A Visit to Stoneybrook

by Marina McLune

Millie Appleby, a farmer’s daughter, hopes to make a positive difference by becoming a surgeon. While working towards her goal, a devastating break-up with her first love Giles, threatens to derail her. When at eighteen, she swaps her sleepy Sussex village life for the bright lights of London to study medicine, she attracts the attention of the very suave and sophisticated Zane, who has so much to offer.

Returning home for the holidays, Millie meets musician and former recording artist Ben, but his unconventional past sounds alarm bells for those around her. As the weeks, months and years go by, several unexpected revelations throw Millie into an emotional turmoil, struggling to decide who to choose, what to believe, and in the end, whether she is able to trust again.

From the author of ‘A Year at Marshywood,’ comes another classic tale of love and loss, longing and laughter. Once again, Marina McLune’s unique style offers up a generous sprinkling of musical nostalgia, natural world beauty and cultural references from days gone by.

It’s time to head back to the 1980s!*

This tender, unashamedly romantic and beautifully written story keeps you guessing right through to the end. Although touching on some hard-hitting subjects, A Visit to Stoneybrook is both positive and optimistic, and its Christian message and many pop song references will hopefully bring you joy.

* Although A Year at Marshywood sets the backdrop to this novel, A Visit to Stoneybrook is a standalone sequel and may be enjoyed on its own.

Readers' Reviews

‘Another beautifully written book by the very talented and gifted Marina McLune’. EH

'A warm, emotional read that I’d happily recommend'. Rodrigo

'A very sweet story. At times, you can actually feel the story, so real. Some heartbreak, some joy, a real life story'. Bev

'This was a great book. It was such a nostalgic run-down memory lane with the 80's reference.s It felt like I was reliving my childhood with every page ...This book is about self-discovery and the choices we make as we learn what truly will make us happy'. Tina

438 pages, Kindle Edition

Published January 29, 2025

About the author

Marina has been passionate about music and creative writing since childhood. British-born to Caribbean parents and a solicitor by profession, she left London to move to East Sussex several years ago and is now blessed to live at the foot of the beautiful South Downs National Park, where she enjoys nature and walks with her husband and three grown-up sons.

Reviews

[Elaine · Rating 4 out of 5]

So…. I guess I’m an outlier on this one…
Although I enjoyed the story, I feel like it went on forever…

Sweet, yet sad and very emotional.
More of a coming of age/ young adult novel …
Millie has a hard time trusting anyone after being hurt… so when she finally gives love another try… well, it’s a real toss up.

Good friends and family come into play too, but the emotional tearing apart…. More by herself than anyone else… well, that was tough. 😕

And, she’s going to medical school… so she really doesn’t need any detractors…

As I said, overall a good read, but I felt like we got a lot of information that we didn’t really need in order for the book to get to the conclusion at the end. And, the end was a bit of a surprise for me. 😮

Also, liked how they interspersed Christianity throughout the book! ❤️

3 1/2 🌟🌟🌟💫 for me, rounds up to 4!

#AVisitToStoneybrook by @MarinaMclune and narrated nicely by @LucyScott.

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[Rodrigo · Rating 4 out of 5]

Warm and emotional read

I really enjoyed this story. The characters felt very real and I loved following the characters journey from heartbreak to finding herself. The book talks about friendship, family, and growing up It’s super relatable. I also liked the mix of romance and nostalgia, plus the 80s vibes were a nice touch for me. The writing was vivid, and the small-town setting felt cozy. The story was a bit slow in some parts in my opinion, so I think some parts could be simplified, but it always picked up in other moments. Overall, it’s a warm, emotional read that I’d happily recommend.

[Kathleen · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is a very sweet romance written without sex, violence or bad language. As the main characters, Ben and Millie, struggle together in their lives and in their slow blossoming love, God is working in their lives to show them love and fulfillment through faith in Jesus Christ. The reader should be aware that the book is full of many British colloquialisms, so if you aren't a real Anglophile, you may want to keep Google handy. Altogether, I would recommend this book to those who love clean stories of romance and faith. I received a complimentary copy of the book from the author via Voracious Readers Only.

[Joelle Gibson · Rating 4 out of 5]

This novel offers a realistic portrayal of heartbreak, personal growth, and the complexities of young adult life. From navigating school and family dynamics to forming meaningful relationships, the story resonates with authenticity and depth...all while providing endless 80s music references.

