🎧🎧AUDIOBOOK REVIEW🎧🎧
It
pains
me to type this, but Defied did not meet the expectation that Sworn set up for it. Sworn was all about building the story to something, that something being the events in Defied, but it missed the mark in my opinion, and it was a huge disappointment for me. AND I HATE THAT IT WAS!!
There is more than just Lincoln & Avery to keep track of with this story. Along with their personal journey, there’s their individual journeys. That being said, in my opinion, there are a few other “main” characters we as readers have to get acquainted with as the story builds. My interpretation on the storyline puts the romance of Avery & Lincoln second to that of the “suspense/mystery” behind Avery & Lincoln both. I cannot tell you how long it has taken me to come up with that wording! LOL AND, because it took me forever and a day to even figure out how to word what I just did, and since this story has been out in the world for enough time, I’m not going to worry about spoiling anything by just saying what needs to be said moving forward!
✔️ Someone please explain to me the point of the “gunpoint kidnapping” that gave us the cliffhanger to Sworn? Wait, no, I get it, we got a lot of information from it and what shenanigans lay ahead, but the whole scene was so badly executed. You take 2 chapters were Lincoln is beaten and intimidated just to have Lincoln basically turn the tables at a snap and while a gun is trained on him, he overcomes everyone by just speaking???????? Was there no other way? Because as a reader, I gotta tell ya, dramatics for dramatics’ sake is the quickest way to ensure a story will not be finished. And this story came really close. *shrug*
✔️ If I have to download the ebook while listening to the audiobook because the author keeps going back and forth from first name to last name with key characters, my listening experience is not going to be that great. Because this happened constantly, I couldn’t be in the story like I should have been. This leg of the duet was all about solving the “mystery” and “corruption” in the storyline of Lincoln & Avery. Their relationship was established in Sworn as far as I was concerned. Sure, it still needed to be fleshed out, but again, it wasn’t what drove this leg of the story. At least, that’s my opinion and interpretation. So, who are these key players? Jay Foley (Mayor of New Orleans / Biological father to Lincoln / Stepfather to Avery), Joshua Hampton (President of Pershing University and the man responsible for the cliffhanger in Sworn and a bunch of other shenanigans), and last but not least we have Jason Ambideaux (Warlord of the underbelly of New Orleans, maybe?? I don’t really know what to call him lol). All three are key characters surrounding this storyline and all three were referred by first or last or both names at intermittent times throughout the story. Also, not to add to this discombobulation, but they were also referred to as their “roles” throughout the story at intermittent times. LISTEN, when you have a “who done it” like this one, please just refer to each character the same way and maybe don’t name three key players Jay, Jason & Joshua. Was there no other letter in the alphabet to use? All three were all up in this story and I just was blinking like a lunatic.
On a more positive note, if I overlook those two issues, and by overlook, I mean pretend they were written differently, this story is a really great romantic journey with a huge side of suspense, all cloaked in an air destiny and fate. I like the way the author connected all the characters with “seven degrees of separation” and connected all the different plot-points in a tangled web within those degrees. It was fascinating but also hard to follow because of the reasons I already gave. I’m not sure that I would have had as much difficulty if I’d have been reading rather than listening to this leg of the story. But I wasn’t so it is what it is.
🎧NARRATION ⇒ Stella Hunter & JF Hunter performed an outstanding duet narration from the very beginning. I mentioned this in my review of Sworn, but it bares repeating.
A duet narration is no easy feat and these two put on a performance that was flawless. I have no idea if they narrated in one studio or separate, and I can tell you that not being able to notice that is high praise in my opinion.