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Omega Lost
I had a dream life as an omega. My pack was perfect and I was happy.
Until they found their scent match.
There was no room for an unwanted omega and they sent me to the reassignment center where they thought I'd quickly find a new pack. That's not what happened.
Rejected omegas don't deserve a good pack. They either get the low-class packs that don't have prestige, or they go to the heat dens to spend their lives on their backs.
After nine months in the center and heat dens, I'll take any pack, even if they have a reputation for being outside the law. But while they think I'm their scent match, I'll never give my heart away again.
Omega Lost is a standalone dark omegaverse book that contains adult themes and is suitable for 18+. It has a HEA with multiple love interests.
Until they found their scent match.
There was no room for an unwanted omega and they sent me to the reassignment center where they thought I'd quickly find a new pack. That's not what happened.
Rejected omegas don't deserve a good pack. They either get the low-class packs that don't have prestige, or they go to the heat dens to spend their lives on their backs.
After nine months in the center and heat dens, I'll take any pack, even if they have a reputation for being outside the law. But while they think I'm their scent match, I'll never give my heart away again.
Omega Lost is a standalone dark omegaverse book that contains adult themes and is suitable for 18+. It has a HEA with multiple love interests.
257 pages, Paperback
Published November 20, 2024
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August 10, 2026
This one starts out almost exactly the same as Omega Scorned (OS) except Melody’s original pack actually liked her. Melody bonded with Jack and his pack (Callum, Lee, Dan) 3 years prior. They grew up together and have a good relationship (they love her and she has a nest) when they take her out and meet Amy, their scent match. Just like OS, the guys are instantly OBSESSED and move Amy in and she quickly takes over pushing Melody out.
Like the other books she’s sent to the reassignment center where she’s abused, sent to the heat dens for her heats where the alphas are rough and manhandle her, and put through “training”. She decides to try a pack and is chosen by the Aguilar Pack and that’s where things start to go off the rails.
Because Angel, Zeke, Micah, Max, Tiago and beta Ari (later renamed to Ali) are Melody’s scent matches, but again just like OS the scent match OBSESSED lurved up vibes only works with the OW because Melody isn’t feeling shit. (and Zeke’s not feeling the love either) Actually, she’s feeling bitter and angry, but rather than directing that at the assholes that screwed her over and celebrating her soulmates… she’s not having it. Zeke’s an asshole but honestly, he was kinda matching her energy.
This made for such a BORING read because nothing was happening. No chemistry is building, no forward movement is moving, nothing was happening except Melody up in her feels of being rejecting because her alphas dumped her for a scent match so she couldn’t risk it again… you know… with her scent matches.
THEN in the laziest plot device for a third act breakup ever the author had Melody make the stupidest most illogical decision that ruined what little I had left and I just couldn't get past it.
Bottom Line- This started out pretty good. The rejection might’ve been the best, but it fell apart pretty quickly after that. There were way too many H’s to keep track of. The writing is dry and flat; I don’t pick up on any of the typical ai-isms but there isn’t any personality to these stories. The characters have no depth, there’s no chemistry… I leave them somewhat entertained but empty.
Like the other books she’s sent to the reassignment center where she’s abused, sent to the heat dens for her heats where the alphas are rough and manhandle her, and put through “training”. She decides to try a pack and is chosen by the Aguilar Pack and that’s where things start to go off the rails.
Because Angel, Zeke, Micah, Max, Tiago and beta Ari (later renamed to Ali) are Melody’s scent matches, but again just like OS the scent match OBSESSED lurved up vibes only works with the OW because Melody isn’t feeling shit. (and Zeke’s not feeling the love either) Actually, she’s feeling bitter and angry, but rather than directing that at the assholes that screwed her over and celebrating her soulmates… she’s not having it. Zeke’s an asshole but honestly, he was kinda matching her energy.
This made for such a BORING read because nothing was happening. No chemistry is building, no forward movement is moving, nothing was happening except Melody up in her feels of being rejecting because her alphas dumped her for a scent match so she couldn’t risk it again… you know… with her scent matches.
THEN in the laziest plot device for a third act breakup ever the author had Melody make the stupidest most illogical decision that ruined what little I had left and I just couldn't get past it.
Bottom Line- This started out pretty good. The rejection might’ve been the best, but it fell apart pretty quickly after that. There were way too many H’s to keep track of. The writing is dry and flat; I don’t pick up on any of the typical ai-isms but there isn’t any personality to these stories. The characters have no depth, there’s no chemistry… I leave them somewhat entertained but empty.
November 25, 2024
Three stars for the angst in the beginning. I cried a few times!
One star for the ridiculous h with selective hearing who would rather run to one of the places that was a source of trauma instead of just talking to her freaking mates.
I was kind of annoyed that the scent matched mate bond didn’t seem to be as all encompassing for the h and her mates as it was for her previous pack. I wanted to see that same passion but I guess her alphas are strong enough to “fight” it until she’s ready. Gah.
This book is exactly why i can’t with traumatized and jaded hs
Overall: 2.5
One star for the ridiculous h with selective hearing who would rather run to one of the places that was a source of trauma instead of just talking to her freaking mates.
I was kind of annoyed that the scent matched mate bond didn’t seem to be as all encompassing for the h and her mates as it was for her previous pack. I wanted to see that same passion but I guess her alphas are strong enough to “fight” it until she’s ready. Gah.
This book is exactly why i can’t with traumatized and jaded hs
Overall: 2.5
November 21, 2024
This actually started out really good and I was really enjoying the story. It moved quickly, and things obviously aren't drawn out as it's more of a short novella, but I was really enjoying the story, and it was on the way to being a 4-5⭐️ read!
The ending kinda ruined it for me though. Her running back to the heat dens and actually being there for three weeks? Boo. And then she decides to go back at the drop of a hat? Like barely any convincing or convo. And then Zeke's reasoning, it was just all kinda sloppy and gave me an ick and it made the story just fall off for me.
The ending kinda ruined it for me though. Her running back to the heat dens and actually being there for three weeks? Boo. And then she decides to go back at the drop of a hat? Like barely any convincing or convo. And then Zeke's reasoning, it was just all kinda sloppy and gave me an ick and it made the story just fall off for me.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 26, 2024
The premise was good, the execution... not so much. Idk it felt kinda bland and empty. The story moved pretty fast, which isn't a bad thing, but there was no depth to the characters or their relationships. Also the unnecessary third act breakup and its really quick and strange resolution? Nah
November 20, 2024
Bonded omega gets ousted from her bonded pack by a scent match and then experiences TRAUMA.
