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Determined to marry for affection, Elizabeth Bennet rejects her cousin’s proposal, unaware that doing so will throw those she loves most into turmoil. When her decision forces her sister Jane to marry without affection and leaves her dear friend Charlotte Lucas bereft of hope, Elizabeth is ensnared in a tangled web of interference and obligation.

Fitzwilliam Darcy is certain he’s left Hertfordshire and the beguiling, impertinent miss he met there behind, only to find her in Kent when next he visits his aunt. While Miss Elizabeth Bennet may seem indifferent to his presence, wrapped as she is in her own concerns, Darcy finds it impossible to mirror her disregard. But as his love for her comes to the fore, her mire of obligations and hope threatens to keep them apart.

To Marry for Love is a sweet, low-angst Pride and Prejudice Variation where Elizabeth, Jane, and Charlotte find love and happiness in an intricate dance of duty, honor, and second chances.

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Published December 20, 2024

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899 reviews70 followers
December 24, 2024
Is happiness in marriage entirely a matter of chance?

“I will explain everything one day. I promise.” (quote from the book)

I love Ms. Stratton’s novels. She takes our beloved characters and sets them on a path of redemption and transformation that provides second chances, growth and maturity.

In this novel Charlotte Lucas, Jane and Elizabeth Bennet ‘s lives take unexpected and, at times, difficult turns. Elizabeth has refused Mr. Collins’ offer of marriage. Charlotte hopes to gain his favour, and Jane is unfortunately placed in a position where she accepts his offer.

“If I dwell only on the what ifs and the could haves, then I shall never know happiness. Instead, I focus on that which I can change, and on the coming joys.” (quote from the book)

Jane and Elizabeth always wanted to marry for love. But what happens when that possibility is taken from them? What if ‘prudence, practicality, and pragmatism’ and love for their family are what moves them to marry men they do not love? We all know Charlotte’s opinion on the matter, “Happiness in marriage is entirely a matter of chance.” But will she ever find a man willing to pursue her and make her an offer of marriage for more than security and her own home.

“Love is when you never wish to be parted from someone, when you pine for their absence. Love is when a person’s character draws you in, enthralling you in a way that withstands the test of time, the fading of beauty.” (quote from the book)

For me, Jane and Charlotte’s stories were deeply moving and brought me to tears at times. The strength of character that Jane develops was inspiring. Elizabeth needed more time to outgrow her stubbornness…she needed to learn her impressions were not always right. And Charlotte needed to learn her own self-worth.

“Perhaps instead of leaning toward disgust and hate at any provocation, I should simply talk to him.” (quote from the book)

As for the men in their lives, Mr. Collins is as he ever was, and Mr. Darcy does not get his Hunsford moment until later. However, I really liked how he was developed in this story. But what about Mr. Bingley? Well, I highly recommend you read this variation to find out!

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my review
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1,224 reviews59 followers
December 22, 2024
From the difficult choice, can one find love?

Three main female characters, three story lines to travel, three individual, complex heartbreaking tales.

This story takes the reader down a dark road of women needing to make tough decisions, made for love or security, sometimes both. What made it dark for two of the three, was the choice being taken away from them by the actions of others. Not a classic compromise, more like maneuverings and manipulations.

The writing was good and each story is well developed, right until happy ever afters are achieved for 3 loving couples.

This story was so emotionally hard going at times, I wanted to take a break from it, but I couldn't. While the happy ever afters come late in the story, the characters- their struggles, their striving for a good life, despite the odds against it - had me completely invested in what happens for all three of our heroines. I was unable to stop until their happy conclusions.

4.5*

I received a free copy of this book for my honest opinion.
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1,736 reviews134 followers
January 26, 2025
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***

>>Rating: mature teen due to adult issues
>>Angst Level: stressful as our two eldest Bennet sisters crash and burn.
>>Source: This was borrowed from KU [1-17-25] and I volunteered to leave a review: Part of: Timeless Love: Darcy and Lizzy variations (6 books).
>>Trope: [1] NSN Mrs. Bennet: she was horrible [2] A Bennet dies [3] Different marriage for Jane: no spoilers, it was mentioned in the blurb. [4] FMS/MOC: Marriage[s] of convenience

