"Bound by Dust" is a fantasy-romance novel set in the "Arid", a harsh and unforgiving desert landscape. It follows Jemma, the main character and narrator, and her charge Jo. After an attack by the enigmatic "Howlers", Jemma and Jo are forced to leave their oasis and set out into the Arid. Injured and on the verge of death, the girls are suddenly "rescued" by whom they discover to be the soldiers of Moria. Jemma is forced to train as a solider in Moria for a war she does not understand. At the same time, she must navigate an evil and manipulative king and learn the difference between friend and foe.
Plot: The plot seemed to either flow too quickly or too slowly. There were climatic moments that I felt deserved more reflection. The narrator herself moved on quite quickly, which, in my opinion, did not allow for the reader to fully digest the content. (Ex. The assassination attempt on Jemma which she completely disregards and doesn't think about again until the end of the novel. Even her friends are more worried about it than her). Conversely, what felt like half the book was Jemma in training and gaining no progress. I am glad the author didn't make her immediately good at hand to hand combat because it would make no sense that she would surpass trained soldiers with absolutely no prior training. However, the chapters that involved training felt repetitive as Jemma would spar, fail, and learn nothing (another qualm - "training" was just sparring and not actually learning any helpful).
Characters: I either despised or felt completely indifferent about almost every character. Jemma is insufferable; however, I had to remind myself that she is young and inexperienced and I, as the reader, have the benefit of hindsight that she does not. While it is difficult to watch her make almost any decision, I actually think her character is quite realistic (even if annoying) and is written well for a lot of future character growth (hopefully)! I will also add here that a lot of characters seem to have been written in order to fit within specific tropes. The author obviously wanted an enemies to lovers trope. Jemma is written to be the stubborn and sassy FMC, while Garrith is the dark and brooding love interest. Their banter, at times, seems forced to fit within this trope and therefore, can be irritating. Garrith is incredibly mean to Jemma in almost all of their interactions. His few moments of amiability and the introduction of his traumatic background are meant to make the readers disregard his continuous cruelty; I, however, could not. Reid's character was quite predictable. I can't say that was the authors intention, but I don't think it's necessarily a bad thing. I felt indifferent towards Jo. We weren't given much time to learn who she really is beyond what Jemma tells us to think. Spending more time on Jo's character would have made the emotional moments with her character much more impactful. I did like Tatum, Cynrad, and Enon. I think they were fun characters and good friends to Jemma. I would love to spend more time with them in future books.
World-Building: I think this section could be improved upon the most. So much time is spent in preparation for a war readers don't fully learn the purpose of until almost the end of the book. Plot with no apparent purpose is quite difficult to read. I also wish there had been more discussion of the politics within Moria/Megara as well as its interactions with other kingdoms (specifically Groth).
Writing: At times the writing could be repetitive. Words and phrases were used regularly with no need for emphasis. Overall though, I thought the writing was well done, especially for a debut novel.
I know this review is quite critical, however, I think this author has a lot of potential and I am excited to see how this series and the author progress! Keep going Keela :)