I found the protagonist, Millie, to be a likable character whose journey of self-discovery kept me engaged. Watching her mature and learn from life's challenges was both satisfying and inspiring! McLune's ability to craft a character with genuine growth and relatable struggles showcases her talent as a writer.

One of the book’s strengths lies in how it explores the intricate balance of life's demands. McLune skillfully portrays themes of friendship, love, and resilience. However, I did wish for some of the side stories to be more fully developed. While they were interesting, one particular subplot resolved in a way that felt somewhat anticlimactic. That said, it ultimately served as a thoughtful reminder that life's trials often guide us to where we’re meant to be, aligning with a greater plan.

Overall, A Visit to Stoneybrook is an engaging read with meaningful lessons about growth, faith, and finding one’s path. McLune’s storytelling is authentic and relatable, making this book a worthwhile journey for readers seeking inspiration and heartfelt moments.

[PurpleLadi · Rating 3 out of 5]

A Visit To Stoneybrook is not a light hearted romance. In essence, this book was based on three testimonies and seemed closer to a Young Adult coming of age story. Millie has low self-esteem which leads her to second, third, guess her self, replay events in her life, assume the blame breakups, and internalize her pain/ fears. Millie was an emotionally cripple, unable to move on from Giles, her first boyfriend and unable to fully trust or fully give herself to subsequent relationships. In addition, some of her "friends" were extremely toxic, treating and speaking to her in a derogatory manner, but she viewed it as them watching out for her. Rather than her parents and family tiptoeing around her, they should have gotten millie into counseling.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Bev · Rating 4 out of 5]

A very sweet story. At times, you can actually feel the story, so real. Some heartbreak, some joy, a real life story.

[Tina · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a great book. It was such a nostalgic run-down memory lane with the 80's reference.s It felt like I was reliving my childhood with every page. We follow
Millie, as she discovers a lot about herself, who she is, and who she wants to become as she is studying to become a doctor. This book is about self-discovery and the choices we make as we learn what truly will make us happy.

I received a free copy of this book by Rowanvale books. This review is my honest opinion.

[Lindsay · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book caught my attention when I saw it took place in the 1980s as I haven't come across many others in this time frame. An 80s music fan will have fun with all the references - I may have just been too young. The storyline itself really drew me in and I got caught up in all the feels. I enjoyed following the main character Millie through her adventures in school, working, and falling in and out of love, and watching as she grew up and faced changes and challenges. There were some other or side characters I would have liked to have more time with, but maybe they can likely be saved for another story. I received a free advance review copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving this review. I noticed after reading this that there is another book in this series that I will be looking to read next. I didn't get a feeling that I was missing anything, so I am thinking each can be read as standalone. I am looking forward to reading more from this author.

[Denzel Struchen · Rating 5 out of 5]

Based in the mid 1980's this is a story of a young woman coming to grips with life, boyfriends and school. Based in the UK some words and phrases may be unfamiliar and the same with music references. Millie goes through university and medical school to become a doctor. Along the way romance blossoms and fails. Some remain friends other's don't. Very thoughtfully written story.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

[Hassena · Rating 4 out of 5]

A Visit to Stoneybrook by Marina McLune is a captivating coming-of-age novel set in the 1980s. The story centers around Millie Appleby, a bright and determined young woman pursuing her dream of becoming a doctor.

The novel beautifully captures the essence of the 1980s, with vivid descriptions of fashion, music, and cultural trends. Each chapter title is a popular song from the era, cleverly setting the tone for the events that unfold.

The narrative is driven by Millie's personal growth and her journey through the challenges of love, heartbreak, and self-discovery. Her relationship with the enigmatic Ben Bradshaw forms the emotional core of the story. Their connection is undeniable, but their path is fraught with obstacles, forcing Millie to confront her own vulnerabilities and make difficult choices.

The supporting characters are well-developed and add depth to the narrative. Millie's close friendship with the free-spirited Ursula provides a source of humor and support. The complex dynamic between Wahida and Jonas, with their contrasting personalities and shared love of music, offers an engaging subplot.

McLune's writing style is engaging and evocative. She skillfully weaves together Millie's personal journey with the social and cultural backdrop of the 1980s. The novel explores themes of love, friendship, family, ambition, and the challenges of navigating early adulthood.

Overall, A Visit to Stoneybrook is a heartwarming and thought-provoking novel that will resonate with readers who enjoy coming-of-age stories with a touch of nostalgia. McLune's ability to create relatable characters and explore universal themes makes this a compelling read.

