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The beginning of this book, if I put it simply, is that it was terrible. Prologue? Fire! Fast paced and we are staring with a fucking BANG and I loved it. The next chapter?…. Tell me why this bitch gets transported to a different realm and just simply spends a week in her room…
Yeah…
The next chapter?
FOUR WEEKS HAVE PASSED…. ARE YOU SERIOUS???!! We are going to start off a fantasy book by just skipping over EVERYTHING??! WTF???? Our FMC makes friends that are assigned to her by the head mistress. Oh and of course during those four weeks she has already interacted with the MMC MULTIPLE TIMES… what do we see you ask? Oh don’t worry, we get to see why he doesn’t like her and decided to bully her! Are you ready for this? I don’t think you are…
Because she bumped into him!!!
Yep you read that right! He “hates” her because she bumped into him and is a human.
Wow! I don’t think I have ever read a more mature and sexy MMC. That is just the hottest thing I think an MMC has ever decided to do!! Don’t you guys agree?!
Oh and the other one interaction we get to see between the FMC and MMC during those four weeks that are so graciously just SKIPPED over, let me tell you guys the FULL BODY SHIVER of cringe that went through me when I read this… It was like nothing I have ever experienced. Prepare yourself, I’m warning you…
Okay so she runs into him again because OF COURSE she does! And he says in a ‘deep tone while dragging his gaze up and down my body while I struggle. Dimples dent deep as he smirks. “I think the human likes being on her knees for everyone, maybe she should stay there. It seems to be the only place she belongs.”
HOLY FUCK. What year are we in again?? WTF IS THAT??
Okay I have to move on or I will simply not make it through this review 😃
The story continues, blah blah, they have had an insta connection from the start. The creatures, I don’t even know what they are, in this realm are learning human behaviors and ways to take over the human realm. Why? Cause this realm is cursed apparently.
We skipped over the first five weeks of this bitch being in this new place guys, we don’t get answers 🤣
ANYWAYS, in learning human behavior, these fae? creatures? monsters? have to learn intimacy/emotional connection, so everyone is paired up and must complete tasks. The first one is asking each other questions, the second is kissing each other.
I think over 50 pages of this book is just descriptions of our MC’s kissing… I’m not even lying. From their first kiss it’s fireworks and sparkles and worlds colliding, and guess what? We get pages and pages of descriptions of their kissing each and every time.
And they have to kiss 5 times, for a minute each, and guess what? They are always stopping right before the minute mark!!
…Yay!!
Oh! And these two can read each other’s minds at times. Odd though because it was never consistent and he would somehow only read her mind when she was thinking dirty, scandalous thoughts and his mind would only open when he was thinking a vulnerable thought about her…
EVEN THOUGH HE HAS BEEN ALIVE FOR HOW LONG NOW??? OVER HUNDREDS OF YEARS… you THINK he would be able to control that by now but NO, apparently not.
Basically the author was TELLING everything., Like spoon feeding into my mouth until I was gagging and having to spit it out because my mouth was FULL.
I cannot stand it when books are told instead of shown and unfortunately thats what Leigh decided to do with this one. I want the story, I want the build up and tension, and LONGING… instead we got glimpses into the dude’s mind that just told us he didn’t want the kissing task to be done with.
There was just no build up between the characters it was all INSTA 🤮
This is supposed to be a bully romance… they are supposed to hate each other… WHERE??? I didn’t see that. They legit never hated each other and there was no bullying. All he would do is say he hates her and she’s weak and pathetic and blah blah fucking BLAH.
How did we go from the masterpiece that is The Edge of Darkness trilogy to this???
It was like pulling teeth trying to make myself read this book guys. I was STRUGGLING!!
Until about 75% where some stuff other than just kissing and dry humping started happening.
Thats right, the PLOT!
Now, was it predictable? Yes! And as someone who hardly reads fantasy, thats kinda sad, but the foreshadowing was HEAVY. I legit guessed what was going on the first time something was mentioned. Still the premise and idea was super intriguing, enough for me to read the second book? No. But enough that I didn’t DNF this one!!
Basically it seems this girl keeps dying because of this curse and keeps getting reincarnated and they have been lovers forever, oh and this is where Leigh tries to clean up the mess that was the first 75% because he tries to say that their idea for them to not fall in love wasn’t working and he couldn’t be rude to her and what not…. Maybe if she isn’t supposed to fall in love with you, you should avoid her, or you know, actually make her dislike you…. Like it just didn’t make sense. I know what she was trying to do, but unfortunately I was just too disappointed and annoyed by the first half that it didn’t work.
I don’t know much about the curse other than it seems to kill her and maybe turn her evil? Like I said, I don’t know, but since this is supposed to be a five book series that does make sense. I’m sure more will be revealed as the series continues.
Thats where it pretty much ends… there’s a small cliffhanger, nothing that had me blown away or saying “I NEED THE NEXT BOOK RIGHT NOW 👹”
Oh! One more thing that bothered me was the inconsistencies… small things, but this stuff really does irritate me because how did you not catch this when you were rereading/editing. Here is an example:
“At midnight on the dot, I’m doing as Mel said and lounging in the bathtub…”
Page 153 (on my kindle)
Later on page 153 (on my kindle)…
“I check my phone beside the bathtub, It’s four minutes to midnight.””
WHY ARE WE GOING BACK IN TIME????!!! I noticed this happened a few times time wise, and like I said its little stuff, but it really does get on my nerves and under my skin 😭
There were some instances with her twin friends where I was like “oh I think the ‘sunshine’ one was meant to say this not the ‘grumpy’ one”, but those happened in the beginning so I think she was still learning the characters.
Overall this book was a NO from me. It was a cringe-fest. Seriously I have not read so many cringey lines/interaction in one book in I don’t even know how long. It was just poorly executed and bad to the point that I could not handle. If this were not an ARC from an author who’s team I am on and want to stay on I would 100000000% would have just DNFed 😭
Update: I was removed from the team
1.5 stars I think? 😭