, are lovely, some of the best in the book. One of my favourites is at the beginning of the story, where we have a beautiful meet-cute, with many more warm festive scenes to follow. The author’s talent at cozy descriptions really bring the Christmas spirit to life.
I gave this four stars because I really enjoyed the story…
If you can choose to look past the many technical errors in the book, the story is well worth reading.