I received this as an ARC read in exchange for an honest review.
This review will mostly be Hudson hate… You have been warned.
Hudson pissed me off from the jump. His new boss offers him a simple suggestion, and this man immediately throws a tantrum in his head like, “I don’t need him to tell me what to do—that’s between me and my clients.” Okay, baby boy, relax. It’s not that deep.
Then there’s the absolute audacity of hooking up with a woman in her house, then acting like she doesn’t exist the next morning… while still in her house. Yes, one-night stands don’t come with breakfast and conversation, but ignoring her completely until he was basically out the door? Infuriating.
And let’s not forget the reason he got fired from his previous job: sleeping with his boss’s daughter and then ghosting her. In what world did he think that would not have consequences?
Honestly, how old is this man? Because based on both his behaviour and the way his family treats him, I would’ve guessed about fifteen. The way they celebrated him landing his fourth job in just a few months like it was some huge accomplishment? Sir, please.
Oh, and just to really highlight his stellar personality, here’s a gem of a quote:
“I just want to empty my balls and then sleep, and I don’t care how selfish that sounds.”
…What a catch.
Now, Giselle. I actually liked her at first—she was sexy, sarcastic, and had fun energy. But the moment Hudson entered the picture, her insecurity took over, and it was exhausting.
The second she hit me with “You could have had your pick of any of those women tonight. Why are you here?” I mentally checked out.
She also claimed to be proud of her celibacy, but her actions said otherwise. If she was truly confident in her choice, why was she so afraid of Hudson’s reaction? And the way she spiralled when he didn’t text her back? Not sleeping, crying, and completely unraveling—girl, please. You’ve had maybe three full conversations with this man. Let’s not do this.
And speaking of expectations, you can not expect a guy to show up for you and be emotionally supportive when you’ve barely spoken and have almost hooked up once. What exactly did she need support for?
As for the writing itself… it was okay. But instead of progressing the story, the alternating POVs often just repeated entire scenes from the other person’s perspective. I get the appeal of dual POV, but if nothing new is being added, it starts to feel redundant.
Final thoughts? This book had potential, but between an insufferable hero, a heroine who lost her spark, and some pacing issues, it just didn’t work for me.