Swiping Right on My Brother

by Becca Vale

Matching with a super hot guy the first time I get up the courage to put my profile on a hook-up app is more than I hoped for. But I’m eighteen now, and even if I’m too shy to talk to hot guys in person, it’s not talking I hope we’ve matched up for.

I’m ready to finally lose my V-card.

But then the hot top who seemed so into me ghosts me, and I…

I don’t know what I did wrong.

I’ve never been good at hiding how I feel, and since I live with my favorite person in the world now—my big brother, Gray—when he asks me what’s wrong, I don’t even try.

Is it embarrassing to admit to my perfect older brother that a stranger didn’t want me?

Totally.

But if there’s one person I trust with all my secrets, it’s Gray. In fact, I’d trust him with absolutely anything…

Genres: M M Romance, Erotica

ebook

Published November 22, 2024

Reviews

[Leigh Gaskill · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another banger (pun intended) for Becca!

I love the ones where they are already digging each other and one is possessive and one is a total sl*t for the other. Definitely my fave combo so far!!

[Becca Vale]

Looking for taboo gay smut? Find this yummy m/m age gap brocest novella on itch.io and Smashwords!

[TJ · Rating 5 out of 5]

And yes, I just called my own brother “sexy’. I’m a virgin, I’m not blind. - Lane

Warnings: Brother-Brother Incest

1st Person, Dual POV
3rd Act Break Up: No
Slow-burn: No
HEA: Yes
MC sex without other MC(s): No
Spice: 4/5
Angst: 0/5
Fluff: 2.5/5
Structure/Format/Flow: 5/5
Overall: 5/5

Sexual/Intimate Acts Include: First Kiss, Handjobs, Frotting, Frotting, Dom/Sub vibes, Praise Kink, Orgasm control, Blowjobs, Fingering, Rimming, Anal, Bareback, Douching

Main Characters:
Lane: Little brother, Bottom, Cafe worker, Gay, Virgin, Femme, Naive, Innocent
Gray: Big brother, Top, Gay, Possessive, Protective, Alpha, A Damn Filthy Mouth

My Opinion: PHEW. Becca. Oh Becca. What a Queen. Her stories always slap. Here we have brothers with a 10 year gap who come to realize that what they have been looking for was actually each other. A little drama llama with a guy at the cafe and Gray’s ex Tristan but nothing troubling. Everytime I get to the end of Becca’s stories I always find myself going noooo because I just need more from the couples/throuple/etc. As always, this is *F I C T I O N*. That means it's not real. Leave us in peace if it ain’t your flavor.

I will be everything to him, just like he’s everything to me. - Gray


Favorite Quotes:



“You wanted him to be your first, Laney? You really wanted to let some stranger open up your virgin hole and stuff it full of his cock last night? You wanted to give someone else the right to touch your tight little body, suck on those decadent pink nipples of yours, put his hands all over your creamy skin and then bend you over and shove his big dick inside of you and pound that tight little hole of yours until you were dripping with his cum?” - Gray

“Is this what you want? Are you ready to let another man make you come? Do you want me to be the one to have all of your firsts, baby? Every single one?” - Gray

“You’re everything I’ve ever wanted. Not just perfect, but perfect for me.” - Gray

I’ve been horny before. Tons of times. But I’ve never felt so desperate for anything as I am for a taste of his cock right now. - Lane

[M's ☆~HEA~☆ · Rating 3 out of 5]

Older bro takes care of baby bro but thankfully doesn't treat him like a fragile flower. Cute and steamy.

Do I want him like this? Do I want to mount him like an animal and fuck him like a ravaging beast, until his hole is sloppy with my cum and wrecked for all others? Hell fucking yes, I do. But do I also want to feel those pale thighs of his wrapped around my waist while I look into his eyes and make sweet, sweet love to him, taking my time to make his first time as special as it can be? If I’m honest... Not really. I just want to fuck.

[Giulia’s bookshelf · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another 5 stars review cause Becca knocked it out of the park yet again.
This was one of the sweetest, most beautiful stories she wrote and I’m still trying to recover from the sweetness and protectiveness overload I’ve been experiencing while reading.
I need Becca to write stories like this for the rest of her life, please and thank you, never break this promise.

[Rachel Emily · Rating 4 out of 5]

I love when the MCs meet online and don't know they're talking to each other at first, and then one finds out that they are. It's one of my top favorite tropes in a book, thanks to You've Got Mail lol

This was sweet, the MCs were sweet and lovely, and very steamy. Very taboo. Very optimistic and fluffy, not angsty at all!

[Maggie May · Rating 5 out of 5]

I am not a big fan of feisty besties so the first chapter wasn’t great for me, but after that this story hit a lot of notes that I love. Especially recommended for those who like caretaking in their romances.

[Brigette · Rating 4 out of 5]

The dirty talk in this one is great!!!! A little cringey dialogue when the ex is involved but the smut is perfection

[Kim B · Rating 5 out of 5]

Love a good size difference...dominant - total top - older brother (10 years) takes younger twink brother's virginity and takes care of him forever....

[K · Rating 4 out of 5]

ahhhhhhhh!!!! The mouth on Gray is intense! that man has a PhD in dirty talk! 🔥🫠 Good God! and Lane is a sweetheart!

[Loves · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was cute, perhaps too cute for a taboo erotica short, and certainly with way too much anxious inner monologue and telling instead of showing. Also, there's absolutely no way in hell Charlie does not figure out exactly what's going on in about a week top. It's kind of a problem to have such a bad liar trying to hide a romantic relationship with his big brother from a shrewd friend/co-employee.