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🔥Quick Fire Review🔥
Genre/Themes: 🏛️⚔️🧙🏻♂️🔮⌛️📜
Tropes: World-Ending Threats, Countdown to Destruction, Magical Academy, Oblivious to Love, Socially Inferior, Ancient Settings, Secret Heir, Knights, Complex Political Systems, Female Warriors, Supernatural Abilities, Wise Old Mentor, War Between Kingdoms
Positives ✅ : overall good use of multi-POVs, engaging plot aspects, interesting world building
Room for Improvement 🔎 : characterisation somewhat lacking, after-thought romance sub-plot, some slow parts
Rating: 🌕🌕🌕
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Full Review - RISK OF SPOILERS 🛑
While this story had all the elements for something I’d really be in to, and objectively there are good things about this book, I can’t say I thoroughly enjoyed it. I think this was mostly down to the characters and the writing style. Some parts felt like a bit of a drag, and while I’m sure the continuation of the story would be interesting I can’t say I’d rush out to read part two.
Characterisation:
The story follows four POVs. Bethany, a seamstress’ daughter who dreams of becoming a sorcerer called a Diviner, somebody who can teleport through ‘gateways’ across their planet by manipulating the cosmos. Zhuana, a queen of a far southern city who must rule following her father’s death, much to the disappointment of some of the nobles. Julian, the prince of the Eternal City, who is desperate to be named heir to his father but is deeply unpopular following his manslaughter of a noble’s son. And Kendrick, a respected but semi-retired warrior who is deeply involved in maintaining alliances between two legions due to his marriage.
My favourite POV was by far Bethany, but as was the common theme across all of these main characters, I didn’t find her particularly likeable. She is very intelligent, but struggles socially. She is fiercely loyal to her mother, but is also lying to her by secretly working for her father, the leader of the Eternal City. When it comes to him, she is a pushover. Most likely desperate for his validation, especially as he consistently reinforces her feelings of imposter syndrome. While reading her journey through the academy was interesting, she as a character didn’t grab my interest in the same way. Her dialogue was basically the same style as most of the other characters, sometimes stilted and unnatural and full of exposition - again a common theme across the board - and she didn’t have a sense of humour to make me like her. Her ‘romance’ with Xander was a complete afterthought and had no build up whatsoever, adding nothing to the story or developing either of them as characters. Her friendships with Xander and Carina were vague and superficial, and both of them were pretty one-dimensional supporting characters. Her relationship with Charlton was the most heartwarming of the book, with Charlton being a patriarchal figure for her. He was kind, encouraging and gentle. But… that was kind of it. We never learn why Charlton was so drawn to helping Bethany and her mother. Bethany’s mother was very much the same. Kind and warm, but not distinguishable enough for me to feel sad about her declining health or to feel scared about her being in peril.
Zhuana was, again, kinda boring. She is having to lead a whole civilisation to a new life following an attempted siege by a foreign invader, but later learns they are escaping something far bigger than all of them. She has to do this while knowing that one of her advisors, Maren Dresk, who tried to become heir instead of her after her father’s death, is constantly trying to undermine her authority in the hope of a successful coup. Zhuana always starts off trying to avoid violence where she can, but as soon as Dresk starts to manipulate the noble’s opinions and encourage violence she too takes this stance to regain a sense of authority, to make it look like she was the one who came up with these ideas all along. She was supposed to be ‘terrifying’ according to Julian, but again she just came across as a pushover to me.
Julian is another character desperate for the approval of others, but is yet another character wrapped around somebody’s finger. In his case it is his wife, Samara. Samara is by far the most intriguing character in the book, essentially being the mastermind behind all of Julian’s actions and secretly the puppet-master of the imperial court and its legions. She came across as scarier than Zhuana ever did, with her ability to smooth talk her way out of everything. Julian however just came across as impulsive, obsessive and power-hungry. Another unlikeable character.
Kendrick’s POV was the least interesting by a country mile, and I’m not convinced he even needed one. He’s supposed to be the wise, mature, patriarchal figure who is pretty grumpy about having to be involved in any politics. But all he really does is scold his kids, play both sides between his legion the Blacks and his wife’s legion the Blues and organise a festival to bring together all of the eligible knights or warriors in the land. I had to flick through the book again to remember his name, he was that unremarkable.
World-Building:
The world seemed to take a lot of its influence from the Ancient civilisations we know well, such as the Romans, the Egyptians and the Incans. The magical elements of the story, the Diviners, were interesting. I really liked the combination of physics and astronomy, and giving it a magical twist. The Academy was the part I enjoyed the most, but I felt the Diviner tutors and their abilities, the specialties that they taught, weren’t explored very much. The Diviner’s existence is shrouded in secrecy after the gateways were found abandoned by a previous civilisation, who left barely a trace of ever living in the Kingdom. I felt that because Bethany was a drop-out from organised education, and lived amongst the lower classes, we didn’t get to see the lifestyle of people like Xander or Carina who spent their childhoods being prepped for the academy. The magical elements of Zhuana’s people was explored less, namely Alric’s alchemy and his ability to make their warriors feel so little pain that they could continue fighting after being halved at the waist. I’d have enjoyed more of this, especially since Zhuana relies so heavily on Alric and his healing. The darkness and the black, scaled monsters plaguing the southern territories also appears to be a dark magic or supernatural aspect that again wasn’t explained very much in the sense that it wasn’t clear if magic like this has existed before. Is divination the only known magic in the world, or are there other types? The political aspects of the story were again very reminiscent of Rome, especially with the leaders who are essentially imperators with very Roman sounding names, the presence of factions, gladiators and an assembly. The architecture in the city sounded very similar to the forum, too. But I thoroughly enjoyed the fact that surrounding lands were of all different terrains, geographies and cultures to add variety into the world building.
Prose\Plot:
On the whole I thought the plot was engaging, and very clever in how all three POVs intricately linked together. I did find Kendrick’s POV quite boring though, and found myself skim reading it. The author’s prose reminded me of other epic fantasy writers I have read such as Brandon Sanderson or Anthony Ryan, in that there is rich and detailed descriptions for world building but characterisation and dialogue are much weaker. Too often I was told what a character’s personality was like rather than being shown. The parallel with Anthony Ryan was most obvious for me in that certain chapters dragged because of the over-explaining of architecture and settings, in a way that was actually detrimental rather than helpful and made it harder for me to visualise scenes in my head rather than make them more vivid. Overall I think this was a decent fantasy book but not unique enough to leave a lasting impression on me.