Overall reco: Overall, it was a read, not amazing and not so bad that I needed to lambast and pick apart every plot hole and issue. I picked it up because I saw a blurp on tiktok that made my heart hurt and was in the mood for some pain. It delivered pretty well on that, I was writhing right along with the FMC in the first whole section of the book. At under 200 pages it felt like a good length and an interesting read, nothing to rush off to write about but also not disappointing.
Plot: 2/5
Spice: 3/5
Characters: 2/5
(The Good)
If you need a short little trauma book, this is pretty great. I really felt for Melody during the low parts of her story. It was easy to hate her first pack, easy to love her second. I was made at the world for Melody, which is kind of the point and overall I needed something to stab at my heart and this did it.
(The Bad)
It was short, and this moved quickly. Which isn't really that bad per say, but we still managed to fit in a which is frustrating. It felt like there were no consequences for anything in the world, except for Melody and the other omegas. Which is guess was kind of the point I guess. The spice felt a little bland? My spice meter is kind of broken and this was probably more of a 2.5, but with multiple men I couldn't drop it lower. The erotica felt on par with the story, "OK"
Overall reco: Overall, it was a read, not amazing and not so bad that I needed to lambast and pick apart every plot hole and issue. I picked it up because I saw a blurp on tiktok that made my heart hurt and was in the mood for some pain. It delivered pretty well on that, I was writhing right along with the FMC in the first whole section of the book. At under 200 pages it felt like a good length and an interesting read, nothing to rush off to write about but also not disappointing.
Plot: 2/5
Spice: 3/5
Characters: 2/5
(The Good)
If you need a short little trauma book, this is pretty great. I really felt for Melody during the low parts of her story. It was easy to hate her first pack, easy to love her second. I was made at the world for Melody, which is kind of the point and overall I needed something to stab at my heart and this did it.
(The Bad)
It was short, and this moved quickly. Which isn't really that bad per say, but we still managed to fit in a which is frustrating. It felt like there were no consequences for anything in the world, except for Melody and the other omegas. Which is guess was kind of the point I guess. The spice felt a little bland? My spice meter is kind of broken and this was probably more of a 2.5, but with multiple men I couldn't drop it lower. The erotica felt on par with the story, "OK"
February 14, 2025
The start of the book had me a little teary with all the angst.
It was predictable but an easy read with a happy ending.
It was predictable but an easy read with a happy ending.
February 10, 2025
review omega lost
Tropes:
standalone HEA
omega verse
alpha males
why choose
rejected mate
When I saw a tiktok for this book I immidealty knew I had to read this, it sounded SO good and it did not dissapoint me.
This book is about Melody, who at the start of the book is happily living with her chosen pack. But then the unthinkable happens, when they are out they met their scent mate. Her pack says they don't want to lose her and they will make it work and keep both mates. But goes brutally wrong when both mates get their heat at the same time and chose their scent mate over her. She is sent to a reassignment center, where she after nine awfull long months decides to get with another pack. Her new pack tries to help her and show her how much she will be cared for, but Melody struggles with abandonment issues, that this pack to will leave her but the only difference is that this pack is her scent match and really want to make this work. Will Melody let them in and take care of her or is she not able to let go off her past and lose what she really wants and deserves?.
I really loved this book, I saw lots of reviews that did not really like the story and I can she why some people might not like some parts of the story, but overall I just really enjoyed it!. Seeing Melody be cared for after what her other pack did just really warmed my hard, especially after the start of the book where I cried my eyes out. Her new pack was so sweet and caring!.
If you love the omegaverse and an angsy love romance than this book is definitely something you should give a try!.
Tropes:
standalone HEA
omega verse
alpha males
why choose
rejected mate
When I saw a tiktok for this book I immidealty knew I had to read this, it sounded SO good and it did not dissapoint me.
This book is about Melody, who at the start of the book is happily living with her chosen pack. But then the unthinkable happens, when they are out they met their scent mate. Her pack says they don't want to lose her and they will make it work and keep both mates. But goes brutally wrong when both mates get their heat at the same time and chose their scent mate over her. She is sent to a reassignment center, where she after nine awfull long months decides to get with another pack. Her new pack tries to help her and show her how much she will be cared for, but Melody struggles with abandonment issues, that this pack to will leave her but the only difference is that this pack is her scent match and really want to make this work. Will Melody let them in and take care of her or is she not able to let go off her past and lose what she really wants and deserves?.
I really loved this book, I saw lots of reviews that did not really like the story and I can she why some people might not like some parts of the story, but overall I just really enjoyed it!. Seeing Melody be cared for after what her other pack did just really warmed my hard, especially after the start of the book where I cried my eyes out. Her new pack was so sweet and caring!.
If you love the omegaverse and an angsy love romance than this book is definitely something you should give a try!.
September 18, 2025
what???
This book started fairly decent but quickly turned into almost a cliff notes book? It’s like skimming a story to see what’s going on but that’s ACTUALLY the story. No backstory on the characters (except for telling you that the FMC and MMC were childhood friends), no description of the pack members (except that the second pack had ink) and hardly any world building (seriously, the redesignation center and heat dens are the only options for rejected omegas?) and the last 1/4 of the book just made my head hurt.
*spoilers beyond here*
You’re telling me that after being traumatized at a heat den she’s going to voluntarily go back to one? And that the alphas she left are just going to show up and she’s going with them after a month of being there? Then “hey let’s have a meeting I want you to bite me”??? SERIOUSLY??? Wish I hadn’t even read this book. What a waste of reading time.
This book started fairly decent but quickly turned into almost a cliff notes book? It’s like skimming a story to see what’s going on but that’s ACTUALLY the story. No backstory on the characters (except for telling you that the FMC and MMC were childhood friends), no description of the pack members (except that the second pack had ink) and hardly any world building (seriously, the redesignation center and heat dens are the only options for rejected omegas?) and the last 1/4 of the book just made my head hurt.
*spoilers beyond here*
You’re telling me that after being traumatized at a heat den she’s going to voluntarily go back to one? And that the alphas she left are just going to show up and she’s going with them after a month of being there? Then “hey let’s have a meeting I want you to bite me”??? SERIOUSLY??? Wish I hadn’t even read this book. What a waste of reading time.
Did Not Finish
October 14, 2025Read this cause I was expecting a poorer or blue collar pack which is underrepresented in omegaverse, but the alphas are rich with tattoos like all the others. But they're also criminals in some vague but glamorous way and that's what makes them second class.