It all hit the fan when Elizabeth refused the marriage proposal from Mr. Collins. Mrs. Bennet was furious and let everyone in the house know it. Mr. Collins spent much time at Lucas Lodge and everyone was expecting a proposal. Charlotte had done everything she could to secure his attention. The Netherfield party departed the area and Caroline sent her poison pen letter announcing they would not return. Elizabeth advised her sister to not lose heart as she was sure Mr. Bingley loved her. Unfortunately, Mr. Collins overheard their nightly conversation and changed his mind. He decided that beauty was preferable to practicality and was a better option for a man in his position. He caught Jane alone and attempted to propose, she was trying to decline when her mother opened the door and Mr. Collins suddenly announced that he and Jane were engaged. Jane’s honor was on the line and there was no way to decline. Elizabeth was horrified; Charlotte and her mother were disappointed, and Jane was resolved that there was no way she could refuse without ruining her family and sisters. And so, a marriage was quickly held in Meryton.

During Elizabeth's visit to Kent, she was found in a similar situation and had to marry Mr. Darcy. This put the kibosh on her romantic dreams. This marriage was hard fought and the outcome was a complete surprise. I did not see it coming. I thank the author for giving Charlotte a fabulous love story of her own. We don’t usually get to see that. Thank you, very much. I enjoyed this different take on our P&P storyline.
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16 reviews
January 9, 2025
There were some issues here that I wouldn't have expected, such as editing and formatting. Regarding the actual story, it was a bit convoluted and overly long. I enjoyed seeing another side to Jane and Charlotte, even Lydia was given a break. I didn't care for the epilogue, which was written more like a family's annual newsletter. I've read other work by this author and she is very talented, indeed!
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588 reviews7 followers
December 18, 2024
This had bits of everything in it. Drama, betrayal, loss, sacrifice, love (that changes for some and stays true for others) and a truly ghastly Mrs Bennet (I don't think that I'm giving anything away). This is told in an alternating POV (3rd person) by Jane, Elizabeth and Charlotte. Both Jane and Charlotte were given much greater depth and a richer inner life than in canon (where they were mostly foils or plot devices).
They all have their world views and views of themselves challenged as events unfold after the Netherfield ball. What they hold to is their care and love of each other even as they at times do not understand each other (and as in canon, Elizabeth does not know herself (as in canon), is more emotional than rational (more so than in canon) and is stubborn, stubborn, stubborn.
Fret not, this is a P&P story, and all works out in the end. Well maybe not so much for Mrs B, but she is truly ghastly and it only doesn't work out well in her own mind because, well, she too is stubborn stubborn stubborn.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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226 reviews6 followers
December 20, 2024
"There are as many forms of love as there are moments in time"

4.5* rounded up

I really admire how authors are able to think up such distinctive plots and write them into captivating stories, and Ms. Stratton is definitely one who has mastered this.

I came to appreciate both Elizabeth's and Jane's characters, and I saw the growth and maturity that both of their marriages brought. I found intriguing, this concept of finding true happiness in marriage through mutual love and respect, whether discovered or present before or after the binding of two individual lives. The contrast between the lives of the two romantics and the pragmatist was compelling.

The correspondence between Darcy and Elizabeth, unveiled and enhanced Darcy's depth, surpassing the one-dimensional perspective from Elizabeth's point of view (the story is told from the perspective of the three central female characters). That, in turn, made him a sympathetic and intriguing character.

I thought the story was an engaging study of what might occur when canon characters' perspectives on what is required for a felicitous marriage are flipped and the resulting consequences.

I read an advanced copy of this book and am leaving this review voluntarily upon purchase of the e-book.
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372 reviews27 followers
December 19, 2024
Review also posted on my blog

https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...

Elizabeth Bennet rejects the proposal of her ridiculous cousin, William Collins, heir to her family's entailed estate, Longbourn.

Mrs Bennet is outraged at her least favourite daughter's refusal to secure a home for her family, when her father dies.

You see, Elizabeth and Jane Bennet have vowed to marry for only the deepest love.

Friend, Charlotte Lucas leads Collins away to give Elizabeth some respite (also hoping Mr Collins might offer for her)

After entertaining Collins for two days, the Lucas family expect an imminent betrothal.

However, Collins discovers information that might allow him to have the beautiful, Jane as his wife.
Charlotte is immediately forgotten.

Circumstances lead Jane to marry a man that she does not love. She does however, marry for the love of her family.

