3.5/5.
Heat Index: 7/10
—Formula 1 sans driver hero
—he’s a stern brunch daddy
—hooking up allll over the world
—on/off and every which way
The Basics:
Natalia Evans is finally the lead reporter for Auto Racing Journal, which is naturally when it turns out the mysterious man she shared a single incredible night with is Klaus Franke, Emerald Team Principal. It wouldn’t be the most professional thing to begin a real relationship with him, but that doesn’t mean they don’t end up sneaking around for intermittent hookups when given a chance (no feelings, of course). But when Klaus and Natalia end up embroiled in a massive scandal, their loyalties—and Klaus’s commitment—are put to the test.
The Review:
I feel like this should’ve been a slam dunk for me. It has a lot of qualities I enjoy in a romance, especially a contemporary. Klaus and Natalia begin with a true (intended) one night stand. They meet, they’re hooking up, it’s hot, and it’s all happening within the first 10% of the book. Though the physical chemistry is off the charts, the real feelings come later… if perhaps a bit sooner than I would’ve liked. He’s older, he’s a little stern, she’s determined to be professional, there’s the backdrop of their careers against their feelings… I love that kind of plot.
Where I think this gets tripped up first is that it’s not sure if it wants to stand alone or not. This is the second in a series—I haven’t read the first, but I liked Juniper’s writing style enough to request it from my library. (Which is a good sign!) Most of the time, contemporaries (and really, most romances) like this, centered on a single couple per book, stand alone while being interconnected. This story clearly took place, at least at first, at a parallel time to the first book. And I really felt sort of confused; I also felt that there were a few too many allusions to the first couple, especially the first heroine, Natalia’s close friend. And it’s like—cool. I want to focus on Klaus and Natalia.
The thing is that they do have good chemistry, but the book has a ton of time jumps. It takes place all over the world, which is cool (though I don’t think we got quite enough detail about the different locales). But you’ll get them in, say, Budapest one chapter, then—boom, SIX WEEKS LATER. I don’t mind time jumps, and I actually like that this takes place over a really significant stretch of time. But we basically miss a lot of longing and emotional development, as Klaus and Natalia spend significant chunks of time apart. Which is part of the conflict, to be fair—even if he is emotionally ready to commit to Natalie (he’s a widower, he genuinely loved his wife and is still grieving, it’s honestly quite touching) does he really have the time? Can he put her ahead of F1?
And on that note, I really liked that Klaus was a Team Principal versus a driver. I haven’t read much in this particular space yet, but I am REALLY into the idea of more sports races focused on the guys behind the scenes. The GMs, the coaches, the kingmakers. Klaus is a little distant, mature, and in control. He was a nice break from the sports romances that always have the HOTSHOT BIG TIME TALKY TALKY ALPHA MALE sports stars, who never actually come off as alphas because they’re talking about it all the time. (Very few sports heroes are written in a way that sells their cockiness—y'all can’t all be Ilya Rozanov.) I really bought Klaus as a leader in his space. The BDE was off the charts. Even if, I will confess, some of his dirty talk was a bit… over the top. I mean, I wasn’t against it, but I was very aware that I was reading a romance novel with some of that dialogue.
Natalia has an interesting background that isn’t quite like a lot of what I see in contemporaries. She was raised by an older female relative because her parents were Mysteriously Absent, and the reasons are not what I (or she) expected. This sense of abandonment and desire to be put first drives the emotional conflict with Klaus, and it’s well done.
So there is a lot I do like here. But I feel as if the plotting just didn’t give me enough time to fully settle into this romance.
The Sex:
Okay, so—the sex scenes are hot, over the top dirty talk notwithstanding. Very good, very fun, had one act I don’t see a lot in romance that made me sit up and go “yes”.
But there was a really weird attitude toward birth control. Natalia isn’t on any, and there are a few times where it’s so laissez-faire, “trust me, I know my cycle”, and…. I know this reflects the way that many people do approach birth control? But considering Natalia’s career-mindedness, her hyper-awareness about the instability of her relationship with Klaus, Klaus’s OWN big age and experience (and mind you, I think Natalia is very much old enough to know her own deal) and Natalia’s trauma regarding her parents—I just didn’t buy that they, and particularly she, would be that risky. It took me out of the story a bit.
The Conclusion:
Although I have issues with this book, I did like Josie Juniper’s writing and am interested in reading the novel that preceded this one. I just feel like Coming in Hot bit off a little more than it could chew.
Thanks to Forever and NetGalley for providing me with a copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.