Zeke was ultra gross with his insistence that Melody's main purpose as an omega in the pack is to be a hole to fuck, and this stance is only kinda challenged by the pack lead Angel. Melody agrees with him! DNFing cause I don't care about or like any of the characters.
Zeke was ultra gross with his insistence that Melody's main purpose as an omega in the pack is to be a hole to fuck, and this stance is only kinda challenged by the pack lead Angel. Melody agrees with him! DNFing cause I don't care about or like any of the characters.
November 26, 2024
Went in blind.Loved the first part of the book but after she left her pack the plot didn't make sense anymore. Skip read after the 50/mark because it was porn and nothing else 🫤
November 1, 2025
✏️Omega Lost by C. T. Rhames🦋
This was super fast paced, dropped you in straight at the beginning which was exactly what I was looking for. This was a whole rollercoaster of feelings and I cannot believe they did that to the FMC!!
It starts out with our FMC being introduced, she is an omega (perfect one) and is bonded to a pack that one of the members (Jack) is her childhood friends but when they are out one night they find their scent match and it evolves from there (no spoilers here).
Our FMC battles with mental health from the old pack and her time at the “reconditioning” institution which I would like some words with who runs that 🤣
This was honestly just a fun time and I really enjoyed it!
Tropes:
Omegaverse
Reverse Harem
Scent Matches
Trauma
Institution
Rating:
⭐⭐⭐.5/out of 5
🌶️🌶️🌶️/out of 5
This was super fast paced, dropped you in straight at the beginning which was exactly what I was looking for. This was a whole rollercoaster of feelings and I cannot believe they did that to the FMC!!
It starts out with our FMC being introduced, she is an omega (perfect one) and is bonded to a pack that one of the members (Jack) is her childhood friends but when they are out one night they find their scent match and it evolves from there (no spoilers here).
Our FMC battles with mental health from the old pack and her time at the “reconditioning” institution which I would like some words with who runs that 🤣
This was honestly just a fun time and I really enjoyed it!
Tropes:
Omegaverse
Reverse Harem
Scent Matches
Trauma
Institution
Rating:
⭐⭐⭐.5/out of 5
🌶️🌶️🌶️/out of 5
January 28, 2025
Angst = h is rejected, brutally by her pack when the pack finds their "scent" match. h's life spirals down from there and it is tragic. h gets a new pack assigned to her. the pack is considered lower class due to some of the members having a criminal past and the h is considered a substandard omega since she had been rejected.
Grovel = due to a misunderstanding, the h believed that one of her new pack tried to give her back to her old pack. the old pack's "scent" mate ran off for better options leaving the old pack to generously consider allowing the h back into their pack. h refuses and leaves both the old and new pack. New pack has to grovel and explain the true intent for contacting the old pack. They work it out.
Omegaverse = h ends up with 4 Alphas and 1 Beta in her new pack.
The book started so strong with such betrayal by the old pack, but it wraps up really fast with the misunderstanding between the new pack and h. Some missed struggles there that were avoided or just glossed over.
Grovel = due to a misunderstanding, the h believed that one of her new pack tried to give her back to her old pack. the old pack's "scent" mate ran off for better options leaving the old pack to generously consider allowing the h back into their pack. h refuses and leaves both the old and new pack. New pack has to grovel and explain the true intent for contacting the old pack. They work it out.
Omegaverse = h ends up with 4 Alphas and 1 Beta in her new pack.
The book started so strong with such betrayal by the old pack, but it wraps up really fast with the misunderstanding between the new pack and h. Some missed struggles there that were avoided or just glossed over.
November 30, 2024
Short but sweet
I really enjoyed how this story started. I felt gutted reading the pain she was going through. You really felt her anguish through the pages.
When she was matched with her new pack, she was having a hard time feeling a bond. There was too much trauma from her past.
I felt the story was a bit rushed. The author coukd have elaborated on a lot more. I think the rushed ending is what led me to give it the rating I did. It just didn't feel natural.
I really enjoyed how this story started. I felt gutted reading the pain she was going through. You really felt her anguish through the pages.
When she was matched with her new pack, she was having a hard time feeling a bond. There was too much trauma from her past.
I felt the story was a bit rushed. The author coukd have elaborated on a lot more. I think the rushed ending is what led me to give it the rating I did. It just didn't feel natural.
January 7, 2025
I honestly can’t believe how her old pack treated her, even before the found their new omega. Then they had the audacity to want her back only because their other omega left, serves them right. She went through a lot but in the end she found her happiness. I wish there was some mention of how her book did and what it was about.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 19, 2024
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Quick easy read
This book it exactly as it reads if you’ve read ur share of omega verse
A touch childish on the fmc part as I think the reasoning to her being so sheltered
But a good quick read nonetheless
Quick easy read
This book it exactly as it reads if you’ve read ur share of omega verse
A touch childish on the fmc part as I think the reasoning to her being so sheltered
But a good quick read nonetheless
January 2, 2025
★2/5! only way this would’ve been a happy ending is if Jack and his stupid pack died. actually no i want everyone dead. then in another life Melody can be a barrister who writes books on the side.
moral of the story: men suck.
moral of the story: men suck.
February 6, 2025
not great, not terrible
Some parts of the book are good. Character development was sudden, but much needed. Certain parts are so crude I noticed I was cringing while reading.
Some parts of the book are good. Character development was sudden, but much needed. Certain parts are so crude I noticed I was cringing while reading.
November 21, 2024
So good
I could not put it down all of the emotions where up and down loved it all when does the next one come out
I could not put it down all of the emotions where up and down loved it all when does the next one come out
June 4, 2026
The first half of this book…wow. Full of angst. I was listening with tears in my eyes. The story started falling apart a bit when Melody was forced by her pack too go to the reassignment center. No other choice? That didn’t make any sense. I kept wondering why Amy the other Omega could be unbonded and packless working and living on her own, but the only choice Melody had was going to the reassignment center forced into the heat den. Then the story really nosedived when Melody ran away back to the heat dens that had traumatized her.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 23, 2024
Omega Lost is an okay-ish read; it's very easy to read and not very lengthy, but it would work as a bit of a pallette cleanser between more taxing reads.
I feel the plot could have been interesting and holds a lot of potential that just seemed to be second thought to the need of adding some spice into the story. Talking about the spice, there was nothing original in those scenes; perhaps I've just read too many of these types of books, but it was all very basic and could have been copied from any omega-verse book to be honest.
