If you like Austenesque books do give this book a go. Unfortunately, this book wasn't for me,
which was disappointing because I was so excited to read it. I couldn't bring myself to continue reading
after 7 chapters, the more I read the more I disliked the book.
My first impression of Viviana was that she is a whiney slob and maybe a slight alcoholic.
My first Impression of Annie was that she is a flirty teenager throwing herself at Brandon from
the very moment they met. I also got the feeling that Annie was very childish for her age range.
I felt like Jack was kind of painted as Mr. Perfect, I'm not really sure what to think of Brandon
and Gregory other than snobs. It also seems like Viviana puts up with Greg's rudeness
simply because, 1. he is Brandon's friend and 2. he is good-looking, which I didn't feel was right.
In the last half of chapter 4 Viviana is invited to a hotel by Annie, at first Viviana wants to
stay home, but Annie convinces her to go by texting: 'You really should reconsider! Greg wants to
talk...' which he never really talks directly to Viviana beyond business talk more or less. Upon
arrival Annie is the one to answer the door, Viviana finds out that Brandon, Annie, and Greg have been in
the jacuzzi drinking. When Viviana starts to say she doesn't have a swimsuit Annie interrupts and tells
her: "Oh, there's tons of swimsuits in the closet - just go pick one," I cringed. I cringed even more at
Viviana's reaction or rather the lack of a reaction beyond: 'I raised eyebrows and stepped tentatively
toward the walk-in closet'. It bothers me greatly that it is never really questioned why there is a closet
full of women's swimsuits in a hotel room rented by 2 men on a business trip, especially when the
company is a publisher of some sort. I could understand the closet full of swimsuits a little more if they
worked for a fashion company, but even that still sounds cringy to me.
I know this was only 7 chapters into the book, but I did not like the way the characters
were written, or their choices so far. I'm sure the characters will grow throughout the book, but I was not
enjoying it well enough to continue reading. I find when I have that kind of reaction to a book it is best to
put it down and walk away from it. Maybe when the audiobook comes out, I'll try listening to it and see if
I like it better that way.
Again, if you like Austenesque books do give this book a go, don't pass it by because of my thoughts on the book.
Thank you, Alana Highbury, for the chance to read your book, I hope many people love it.