Well this book was surely interesting… and unique. To begin with, this book really wasn’t my cup of tea to put it nicely. It was corny, strange, and downright embarrassing. No significant message, theme, or even value that the reader could take away from this book was presented. The part where Marisa loses weight, not for herself, but for a boy, really irritated me. No one, in my opinion, should feel as though they need to change who they are in order for their partner to love them. As a result, I can never bring myself to appreciate a book that promotes this kind of mindset.
I admire the author's effort, but I was unable to read this book because of the exaggerated language. The author's attempt to craft a narrative that would be "different" from other books was so blatantly obvious. Like for example when the author writes “A boy is wearing white socks and I refuse to call him a nerd or anything mean. What’s going on with me?” After a few chapters, the overemphasized portrayal of Rene as a nerd grows really old. But when Rene said, "Everything is hunky-dory," I really lost it.
Don’t even get me started on the slang. Usually I understand the usage of slang, because I can tell the author gave the dialogue a lot of thought before writing it. But, if slang words were water, this book would be drenched with it. Marisa even talked to her mother like, “Nah mom” and said things like “Big boy, do i look like your mama.” It may be viewed as extremely offensive to the spanish, latino, and mexican communities to depict Marisa as having a Hispanic background and making her act in a stereotypical or cliched manner .
This book's writing did not make me feel anything other than annoyance, boredom, and relief when I finally finished it. The ideas of character growth and the characters getting to know one another are absent. Although the author included a tedious number of problems in their lives, they were all incredibly trivial and genuinely unoriginal.
Reading this book I could really tell that a middle aged man or woman had written it, due to the obviously painful rendition of what teenagers are like. The author's belief that teenagers can't even form complete sentences without the use of slang words or that dressing a certain way automatically labels you as a nerd offends me in some ways. Overall, this book accurately depicts the stereotypical teenage girl and nerd that appear in all high school movies. I’d thought that books were a work of art that were relatively superior to movies on many levels, but it's unfortunate to see myself being proven wrong by this book.
(ALSO he’s thirteen and she's about to turn 15 that gives me such an ick. )