In terms of the plot, it could have been interesting to have more of an in-depth interaction between Melody and the Orion Pack when they came back around, and there could have been some interesting dynamics to explore if we were able to see the two packs interact. I also feel like the prostitution elements were just completely brushed aside, and there was no exploration as to how those experiences influenced Mel's behaviour towards her new pack.
There seemed to be a lot of characters in the new pack who we didn't really get to know and just seemed to be there for the sake of making the second pack larger than the Orion pack. For example, what do we learn about Micah and Max? Other than Micah will take her shopping and make her buy things, and Max had a large penis that Mel wasn't sure she'd be able to handle anal with. There was very little substance given to any of the characters.
The FMC has spent a great deal of time writing a book that she started from scratch because her experiences made her believe she wasn't qualified to speak on the original topic and this seemed to be something she was really proud of. We never actually learn what she wrote her book on - it was briefly mentioned that she may possibly write about her new experinces, but there was nothing definitive - and then she said she was going to publish it, yet a year later and the only update we have is that they've built a pool and she still hasn't learned to swim. I think this takes away a piece of the FMC's character because the only thing she's been doing for herself has been working on this book, and by not providing any updates on that the author is reducing her to the standby peice of meat for when the alphas want her.
It could also do with a round of editing as, like another review mentioned, one of the character's names changed. There were also multiple spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.
I don't think I'd read again, and I'll probably just stick to the tiktok highlights from now on rather than buying the book.
I feel the plot could have been interesting and holds a lot of potential that just seemed to be second thought to the need of adding some spice into the story. Talking about the spice, there was nothing original in those scenes; perhaps I've just read too many of these types of books, but it was all very basic and could have been copied from any omega-verse book to be honest.
In terms of the plot, it could have been interesting to have more of an in-depth interaction between Melody and the Orion Pack when they came back around, and there could have been some interesting dynamics to explore if we were able to see the two packs interact. I also feel like the prostitution elements were just completely brushed aside, and there was no exploration as to how those experiences influenced Mel's behaviour towards her new pack.
There seemed to be a lot of characters in the new pack who we didn't really get to know and just seemed to be there for the sake of making the second pack larger than the Orion pack. For example, what do we learn about Micah and Max? Other than Micah will take her shopping and make her buy things, and Max had a large penis that Mel wasn't sure she'd be able to handle anal with. There was very little substance given to any of the characters.
The FMC has spent a great deal of time writing a book that she started from scratch because her experiences made her believe she wasn't qualified to speak on the original topic and this seemed to be something she was really proud of. We never actually learn what she wrote her book on - it was briefly mentioned that she may possibly write about her new experinces, but there was nothing definitive - and then she said she was going to publish it, yet a year later and the only update we have is that they've built a pool and she still hasn't learned to swim. I think this takes away a piece of the FMC's character because the only thing she's been doing for herself has been working on this book, and by not providing any updates on that the author is reducing her to the standby peice of meat for when the alphas want her.
It could also do with a round of editing as, like another review mentioned, one of the character's names changed. There were also multiple spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.
I don't think I'd read again, and I'll probably just stick to the tiktok highlights from now on rather than buying the book.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 18, 2024
I enjoyed the beginning and it certainly made me feel things when it was intense and based on the FMC trauma but I think that could of been explored more and maybe make the MMCs more caring?
I think it had alot of potential with the story line as it was interesting enough but what zeke kept doing had me and the lack of acknowledgment from the rest of them, that they let those comments sly without a batter of an eyelash was infuriating and didn’t really match up with with what there morals are meant to be aligned with. It would of been more interesting if the author didn’t rush the end and flushed out the characters more and made them more discernible from one another (especially Micah and Max) more one on one time with the FMC I think would of made their personality, mannerisms and quarks shown to the readers as well as the FMC building more on the relationship.
Also what happened to her old pack they show up randomly and we never hear about them again, aren’t they also meant to have shifter mannerisms and get insanely possessive of what’s “theirs”? I feel like the story line could of explored that more as well as her publishing a book especially after the slight time skip, it would of been cool to see it have something to do with her own growth eg her book. No saying I didn’t mind the ending but I think it would of been interesting to follow one of the other story directions she laid down previously in the book.
I think it had alot of potential with the story line as it was interesting enough but what zeke kept doing had me and the lack of acknowledgment from the rest of them, that they let those comments sly without a batter of an eyelash was infuriating and didn’t really match up with with what there morals are meant to be aligned with. It would of been more interesting if the author didn’t rush the end and flushed out the characters more and made them more discernible from one another (especially Micah and Max) more one on one time with the FMC I think would of made their personality, mannerisms and quarks shown to the readers as well as the FMC building more on the relationship.
Also what happened to her old pack they show up randomly and we never hear about them again, aren’t they also meant to have shifter mannerisms and get insanely possessive of what’s “theirs”? I feel like the story line could of explored that more as well as her publishing a book especially after the slight time skip, it would of been cool to see it have something to do with her own growth eg her book. No saying I didn’t mind the ending but I think it would of been interesting to follow one of the other story directions she laid down previously in the book.
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October 23, 2025The f*ck was this?? The fmc sucks - really love when your main character decides to become a prostitute after a night of crying due to the miscommunication trope, not to mention there was no character development? She’s starts as a bland, personality-less lap dog for a bunch of second rate men, and she ends much the same but with 6 guys she barely knows and spends less than half the book with.
I’m upset because the premise was exciting and the blurb made me expect a good spin on the average OV set up but unfortunately this fell so flat it’s all the way in hell, the only interesting part was her getting tortured into becoming “the perfect omega” and yet it was hardly touched on, and barely a word is spoken out about it??
I’m upset because the premise was exciting and the blurb made me expect a good spin on the average OV set up but unfortunately this fell so flat it’s all the way in hell, the only interesting part was her getting tortured into becoming “the perfect omega” and yet it was hardly touched on, and barely a word is spoken out about it??
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 12, 2025
The characters had no fucking depth it was infuriating
May 18, 2025
Omega Lost was about the Omega Melody Dasch, and the Aguilar Pack: Leader Angel, four other alphas named Zeke, Micah, Max, and Tiago, and a beta named Ari, who ran a trucking company. (No ages were given for any of the characters.)
As the story began, Melody had been with her chosen pack for three years when things took a sudden turn against her. Having gotten so caught up in a task on her tablet, Melody forgot to start dinner before her four Alphas arrived home. So they took her out to eat instead. However, as soon as the waitress walked up to take their order, her four guys changed instantly because they had suddenly found their scent mate, and she was immediately replaced with the new girl. Within a week, Amy had moved in with them, and the alphas had forgotten Melody in their newfound euphoria.