So very early in the book, Jane is married to a fool, Charlotte is even more firmly on the shelf and Elizabeth is distressed and confused.

The ladies' path to security and love is long and sometimes bitter but makes this book thoroughly compelling.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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89 reviews8 followers
August 5, 2025
At first clever Charlotte is the early heroine of this story. We get inside her thoughts and wishes as never before!

She is a romantic in spite of her denials.

And finally someone sees her worth:)

Darcy & Elizabeth:
Charlotte bursts into the room as Darcy finishes his disastrous insulting proposal!
Whispering in Lizzy’s ear “Think”!
Lizzy swoons!

Elizabeth had to marry the last man in the world she would ever consider!

Lizzy is anything but romantic when it comes to Darcy. It takes near the end of the book till she admits she loves him!

Jane’s story is the most complicated and painful. After being abandoned by Bingley she marries the loathsome Collins to save the Bennet estate and her family.

Darcy is stubborn about Jane still thinking she is a fortune hunter!

Well written and very enjoyable!
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2,549 reviews13 followers
December 20, 2024
interesting

A rather interesting and winding journey to happiness in this variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by MJ Stratton. I enjoyed it.
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1,222 reviews12 followers
February 18, 2025
Neatly done

Interesting side path where love is the guiding light. A different set of circumstances have a great impact on the decisions taken. I liked the original characters and the love story of our dear couple is a good part of this story's attraction.
208 reviews
December 31, 2024
3.5 stars

This book is full of contradictions: it’s compelling, yet far too long. It’s well-paced…yet far too long. Ultimately, “far too long” wins.

The story begins with Elizabeth, Jane, and Charlotte on equal footing, and each tale draws me in. Halfway through the book, however, Charlotte’s story is wrapped up neatly (save for a brief appearance at the end). Elizabeth’s and Jane’s tales continue apace, and wrap as they should.

However.

However.

Some things happen that don’t need to happen. The robberies subplot is a needlessly long way of evicting a character. As for Elizabeth, in no universe would she not realize a loved one is sick; should this travesty actually occur, Jane would certainly fill her in, because to not do so is selfish.

The male characters also need some work. Charlotte encounters a man who enjoys telling her she’s a plain spinster, and she just takes it. Jane, meanwhile, can never decide if she could love her husband, or if that ship sailed once he did _____.

Finally, extraneous exposition, often tacked on to the back of a sentence, creeps throughout the book. For example, “Elizabeth examined the lady. She was dressed fashionably and had the same cheerful disposition her nephew possessed. Standing a head over Elizabeth, Mrs. Bingley’s stature did nothing to intimidate. Miss Bingley had often used her superior height in an attempt to make Elizabeth feel small, but this lady did nothing of the sort.” —the insight into height would have been useful hundreds of pages earlier, in a scene featuring Caroline.

Or consider this: “They are, but we can well afford them. Much of Pemberley’s income comes from tenants, but I have diversified our holdings as well through various investments.” Elizabeth nodded. Her uncle often spoke of the changes coming. Tradesmen such as Mr. Bingley were making their fortunes and upsetting the balance of classes. Soon, tenant farmers would leave their fields in droves for more lucrative work.” —None of that is needed .

Is it worth a read? Yes. Is it worth your time? Not all of it.
82 reviews1 follower
December 24, 2024
A really good read

Jane is forced to accept Mr Collins after Lizzy's refusal, the Bingleys' desertion and Caroline's letter. It looks as if Jane is in for a miserable life but she tries to make a go of it. Lizzy and Charlotte visit Hunsford where Mr C is embarrassed due to him raising Charlotte's hopes then proposing to Jane. Two more de Bourghs join the story and Lady de Bourgh is a delight keeping Lady C in her place. I won't give any more information except to say that it's a real romance and I really recommend this book.
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105 reviews2 followers
January 12, 2025
difficult to read

To Marry for Love is a difficult read, not because of any problem with the prose or editing, but because of content!

**Spoilers!!**

Jane married to Mr Collins! And seemingly happy with this!
Jane having a baby with Mr Collins!!
Jane selfishly keeping Lizzy in Kent though she knows she’s robbing her of perhaps her last weeks with her father!
Lizzy married to Mr Darcy not for love!
Charlotte falling for a man who constantly belittles her!
Mrs Bennett nasty to Lizzy throughout!

