I’m gonna be honest about this one. I’m real picky about books. I am a serial DNF’er and I don’t hand out high ratings just to be nice. If I hadn’t won this book in a contest, I’d have set it down around chapter 10 and moved on but I kept listening until chapter 15. I couldn’t listen any more. That said, I don’t enjoy tearing down new authors, especially ones who clearly have some talent, so this is coming from a place of honesty.
Frankie is relatable in a lot of ways, especially when it comes to bad men and even worse choices. Most women I know have dealt with a guy who doesn’t know his way around a woman’s body, and that part felt real. What didn’t work for me was how fast she bounced between being scared of Todd and wanting to sleep with him. The back and forth was constant, and it was so insanely ridiculous it just didn’t feel believable.
Todd raised more questions than answers for me. He didn’t know what phones were but somehow knew about security systems, which pulled me right out of the story. He was also basically stalking Frankie, and the book treated that like it was romantic or mysterious. For me, it just wasn’t. She let him into her life way too easily, right up until she found out he was a demon but immediately forgave him. The whiplash was crazy), which somehow bothered her more than the fact that her brother was missing.
There were a lot of moments where the reactions just didn’t add up. Frankie didn’t seem too concerned that two men she’d been intimate with suddenly had serious things happen to them. Five minutes after finding out Todd was a demon, she was already exposing herself to him. She also agreed to go to a demon party with a stranger who had already been stalking her, and that just didn’t make a lick of sense to me. From terrified of demons to exposing herself, sucking him off, to a party with a bunch of demons? There’s no way.
The pacing was a big problem. The rebound speed between fear, attraction, and trust was unrealistically fast, and I kept wishing the story would slow down and let the characters actually develop. This book needed several more hours of character development and world building for the emotional moments to feel earned.
I’ll also say the marijuana use gave me a personal ick since I’m allergic. That’s obviously not on the author, but it did affect my reading experience.
All that said, A A Powers does have talent. The book isn’t repetitive, and she clearly knows how to pull readers in. I can see why this story has found its people, even though I wasn’t one of them. Age matters here, and I would’ve liked this book a whole lot more five or six years ago. At almost thirty, I just wasn’t the target audience.
This is self published, and I think that shows. With a strong editor and some guidance from a publisher, I really believe this book could’ve gone from a two or three to a solid five. The bones are there, it just needs more polish.
Do I think this book’s gonna go viral? Probably not. Do I think A A Powers could write something award worthy one day? With the right team behind her, absolutely. I’ll be giving her future books a chance, because I think she’s got something there. This one just wasn’t for me, unfortunately.