With Amy taking over Mel's nest, forcing her to use the office as a bedroom, Mel essentially became a maid in her own home while Amy became the main Omega to the four alphas. Amy wasn't at all cordial to Melody. Just a few days later, after the guys had spent that time rutting and mating with Amy, Mel asked them to take her to town so she could find a job. None of them put up a fuss about that the way they would have if she had still been important to them. But Mel felt she couldn't stand to be left at home alone with Amy while the guys worked. Their callous and insensitive attitude towards her hurt. As she looked for work, she learned she was either not qualified for the position, or the places just did not employ omegas. A month passed with Melody finding nothing and only becoming more and more distanced from the four alphas as they showered all of their attention on Amy.
When Melody mentioned to one of the alphas that it was nearly time for her heat, instead of offering to help her with it, he was upset that they hadn't gotten her started on a suppressant, which floored Mel, crushing her spirit even more. He was telling her they didn't want to mate with her anymore. When her heat hit, Amy went nearly berserk and refused to let them mate with her. Then Amy mated with them, leaving Melody to fend for herself as the painful heat took control of her. Although she screamed for her mates, they were too busy to bother with her. It wasn't for another three days before the guys even remembered her, and only then because they found her collapsed on the floor. She was in such a bad way that they had to call the doctor, who, in the process of learning what had happened, berated the four alphas.
A few days later, the pack decided it was time for Melody to leave. The alphas had chosen their new mate over her and were going to send her to a reassignment camp for rejected omegas. There she would either find a new, low-class pack (these packs were considered lower class due to their history, such as run-ins with the law, and just not being good enough to be worthy of "upper class" status)...or she would be used by men until there’s nothing left of her. That same night, she was taken to the camp. However, once inside, the woman in charge demanded to know where her pack alphas were. Upon calling them, she informed them that they had to be there in person so each alpha could sign the rejection papers. They arrived the next morning, rejected her verbally, then signed the papers. Only one of them stayed behind long enough to question what would happen to her after the rejection took effect. He was informed that she would more than likely end up in the heat dens. Upon hearing that, he was horrified because he had believed she would be instantly set up with another pack.
Two months into her stay at the camp, Melody went into heat and was sent to the heat dens to be taken care of. She was informed that since she had been given a birth control implant, she did not need to fear becoming pregnant during her heat. She endured one alpha after another for the next five days, non-stop, until her heat broke on the fifth day. This continued each time she went into heat.
When she went before the woman in charge of the camp a second time, she was given the option once again of either being released to the heat dens to serve as a rut for the alphas or to accept a new pack. After living through nine months of hell in the dens, she was more than willing to go with any pack that wanted her. The very first pack she was introduced to was the Aguilar Pack, which consisted of the Leader Angel, followed by four other alphas: Zeke, Micah, Max, Tiago, and Ari, the beta. Once they had been introduced to her, they all took in her scent and accepted her. Once they signed the papers for her, she was informed that the reassignment center would check in on her in six months to make certain everything was going well. She then left with her new pack mates.
During dinner, she was shocked to learn from Angel that when the pack had received her scent card along with the packet containing her information, they had scent-matched with her. Melody was sceptical about their matching, after having been discarded by her former packmates. Secretly, she didn't WANT to scent-match with them because, from her way of thinking, that would only complicate the situation. She just wanted to let them rut her and be done with it.
As time passed, Mel struggled with doubts about the six guys actually keeping her as their omega. Her old pack had treated her in such a horrible manner that it left a ton of self-doubt and suspicion that was hard to overcome. However, her new pack was open and honest with her, and she returned that trust by slowly beginning to accept everything.
Although this book had angst, drama, push/pull, contention, spicy scenes, and the ever-present emotional rollercoaster that a normal romance novel would have, it was more about a woman learning how to deal with the trauma of rejection and overcoming a lifestyle she was not meant for (the heat dens). No humor was offered to alleviate how depressing the entire story was. It just went from one trauma to another for the FMC without so much as a moment of relief. In addition to that, there wasn't much background story written about any of the characters, whether they were the main pack, the FMC, or the old pack. As previously stated, it was all about learning/healing from the trauma of rejection. The romance between the FMC and the rest of the pack wasn't the main focus at all, which was disappointing.
The length of the story was drawn out more than it had to be, with the author giving too much emphasis on the heat dens/reassignment camp. As much as it was appreciated that she told what happened to omegas in such places, that could easily have been done via a recap/retelling by the omega to her packmates. Plus, the scene with the first pack could have been handled by the omega rejecting them on the spot and watching them each go through a similar pain that she had endured all those months ago. On top of that, the author missed the opportunity to have the omega's new pack go through the same passion-induced scent matching once they got the omega home (much the same way as the old pack did with their scent match).
The MFC was not quite as fully developed as she should have been, and at times, she acted on impulse, showing the reader just how immature and childish she could be. As for the six main men, there were varying degrees of maturity, but with an all-around level of not quite fully developed for each of them. Perhaps the reader got that impression because the book was only written from the FMC's POV. This made it less enjoyable since the reader wasn't given any insight into the pack's separate thoughts, feelings, or struggles. It would have been better if each pack member had been able to state their POV, as many other authors are wont to do. Without this view, the book was crippled to the point of falling flat on its face.
I gave this book only a three-star status, and that was being generous. There were too many plot twists that the author could (and should) have taken advantage of, but chose not to for whatever reason. I can't say whether or not I will read any future books by this particular author. It's something I will have to give a tremendous amount of consideration to...if I give any at all.
As the story began, Melody had been with her chosen pack for three years when things took a sudden turn against her. Having gotten so caught up in a task on her tablet, Melody forgot to start dinner before her four Alphas arrived home. So they took her out to eat instead. However, as soon as the waitress walked up to take their order, her four guys changed instantly because they had suddenly found their scent mate, and she was immediately replaced with the new girl. Within a week, Amy had moved in with them, and the alphas had forgotten Melody in their newfound euphoria.
