Milkmaid for my Bully

by Jade Swallow

Diana
Darren King is my bully—a silver-eyed devil with raven hair who has made my high school life hell. I'm all ready to graduate in two months, and then, I'm getting far, far away from this town.
But everything changes when I accidentally take my mom's pills and start lactating. My bully finds me in the hallway, my aching, creamy mounds full of milk, and he can't resist anymore. Things get wet and creamy, and whatever thin thread of control Darren was holding onto is gone. He wants me and he'll do anything to have me.
When I find out his secret one night at a party, my feelings begin to change. Soon, I'm letting him take me unprotected all over school, draining my milky mounds and giving me pleasure I've only dreamed about.
Could this forbidden relationship be what I've always wanted? Can my bully and I ever have a happy ending?

Milkmaid for my Bully is a dark high school romance novella with lots of milking, baby-making, and a pregnancy. It contains darker themes (read list at the beginning of the book) and is perfect for readers who prefer their books scorching and without plot.

Genres: Novella, Smut, Romance, Erotica, Enemies To Lovers, Dark Romance

72 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 30, 2024

About the author

Jade Swallow is an author of super steamy books. She loves reading and writing filthy tales featuring all kinds of kinks. Follow her on Amazon for upcoming books.

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Reviews

[Gennaskindletbr 🩶 · Rating 4 out of 5]

I liked this.

[Midnight.Bella · Rating 4 out of 5]

An interesting take on the bully romance genre.

Came for the bully trope, stayed for the plot 💀

[Lindsey ( United By Books Reviews) · Rating 4 out of 5]

more like 3.5 but rounded up

This was a short steamy read . Only problem I had was if the guy claims to have loved her since first sight and is possessive and keeps other guys away so she remains an untouched virgin then why isn’t he a virgin too? He made comments which made me believe he wasn’t . Though it is worth a read for sure .

[Lauren · Rating 4 out of 5]

Do I have a new k!nk?! Phew, was this spicy!! Loved how, though a novella, I was still able to feel connected to the characters. Darren and his heart of gold after all.

[Ashley Frederick · Rating 1 out of 5]

I went into this blind because I heard it was absolutely horrific and I apparently love to torture myself? Reviews were right it’s awful. The actual plot isn’t necessarily the issue for me, I’m not here to yuck anyone’s yum or anything. But the subject matter is obviously VERY adult and the story takes place between two high schoolers. I don’t care that they’re 18. There was no need for it to be high school at all, and very easily could have been written with them as college students, or even coworkers out of school entirely.

Most vile is a scene where the to MCs are intimate in an open hallway and keep mentioning that anyone could walk out on them, meaning students, who would be mostly minors. I hated every page but I’m incapable of a DNF apparently.

A book about breeding/pregnancy, lactation, degradation, shouldn’t have the word “high school” anywhere in it and I’ll die on that hill.

So the kinks are definitely not for me, but that’s simply not the problem, the problem is using adult themes in a setting with CHILDREN.

[Paige]

Not going to rate this because I read the whole thing despite being the cringiest thing I’ve ever read. I knew what I was reading so it’s not the lactation part that was cringy but the dialogue itself. If I never see the words “udders” and “teats” again it will be too soon.

Also Darren went from being Darren to being named Aiden in the span of a paragraph. This definitely needed some editing. I did like how obsessed he was with the FMC but I need to know if Darren has been with anyone. Apparently he’s been obsessed with the FMC since freshman year and has told everyone to stay away from her but we don’t know if he’s been sleeping around the whole time. He makes a big thing of her being a virgin but we don’t learn anything about him.

Anyway even though I didn’t like this one at all I’m still gonna try the next one. 100% safe

[Brandan WH · Rating 3 out of 5]

Clear objectives

The author “warns” the reader on what to expect for these books. It dint belabor the point with a lot of plot. You’re here to read about a milking kink and that’s it. So, with that said, it frees your mind to read the filthiest fantasy with 2 consenting adults who have a lot of sex all over the place. The language is sophomoric and can be funny, but it serves its purpose. Ignore any typos, as the author suggests you do, and let your mind be free for the low drama, high angst read.

[Kaylin Withey · Rating 3 out of 5]

I know this book is mostly about the spice but if you have plot in there it should be consistent. In the beginning, she says she’s wearing a pink bra but suddenly the next page she’s wearing a plain white one. Then she says that Darren is an only child but the next chapter he talks about his brother and sister. I kind of skimmed the rest of the book as the inconsistencies were bothering me. The book wasn’t bad. Some weird language was used but not horrible.

