DNF at 46%. Unfortunately, this just didn’t work for me. I’m going to apologize here at the start for how long this review is. The amount I have to say probably makes it sound like I thought the book was hot garbage, but I didn’t. If I had to rate it, I’d probably give it 3/5. My brain is just really, really good at identifying things I don’t enjoy in books so I always have lots of nitpicks, which then circle endlessly around in my thoughts unless I exorcise them by writing them down. So, here you go, my list of complaints that looks worse than it really is.
The world Hoang created in this book seemed interesting but most of the details are given to the reader in long infodumps with insufficient context. There are a lot of fantasy races (sirens, fae, demons, vampires, werewolves, maybe others) and at least one major political or cultural group aligned with each race, but you learn almost nothing about the values, goals, or objectives of any of the races or groups aside from the fact that some of them are obsessed with the idea of racial purity. However, although racial purity isn’t the only driver of conflict between many of these races, and some of those other conflicts are apparently relevant to our characters’ backstories and possibly the main plot of this book, the reader is given almost no information about them. Many of the worldbuilding passages feel like reading a textbook instead of a novel, because almost none of the information actually drives the plot by shaping the characters’ thoughts or actions; maybe some of it will be important later but almost none of it is important now, when it’s being delivered to the reader. As a result, I quickly lost track of most of the factions and why they mattered – and I’m an experienced sci-fi and fantasy reader who is used to books where you feel overwhelmed with new names and places at the beginning.
Additionally, other than the various groups/factions the author introduces, the worldbuilding feels very shallow. Cars are called “autos” and instead of smartphones, people have “messengers” that appear to be text-only. Beyond that, there are few hints of how this world differs from our own, and in many important respects, it appears to be the same. Why is that? What does this world actually look like? How has the existence of these various races shaped culture and politics? How does being part of each of these races shape someone’s beliefs or values? What does it mean to be a human in a world populated by beings with supernatural powers and centuries-long lifespans? While I wouldn’t expect to have answers to all these questions at the point where I DNFed, I do expect partial development of some answers, or at the very least, indications that some answers are forthcoming if I continue reading.
These problems were compounded by the fact that seemingly every new piece of information was yet another reason why our main characters are the most badass or special members of their race. This is less of a flaw in the book and more an issue of preferences, but I really don’t enjoy stories where all the main characters start out being super powerful and then just get more powerful as the book continues. And that type of story really doesn’t work for me when all the badassery happens off-page, in the past, and the characters on-page are just normal (or in this case, extraordinarily polite and kind) dudes. If you want to convince me that a character is holding themselves back, then you need to actually show that to me, not just have them think about how important it is to hold back but never actually struggle to do so.
I also had no interest in the romance between the main characters because they are apparently only attracted to each other for physiological reasons, to the point that they have a conversation where they agree that this is what’s happening. Worse, one of the main characters hasn’t experienced sexual desire for 100 years,due to issues caused by siren physiology, and feels it again for the first time with the other main character because the other MC is such a powerful demon that it makes the siren’s body want to respond by fighting, and sex is a siren’s weapon. In other words, his lack of desire is a form of disability, and it is apparently cured because he finally met someone who was physically/supernaturally powerful enough to trigger his fight response. I’m hoping there’s more to the situation that I just didn’t get to, because the part I read felt like a very convoluted form of the “disability cured by magic dick” trope, which doesn’t appeal to me at all. In general, I’m not interested in reading romances that are based mostly or entirely on physical attraction, even if the characters eventually develop feelings after banging.
One of my other major issues is also one of personal preference. I feel like some queer books go out of their way to make all the major characters extremely polite, considerate, and accommodating of each other at all times so that interpersonal conflicts are driven by outside forces that are clearly bad/evil and can be fought against. I understand why people find this appealing, but it doesn’t work for me because it feels so forced and unrealistic. In reality, even when two people have nothing but the best intentions in their interactions with the other, those intentions do not always translate perfectly into action. But in stories like this one, not only does everyone have good intentions, everyone else around them always seems to sense those good intentions, so any fear, anxiety, distrust, and so on is quickly soothed. Our two main characters have many reasons to distrust each other, and their relative power levels (supernaturally) are apparently putting their bodies into fight or flight mode (or whatever), yet I felt absolutely no tension between them because they just somehow knew the other was trustworthy and immediately wanted to get along. Similarly, something happens between one of the MCs and a side character that should have made the MC mistrustful, upset, or scared, but he had almost no reaction (at least, not that I got to) because the side character is a Good Guy, I guess. Why should I care about this development if the MC doesn’t?
Finally, I found this book sorely lacking in plot. At the point where I DNFed, the two main characters had done almost nothing. They interviewed one witness and right before I DNFed, they were affected by something important happening to one of the side characters. Otherwise, they sat around talking or thinking about their sad backstories, each other, or some of the background worldbuilding info. The main reason I DNFed is because once I put this book down, there was nothing to pull me back in. The romance was just “our badassery makes us want to fuck” and the main plot of “we’re investigating some werewolf racists for vague and convoluted reasons” kept getting derailed by side character POVs and other problems. I just don’t care how either of those things winds up getting resolved.