With Amy taking over Mel's nest, forcing her to use the office as a bedroom, Mel essentially became a maid in her own home while Amy became the main Omega to the four alphas. Amy wasn't at all cordial to Melody. Just a few days later, after the guys had spent that time rutting and mating with Amy, Mel asked them to take her to town so she could find a job. None of them put up a fuss about that the way they would have if she had still been important to them. But Mel felt she couldn't stand to be left at home alone with Amy while the guys worked. Their callous and insensitive attitude towards her hurt. As she looked for work, she learned she was either not qualified for the position, or the places just did not employ omegas. A month passed with Melody finding nothing and only becoming more and more distanced from the four alphas as they showered all of their attention on Amy.
When Melody mentioned to one of the alphas that it was nearly time for her heat, instead of offering to help her with it, he was upset that they hadn't gotten her started on a suppressant, which floored Mel, crushing her spirit even more. He was telling her they didn't want to mate with her anymore. When her heat hit, Amy went nearly berserk and refused to let them mate with her. Then Amy mated with them, leaving Melody to fend for herself as the painful heat took control of her. Although she screamed for her mates, they were too busy to bother with her. It wasn't for another three days before the guys even remembered her, and only then because they found her collapsed on the floor. She was in such a bad way that they had to call the doctor, who, in the process of learning what had happened, berated the four alphas.
A few days later, the pack decided it was time for Melody to leave. The alphas had chosen their new mate over her and were going to send her to a reassignment camp for rejected omegas. There she would either find a new, low-class pack (these packs were considered lower class due to their history, such as run-ins with the law, and just not being good enough to be worthy of "upper class" status)...or she would be used by men until there’s nothing left of her. That same night, she was taken to the camp. However, once inside, the woman in charge demanded to know where her pack alphas were. Upon calling them, she informed them that they had to be there in person so each alpha could sign the rejection papers. They arrived the next morning, rejected her verbally, then signed the papers. Only one of them stayed behind long enough to question what would happen to her after the rejection took effect. He was informed that she would more than likely end up in the heat dens. Upon hearing that, he was horrified because he had believed she would be instantly set up with another pack.
Two months into her stay at the camp, Melody went into heat and was sent to the heat dens to be taken care of. She was informed that since she had been given a birth control implant, she did not need to fear becoming pregnant during her heat. She endured one alpha after another for the next five days, non-stop, until her heat broke on the fifth day. This continued each time she went into heat.
When she went before the woman in charge of the camp a second time, she was given the option once again of either being released to the heat dens to serve as a rut for the alphas or to accept a new pack. After living through nine months of hell in the dens, she was more than willing to go with any pack that wanted her. The very first pack she was introduced to was the Aguilar Pack, which consisted of the Leader Angel, followed by four other alphas: Zeke, Micah, Max, Tiago, and Ari, the beta. Once they had been introduced to her, they all took in her scent and accepted her. Once they signed the papers for her, she was informed that the reassignment center would check in on her in six months to make certain everything was going well. She then left with her new pack mates.
During dinner, she was shocked to learn from Angel that when the pack had received her scent card along with the packet containing her information, they had scent-matched with her. Melody was sceptical about their matching, after having been discarded by her former packmates. Secretly, she didn't WANT to scent-match with them because, from her way of thinking, that would only complicate the situation. She just wanted to let them rut her and be done with it.
As time passed, Mel struggled with doubts about the six guys actually keeping her as their omega. Her old pack had treated her in such a horrible manner that it left a ton of self-doubt and suspicion that was hard to overcome. However, her new pack was open and honest with her, and she returned that trust by slowly beginning to accept everything.
Although this book had angst, drama, push/pull, contention, spicy scenes, and the ever-present emotional rollercoaster that a normal romance novel would have, it was more about a woman learning how to deal with the trauma of rejection and overcoming a lifestyle she was not meant for (the heat dens). No humor was offered to alleviate how depressing the entire story was. It just went from one trauma to another for the FMC without so much as a moment of relief. In addition to that, there wasn't much background story written about any of the characters, whether they were the main pack, the FMC, or the old pack. As previously stated, it was all about learning/healing from the trauma of rejection. The romance between the FMC and the rest of the pack wasn't the main focus at all, which was disappointing.
The length of the story was drawn out more than it had to be, with the author giving too much emphasis on the heat dens/reassignment camp. As much as it was appreciated that she told what happened to omegas in such places, that could easily have been done via a recap/retelling by the omega to her packmates. Plus, the scene with the first pack could have been handled by the omega rejecting them on the spot and watching them each go through a similar pain that she had endured all those months ago. On top of that, the author missed the opportunity to have the omega's new pack go through the same passion-induced scent matching once they got the omega home (much the same way as the old pack did with their scent match).
The MFC was not quite as fully developed as she should have been, and at times, she acted on impulse, showing the reader just how immature and childish she could be. As for the six main men, there were varying degrees of maturity, but with an all-around level of not quite fully developed for each of them. Perhaps the reader got that impression because the book was only written from the FMC's POV. This made it less enjoyable since the reader wasn't given any insight into the pack's separate thoughts, feelings, or struggles. It would have been better if each pack member had been able to state their POV, as many other authors are wont to do. Without this view, the book was crippled to the point of falling flat on its face.
I gave this book only a three-star status, and that was being generous. There were too many plot twists that the author could (and should) have taken advantage of, but chose not to for whatever reason. I can't say whether or not I will read any future books by this particular author. It's something I will have to give a tremendous amount of consideration to...if I give any at all.
January 25, 2025
This book was bland as hell. In my opinion, there isnt any real substance to the writing or to the characters. I feel like more could have been done with the plot despite it being similar to a lot of omegaverse plots out there but because it was super short the author had no time to really do anything with it.