ARC for unbiased review

[Gail · Rating 2 out of 5]

I found this book to be a very long and unrewarding read. The overwhelming references to songs was distracting and became a superficial narrative. The story is about the life and loves of Millie, which started at age 16 when she gave everything to a boy named Giles in high school, who then dropped her. Millie was devastated, until she met Zane while they were attending medical school together. Zane was very interested in Millie, but she couldn't get over the brokenness of her first love and only considered them friends. Then there's Ben, a former musician in a popular band. Ben had some secrets from his past, which Millie was willing to overlook--until he dumped her and disappeared. And so the story goes.
I found it sad that Millie's life was built mostly on romantic relationships. Perhaps she was in love with love? Sure, there was descriptions of animals, sounds, etc., but it was mostly disjointed snippets of descriptions with plenty of random details not connected to a storyline or theme. At times it seemed like insignificant babbling--or perhaps filler? And what was the family scandal that was mentioned throughout the book? We're never told the details.
I did enjoy the HEA ending, which raised my rating to 2 stars. However, I found myself dreading having to pick the book up to finish it. It did not hold my interest, and I will not be reading it again in the future.
I received a complimentary ARC of this book and have voluntarily given my honest opinion in this review.

[Becky Durstenfeld · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book was not my favorite but the language and descriptions are sometimes beautiful. There was not much of a plot, with most of the book being the main characters feeling and angst about relationships with guys. I can relate to some of that, but it got old after awhile. The book is needlessly quite long. There was another story intertwined and at first I had trouble remembering what I'd read about that woman in a previous chapter and then didn't know why we were meeting her. The two woman finally did intersect at a point far into the book. I liked that there wasn't bad language and that the main character grew in faith in God and in handling the stress in her life. All the references to songs from the 80's sounded fun, but I was not familiar with very many of the songs. There is a reference to a scandal her family went through but I don't remember the readers ever being told what that was. I didn't care for her friendship with Zane, as she really was leading him on. It was heartbreaking to see Ben's issues. I enjoyed hearing about some of the places she did some of her medical work. I think this book said it ended with a happily ever after, so I expected that but doubted it was going to be happily ever after.

[Hannah Mcintosh · Rating 5 out of 5]

Marina McLune's "A Visit to Stoneybrook" is a tender and beautifully written novel that keeps readers guessing until the end. Set in the 1980s, the story follows Millie Appleby, a farmer's daughter from Sussex, who aspires to become a surgeon. Her journey is fraught with personal challenges, including a devastating breakup with her first love, Giles. As she transitions from her village life to the bustling city of London for her medical studies, Millie encounters new relationships that test her faith and resilience.

The narrative delves into themes of love, loss, and trust, all while weaving in cultural references and musical nostalgia from the era. McLune's storytelling is both positive and optimistic, offering a Christian message that resonates throughout the novel. While it touches on some hard-hitting subjects, the story remains uplifting and is sure to bring joy to its readers. Fans of McLune's previous work, "A Year at Marshywood," will find familiar elements, though "A Visit to Stoneybrook" stands firmly on its own as a standalone sequel.

Thank you to Rowanvale Books for providing me a copy of this novel. I have left my review voluntarily. I am looking forward to any future work by this author!

[Natasha W · Rating 3 out of 5]

It takes time to figure out what you want out of love.

This one is for those who prefer a thoughtful romance over a dramatic one. Millie navigates relationships beginning in her late teens through to her studies as she becomes a doctor.

There are some sweet moments between Millie and her suitors framed in idyllic countryside. I was genuinely surprised at how much some of the interactions spoke to me. Although, the story was at its peak when tackling the more serious issues in relationships. It brought some balance and realism to the romance.

Whilst I was engaged with Millie's journey, the pacing threw me off at some points. Each time I started a new chapter I found it difficult to gauge how much time had passed. There were also a few mysterious chapters which switched perspectives that didn't have the pay off in the story I was hoping for.

I liked this book which aligns with 3 stars according to Goodreads ranking system. It wasn't a remarkable love story but still a nice read. Perhaps if the ending came with more challenge and growth for the characters I would have upped the rating, things wrapped up a little quickly for me. I'm sharing this review having received a free copy from Rowanvale Books, and I wanted to express what I appreciated about this novel.

