3.5 Stars
One Liner: Quite cute
Miami
Penelope Delmar, a broke salesgirl, gets a chance to participate in Cast Judgment, a spellcasting reality show. She could do with the winner’s cash prize. To add some excitement, the producers are pairing participants with a celebrity. Penelope’s teammate is Leandro Presto, who is more famous for his viral videos than spellcasting skills.
Gil Contreras, alias Leandro Presto, has a crush on his pen pal, Penelope. But now he has to work with her to win the contest and stay in his ‘internet character’, letting her think he’s a total loser.
As if sabotages and wonky spells weren’t enough, the duo has to fight their attraction for each other and win the contest.
The story comes in Penelope and Gil’s first-person POVs.
My Thoughts:
I grabbed this more for the Cuban rep than the witchy plot or the TV show trope, since the latter is not a favorite.
The premise is cool, and the story has a decent pace. Thanks to the dual POV, we know both characters and their thoughts.
This is also a cozy witchy romance, light on angst. That is exactly how I like my reads these days, so it fits my requirements well.
The narration is a bit informal with a lot of slang, possibly for the local Miami vibe. But the characters are in their late-ish 20s, so the lingo makes them sound a lot younger, kinda like teens. Also, I don’t think all Spanish words were translated. I didn’t check.
The main characters had some baggage and things they had to work through, which they did during the filming of the show and all that.
The concept of having a TV contest for casting spells is fun. I liked that both characters come from normal/ regular backgrounds, so they are not used to all the BTS (behind-the-scenes) drama. The contests were also interesting.
Where the book falters is the magic system, or the lack of it. It’s set in an alternate reality of sorts where spells and magic are common. So far, good. However, we don’t know how a lot of that magic works. They mention spells, chants, ingredients, and some technical terms, but it’s just too vague and whimsical. This is a book where you have to wing it instead of wondering about the whats and whys because there aren’t many details.
Things come together well at the end, and I like that there are no miracle wins. It’s realistic growth and better opportunities. However, the ending was a bit abrupt and made me wonder if there’ll be a book two. If not, that kind of ending can be a hit or a miss for the genre. It’ll work better for short stories.
To summarize, Witch You Would is a light and cozy romance with some poignant themes. The cast is diverse, and the characters are easy to like. If only the world-building were a bit more detailed!
Thank you, NetGalley and Avon, for the eARC. This review is voluntary and contains my honest opinion about the book.
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