Spoilers ahead:
The fmc, Melody, is replaced in her original bonded pack when they find their scentmatch and they decide to “return” her to the omega academy where you either get redistributed back out to a “second-rate” pack since being returned or rejected by your original pack makes you also a second rate omega…or you join the heat dens and are whored out to rutting alphas for a low wage. Originally Melody decides she’s going to join the heat dens, she doesnt want to risk her heart again in a pack but after being in the facility for nine months and being forced to go to the heat dens for each of her heats in that time period, she’s willing to chance it with one of the second rate packs to avoid returning. She is immediately picked up by the new pack, they claim they’re her scent matches, and she goes to live with them. I wont bother with mentioning their names because pretty much all of them are the same or just lack any substance. There are a few hiccups along the way, where Melody tries to act like she had with her original pack or behave in a way that is demeaning to omegas due to her trauma from the facility like saying things like “I’m just here for yall to use my body” and we endure a constant back and forth where she’s positive they’re gonna reject her and send her back and the alphas and one beta from the new pack have to reassure her that this is not the case. They help her through her heat and one of the more aggressive alphas kinda pitches a fit that she’s not ready to bond them or let them bite her yet…which causes him to call her old pack to try to set up a meeting with them but they end up showing up to the house when none of the new pack are around, saying they want her back and tell her that that specific alpha called them and she jumps to conclusions of “they dont want me” and she leaves. In reality that alpha, i think his name was Zeke, called her old pack because he had plans for Melody to have a chance for closure and to tell them off and see that the new pack is better but…enter the miscommunication trope….or more like no communication trope. She returns to the heat dens for 3 weeks while the new pack tries to find her by showing up each day hoping she’s in rotation…it takes one of them finding her and talking to her for like 2 seconds before she chooses to go home with them…and then the whole issue is resolved in like a short paragraph where Zeke explains himself, she says she’s sorry she left and then she’s suddenly ready for them to bite her…despite everything she’s just went through. 🙄
Spoilers ahead:
The fmc, Melody, is replaced in her original bonded pack when they find their scentmatch and they decide to “return” her to the omega academy where you either get redistributed back out to a “second-rate” pack since being returned or rejected by your original pack makes you also a second rate omega…or you join the heat dens and are whored out to rutting alphas for a low wage. Originally Melody decides she’s going to join the heat dens, she doesnt want to risk her heart again in a pack but after being in the facility for nine months and being forced to go to the heat dens for each of her heats in that time period, she’s willing to chance it with one of the second rate packs to avoid returning. She is immediately picked up by the new pack, they claim they’re her scent matches, and she goes to live with them. I wont bother with mentioning their names because pretty much all of them are the same or just lack any substance. There are a few hiccups along the way, where Melody tries to act like she had with her original pack or behave in a way that is demeaning to omegas due to her trauma from the facility like saying things like “I’m just here for yall to use my body” and we endure a constant back and forth where she’s positive they’re gonna reject her and send her back and the alphas and one beta from the new pack have to reassure her that this is not the case. They help her through her heat and one of the more aggressive alphas kinda pitches a fit that she’s not ready to bond them or let them bite her yet…which causes him to call her old pack to try to set up a meeting with them but they end up showing up to the house when none of the new pack are around, saying they want her back and tell her that that specific alpha called them and she jumps to conclusions of “they dont want me” and she leaves. In reality that alpha, i think his name was Zeke, called her old pack because he had plans for Melody to have a chance for closure and to tell them off and see that the new pack is better but…enter the miscommunication trope….or more like no communication trope. She returns to the heat dens for 3 weeks while the new pack tries to find her by showing up each day hoping she’s in rotation…it takes one of them finding her and talking to her for like 2 seconds before she chooses to go home with them…and then the whole issue is resolved in like a short paragraph where Zeke explains himself, she says she’s sorry she left and then she’s suddenly ready for them to bite her…despite everything she’s just went through. 🙄
July 13, 2025
The premise of this book could be good. FMC omega in a choice bond relationship. The pack finds their true scent match who drives her out. Rides out her heat alone and is rather forgotten and unloved till they dump her off at a camp to "rehabilitate her" There she finds her scent matches. Who struggle with her inability to love.
The story starts out better then it goes along, It has some good points but just needs to be better fleshed out, more meat...
The story starts out better then it goes along, It has some good points but just needs to be better fleshed out, more meat...
December 24, 2024
Ali hands down was my favourite MMC. He was cute. He was funny. He wasn’t grumpy. His moods just lifted you. Plus, he was the only Beta of the group which made the story line so much cuter.
Tiago was my second favourite. He was so gentle and caring. He was attentive but strict as most alphas are in these novels. He was just a sweet soul.
Angel and Zeke are my close third favourites. Angel was the top alpha and you can see why. He knows how to take care of his pack and he isn’t afraid to either. Zeke made some mistakes but they were made with a completely different outlook in mind. His main mistake being that he called the Omegas old pack with the intention of empowering her but it backfired into betrayal. Nevertheless, we got the happy ending.
Coming in number finally was Micah and Max. These two we didn’t really get to see which is why they are placed so low. We saw them in the spicy scenes but not much more than that. They were still great characters from speculation of their encounters.
Overall, this book was angsty, heartbreaking and most importantly, heartwarming. This book pulled at my heart strings. The Omega really didn’t deserve the ‘heat dens’ that she was sent to after the facility. She deserved all of the love her precious pack refused her when they found their mate. It broke my heart to see her go through her heat alone when the people she had come to trust just let her go like that. Absolutely not. I will not stand for that. I’m beyond glad that she got her proper ceremony of bonding through marriage to six wonderful males. She got her bonds after so much misery from her old ones.
This book is definitely worth a read to get your heart feeling warm and fulfilled.
Tiago was my second favourite. He was so gentle and caring. He was attentive but strict as most alphas are in these novels. He was just a sweet soul.
Angel and Zeke are my close third favourites. Angel was the top alpha and you can see why. He knows how to take care of his pack and he isn’t afraid to either. Zeke made some mistakes but they were made with a completely different outlook in mind. His main mistake being that he called the Omegas old pack with the intention of empowering her but it backfired into betrayal. Nevertheless, we got the happy ending.
Coming in number finally was Micah and Max. These two we didn’t really get to see which is why they are placed so low. We saw them in the spicy scenes but not much more than that. They were still great characters from speculation of their encounters.
Overall, this book was angsty, heartbreaking and most importantly, heartwarming. This book pulled at my heart strings. The Omega really didn’t deserve the ‘heat dens’ that she was sent to after the facility. She deserved all of the love her precious pack refused her when they found their mate. It broke my heart to see her go through her heat alone when the people she had come to trust just let her go like that. Absolutely not. I will not stand for that. I’m beyond glad that she got her proper ceremony of bonding through marriage to six wonderful males. She got her bonds after so much misery from her old ones.
This book is definitely worth a read to get your heart feeling warm and fulfilled.
June 20, 2025
This started off really strong. I was captivated by the story, the emotion and trauma.
But it was too short to get everything into it in order to work. With six guys in the harem, and her joining them and actually talking to them at 60%...doesn’t leave you with any time to get to know them. For the length of this book, I feel like anything more than 4 guys is too much to fit in, even then it's a tight fit.
Seriously, besides Angel's favourite colour being orange, a rose neck tattoo, a peirced peen, Max having a friendly smile, and one of them being hispanic descent, I don't know anything about the guys. I don't even remember all of their names because some of them kind of disappeared into the background.
