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304 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 28, 2008
Kebar said,This creates a fast flowing and frank narrative. Descriptions are minimalist and details are rarely given unless essential to the plot. Though unusual, Bruen uses this style well, and it comes across as very natural for the gruff, no-nonsense personalities of the characters.
“You wanna stop doing that, sir?”
He didn’t.
Lonnie thought,Though the constant use of the dialogue tag “said” keeps us on track with which character we’re following and is consistent throughout, there were a number of times when not only could the tag have been omitted, it would have read much better if Bruen had done so. Take the following section, in which I have struck-through the unnecessary tag:
“Oh sweet f***.”
Kebar smiled, said,
“Be seeing you.”’
“Would you like to visit?”Without the “I said,” the contrast between Shea thinking “f*** no” (which is presented as narration since his chapters are in the first person) and his answering “yes” is much more striking.
F***… no.I said,
“Yes.”
Much as I loved Nora’s neck, and Jesus, I did, somewhere in me, I thought… no… not her, she might be my salvation.This doesn’t tell us much about what is to come other than to give a heads up that 1) some major event is coming, and 2) the narration is being presented from some time distant to that event. I always enjoy picking up these little hints as they come along, and Bruen does a good job of giving us bits of information without overdoing it.
She wasn’t.