I love supporting indie horror authors, so I’m sad to rate this so low, but this novel just didn’t do it for me.
There were numerous spelling, grammar, and continuity errors, but I tend to be more lenient about that for indie authors because they usually don’t have a big editing team behind them. But there were other issues I just couldn’t ignore.
Alesci and Olivia had zero chemistry, and their love story was completely rushed. I would have liked to have seen the tension as they’re falling in love knowing Olivia’s already married and the push and pull as they deal with that. I wasn’t even sure why they were so obsessed with each other - Alesci continued to say it’s because she’s a brilliant student and believes what he believes, but that’s no basis for an epic love story.
I believe when you’re reading a novel, you shouldn’t have to ask Google to clarify what something is - it should be clear in the text. I had to research tantra because I wasn’t clear on what it was and the purpose it played in the story. That being said, I’m still not sure why it was included here and what the point was.
I ended up skimming large sections of this because there was so much in here that felt like filler and had no bearing on the plot. It’s not even clear after finishing this novel what the plot was. I know what the summary on the back said, but i didn’t get any of that from the book. The summary states Alesci and Olivia are trying to help humanity, but I got none of that - instead I saw them ruining others’ lives due to their own foibles and jealousy.
This book just felt very messy, and it seemed like the author lost the plot along the way. In my opinion, this would have worked better as a short story.
Thank you to the author, Tim Burke, for giving me a copy of this book to review!