The first book was damn horrible and goes down as one of the worst books I've ever read. There wasn't a shred of reality to any of the reactions to some really horrible events & the storyline was like a bipolar roller coaster ride from making damn snow angels to talking about being gang banged by a bunch of psychos.
Why did I read this crapolla second book, then? After reading the shit and having it end with so many damn unanswered questions, I decided I'd read part 2 since the bs was free on Kindle Unlimited. Yeah, I'm a sick puppy that's apparently a glutton for punishment. And, this was f'ing torture in the land of unicorns and little pink aliens singing Somewhere Over The Rainbow. Yes, seriously!
So, in book one theres an awkward moment with the bro that dies, and it leaves a big unanswered question as to wtf was up with him. Of course, he had a diary (eye roll) & all is answered. Wtf the purpose of this was is beyond me since it's revealed and immediately brushed aside like it was nothing at all. Well, hell, why bother with building the shit up through the storyline IF U PLAN TO DO NOTHING WITH IT!
Same with the big mystery of V's mama. It's built up like it's a damn CIA secret only to get a paragraph in the big reveal & absolutely NO follow up whatsoever. No one would say okay thanks for sharing the secret now I'm going to do nothing, say nothing, feel nothing... Nada... 'Hey let's go bowling'. Again, with the bipolar storyline that swings like a crazed monkey from serious to sex to crazy to mundane. I need a Xanax just writing this shit!
Believability? This seems to be a lost concept with the author! V has a gang of rapist psychos after her in book 1 that she brings to the bro's doorsteps and her former bf Rae reconnects with her and coincidently has a psycho stalker that she brings to their doorsteps. Our traumatized V freaks out over a dude trying to dance with her but doesn't bat an eye at another stalker psycho that could inadvertently cause a threat to her and her kid by Rae being there?!? Really, okay, that's believable! The surprise kid embraces a new mom that happened to be the reason her real mom dies.. Okay, again, so believable! Trust me when I say that nothing about any of the plot points in this book, like it's predecessor, is remotely believable!
Spoiler alert!!!!!•••••••• if that's possible~
If you hated the first book, but are a curious cat, like me, please let me save you the time - the bad guys from book one are in jail. The new psycho dies. The assumption behind the awkward moment in book one is spot on, but since the bro is dead, there's really nothing said or done in response to him loving his bro's girlWhoop pie . Grams big secret is that V's mom has amnesia ( no one knows why, psst) and moved on to start a new family since she didn't remember the one she already had good gawd! V takes this info and does nothing but heads off to go bowling. The rest is a fuck buddy fest turned true love with a surprise 12-year old kid left orphaned for the familyless fuck buddy to become mama to.
Yes, unicorns exist, I WILL win the lottery tomorrow, and spandex should be worn by ALL!