Also, the fmc decided to write a book about the truth behind what happens when a pack rejects their omega because the world believes it's a good, happy/hopeful place when they're sent to the Omega Reassignment Centre. Instead, the abuse, torture and r*pe they have to endure as they're stripped down to a possession, property of the govenment, not even allowed the clothes off their back.
She finishes the book and says she wants to publish it but we don't get to see that happen. Did she publish it? How did that go? Did it shed much needed light on the ORC? Were there any consequences to what they do?
This is something I would have liked in the 'epilogue' rather than see a pool they have an orgy next to. Or another head given she was so scared during hers with the guys and was triggered more than once because of the trauma she endured at the ORC.
What was written, was really interesting it's just too much was left out to feel like a complete book.
But it was too short to get everything into it in order to work. With six guys in the harem, and her joining them and actually talking to them at 60%...doesn’t leave you with any time to get to know them. For the length of this book, I feel like anything more than 4 guys is too much to fit in, even then it's a tight fit.
Seriously, besides Angel's favourite colour being orange, a rose neck tattoo, a peirced peen, Max having a friendly smile, and one of them being hispanic descent, I don't know anything about the guys. I don't even remember all of their names because some of them kind of disappeared into the background.
Also, the fmc decided to write a book about the truth behind what happens when a pack rejects their omega because the world believes it's a good, happy/hopeful place when they're sent to the Omega Reassignment Centre. Instead, the abuse, torture and r*pe they have to endure as they're stripped down to a possession, property of the govenment, not even allowed the clothes off their back.
She finishes the book and says she wants to publish it but we don't get to see that happen. Did she publish it? How did that go? Did it shed much needed light on the ORC? Were there any consequences to what they do?
This is something I would have liked in the 'epilogue' rather than see a pool they have an orgy next to. Or another head given she was so scared during hers with the guys and was triggered more than once because of the trauma she endured at the ORC.
What was written, was really interesting it's just too much was left out to feel like a complete book.
December 1, 2025
I just finished Omega Lost by C.T. Rhames, and wow… this book pulled me in fast. I devoured it in about three hours, and even though it’s a shorter read, it hits hard in all the right ways.
The story opens with heartbreak the kind that leaves a character scared, scarred, and barely holding herself together. From there, it takes you through her fall into the reassignment center, where she spends six months trying not to lose herself completely. The author did such an amazing job showing how trauma, survival, and identity all crash together. Even the scenes involving the heat dens were handled in a way that added weight to her journey without feeling gratuitous.
This is an Omegaverse romance with strong A/B/O dynamics, and definitely a slow burn with a why-choose (reverse harem) twist. What I loved most is how her new scent-bonded mates aren’t just “hot alphas” they’re rough, tough, complicated, and honestly just as broken in their own ways. Watching her try to accept them and watching them try to be worthy of her was one of my favorite parts of the whole book.
Some things that really stood out to me:
💜 The emotional depth right from the first chapter
💜 A heroine who refuses to stay down, even when she’s crushed
💜 Mates who aren’t perfect, but who want to fight for her
💜 Slow-burn tension that builds beautifully
💜 Dark, atmospheric Omegaverse world-building
If you’re into Omegaverse, why-choose dynamics, slow-burn tension, and emotionally heavy beginnings that turn into something healing and hopeful, this book is such a good pick. It’s one of those stories that sticks with you long after you finish.
Absolutely recommend. 💜📚✨
The story opens with heartbreak the kind that leaves a character scared, scarred, and barely holding herself together. From there, it takes you through her fall into the reassignment center, where she spends six months trying not to lose herself completely. The author did such an amazing job showing how trauma, survival, and identity all crash together. Even the scenes involving the heat dens were handled in a way that added weight to her journey without feeling gratuitous.
This is an Omegaverse romance with strong A/B/O dynamics, and definitely a slow burn with a why-choose (reverse harem) twist. What I loved most is how her new scent-bonded mates aren’t just “hot alphas” they’re rough, tough, complicated, and honestly just as broken in their own ways. Watching her try to accept them and watching them try to be worthy of her was one of my favorite parts of the whole book.
Some things that really stood out to me:
💜 The emotional depth right from the first chapter
💜 A heroine who refuses to stay down, even when she’s crushed
💜 Mates who aren’t perfect, but who want to fight for her
💜 Slow-burn tension that builds beautifully
💜 Dark, atmospheric Omegaverse world-building
If you’re into Omegaverse, why-choose dynamics, slow-burn tension, and emotionally heavy beginnings that turn into something healing and hopeful, this book is such a good pick. It’s one of those stories that sticks with you long after you finish.
Absolutely recommend. 💜📚✨
November 23, 2024
Listen I keep trying to get into omega verse and keep leaving disappointed. Leaving aside that apparently everyone is aware of huge issues like the "heat dens" and the re-training center and reacts in a way that tells us they understand they are cruel and wrong, but somehow still do nothing about it or react for more than a minute, the way they treated the fmc was ridiculous.
I thought, "oh cool, she finds a new pack and they treat her right" but they literally make a joke that she's just there to "service" them right after finding out she's been repeatedly raped. And even if you say that they don't conceptualize it as rape in their world, they've all reacted in a way that shows they know how she's been treated is deplorable. One of them calls her defective when she's no longer soft and cuddly after that. The guys suck, they have no personality, and I honestly couldn't tell you how many there were, that's how interchangeable they were. And my feeling is, if you're going to make bland flat characters, at least make them excellent fantasies, right? They should be perfect men if they don't have personalities of their own, but instead they just seem to be confused why she's traumatized and there to fuck.
I will give this book points for trying to give the fmc a personality beyond being an omega, and seeing her try to discover herself during her recovery, but with only a hundred and sixty something pages, it's underdeveloped.
I thought, "oh cool, she finds a new pack and they treat her right" but they literally make a joke that she's just there to "service" them right after finding out she's been repeatedly raped. And even if you say that they don't conceptualize it as rape in their world, they've all reacted in a way that shows they know how she's been treated is deplorable. One of them calls her defective when she's no longer soft and cuddly after that. The guys suck, they have no personality, and I honestly couldn't tell you how many there were, that's how interchangeable they were. And my feeling is, if you're going to make bland flat characters, at least make them excellent fantasies, right? They should be perfect men if they don't have personalities of their own, but instead they just seem to be confused why she's traumatized and there to fuck.
I will give this book points for trying to give the fmc a personality beyond being an omega, and seeing her try to discover herself during her recovery, but with only a hundred and sixty something pages, it's underdeveloped.
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