[Alexandra · Rating 5 out of 5]

After having read “A Year at Marshywood”, I was excited to read another book signed by this author. “A Visit to Stoneybrook” is the sequel to the story, but the great thing about it is that it may be enjoyed on its own. This time, we are introduced to Millie, who trades her sleepy Sussex village for the bright lights of London. She is planning on studying medicine, but her romantic life might get in the way. Millie will have to decide which of her romantic interests is worth pursuing, and how will her life proceed from there. This is a classic tale of love and loss, as the author wonderfully puts is. The writing is excellent, and the setting is in the 1980s, with plenty of musical nostalgia for us to enjoy. I absolutely loved the idea behind the story, and Millie is a wonderful character, one you cannot help but root for. I received a free copy of this book from Rowanvale Books, but the opinion I posted is my own and not biased in any way.

[Lia Lorimer · Rating 4 out of 5]

Was there a previous book?
A well-written, but long book, using a range of descriptive language and continuous references to songs of the era that will appeal to many readers.
The main theme focuses on Millie navigating friendships and romantic relationships while studying towards a medical degree in London, thus being separated from her family in Sussex for the first time.
Attracted to Ben, a new resident in Magham Down, Millie is frustrated by his reticence, but then needs time to process his eventual revelation.
The author adds two additional conundrums: a past Appleby family scandal which negatively affected Millie and her family that still resonates in the village, but which is never clarified for the reader; and a few enigmatic chapters apparently unconnected to the main story featuring “Grace. My name is Grace”.
Well worth reading if you have time.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

[jenswhitenoise · Rating 4 out of 5]

Millie & Ben. I really enjoyed the story of the way these two met, came together, fell apart, and resolved the issues with their relationship. I was unsure if I was going to get the HEA I expect in a romance. They took the long way around. This story was so full of emotion ranging from funny/happy to absolutely devastating. I will admit that I had a lot of angst while getting to know Ben. Millie is so patient, so kind and understanding. I'm not sure I would've been able to be as patient and trusting when learning his story. When they parted and Millie had to move on while going to medical school, my heart just broke for her. I felt like I really knew Millie, and was experiencing the sorrow and hurt she was going through. After finishing the book, I am so incredibly proud of Millie and am so happy Marina McLune wrote her the way she did. I want to talk about Ben, but that may give away some part of the story and I enjoyed the angst of not knowing and I think you should too.

The audiobook was narrated by Lucy Scott and was brilliant. Her pacing was perfect, her different voices and accents meant I was not confused as to who was talking. She brought Millie and Ben to life for me and I loved it,

I received the ALC of this book for free and my review is voluntary. Thank you to NetGalley, the author, and BooksGoSocial Audio.

[Kimberly · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF this book. I didn't get past chapter 2. This book was very was slow, because the MC, Millie, was just dull; reminiscing about her breakup with her boyfriend. There's no other word to describe her.

The book takes place in the 80's, after Millie experiences a breakup with her first love, her high school boyfriend, Giles. It was completely unexpected and devastated her. Soon she'll be going off to London for college, then medical school to become a surgeon. She wants to make a difference in the world. She grew up on a farm and moving away from home to London is a big change and accomplishment for Millie.

That's as far as I got.

*I received a complimentary copy of this ARC via NetGalley. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.

[Heather · Rating 4 out of 5]

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

A Visit to Stoneybrook by Marina McLune is a heartfelt Christian coming-of-age romance set in the 1980s, full of nostalgic references that made the era feel alive. While it has plenty of sweet, small-town warmth, it also isn’t afraid to lean into heavier moments- family pressures, heartbreak, and the real struggles that come with chasing big dreams.

The balance of light and weighty kept me invested, and I especially enjoyed how Millie’s journey felt both relatable and encouraging. The audiobook added another layer; the narrator captured the heart of the story and really made the characters breathe.

A thoughtful, emotional read that blends faith, romance, and a touch of nostalgia.

Thank you, NetGalley, for the ALC to listen to and review 💕

[Val Andrews · Rating 4 out of 5]

A GENTLE, HEARTFELT JOURNEY OF LOVE, FAITH AND SELF-DISCOVERY

"A Visit to Stoneybrook" by Marina McLune has a quiet grace to it. On the surface, it's the story of a young woman forging her path in medicine while navigating the tender uncertainties of romance. But beneath that, it’s a meditation on love in all its forms: romantic, friendship, familial, and divine.