[E. C. Ecchor · Rating 2 out of 5]

Was this supposed to be funny?! Because it was. It was so darn funny LOL the writing is pretty godawful and the smut is a little weird and they definitely seem like 18 year olds and there’s that weird moment early on where she randomly called him Aiden instead of Darren, but, like, whatever I guess. If you can laugh through it you might enjoy it, cause I’m just wondering WTF did I just read?!

[Ash · Rating 4 out of 5]

I've read several of Swallow's books and she's definitely improving in her writing. The only error is that the mmc is named Darren but the name Aiden popped up instead a couple of times.
The story is decent with the tension being absolutely delicious. Darren, the bully, did his job but wasn't overtly cruel and Diana was a bit feisty but also a nice submissive.
This was a nice smutty short read.

[Ꭿຖᥲ·♡ ྀི · Rating 2 out of 5]

1.5✯

-dual POV
-no ow/om drama
-no separation
-virgin heroine
-hero faithful after having sex with the h (his past wasn't mentioned so I'm going to assume he was not a virgin which kinda sucks bc according to him he's been in love with the h for 4 years)
-both are 18 y/o
-epilogue: 4 years later -married with a baby on the way

[Magalie Bonneau · Rating 1 out of 5]

Ok I know these books aren’t made to be littérature but the writing is atrocious.
in the first chapter 1 page appart she has a pink bra under her white shirt and all of a sudden when he opens her shirt she has a plain white bra. And than in the same phrase she went from calling the MMC Darren to Aiden randomly.

[legolegolas · Rating 5 out of 5]

I’ve been looking for a bully romance where the fmc ended up getting pregnant by her bully. This is perfect! I love how Darren turned into a softie as the story progressed~ And the lactation kink was a pleasant bonus 🤭❤️

[Tara · Rating 5 out of 5]

Oh my god

I have to say that was such a amazing enemies to lovers book. Yes it's a milk maid book and it is honestly 1 of the few I have read that has a great plot to it. I will definitely read her other books now cause it really was good

[Gina_M_N · Rating 2 out of 5]

HOLY MOLY!! WHAT THE FUCK KIND OF HIGH SCHOOL IS THIS!!
This book is the epitome of raunchy adult movie, with a fairy tale twist, the wording was kind of immature, one specific phrase had me in tears "My man meat" I think it needed a good edit, cause the story was good but the writing wasn't.

[Crystal · Rating 2 out of 5]

Didn't like this one. I know what I'm getting with this author, but this one just felt bad. Besides the typical errors and inconsistencies, the story itself was just beyond reality. And I need at least some sort of rational thought in contemporary reads.

[Qu33nsara · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was wild

This was a wild book. I could not stop laughing!!!! This book was just the kinda book I needed as a palette cleanser. This was very odd and interesting…. Review by:Qu33nsara

[María · Rating 4 out of 5]

Corta historia cargada de erotismo, narra el amor de dos jóvenes dentro de un periodo de 4 años haciendo referencia a su pasado y concretando un futuro colmado de amor y bases para disfrutar de la unión familiar.

[Lana · Rating 1 out of 5]

He bullied her for 4 years because he loved her but couldn't have her... then after they hook up once, he wants to prove he loves her and will treat her better so he brings her coffee for 2 weeks and now she's ready to have sex and say I love you back. lol

[Gabrielle · Rating 4 out of 5]

for me

I enjoyed this book. Very spicy. Not a fan of milking but these books are too good. I will say this authors book have lots of misspellings and definitely need a read over but not too bad. 4/5

[Hannah · Rating 5 out of 5]

quick spicy read

This was a short story and it was straight to the point… milking, breeding, & smutty! A great quick read in between books

[Vanessa · Rating 5 out of 5]

Interesting story

darren & Diana had to come through the Many obstacles together. I’m curious to see what the author up with next.

[RomanceReader755 · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF

[Clarelle Charles · Rating 5 out of 5]

Bully turned knight!

This bad boy is so naughty even when he's turned prince. Sexy story of young love postponed but not destroyed.

[Aiga Bears · Rating 5 out of 5]

Enjoyed

1st book by author. It was a short and quick read. The plot flowed and I enjoyed the book. It was steamy.

[Grace · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5

[SamS · Rating 3 out of 5]

Author needs a proof reader. Darren became Aiden somewhere down the middle. Decent brainrot kinky smut otherwise.

[riya.reads · Rating 2 out of 5]

2 ⭐️

[Ella Rowan · Rating 4 out of 5]

I will not be taking questions at this time

[Meriyem · Rating 1 out of 5]

I feel like puking right now. Because wtf was this. EWW EWW EWW EWW EWW EWW