Sooo many aspects made me uncomfortable as a reader and lover of these characters. Had there not been the promise of true love matches all the way around, I couldn’t have made it past the 45% mark. As it was, I had to force myself forward in the desperate hope that marrying to save your family or put a roof over your head did not count as true love to the author!

I quite liked the additional Lady de Bourgh. She was delightful. I don’t care about her grandson’s back story, though; he needs much better manners, even if he is a foil for Darcy.

**End spoilers**

I’m glad I finished it. It did end well. I’m not going to be reading it again, though. Too much for me!
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155 reviews14 followers
January 27, 2025
Very in-depth book....

Including most of the P and P characters, each of whom have their own stories. I hope MJ Stratton will soon put her collection on audio
146 reviews
December 22, 2024
Not only do ALL of the characters Need antidepressants, but so does the reader to get thru it. Too Angry for me.
1,191 reviews29 followers
March 27, 2025
Kind of melancholy, but good

After the Bingleys and Darcy abandon Netherfield, Elizabeth refuses Mr Collins' marriage proposal. He then catches Jane in a vulnerable moment and tricks her into accepting him. Meanwhile, Mr Collins has jilted Charlotte, who had fully expected a proposal from him. When Elizabeth and Charlotte visit Jane at the Hunsford Parsonage, Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam visit, and eventually the infamous proposal happens to Elizabeth. Before she can refuse Darcy, Charlotte interrupts and makes sure that her friend doesn't make a serious mistake. Elizabeth is compelled to accept Darcy, even though she doesn't like him.

Even though this is an interesting story, it's certainly not a happy one. The three women friends, Jane, Elizabeth, and Charlotte, are all in unhappy situations. If I hadn't read the book summary and been assured that they would have HEA's, I might have given up on it. These women each endured terrible times in different ways. I'm used to more lighthearted JAFF, with more romance, so be prepared for some very serious reading. There is eventually romance for our heroines, but it's a long time in coming.

The book is very well written and well edited. I recommend it for an engaging tale.
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204 reviews16 followers
December 29, 2024
Elizabeth Bennet is determined to only marry for the deepest of love. Therefore she rejects the proposal of her cousin William Collins. But doing so will not only affect her life but also that of her sister Jane and her friend Charlotte. The latter has hopes of gaining the affection of the parson, but the former finally marries him, despite not being in love, to secure the wellbeing of her family after her father's death.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has fled Hertfordshire to forget Elizabeth and his growing feelings for her. But when he sees her again in Kent where she is staying at her sister's home together with her friend Charlotte he decides to act on his feelings and proposes to Elizabeth.
Will she, following the example of her sister, accept the offer of a man who can save her and her family? Or will Jane's marriage of convenience add to her desire to only marry for the deepest of love? And what about the happiness of Jane and Charlotte?

The book was very well written by the author MJ Stratton. Most of the stories I have read written by her have a spotlight on another person rather than Darcy and Elizabeth. This is also the case here as the focus is on Jane, Charlotte and Elizabeth and their path to love or their reasons to marry for love. While reading the book and following the lives of the three ladies you will discover that they are (in the end) all three married for love, even if it may sometimes be another kind of love. One may not, at first, understand their choices but it was well described and therefore one gains an understanding of the reasons behind some particular choices. But do not fear, in the end all our heroines are truly happily married, it only sometimes takes some twists and turns and a little more time. This was all very well described by the author.
At the beginning I had some problems with coming into the story, probably because my mind was screaming no to a marriage between Jane and Mr Collins (in this case I feel a bit like Elizabeth who also struggles to accept this) but the longer I read the more the story drew me in and at some point I was not able to put it down.

I really liked the addition to the de Bourg family, Lady Amelia de Bourg and her grandson Sir Andrew. They were delightful, especially Lady de Bourg who successfully put her daughter-in-law, Lady Catherine, in place. For this I owe her my admiration. I also liked the influence Lady de Bourg has on our heroines and her ability to change their lives for the better. As for Sir Andrew - without telling too much, I’m pleased with the change in his life as well. When you read the book you will understand what I mean.

If you like to read about a determined Bingley you may like the second half of the book. For the first half he is absent because his sisters and Darcy lured him away but when he learns of Jane’s new situation he develops a backbone and finally copes with his sisters. I like this new and determined version of Bingley and therefore the changes in his life at the end of the book are well deserved.