Set against a backdrop of country roots and 1980s nostalgia, the novel carries a deep sense of place and time. The pacing is unhurried, the tone is clean and sincere, and the emotions ring true. What moved me most were the spiritual threads woven subtly through the narrative, reminding the reader that love, in its purest form, is an act of faith. This novel is a lovely read that lingers quietly long after the final page.

[Denise Taylor · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was a bit of an odd story. I often found myself wondering where it was taking me. The references to songs and artists was completely lost on me. I didn’t really understand the reason behind putting so many song references. I couldn’t really relate to the main character. I’ve never really been one to “fall hard” for anyone and to be devastated over a breakup. The fact that there was so much wasted energy and time in each male didn’t feel realistic but like I said I couldn’t relate to the character. It kind of felt disconnected and I had a hard time finishing it. I’m glad I did though.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

[Elaine · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a beautiful journey of love, both earthly and heavenly, for the two main characters Ben and Millie. Will totally appeal to those who love the farming life, God’s creatures, medical terminology, misunderstandings made right, twists and turns which are all revealed by the end of the story.

Appreciated greatly the journey of salvation that is depicted and how it changes a person’s life… well done!

First time to read a novel from this author and hope to do so again!

Received this copy for free and this review is my own opinion given voluntarily.

[Erin · Rating 4 out of 5]

I am glad that I stuck with this book to the end. It didn’t draw me in from the beginning like other books have, but I was invested in Millie enough to want to see how her story played out. This book will certainly take you on a roller coaster of emotions with many highs and lows. Definitely a story of young love, heartbreak, growth, and maturity.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[P · Rating 5 out of 5]

4.5 stars. I received an advance reader copy and I have to say, it's a triumph for Marina McLune. Although there were lots of song references in this novel, they were great fun and woven in skillfully, and I was fully invested in the story (which had plenty of intrigue) from beginning to end. I really enjoyed it.

[Tanya · Rating 5 out of 5]

She has big plans of becoming a surgeon and she will leave home for London where she will meet him. Her life goes well until she goes home where she will meet another man who is the total opposite. Now she has to decide who she wants. How will she get on? See where life and love will lead her
I received an advance copy from hidden gems and I was soon caught up in her tale

[Laura Prindable · Rating 3 out of 5]

Millie has been unlucky in love. But when she meets Ben she thinks she has found the one. Been has a past filled with drugs and rock and roll. And, Miller is going to school to become a doctor.

I liked this book well enough but the ending was disappointing. 3 stars

Many thanks to Net Galley and BooksGoSocial Audio for an audio ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.

[D Andres · Rating 3 out of 5]

The story itself was okay, but the number of song titles and lyrics was in the book way too often for my liking. I felt that the story at times was being written by the lyrics instead of the lyrics being mentioned at just the right time.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC.

[Molly · Rating 4 out of 5]

a young woman on the cusp if whomever and whatever they would become next finds her heart a bit bruised, and her friendships and romances tested as she chases her dreams.

broken, changed, and moving on - a compelling coming of age story collection.

[Amy Anderson · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good book. A little long, but overall a good storyline. Would recommend for young adults, or anyone that likes coming of age stories.

[Staci · Rating 3 out of 5]

A Visit to Stoneybrook is a gentle, nostalgic journey back to the 1980s, filled with small-town charm, emotional crossroads, and a thread of Christian faith woven throughout. Millie Appleby is an earnest protagonist whose dream of becoming a surgeon provides a strong backbone to the story. Her personal growth—through heartbreak, ambition, and the complexities of trust—is relatable and engaging. I appreciated that this isn’t just a love story; it explores purpose, family expectations, and resilience in the face of disappointment.

The novel’s tone is soft and reflective, with vivid nature descriptions and musical references that add to the nostalgic atmosphere. Readers who enjoy character-driven stories with emotional depth and a wholesome message will connect with Millie’s journey. The book also addresses themes of forgiveness, second chances, and faith in a way that feels sincere rather than heavy-handed.

However, at times the pacing felt uneven, especially in the middle chapters where the story lingered on day-to-day details. The love triangle and emotional tension are central to the plot, but the back-and-forth stretched longer than necessary, which caused some scenes to lose impact. Some secondary characters also felt underdeveloped and were introduced quickly without enough follow-through.

Overall, this is a heartfelt story with a tender message and a sentimental style. Fans of clean romance, especially those who enjoy British village settings and coming-of-age arcs, will likely enjoy this book. While it didn’t fully captivate me from beginning to end, it offered comforting themes and thoughtful moments that made the read worthwhile.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing me with an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own