When an EMP hits, Mark must lead his wife from a lawless city to find their missing daughter. With no power or communication, danger is everywhere. Their only Mark’s estranged brother and his secret off-grid homestead.
While the story line had promise, the writing was at best substandard. Several times the same statement was repeated so many times I was tempted to try and count how many. Sometimes it was virtually the exact same sentence multiple times. Unless you can put up with this, other inconsistencies in the story, and numerous editing issues I would not recommend this book to you.
The word choice, spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure seems good. Yet, the overall feel is off. It started out good. Average dude, going by average day. Someone who works in a field that would understand the impact of what’s about to happen. The set up was solid. But every paragraph is momentous . Every decision has the weight of the world . The characters in her monologue tells us that they have grit, and to certainly understand what’s going on, but every decision is almost made in panic. By about 15% of the way through the book , we know nothing about the characters background’s, political leanings, ideology, or view of how the world works. The author may have been trying to keep the neutral to stay out of politics, but ultimately politics shape how people think. Most right wing rednecks , would’ve had a weapon, or at least made one out of a tool because ain’t nobody coming to save you. More progressive , would still lean into something like pepper spray, or self-defense classes, but would also tend to wait for someone to save them. Having people run around like they’re gonna assault their own problems , but keep passing up of your tools, resources, and solutions just doesn’t work. I kept finding myself hoping these characters would get splatted, and then we would shift to the lost child who would turn out to be competent. But I ran out of patience to wait for some kind of useful storyline to develop.
Minor spoilers: they run around the city like their professional marathon runners, but no background of exercise or fitness has mentioned. They get attacked by someone with a gun , beat them off, and don’t take the gun. At one point, they run into a line of national guard. We just got hit by an EMP, there’s no communication to call up the guard, and it’s only been 2 to 3 hours. Where did the guard come from? How did they get armed? How did they get to this location? Why are they at this random location in the city? Why can’t our heroes just walk over four blocks and go around? There is zero chance that the National Guard has enough people to effectively block dozens of city blocks, with alleyways rooftops and interconnecting doorways.
My abilities suspend disbelief eventually just……broke. I love this genre , but this author needs a bit more work on story pacing and character before this story is ready for serious people to read it.
I usually don't write reviews, but the longer I read this book, the worse it got. I actually just skimmed the last 20 pages or so because it was so repetitive and predictable. The character development is awful. The author refers to the homesteaders as a crowd. Then the reader finds out there are only 14 of them including useless wimpy women and children. These two things probably irritated me the most. When the main character, Mark, talks about the place, he talks about how they've worked on this place for years and built it together. He thought his brother was a wack job for starting the place and had just showed up there after the EMP. Awful book.
You could call this a typical apocalypse tale. Unbelievable in parts. Unnecessary repetition. But there was something about it that really turned it into a fast paced page turner. Character development was pretty weak but it wasn’t about each person, it was about survival. One main complaint which is pretty common. Why is a 13 year old girl referred to like she’s 3 or 4. Tiny, small body, little hands, knelt down and put his hand on her shoulder…what? But they all do it! Haha. Still a fun read.
A family escapes chaos, danger all around them as TEOCAWKI happens
The everyman-average guy has to become a warrior to keep his wife & daughter safe after running from the brutality erupting as a result of a deadly EMP attack in their hometown. Reaching a sibling’s preppers’ retreat, a MAG built in deeply rural land, good resources, & strong organization, they stumble upon a murderous group, & must withstand an overwhelming army of barbarous fighters.
No new twists or personalities to Set this one apart. Was the Chevy a 68 or 69? Crashed thru a heavy road block and the headlights worked. Clean language and good morals in the telling of the story. Wife was a wimp. Tried to fire an empty weapon what? No ammo check! Had the wife back in the barn without a weapon hiding in a closet. While others were doing the fighting! No mama bear!
So many inconceivable incidents .. Too many to list but how about having a working post EMP vehicle and not using it when attacked .. or waiting for peppers to arrive and when they do 'bagging' them and roughing them up. Ridiculous! I would have liked to see our hero, a hydro maintenance specialist, use his skills but nada!! Turns out he's a damn good shot though.
Why was the national guard on the street? Mayor, Governor? Nope, no reason at all... Oh, and here in our garage is an old truck... Really? Thanks, but no thanks... Author really has no intention of helping anyone that may really find themselves in an apocalyptic situation...
I listened to this as an audiobook and I think that I preferred it this way than to reading it. The story was intriguing and the scenario believable and not too far-fetched. I wasn't particularly attached to the main character but what happened in their camp was interesting. The story built up to a climactic end I enjoyed the listen.
The story is of Mark and his wife and daughter as the EMP hits their city and they struggle to get out. Mark has a brother who lives as a prepper with others in a community they made. His struggle is to get there and then to stay there safely. It is a heartwarming and exciting both. I enjoyed the stories by this author, so he repeats phrases often.
There comes a time when people come to realize that family is the most important thing. By standing together makes us stronger. This story shows that in times of hardship, most people will fight and kill to save them self and their families. Very action packed and fast pasted
A different look at how society could break down. Mark and Jimmy were decent characters. Hope and Sarah were useless females. The prepper compound seemed well planned out and well stocked. We never know—the world could change like this.
This story could eventually become true. Maybe. Hopefully not. But the survivors in the story did well. Appears life was better for them with a future. Hard work & hope.
I read this book in two days and was sad when it ended,it was a loving,terrifing, scary and thrilling novel..if you haven't read it your missing out on a wonderful book,great characters,l really enjoyed it, well done Mr.Stone !!!
The plot and character development were beyond excellent. At times this book was so exciting that I had to take breaks! But I enjoyed it, am better for having read it, and congratulate the author on a great read.
It seemed kind of thin to me, lacking character development. The same descriptive phrases used several times. Continuity was also confusing. I found myself going back a few pages to try to make sense of it thinking I must have missed something.
Anyone who has to fight for what they need...whether it's there family, housing etc. There are many people that cannot make it without help and our state helps those in need. Before and after the hurricanes!
The characters drew you in I wasn’t sure in beginning but so glad I read on because then I couldn’t put it down. Very realistic of how things can come to happen