I also really liked the friendship between Elizabeth, Jane and Charlotte and that their fates are more or less entwined. I like the way they care for each other, give each other strength or push each other in situations they think have an favourable outcome for their friend 😉.

My sympathies in the book were definitely with Darcy. He is so in love and finally asks the love of his life to marry him. Not everything is smooth in his relationship with Elizabeth but he is, even if he is sometimes utterly clueless, willing to change what is in his power to make Elizabeth happy. I pitied him so much when he eventually discovers that not all is as he thought. But fortunately everything changes for the better in the end.

The relationship of Darcy and Elizabeth is, for most of the book, not an easy one mostly because Elizabeth is slow to overcome her negative feelings for Darcy and recognise the positive ones. This naturally leads to misunderstanding but fortunately there is nothing really angsty for the readers.

There are no real villains in the story besides Mr Collins and Lady Catherine but they are not needed, the ups and downs of the love live of our heroines is diverting enough.

If you like to follow Jane, Charlotte and Elizabeth on their way to happiness and discover their reasons for marrying for love you should definitely read this excellent book.

I highly recommend it.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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1,334 reviews79 followers
December 20, 2024
Three journeys for three ladies.
In MJ Stratton’s latest multi-trope novel, To Marry for Love, readers consider: “What if Elizabeth had to marry for practicality rather than love?” This thoughtful variation doesn’t just focus on Elizabeth but also on her sister Jane and her friend, Charlotte Lucas, intertwining three journeys into one well-constructed plot.

Jane’s storyline is particularly arresting, as she marries Mr. Collins. He is resentful in temper and is unwavering in his devotion to Lady Catherine. After Elizabeth rejects him, he courts Charlotte, but when he sees an opportunity to marry Jane, he seizes it—Charlotte remains on the shelf. By the time the three ladies reunite at Hunsford at Jane’s invitation, that marriage is a sobering reality. Faced with challenges that test her unexpectedly, she becomes a capable and determined woman who takes charge of her future and her family’s legacy, showing a steady resolve to do what’s right and holding on to what she feels is an improbable hope for a second chance at love. This is a strong Jane—stronger than even she expected.

Elizabeth’s own path to the altar is equally complicated. Through a matchmaking scheme and an ill-timed swoon, Elizabeth ends up in a compromising situation, and it’s assumed she’s accepted Mr. Darcy’s hand. Forced to marry for practical reasons—entirely against her principles—Elizabeth begins her marriage with the uncomfortable knowledge that Darcy loves her, while she does not return his feelings. Watching her struggle with this, and her resistance to a pragmatic marriage, had me frustrated at times, but her loyalty to her loved ones made me sympathetic towards her.

Darcy, on the other hand, is blissfully unaware that Elizabeth doesn’t love him. Had she not been interrupted, she would have rejected his haughty proposal and put him in his place. But without that confrontation, Darcy remains oblivious. Elizabeth’s efforts to make the best of her situation hide her true feelings, keeping him in the dark until circumstances make her fiery temper known and she finally speaks her mind. I appreciated that when this inevitable confrontation happens, Darcy doesn’t withdraw emotionally—he’s determined to work things out, sparing readers unnecessary angst.

Charlotte also gets her moment in the spotlight. At Rosings, she meets Lady Amelia de Bourgh, a sharp, observant character who quickly becomes a favourite. She sure knows how to get under Lady Catherine’s skin, to my utter delight. There’s also Lady de Bourgh’s grandson, Sir Andrew, a confirmed bachelor. Can practical Charlotte overcome her first impression of him, or will she remain on the shelf? I found Charlotte’s journey to be the most charming of the three ladies, although all of them were good and unique in their own way. It’s not often we get to see Charlotte attend a season in town.

All in all, To Marry for Love is a well-written and engaging story of three favourite characters who all find their own versions of happiness—and an illustration of MJ Stratton’s growth as an author. I’m very happy to recommend it.

Kisses only.

Sweet romance.

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.

Note—on how I shelved this book. Although it’s a forced marriage scenario for Elizabeth, it isn’t for Darcy. It’s a marriage of convenience and then second-chance romance for Jane.
470 reviews9 followers
December 27, 2024
There is a lot to love about this variation. It really feels like something that could have happened if Mr. Bennet had been unwell, and the possibility of choice seemed less palatable. But Jane is the sacrificial lamb here, and I actually loved how she handled being the wife of Mr. Collins. But man, Mrs. Bennet is the worst kind of vindictive in this story when her sweet Jane takes on Collins instead of her less deserving second born.

