The book started off really promising, but it quickly dragged. The romance kept getting pushed back with so many side twists that took the focus away from the main couple. I loved the beginning, but the love story never really developed, at least not to my liking, and by the end, it just fell flat.
In other words, it was whatever. I like Damon's company and his world getting its own series, I just wish it would've been a lot better than it is.
🟢 Pro baseball player/intern (ex baseball player)
🟣 Age gap 24/26
🔵 A bit of a size difference (Thad is taller and more muscular)
🟡 Both gay
🟢 Many side characters
🟠 The covers in this series are terrible
🌶️ Sex is good, but not a lot of it; rimming, penetrative, oral, kissing; both vers
Thad is an ex–baseball player who never made it to the pros, so he carries a lot of bitterness and envy toward Kelley, the hot and successful baseball star King Sports represents. Thad isn’t an agent yet, just learning the ropes, which lands him in a two-week intervention with Kelley, who’s battling anxiety and trying to step away from the social media noise that’s surrounded him since coming out.
Their chemistry is really good in the beginning, it's authentic, real, and I really liked them together. The sex scenes were good too, though I wish the author had taken more time to explore them instead of rushing through. But the story did feel strong and engaging starting out and most of all, there was no drama at first, just two guys liking each other and I liked the simplicity of it, I was really looking forward to this love evolving and ending on a good note.
A bit predictable, sure, but a nice refreshment after a few bad books I've read lately.
Once Thad and Kelley are back in real life, they circle around each other for a while, trying to meet up, and it works, it's a bit funny and interesting, holds a lot of promise, until they get caught. After that, the plot completely loses direction. Too many unnecessary events drag things out, keeping them apart for weeks and even months. They hardly talk in between. Their potential relationship starts to feel less like a romance and more like a situationship that should have ended right then and there.
Thad then suddenly uproots his life and moves states for Kelley, despite them barely speaking, rarely seeing each other, and not building a real foundation. There’s no steady communication or emotional growth to justify such a big leap, I mean, what was he thinking??
Until the very end there was no chance of them being together and then suddenly Damon gives it a green light and Thad, although showing little desire for keeping in touch with Kelley for all those months, suddenly runs to LA.
It made no sense.
When Thad showed up at Kelley’s game declaring he’s there to stay, it felt rushed and embarrassing, honestly. It's a hook-up you hardly talked to in 6 months and then suddenly it's 'hello honey, I'm home'?
Like, what?
If at least they talked a lot in the meantime.
If at least there were intense pining and wanting to be together, all the time.
That would've justified everything, but Thad, even though he sounds really mature in the beginning, is only fresh out of college and he just didn't seem like the perfect fit for Kelley, who is a very endearing character, he's thinking serious relationship , marriage, kids, all the works, and I don't think Thad was there yet.
Not to mention leaving so many things hanging out in the open, like Thad's family, his brother, his financial situation, Brady jumping in all the time - it's too much for something that was supposed to be a simple love story.
The book began with so much promise, but the development never matched that initial setup, I didn't see Thad as being an agent at all, I thought he'd become Kelley's assistant and just went to live with him, really milk that good sex and chemistry while it was hot, but their love story is leaving me disappointed.