Thus, the second part that is really great about this variation comes into play. Elizabeth won't have a place at Longbourn either way, so when the DHP comes, her hand is also forced. She doesn't love Darcy, and many of their misunderstandings still exist. Because Elizabeth doesn't offer her famous sit down at the proposal, Darcy doesn't change as much as he normally would. But this Darcy is willing to fight for Elizabeth, and his letter is EVERYTHING. It is my favorite variation of the post-Hunsford letter ever.

Charlotte is in the mix, too, thrown over at the last minute by Mr. Collins for Jane, and I really loved her storyline here. She is very instrumental to the Darcy's love story, and she gets her own HEA.

There was so much to love in this very well-paced story with the different paths to HEA. I especially loved Jane in this variation as she finds strength and independence through a terrible ordeal as Mrs. Collins, and I loved the addition of a few new characters that added much to the tale. This is a wonderful new variation!

I received a complimentary copy of the author's story to read and review. All thoughts contained here are my own.
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1,807 reviews13 followers
December 30, 2024
I loved it!

It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is a sweet, low-angst story where Elizabeth, Jane, and Charlotte find love and happiness in an intricate dance of duty, honor, and second chances. Determined to marry for affection, Elizabeth Bennet rejects her cousin’s proposal, unaware that doing so will throw those she loves most into turmoil. When her decision forces her sister Jane to marry without affection and leaves her dear friend Charlotte Lucas bereft of hope, Elizabeth is ensnared in a tangled web of interference and obligation. Fitzwilliam Darcy is certain he’s left Hertfordshire and the beguiling, impertinent miss he met there behind, only to find her in Kent when next he visits his aunt. While Miss Elizabeth Bennet may seem indifferent to his presence, wrapped as she is in her own concerns, Darcy finds it impossible to mirror her disregard; but as his love for her comes to the fore, her mire of obligations and hope threatens to keep them apart. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
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2,688 reviews202 followers
December 25, 2024
As we read this story from three different viewpoints (third person) we find different interpretations on "marrying for love"...specifically for jane. When Bingley returns to London and it seems that he will not return, plus Elizabeth turning down Collins' proposal, Jane accepts when he then proposes to her. She tells Elizabeth she did "marry for love" yet puts off explaining that to her sister.

Charlotte has Collins "courting her" immediately after he is turned down by Elizabeth. Her family is expecting a betrothal. However, she is then dismayed to learn he proposed to and was accepted by Jane.

These characters come together in a visit to Hunsford where we meet two new characters: Lady Amelia de Bourgh and her grandson, Andrew. We also find Collins soon throwing Elizabeth out and refusing to allow jane to even correspond with her.

Elizabeth finds herself accepting a proposal from Darcy. (Read those details for yourself.) But different from canon, she has not come to know him better and it is a slow path to her coming to love him.

There are some surprises in this story. One has to do with Jane's path. And even Charlotte has a twist to her story.

There was no angst in this story for me. Two paths to HEA were no surprises, while another was a sweet twist for that particular lady.
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1,212 reviews
January 9, 2025
Heroines with hidden depths

An exceptionally well written book exploring the marriage decisions of the oldest Bennet sisters and the spinster Charlotte Lucas. This book switches between the POVs of Elizabeth, Jane and Charlotte as they face difficult decisions and disappointments in a time where the only options for a gently born woman are to marry or to trust on the goodness of relations to support them financially. The resolve and mettle of these three young women is tested repeatedly, especially when others interfere in their lives.

The author has clearly taken great care to develop the plot and, more importantly, the characters giving the reader a precious insight into their hearts and minds. The male characters have also been very well written, warts and all. I very much appreciate a book in which the author does not create a "perfect" Darcy.

The only little niggle (Other than the use of that ugly and non-regency word "muss") is the cover. It is pretty but the messy bun hairdo is a no-no and the dress doesn't fit to the body as it should.

This is a well edited book and I heartily recommend it.

5* = “it was amazing” (Goodreads rating)
120 reviews1 follower
January 26, 2025
"To marry for love" is a long, satisfying read. The plot and the writing are good. The plot in particular kept me interested until the end. It is quite original. I liked Jane and Charlotte stories, Elizabeth not so much. I couldn't like her. Her decision to marry Darcy did not sit well with me. The author tried hard to justify it but it failed, in my opinion. You can find the same trope in "Mr Bennet's dutiful daughter" by Joana Starnes but the effect on the reader is completely different. I didn't feel compassion for Elizabeth but a profound dislike for her attitude towards Darcy. She is self serving (her family is already saved by Jane's sacrifice at that time) and takes him for a fool for far too long. I just couldn't believe she defended a convicted and deported thief just to taunt her (devoted) husband. Charlotte, Jane, Bingley and a few original characters are far more interesting. Darcy is meh. I still recommend this variation because once you've accepted that Elizabeth is just another character and one you do not particularly like, you can enjoy the good story. I would have enjoyed more chapters about Charlotte and sir Andrew in the end.
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124 reviews3 followers
December 25, 2024
Much the same as the author’s other works. There are no unbearable excitements, or unfathomable twist and turns in the happening of events, or gigantic drama coming out of nowhere to make one breathless, YET, there are always a sentence here that catches my eye and requires my attention to read it through more than twice, or a conversation that speaks to my mind and expresses something that has been long in my heart but never known was there, or a sentiment that delivered in such a way that melts a part of me.

To marry for love, is only a wishful thinking, a matter of chance, or a goal to achieve.

Can love be found? Can love be imagined? Can love be insisted? Can love be denied? Can love be created? Can love be judged?

Read it. Love it.
325 reviews1 follower
January 6, 2025
Interestingly Written

I believe this is one of the few variations on Pride and Prejudice that has Jane married to Mr Collins. It was well done. No, she didn't love him, but she tried. And she had married for love; love of her mother and sisters.

The slow growth of love for Darcy was so very well written! She was advised to look for the good in him. Every person should follow such advice! How much happier we would be if we did!

Bingley growing into his own was very well done also. Jane required more than a passing fancy if she would be induced to marry a second time. He would prove his worth.

But the best was Darcy himself! He was kind, steadfast, and truly in love! Very swoon worthy!
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9 reviews
November 29, 2025
Outstanding KU ebook. Even at 463 pages, I was impressed and read it in one sitting. Grammar, spelling, plotlines, and variations were excellent.

New characters fit right in and pairings worked out perfectly. The worst villain was barely mentioned and dispatched efficiently. The remaining 3 villians were easily got rid of mischiefs, eventually.

All HEAs were eventually came to fruition. A some had sadness endings, but were handled perfectly.

I highly recommend. In fact, I liked it so much I purchased the KU version to reread again later. I was able to avoid spoilers, thankfully; if I hadn't, this review would have been very lengthy. 😁 Currently it's 99¢ but only for a limited time; no idea for how long.
26 reviews
January 26, 2025
Three Happy Marriages in the End

What a wonderful book! Throughout the book we are privy to Elizabeth’s, Jane’s, and Charlotte’s POV of the various situations they find themselves in including their heartbreaks and joys. Each of these ladies find their HEA but not without some trials and struggles but this only added the nuances of human life to the characters and novel. I don’t want to tell you about the storyline because I think it is best experienced by the reader.
If you love P&P variations like I do, you will love this story from Ms Stratton just like I have. Well done MJ! Please keep writing and giving us such lovely stories to become engrossed in.
336 reviews
December 24, 2024
Lovely

I enjoyed the twist and turns that occurred in this story. ***Spoilers*** Jane marries Collins and seems happy. She works hard to have Collins allow Elizabeth to come visit her.
Elizabeth does not give Darcy the set down, due to Charlotte’s intervention. There is more but I don’t want to give it all away.
I stayed up all night reading this story. While it is not a Darcy and Elizabeth story exclusively, it is wonderfully creative. Usually Elizabeth is stuck with Collins.
I look forward to more novels from this author.
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January 28, 2025
To Marry for Love is another wonderful P&P variation by MJ Stratton! As always, the story is very well written and captivating. Lizzy and Darcy, Jane and Charlotte go through a lot of struggles on the road to happiness, and the romance is sweet and heartwarming. The story is engaging and sweet. Elizabeth and Darcy are great characters and their development is very impressive. I enjoyed the journey they went through to love. It was entertaining and unputdownable!.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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